Comeuppance

[Datom]

So, where do I go from here? The only thing I can think of to follow this is "Ouch!" And that seems insufficient.

[Summers]

So, where do I go from here? The only thing I can think of to follow this is "Ouch!" And that seems insufficient.

Not a massive fan of the rape and then baby stuff, if i am being honest. It kind of came out of nowhere and a bit of an extreme direction to take the story.

It also leaves you with nowhere really to go, as you're saying yourself, other than more extreme.

I guess, a more tame or less extreme direction, that isn't "ouch" is to go somewhere like forcing the boys into gay territory, maybe if you're having them kidnapped or blackmailed long term, then basically having them in glory hole/booth setups, tied up and forced chastity, is a route to take.

Having them just blackmailed would be less extreme than that though, so maybe forced chastity, and anal plugs, so even at school or out with friends or at home, they always wearing those. force them on dates with other boys who are gay, or girls that want to try out some femdom.

If you want to go extreme, then those ideas, but x100... but not sure based on the stories i have read on here so far, cbt, and that kind of extreme content, is going to be that popular, but i could be wrong. maybe someone that has been around a lot longer, will disagree with me, and i would definitely take their word over mine.

[Datom]

You're right. I think the story ends right where it is. Leave it to the reader to imagine.

[Datom]

@ Summers:

"Not a massive fan of the rape and then baby stuff, if i am being honest. It kind of came out of nowhere and a bit of an extreme direction to take the story."

The reason I emphasized my other story, "Wendi Babysits the Twins," (viewtopic.php?t=4152)is that the events in that story are the ones Wendi is referring to at the end of this story. "Comeuppance" sort of acts as a kind of sequel to "Wendi Babysits theTwins."