Probably A Bad Idea To Get A Locker (EUF)

[Moonshine+CC21]

Lockers at Blue Sky Academy are a nightmare to get since the grand majority of them are smashed up and all the half decent looking ones, with functioning locks, are already taken. Lily walks down the corridor towards the lockers, the lockers are located near the Food Tec classroom (cooking if we're being for real, no need for complicated names), she unlocks her new locker with a key. The lockers had different locking mechanisms, some are key based, some are code based. She takes her backpack off and opens it to decide what she should take out and what to keep in her bag.

"You got one then?" A familiar voice calls out to her.

She looks up and sees a group of 3 guys in school uniform similar to hers. They're wearing black blazers with the school logo on the front pocket on the left side of the blazer (the pocket is only decorative), white shirts, blue clip on ties, black school trousers, black smart shoes. Only differences to their uniforms and Lily's is that she's wearing a black pleated skirt (it reaches down to mid thigh) and black knee high socks that she has pulled up to just below her knees, also her shoes are black and smart but her's are more what girls typically wear for school. The school's policy on skirts is that if you stand straight and your arms by your sides, if your fingertips go past the skirt that means it's too short, luckily Lily's isn't. The space between her skirt and knee high socks leaves an expanse of her white, creamy skin exposed to the elements but also to her classmates, if they cared to look.

The boys names are Max, Mason, and Thomas. They ain't popular at all, a stark contrast to Lily's popularity where she could get on with anyone. But Lily is friends with them, ever since their first week of year 7 (they got grouped together in an ICT class and the topic of gaming came up so they started playing with eachother afterschool). Their classmates always wondered why Lily, the most popular and prettiest girl in their year, hangs out with a bunch of "nerds" like them.

As for Lily's appearance she has fiery red hair that cascades down to the middle of her back, big blue eyes that give her a cute and innocent look, pale skin that is smooth and flawless, slim and in shape body thanks to her football training.

"Yep, just trying to figure out what can go in it." She responded, only peering up for a few seconds before turning her attention back to her backpack and locker.

Thomas steps forward and looks through Lily's backpack, Lily doesn't mind since there's nothing in there that's private.

"Right PE kit can stay in since that's our last period, we've got English next so that can stay in, you done your homework?" Thomas asks.

"Yeah" Lily nods her head.

"Bollocks!" Mason finally speaks up.

"Forgot to do it did ya?" Max asks already knowing the answer.

"Yep" Mason says not too happy that he's going to be in homework detention again.

"Hard luck" Max says not even trying to sound sympathetic.

Thomas and Lily finish sorting through her backpack and lock the locker.

"Right sorted" Thomas says to Lily.

Lily nods and the group start walking to English class since break time is almost over and Lily goes to get her phone out of her pocket when she realises it's not there.

"Guys, where's my phone?" Lily asks panicking.

"It's in your locker Lily calm down." Thomas reassured her.

"Why?" Lily said looking confused as she walks towards her locker to get her phone. The corridor is starting to fill up with students since break is about to finish. She unlocks her locker once again and grabs her phone and shuts her locker and locks it. She moves away from her locker pretty quickly when a loud

RRRRIIIIIIPPPPPP!!!!!

Lily has a feeling of knowing what's happened. She looks down and sees her My Little Pony themed panties, and the rest of her creamy thighs. She places her hands instantly over her panties trying to hide them, her face beet red a massive contrast to the pale skin of her legs. She bends her knees slightly and they knock together and she looks where her skirt had been torn off. The culprit..... her locker. Her skirt is halfway in the locker. The students in the hallway look at the spectacle and laugh at Lily's misfortune.

The boys, Max, Mason, and Thomas try to open her locker to free her skirt but the locker won't budge.

"I think it's jammed" Mason said panicky.

Lily hears the commotion the boys are making and once she heard that Mason said it was jammed one of the thoughts she had was "Maybe getting a locker wasn't such a great idea after all."

[SixPathsKeyblader]

Nice! I enjoy it. You should try writing a longer form grand narrative EUF story. If there is one tweak that I would make, it is this: The panties don't always have to be "childish panties" (e.g. My Little Pony or Dora the Explorer). Even just seeing her in normal plain white cotton panties or plain hot pink panties or polka dotted panties would be very appealing to me. If anything, having them always have some sort of kiddie design somewhat detracts from the appeal to me (just a little). For me, the appeal comes more so from the fact that she is in her underwear, rather than the prints on the panties. This is probably just a me thing, but whenever the kiddie prints are emphasized, it kind of makes me feel less like she's in her underwear, and more like she's just wearing a funny looking costume or a silly swimsuit/bloomers, which somewhat detracts from the appeal. That's just my take on it though. You do you in the end. I still enjoy it.

[SixPathsKeyblader]

Here's a good EUF story that you could consider continuing:

viewtopic.php?p=5060&hilit=Preteen+unde ... odel#p5060

[Moonshine+CC21]

Nice! I enjoy it. You should try writing a longer form grand narrative EUF story. If there is one tweak that I would make, it is this: The panties don't always have to be "childish panties" (e.g. My Little Pony or Dora the Explorer). Even just seeing her in normal plain white cotton panties or plain hot pink panties or polka dotted panties would be very appealing to me. If anything, having them always have some sort of kiddie design somewhat detracts from the appeal to me (just a little). For me, the appeal comes more so from the fact that she is in her underwear, rather than the prints on the panties. This is probably just a me thing, but whenever the kiddie prints are emphasized, it kind of makes me feel less like she's in her underwear, and more like she's just wearing a funny looking costume or a silly swimsuit/bloomers, which somewhat detracts from the appeal. That's just my take on it though. You do you in the end. I still enjoy it.

I get what you mean and yeah I usually prefer the fact that she's in her underwear and not really bothered of what they are but to be honest I couldn't think of anything specific to add to her panties so I decided to just give her some generic childish panties since, what I'm planning is that she can act cute and childish despite her age so yeah. But I'll definitely change it up a bit.

Trust me I want to do a long form story like "Amy Unfiltered" in length I mean, not premise (not chapter length either god almighty ) I love that story but god that writer can talk for whereever they're from, since I'm sure they said the story is translated. I've still got another story for Lily in year 9 to establish her character and then atleast 3 flashback stories, which one of them can be a 2 parter. Then I can try my hand at a long form story which I'll definitely need ideas for. But we'll cross that bridge when it comes to it

[Moonshine+CC21]

Here's a good EUF story that you could consider continuing:

viewtopic.php?p=5060&hilit=Preteen+unde ... odel#p5060

I don't know. I don't have nothing against continuing stories since it does give closure to stories people want to read. But me, I prefer when the girl's pants are down or were once on before their underwear is exposed.

I guess I could write it as in a few classmates recognise her from it when the pics go public so they pull her pants down when she's next at school to see if she actually wears underwear like that herself. But I don't know if it disrespects the author's original take on it and what other people imagined.