It's Just a Collar (Complete - 7/19)

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Re: It's Just a Collar (New 7/17)

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MissAriel wrote: Fri Jul 18, 2025 2:26 am This story is going on a bit longer than I thought and we're probably looking at a few more chapters here. While I mostly have the rest of the story planned out, I'm open to suggestions. Given the ending of the last chapter, we're likely to see Rachel to be in a bit of a bind here and there are a couple of ways the story could go.

Jennifer could get her hopes up and finally turn the tables on Rachel, only for that hope to be destroyed as Rachel not only talks her way out of it, but gains even more leverage on Jennifer in the process.

Or perhaps Rachel has been caught in the act and now it's up to Jennifer whether she remains captain of the track team. What sorts things should Rachel should have to do to maintain her spot at the top of the food chain?

Looking forward to hearing everyone's suggestions. Cheers.
I am really enjoying this story.
I hope that Jennifer will manage to turn the tables on Rachel. I think that if they really want to learn to understand each other, Rachel should experience the same embarrassment and humiliation as Jennifer.
To be honest, I really like ENF stories with comeuppance, but unfortunately they aren't very common
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MissAriel wrote: Fri Jul 18, 2025 2:26 am
Jennifer could get her hopes up and finally turn the tables on Rachel, only for that hope to be destroyed as Rachel not only talks her way out of it, but gains even more leverage on Jennifer in the process.

Looking forward to hearing everyone's suggestions. Cheers.

Definitely the above option. I love that Jennifer seems to secretly like what is happening to her and although outwardly she gives the impression that this is horrible or tries to act like this is no big deal, her body and her deep-down psyche hopes it will continue.

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A/N: This story ended up going in places I didn't expect, but I'm pretty happy with the outcome. I appreciated your suggestions. I was rather torn on which direction to go with, and in the end, I think I picked something of a middle ground. Hopefully you all enjoy this rather unique chapter.


Part 7

Jennifer sat in silence next to Rachel outside the coach’s office. Only moments ago, she had stripped completely in front of her teammates. Her teammates, by the way, that she would have to see every day for the rest of the school year. And perhaps even longer than that depending on how difficult it was to transfer schools. She swallowed bitterly and glared at Rachel. Rachel, her tormentor, her voluptuous figure exuding an undeniable aura of command and condescension, her hair a vibrant red, a color of victory and aggression. Rachel, the team captain, a few years older, felt seemingly untouchable. She had bested Jennifer at every turn, each interaction leading to an escalation of her own humiliation, culminating into the ultimate act of vindictive teasing: being forced to strip completely naked in front of an audience of her peers.

But now the world had been tilted on its head. Rachel had been caught red handed bullying poor Jennifer. If Jennifer played her cards right, it would be Rachel stripping at her beck and call.

Coach Burr, a man built like a brick wall and with a face so intimidating that students would choke down their lies before opening their mouths, had appeared, a monumental figure of authority. He gestured both women into his office. His eyes, sharp and dissecting, immediately fixated on the collar. The words, ‘Rachel’s Pet,’ had been all the evidence he needed to understand what had happened.

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“As you should both be well aware, hazing is unacceptable at this university,” Coach Burr said with a booming voice. The words were like a hammer smashing into Rachel’s glass house of conceit. The coach hadn’t needed to ask who was responsible: the culprit was written plainly on Jennifer’s neck. He looked Rachel in the eye as he spoke with the authority of a mountain. “What do you have to say for yourself?”

Rachel looked down, a rare moment where she was at a loss for words.

Coach Burr turned to Jennifer, his expression unchanged. “And Jennifer, why did you not come to me? You could have told me what was going on. I could have helped. But now you, too, have broken the school rules. Did you not attend the assembly earlier this week? Did we not tell you that this exact behavior was explicitly against school policy?”

“Yes, sir,” Jennifer replied meekly.

Coach Burr then turned his sights back to Rachel, his voice booming. It was said that Coach Burr only had two volumes: loud and very loud. “Rachel, did you not promise to treat your teammates with equity and respect? To uphold the values of this institution in exchange for the responsibility that was entrusted to you?”

“I’m sorry, sir,” Rachel murmured as she averted her eyes.

“That being said, I am not without a sense of humor,” Coach Burr laughed. Jennifer and Rachel twitched, his change in demeanor unexpected. “Rachel’s pet, haha. You kids come up with the silliest ways of expressing affection. You know, when I was a kid, when you liked someone, you wrote them an anonymous letter. Oh, you should have seen some of the poetry we came up with. It was something special. Actually, you know, I might have one of them right here.” Coach Burr rambled on while rummaging through his files. Jennifer and Rachel glanced at each other awkwardly. As Burr began to read some of his prizewinning Vogon-worthy poetry, Jennifer and Rachel reflected on the weight of their sins.

It felt like it would never end, but after some time, the poetry reading, and their suffering, came to an end. “Now I’ve got plenty more where that came from if you’d like to hear some more,” Coach Burr said with a grin. Rachel and Jennifer both shook their heads violently. “Oh, fine, I guess there's no accounting for taste." Coach Burr shook his head, a tear in his eye. "Oh, I must say, you two DO make an adorable couple." He sighed. "If only you could express it without breaking school rules that I didn't even know existed until last week,” he mused wistfully.

It was Jennifer’s voice that broke the silence first. “Coach, we’re not – I’m not – err –”

“Hey, you’ve got the wrong idea–” Rachel stammered.

“But I digress, ladies,” Coach Burr interrupted, “I should get back to the topic at hand. In light of recent events, while I am technically supposed to suspend anyone attending a school function in such inappropriate attire, I think we can all agree that winning the next track meet is far more important, yes?”

Jennifer and Rachel nodded vigorously. The tension in the room relaxed. Rachel breathed with a sigh of relief. It would seem that they had escaped punishment for the moment.

“However," Coach Burr said with a dramatic pause. Rachel held her breath. "While I’m not going to suspend you girls over what appears to me to be a rather harmless prank, I do believe that some punishment is warranted. Now, now, don't fret. I believe this is a very teachable moment for both of you,” he proclaimed.

“Teachable moment?” Jennifer and Rachel asked in unison.

“Jennifer, you can tell me what you think is an appropriate punishment for Rachel’s behavior on Friday. Now get out of my office, the both of ya. I’m already late for the pickleball tournament!” Coach Burr boomed as he shooed them into the hallway.

As they exited Coach Burr’s office, Jennifer turned to Rachel with an incredibly smug look on her face. The sheer weight of what had happened, the sheer amount of power suddenly thrust into her small hands, was overwhelming. Rachel’s fate now belonged to HER. But rather than stay and gloat, Jennifer kept her words short and sweet. “See you at 8:00, red. I’ll text you the deets,” Jennifer grinned wickedly as she walked by Rachel, frozen in time.

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By the time Jennifer made it back to her apartment, the spark of victory had ignited into a steady, determined flame. She had a skip in her step and an overwhelming joy that simply couldn’t be contained. She waited for Rachel inevitable arrival. They both knew that Jennifer held all the cards now.

After some time, there was a light knock on the door. Jennifer could almost hear the nervousness in her knock, so unusual for Rachel, ever confident, cool, and in control. Rachel, for all her bravado, was finally showing some cracks in her armor. Her captaincy, her reputation, her entire athletic career, hung in the balance.

Jennifer opened the door with a wide smile reminiscent of the one Rachel had only a few days before. “I’m glad you could make it on such short notice,” Jennifer teased.

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Rachel stood on the threshold, a picture of vibrant defiance. Her red hair, usually styled in voluminous waves, seemed a little flatter today. She wore a red sweater and dark light blue skinny jeans. Her full lips were set in a slightly challenging pout, her green eyes, usually sparkling with mischief, held a flicker of apprehension.

“All right, flash, I'm here. What do you want?” Rachel asked with a shrug in her shoulders, an air of nonchalance. It appeared to Jennifer that she had not yet grasped the gravity of the situation; of the power that she now held. Jennifer closed the door slowly, deliberately, the click echoing in the sudden silence. She turned, her gaze meeting Rachel’s, a sinister smile on her face.

“What I WANT is for you to feel what I felt. I want you to know the sting of humiliation as you strip down and bear your,” Jennifer paused for effect as she looked Rachel up and down, “considerable assets to me.”

Rachel scoffed, waving a dismissive hand. “Look, Jennifer, all that was stuff that you asked for. You literally set the terms of the bet. You were the one that insisted the loser streak across the football field. You were the one that insisted the loser resigned from the team. And then you were the one that begged and said you'd do anything to not resign."

Jennifer was stunned for a moment, a quick, clever reply not coming immediately to her. However, she remained steadfast in her desire for vengeance. "You made me strip in front of the team! I never asked for that!"

"It was just some harmless fun between teammates," Rachel replied.

“Harmless fun?” Jennifer repeated, a bitter edge creeping into her voice. “I was humiliated. Repeatedly. I had to streak across a football field. I had to clean your entire apartment, naked, while you stood over me, barking orders and making jokes. And to top it all off, I had to strip in front of all our teammates only wearing a humiliating collar.” Her voice rose slightly, the emotion finally breaking through her controlled facade. “Do you know what that felt like, Rachel? Do you have any idea?”

Rachel shifted uncomfortably, acknowledging that maybe it wasn’t entirely harmless. What had started as a silly prank had perhaps shifted into something a bit more than that. Rachel, ever an empathetic person, felt a slight pang of guilt. She admitted to herself that she hadn't been thinking about Jennifer’s feelings when she agreed to Riley’s amendment. Even she could admit that things had gone too far.

“Okay, when you put it that way, you're right," Rachel said with empathy. "I admit it. I went overboard. I really should have shut down Riley's suggestion. Making you strip in front of the team was way too much. And honestly, I didn't realize how much it upset you. Seriously, I’m sorry, Jen. I never meant to hurt you. I never meant for you to get in trouble. That’s why I picked you up in the parking lot after the football game. I've always tried to look out for you. Only I wasn't looking out for you at football practice. I should have been there for you that time. I'm sorry,” Rachel said, her lip trembling with heartfelt apology.

“I don’t think you’re sorry. Not yet,” Jennifer replied.

They stood in silence for a moment. Rachel's apology, though true and sincere, had not been enough to calm the tides of Jennifer's anger. The sting of humiliation, the burning sensation of orgasming in front of her teammates, of presenting herself completely naked, were still fresh in her mind.

“Now listen up. You’re going to do exactly what I tell you to tonight or I’m going to march right into Coach Burr’s office and tell him how everyone would be so much better off if you were off the team.”

Rachel’s eyes widened, her apology falling on deaf ears. “But we're teammates!” she squeaked.

“Strip, girl,” Jennifer said.

“Seriously?” Rachel asked.

“Did I stutter?” Jennifer asked.

Rachel stood frozen, her face slowly flushing a deep, angry red. The reality of her situation began to sink in. She had always been the one in control, the one pulling the strings. It had all begun with a silly bet to humble Jennifer’s attitude, but things had quickly spiraled out of control. Now she found herself at Jennifer’s mercy. Though she admitted the current situation was not entirely unjust, she did regret that she had caused Jennifer such pain earlier that day.

“Is this what you really want?” Rachel asked.

“Sweater,” Jennifer said.

Rachel shrugged. As you wish, she thought. She defiantly twisted her arms and pulled her sweater over her head. Her pride screamed in protest, but her sense of duty propelled her forward. She wordlessly folded her sweater and placed it neatly on the couch. With a frustrated sigh, she began to unbutton her jeans. Her fingers, usually nimble and confident, fumbled slightly against the metal buttons. The pop of the metal clasp seemed to echo loudly in the quiet apartment. Her jeans slid to the floor. She lightly stepped out of them and likewise folded them neatly.

“Shirt,” Jennifer commanded.

Rachel’s gaze dropped to her t-shirt, her face growing hotter. “Having fun?” she asked in a whisper.

“A lot,” Jennifer said cheerfully.

With another shaky sigh, Rachel reached for the hem of her t-shirt. She tugged it up slowly, revealing a toned midriff, then her stomach, the fabric bunching around her ample breasts. Her arms, surprisingly muscular, pulled the shirt up and over, momentarily obscuring her face. When it came down, her hair was slightly disheveled, and her face was even redder, but her forest green eyes met Jennifer’s with defiance. She boldly stood before Jennifer in only her underwear; in contrast, she was not embarrassed of her meticulously sculpted body, though the situation of being forced to strip by her former submissive admittedly made her blush.

The energy in the room shifted as Jennifer took in Rachel’s impressive assets. She was, needless to say, stacked. It was a little intimidating, but Jennifer shook her head and kept her composure. Remember, this is my chance for revenge, Jennifer thought.

“Socks and shoes,” Jennifer said in in a slightly higher note, her voice betraying her intentions.

Rachel bent down, Jennifer’s attention drawn to her metallic, polished red nails. She wrestled her soft fingers with the rough laces of her chunky boots. Finally, the boots came off, followed by her pink, puffy socks. She stood up straight again, her arms hugging her torso protectively.

“Bra,” Jennifer said flatly.

“You sure you don’t want me to remove my panties first, flash?” Rachel asked with a grin.

“Bra,” Jennifer repeated awkwardly. Rachel was not an easy horse to tame.

Rachel blushed as she slowly, reluctantly, reached behind her back. Her dexterous fingers expertly found the clasp and it came undone with a soft click. She pulled it off, her full, round breasts exposed to the cool air of Jennifer’s apartment for the first time. She cradled the bra in her hands for a moment before dropping it in the aforementioned pile of clothes.

Her breathing calmed. Though her face crimson, she was not ashamed. Anyone would be lucky to see her, her breasts full, her stomach toned, her arms muscular, an hourglass figure of elegance and beauty. The red strands of her hair flickered with each breath. Jennifer would not have the satisfaction of domination. Rachel stripped herself bare without complaint.

Her gaze averted, Rachel fingers glided downward towards her waist. Her thumbs hooked into the elastic waistband of her black, silky thong. With a quick, jerky motion, she pulled them down, letting them fall to her ankles, and stepped out of them.

The final prize removed, she stood before Jennifer completely naked.

Rachel’s body was as Jennifer had always known it to be: voluptuous, athletic, strong. Her shoulders were broad, her legs powerful. Even now, in the unforgiving light of Jennifer’s apartment, stripped of every shred of clothing, every minutia of dignity, her body completely exposed, her voluptuous body remained intimidating. Dominating Rachel would require far more than merely stripping her bare.

“Got what you wanted, flash?” Rachel quipped as she stood with her hands on her hips, an odd confidence swaying within her, unperturbed by her newly minted exposure.

“Almost,” Jennifer replied. She reached for her pocket and pulled out a black leather collar. It was identical in shape and material to the one Rachel had made her wear, but the silver engraving shimmered with different words: ‘JENNIFER’S PET’.

Rachel’s eyes widened, then narrowed in fury. “You’re ridiculous,” she hissed.

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“It will look cute on you,” Jennifer replied with a jovial grin.

Rachel wanted to protest, but the words died in her throat. She had to admit that it wasn’t entirely unfair. She had, after all, done the same to her. Her jaw tightened as Jennifer approached and, with a gentle but firm hand, fastened the collar around her neck. The cool leather against her skin, the weight of the engraved metal, felt like a brand. She could feel the words pressing against her throat, a declaration of ownership. The irony had a bitter taste to it. This must have been what Jennifer felt.

“Now let’s start with the kitchen,” Jennifer said cheerfully. “You can start by scrubbing the floor,” Jennifer instructed, gesturing vaguely. “And make sure to really put your back into it. I want this floor so clean that it shines my reflection.”

Rachel wordlessly walked past Jennifer and grabbed the cleaning supplies. She crawled down on her hands and knees and got to work. She began to scrub, her movements powerful. It was an exercise she was not unfamiliar. Rachel knew the meaning of hard work.

“You missed a spot, Rachel,” Jennifer said in a familiar tone.

Rachel’s jaw tightened, her cheeks burning. The humiliation of Jennifer echoing her own words back to her was immediate and profound. She stretched and scrubbed harder at a spot that wasn’t even there. The smell of the citrus cleaner filled the air.

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Rachel pressed down on the sponge. She scrubbed with a vengeance, determined to make the floor shine so bright that it would be beyond criticism. Despite how degrading it felt, Rachel’s pride remained intact. She knew that she made Jennifer do this and she could take it just as well as she could deal it. She could see Jennifer looking for any small mistake to capitalize on, but Rachel left her nothing to critique. This had not been going the way Jennifer thought it would.

“Floors clean. I’ll get the countertops next,” Rachel said cheerfully, fully committing to her repentance. She moved from the countertops to the sink, then to the stove top.

Jennifer continued her commentary, a soft, purring stream of criticism and instruction, and yet none of it really seemed to stick, as even Jennifer had to admit that everything Rachel touched was as pristine as her silky red hair. No matter how many 'spots' that she claimed Rachel missed, her words failed to evoke the emotions that Jennifer was looking for.

Once the kitchen had been cleaned, they moved to the bathroom. Jennifer led the way, a spring in her step, while Rachel followed, the black collar still sparkling against her pale neck. Jennifer continued to plot her vengeance. Sure, Rachel had cleaned one room while maintaining smug superiority, but eventually she would break. Of this there was no doubt.

The bathroom was small, tiled in cool blues and whites. Jennifer took a seat on some nearby shelving and pulled out her phone. She began to scroll, her finger tapping idly on the screen.

“Alright, Rachel,” Jennifer said, without looking up from her phone. “I want you really scrub those grout lines. Put some elbow grease into it.”

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Rachel knelt, the cold tiles biting into her knees and hands. It was an uncomfortable position, but not entirely unfamiliar. Tired, perhaps, but her endurance prevailed. She took a small brush and began to scrub the grout, her body swaying and bubbling uncontrollably with each harsh movement. Cleaning naked was certainly an experience, perhaps more so for her than Jennifer because of her generous proportions, though she refused to give Jennifer the satisfaction of complaint.

After some time, Rachel finished cleaning the bathroom. She pushed herself up, her knees stiff, and followed Jennifer into the living room, a space filled with comfortable furniture and shelves crammed with books and personal mementos. “The shelves, Rachel,” Jennifer announced, pointing towards a tall, built-in bookshelf. “Make sure you get the top, and don’t mind the stretch,” Jennifer teased.

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Rachel grinned at the memory. She remembered. She had made Jennifer stand on tiptoes, stretching her petite frame to its limit, her cute little butt clenched. Being much taller, she would not have to stretch so much, though Jennifer would admittedly have quite the view.

She took the feather duster and worked swiftly. She started with the lower shelves and worked her way up. As she moved upwards, she had to stretch, her lithe body elongating, her arms reaching above her head. The collar around her neck felt heavy, pulling at her as she extended. Her breasts, full and heavy, swayed slightly with each upward reach. She blushed and hoped Jennifer was enjoying the show.

Jennifer sat comfortably on the sofa, watching her, a satisfied gleam in her eyes. She wasn’t looking at her phone this time; she was watching intently. She felt an uncomfortable tingling down below. The feeling reminded her of a certain device.

Rachel gritted her teeth as she swiped away every last speck of dust. The stretch was uncomfortable, her ass leaving nothing to Jennifer’s imagination, her every curve and wrinkle revealed. She turned around and faced Jennifer with a relaxed shrug.

“Anything else?” Rachel asked.

Jennifer was annoyed. This was not going as planned. No matter how hard she tried to humiliate Rachel, she kept her smug attitude. Sure, she had blushed. She was clearly a little embarrassed, yet she was obviously not experiencing what Jennifer had. Jennifer had to do something. She had to reassert her dominance. She had to show Rachel that she owned her now.

“Not even close,” Jennifer hissed. Jennifer took Rachel’s arm, her grip surprisingly firm, and led her into the bedroom. Rachel followed passively, her eyes open with curiosity. The bedroom was softly lit, the curtains drawn, creating an almost intimate atmosphere.

“Sit,” Jennifer commanded, gesturing to the edge of the bed, and Rachel obediently climbed onto the bed. Jennifer then picked up a length of thin, durable rope from her bedside table. “Put your hands behind your head, Rachel,” Jennifer instructed, her voice calm, but with an unyielding steel to it.

“You know how to use that, tiger?” Rachel quipped.

“Of course I do. Just put your hands behind your head,” Jennifer repeated, though her voice betrayed her with just a hint of nervousness as it raised another octave.

Rachel complied silently, her arms raising, her hands clasping the back of her head, her elbows flared out. The pose stretched her chest, making her breasts appear fuller, more prominent. Rachel observed Jennifer silently as she worked, twisting and tying, crawling back and forth to find a better angle, to get the rope just right. She actually found Jennifer’s dedication to her newfound role of dominant to be a little cute.

Jennifer moved swiftly behind her and tied Rachel’s wrists together with the rope. It was tight, but there was slack in the rope. Jennifer did at least appear to have some idea of what she was doing as checked to make sure Rachel was comfortable. Rachel’s circulation remained intact. Once her wrists were secure, Jennifer fastened the rope to a small, sturdy notch on the wall, a place Jennifer had perhaps once hung some sort of painting or portrait. Rachel was now tethered, her arms pulled back and slightly upwards, leaving her chest thrust forward, her body entirely exposed.

“Now, Rachel,” Jennifer said, her voice slow and deliberate, “I want you to arch your back. Really push your chest out. We can take a photo so you can remember how you got here.”

“Like this, flash?” Rachel said in a sultry voice as she extended her back, pushing her magnificent chest out like the crowned jewel that it was, her eyes meeting Jennifer’s with a deep undercurrent of sexual tension.

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Jennifer stared dumbfounded. Rachel was completely unmoved. And she looked... incredible.

"Um, yeah...” Jennifer squeaked. “That’s...” Jennifer paused, trying to find the words. “...yeah,” she repeated. “Now how does that feel, Rachel? How does it feel to be humiliated and exposed?” Jennifer taunted as she took out her phone to snap a photo.

“Hey, Jennifer, can I ask you something real quick?” Rachel asked calmly.

“What?” Jennifer replied, taken aback, nervously dropping her phone onto the mattress without taking a picture.

“Will you just shut up and kiss me?” Rachel replied.



...some hours later, Jennifer nestled in Rachel’s powerful arms fast asleep. Rachel gently stroked her pretty blonde hair. “Such a good girl,” she whispered. “But we’ll have to talk about your punishment when you wake up.”

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Loved the story but I do have to wonder how many people on this site read The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
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cradulich wrote: Sat Jul 19, 2025 6:09 am Loved the story but I do have to wonder how many people on this site read The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
Never actually read it, but I know from Vogon poetry.
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Part 8

Jennifer reflected on the night before. What started as a power play, a cruel assertion of her dominance over Rachel, had somehow twisted into something far more complicated. The raw exposure, the shared secrets, the uncomfortable intimacy had cracked open a door between them. Slowly, impossibly, her anger towards Rachel had twisted and transformed into an involuntary sort of respect... to an undeniable attraction. When Jennifer has demanded to know how Rachel felt tied up, exposed, and humiliated, Rachel had shockingly asked that she shut up and kiss her. Rather than being humbled or embarrassed by Jennifer’s display of dominance, Rachel had almost seemed amused.

Their late-night sexual rendezvous had been a blend of fierce competition and passionate affection. They fought and they reconciled, they pushed and pulled, but somehow Rachel always ended up on top. And no matter how much it infuriated her, Jennifer only wanted more. So much so that she had willingly acquiesced to Rachel’s every desire, her every whim. And to her own dismay, Jennifer had wound up ending the night collared as Rachel’s pet.

But even as their bodies intertwined in the dark, as their lips caressed one another’s, the memory of her naked lap was a painful memory seared into Jennifer’s mind. The humiliation had been intense, deeply ingrained, and despite the tender kisses and sweet consummation, Jennifer felt an undeniable thirst for vengeance. She had gotten Rachel back, in a way; thanks to Coach Burr, she had turned the tables and forced Rachel cleaned her apartment in the buff. It had been satisfying. A taste of Rachel’s own medicine so to speak. And even Rachel conceded that it was fair. But Rachel’s casual concession of Jennifer’s painstakingly, carefully planned revenge was actually part of the problem. Rachel had taken it all in too easily.

As they laid in Jennifer’s bed, their limbs entangled, the moonlight painting silver stripes across their exposed flesh, Jennifer knew it wasn't enough. The score wasn’t quite settled. Not really. It wouldn’t be. Not until it was Rachel that was forced to strip in front of an audience.

The morning light began to peak through the window and Rachel started to stir. Evidently, she, too, was an early riser.

“Sleep well, Jennifer?” Rachel asked with a knowing smile.

“Next to you, who wouldn’t?” Jennifer replied.

Rachel, always the more direct one, shifted, rolling gracefully onto her side, then smoothly over Jennifer, her long, athletic body pressing down, pinning Jennifer gently to the mattress. Her red hair splayed like a fiery halo around her head onto the pillow, and her emerald eyes, usually alight with competitive fire, were softened by post-coital contentment. She propped her elbow onto the pillow, her gaze tracing the curve of Jennifer’s jawline, then dipping lower, lingering on the delicate swell of her chest.

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“So,” Rachel murmured, her voice deep, husky, filled with a certain satisfaction, a faint smile escaping her lips, “are we good now? The slate’s clean? Or rather, the apartment’s clean?”

Jennifer returned the smile, blushing at Rachel’s bold display of dominance, chuckling at her cleverness. She ran a small hand up Rachel’s smooth, muscled back, feeling the ripple of her lats under her fingertips. The warmth of Rachel’s skin, the comforting weight of her body, her familiar rosy scent... it all conspired to lull her into complacency, but Jennifer clung fiercely to her resolve.

“No,” she said, her voice quiet but firm.

“No?” Rachel repeated, a faint frown creasing her brow. “Still not satisfied with your... victory?” she asked. The word ‘victory’ lingered in the air.

Jennifer composed herself. “No. No, we’re not even. Not until you feel what I felt.”

“And what is it that you want me to feel?” Rachel asked as she stuck her tongue in Jennifer’s mouth. Rachel’s calmness, her relaxation, her nonchalance, only served to infuriate Jennifer further, though she couldn’t help but surrender to Rachel’s seduction, returning her kiss, lightly squeezing her soft, ample chest.

As the kiss ended, Jennifer took a deep breath, her heart beginning to pound with anticipation. She couldn’t be distracted any longer. She had to do something that would push Rachel so far that even she would lose her composure. Something that would truly equalize them. Revenge just wasn’t satisfying when the other person just ‘accepted’ it. She wanted Rachel to beg her for mercy. And she knew exactly the thing that would bring Rachel to her limits.

“I want you to sign up to be a nude art model,” Jennifer said flatly.

The words hung in the air, heavy and audacious. For a long moment, Rachel simply stared, her expression a mixture of disbelief and amusement. “You’re joking,” she finally breathed, her voice barely a whisper.

“Oh, I’m dead serious,” Jennifer countered, a slow, triumphant smile spreading across her lips. Even Rachel, bold as she was, would be reluctant to strip in front of a live audience. An audience, by the way, that would record her every line and curve in her body in ink. It would leave a visual record that she could never erase. It was the perfect revenge for her ‘naked lap’.

“There’s an art class at the community center. And I know for a fact that they’re always in need of models. Nude models. For some reason, they just can’t seem to get any volunteers. You, Rachel, are going to help them.”

Rachel pushed herself up further, rising to her knees above Jennifer, her expression now a mask of pure indignation. “Absolutely not! Are you insane? I would never – that’s… that’s humiliating! Our teammates, Coach Burr, my classmates, even my parents... anyone could find out!” Rachel whimpered.

“It’s only fair, cap. After all, I didn’t see you complaining when I started stripping for the track team.” Her voice dropped, becoming steel-sharp, “and besides, if you don’t, I’ll tell Coach Burr everything. You wouldn’t want that, would you?”

“Oh no,” Rachel said, her voice rising hysterically. “Whatever will I do? Jennifer, please, I’ll do anything. Please don’t make me do this!”

“Oh, you’re going to do it all right,” Jennifer replied, but her smug grin was cut short as Rachel returned a devilish grin.

“Is that what you wanted, flash? For me to beg you for mercy? You’re adorable,” Rachel teased as she teased a fluffy strand of Jennifer’s hair. She let out a long, frustrated sigh. “Fine, Jennifer. I’ll sign the volunteer sheet. Are you satisfied now, my pet?” Rachel grinned as she traced the collar with her red fingernail, an act that brought an involuntary warmth to Jennifer down below.

Jennifer felt annoyed. Somehow, even when Rachel was agreeing to do exactly what she told her to, it still felt like she was at her mercy. Still, Jennifer had gotten what she wanted. Rachel would bear herself before an audience; her miraculous curves sketched by some of the finest artists in the university. And she would be happy to pay these handsome artists a fair sum for their sketches. A memento to remember her moment of triumph forever.

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The following Saturday, Jennifer arrived at the Northwood Community Center, a nervous flutter in her stomach mingling with a delicious sense of anticipation. She wore a simple, casual outfit, jeans and a comfortable hoodie. Her short blonde hair was neatly combed, her face scrubbed clean of makeup. She carried a small sketchbook with her. Though she was no artist, she was happy to give her best shot at sketching Rachel’s appreciable assets. She was just another young, budding artist who would just so happen to witness Rachel’s very public humiliation by chance.

She entered the art studio, a large, airy room bathed in the muted light filtering through high windows. Easels were scattered throughout, some already set up with blank canvases or paper alongside stools and drawing boards. A faint smell of charcoal and turpentine hung in the air. A handful of students were already milling around, chatting quietly, setting up their supplies. Jennifer scanned the room, looking for Rachel.

A woman with kind eyes and an artist’s smock, presumably the instructor, was at the front, adjusting a spotlight. Jennifer approached her tentatively. “Excuse me,” she began, “I’m here about the figure drawing class. My friend Rachel said she’d be here today?”

The instructor smiled warmly. “Ah, yes! You must be Jennifer. Rachel already checked in. She’s waiting for you just back there in the changing room.” She gestured towards a door tucked away in a corner of the studio. “We’ll be starting in a few minutes once everyone’s settled, so please hurry, and thank you so much for coming.”

Jennifer’s heart pounded with a mixture of excitement and a strange, unfamiliar guilt. She felt a prickle of unease. She wondered if she’d gone too far, but the thought quickly vanished beneath a wave of vindication. This final act of humiliation would at last make them even. For all the times that Rachel had made her feel small, humiliated, vulnerable; for all the times that she’d been forced to expose herself. This was justice and it felt good. Deserved. She couldn’t help but walk into the changing room with a smug grin.

But Jennifer’s heart skipped a beat. Something felt off about the situation. Rachel wasn’t dressed in a robe, ready to strip. She was fully dressed, wearing her usual confident smirk, a fluffy red sweater, and skinny jeans, a clipboard in hand. And in her other hand, a sketchbook of her own. This didn’t look like a girl nervously about to bear herself before an audience for the first time.

“Hey, flash, ready for your grand debut part deux?” Rachel grinned.

“You – what?” Jennifer gasped. Had Rachel set her up? Even knowing that she would tell Coach Burr everything? This had to be some kind of mistake. “No, you can’t do this! You promised! You said you would sign up to model nude!” Jennifer protested with a pout.

“I said I’d sign the volunteer sheet, and I think you’ll find that I did!” Rachel beamed, shoving the list in her face. As Jennifer ran her eyes down the sheet, she confirmed it was true. Rachel’s name WAS on the sheet. Only Rachel had signed up as a ‘posing assistant’. A chill rose up Jennifer’s spine as her eyes slowly moved down to find her own name on the sheet. Today’s nude model would be none other than Jennifer herself.

The words struck Jennifer like a physical blow. The loophole. The meticulous, infuriating loophole. Rachel hadn’t lied. She had promised to sign the sheet and so she had. Jennifer had been so consumed by her own cleverness, her desire for revenge, that she hadn’t even considered the possibility of Rachel turning it back on her.

Jennifer’s carefully constructed composure shattered like glass. What could she do? The class was expecting her. It wasn’t as if they could change models at the last minute. If she made a scene, tried to explain... no, no one would believe her. The class would be ruined. Everyone’s time would be wasted and it would be all her fault. Jennifer’s meek protests died in her throat as she began to accept her unfortunate circumstance.

Rachel turned, and with a flourish, extended her clipboard towards Jennifer. “Jennifer, darling,” she purred, her voice overly pleasant and light, “I need you to sign the consent form. Oh, it's nothing to worry about. It's just a formality; all the models have to do it. So if you could just sign right here on this little dotted line and then we can start getting you changed," Rachel said helpfully.

Jennifer bitterly signed her name on the dotted line, a binding contract for her own demise. The irony was not lost on her. It should have been Rachel. Yet somehow, yet again, Rachel had come out on top. It was exhausting. Infuriating. How could she have let this happen again? And for the fourth time?

Jennifer sighed with resignation. She quickly stripped her clothes off under Rachel’s piercing emerald eyes, no longer shy of her nudity. After all, Rachel had been given a very personal, thorough tour of her body in her very own bedroom just a few nights before. At this point, there wasn’t much of anything to hide from her. Jennifer gave Rachel a shrug, shoving her clothes into a bag. Rachel gently helped Jennifer push her arms through the modesty robe as she willingly accepted her fate.

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“Good morning, everyone,” Rachel announced, her voice ringing clearly through the suddenly quiet studio. “And welcome to today’s figure drawing class. My name is Rachel and I’ll be assisting our lovely instructor, Miss Birch, today.” There were some murmurs in the class. Rachel, the track team captain? She was a campus legend, having broken nearly every school record in long distance running in her freshman year. The class needed no introduction; everyone knew exactly who she was. “And to kick things off, we have our model for the day, Jennifer! After hearing that the class would be canceled without a model, she valiantly volunteered so that you all could draw today. As this is her first time modeling, please give her a round of applause for being so brave!”

And with that, there was applause.

Jennifer’s jaw dropped. Her mind reeled, trying to process what was happening. She stared at the grinning faces of Kate and Riley, her teammates from the track team. Though it was unpleasant having them there, they had seen it all before. No, that was not what drained the color from her face. Rather, it was Richard, quarterback of the football team, her former crush that she had so boldly promised to cheer on the frontlines in the football game. That she had so brazenly flirted with in front of everyone. The Richard that she prayed every night had not recognized her during her infamous spectacle at the halftime show.

Rachel’s eyes filled with concern. “One moment, please,” she announced to the class as she pulled Jennifer aside into the hallway.

“What’s wrong, Jen? You look as pale as a ghost. You good?” Rachel asked.

“Why is Richard here?” Jennifer asked angrily, her face red with fury.

“Oh, is that your Richard?” Rachel asked.

“No... I mean, yes... I mean, you know. He’s that Richard. The quarterback? Come on. This is too far even for you,” Jennifer spat. She was seeing red, but Rachel soothed her with a gentle kiss.

“I didn’t know. Stay here,” Rachel commanded. She briefly left the room. Jennifer stewed in her anger. Why the hell did it have to be Richard of all people? She’d lived through a lot of things, but she wasn’t sure she’d survive this one. No, she was going to put her foot down. Rachel had gone too far this time.

When Rachel returned, Jennifer was ready to let her have it. However, Rachel disarmed her effortlessly, gently putting her finger on Jennifer’s lips. “Shh. I took care of it. It’s okay. He’s gone. You okay now?”

Jennifer was stunned. Had she just done what she thought she did?

Sure enough, as Jennifer followed Rachel back into the hall, Richard was gone. Jennifer’s anger softened. She had to admit that Rachel had protected her just now. And, to be fair, this wasn't the first time. She always had. During the halftime show, she had meticulously planned her escape route. She met her in the parking lot holding all her clothes. She had driven her home. Rachel may have pushed her boundaries, yes, but she had to acknowledge that she’d never been in any real danger. She knew now that Rachel’s apology the other night had been sincere.

Nevertheless, the reality of stripping in front of an audience came crashing down upon her like a meteorite. Her gaze darted desperately around the room. It was time for her grand debut part two. The instructor beamed expectantly. The students, including her teammates Kate and Riley, were watching, a mixture of casual interest and perverted desire on their faces.

Jennifer’s heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage. Her hands began to tremble uncontrollably. She couldn’t believe she was about to do this. She, Jennifer, the prodigy sprinter, a rising star of the college track team, a legend in her former small town in Iowa, was about to strip naked in front of not only her teammates, but this time her classmates as well. Both male and female, these students would be sure to recognize her should they pass by in the halls. And to top it all off, they would be recording her nude form in ink, immortalizing her humiliating exposure for all time. The very thing she had orchestrated for Rachel was now being exacted upon her in a cruel twist of fate.

There was no more time. Taking a shaky breath that did little to steady her racing heart, Jennifer disrobed. There she was. Naked once again.

The studio, which had seemed like a large, impersonal space moments before, now felt suffocatingly small. Every eye in the room immediately fixed on her. The quiet murmur of conversation ceased. The scraping of chairs stopped. Jennifer’s cheeks burned crimson, a blush that started at her collarbones and swept upwards, engulfing her face and neck. She could feel the heat radiating from her skin. Her bare feet felt cold on the polished floor, each step a conscious effort. Her entire body trembled, a fine, uncontrollable tremor that started in her limbs and vibrated through her core. Her hands instinctively went to cover herself, but she quickly dropped them, knowing it was a pointless gesture. She would be posed. She could not cover herself.

She forced herself to walk towards the elevated platform, her gaze fixed on a point just beyond Rachel’s shoulder, anywhere but the faces that were now openly staring at her. She heard an inaudible whisper from Kate, a stifled giggle from Riley. The air crackled with an odd mixture of curiosity, embarrassment, and a palpable tension.

She reached the platform and, under the instructor’s guidance, stepped onto it. The spotlight, intended to illuminate the model, felt like a harsh, accusatory beam, revealing every inch of what should have been her most private parts.

“Alright, everyone,” the instructor said, her voice calm, professional; a stark contrast to the chaos in Jennifer’s mind. “Let’s start with a simple standing pose. Jennifer, if you could just stand facing the class, arms relaxed at your sides.”

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Jennifer complied, forcing her arms to her side while her mind screamed to cover herself. She felt incredibly self-conscious of her small breasts, the subtle curve of her hips, her relatively boyish figure. She once again found herself completely helpless to Rachel’s schemes. She dared not move for fear of drawing the sweet professor’s ire. The mere hint of non-compliance would no doubt invite harsh criticism. She tried to slow her breathing, but it came in shallow, ragged gasps. She could feel every single gaze on her, the weight of their scrutiny pressing down. She could hear the pencils meeting their sketchpads, smell the charcoal, see the vivid paint bringing her figure to life. She imagined Rachel, standing somewhere in the periphery, watching with those haunting forest green eyes, enjoying every agonizing moment of her unconditional defeat. And a strange, traitorous warmth began to unfurl deep within her, a tingling sensation that she recognized as arousal. A familiar feeling that reminded her of the track race she had lost so convincingly. The humiliation was so profound, so utterly overwhelming, that it was twisting into something else, something forbidden and deeply unsettling. Her clitoris throbbed faintly, a slow, insistent pulse that defied her mortification. Though anxiety swelled, though it felt as if everyone in the room could see the evidence painted across her nether regions, the class was silent. They continued to create their so-called art.

Minutes crawled by like hours. The only sounds were the soft scratch of charcoal on paper, the rustle of clothing as students shifted on their stools, and the frantic drumming of Jennifer’s own heart. Her skin felt hypersensitive, every subtle breath of air, every shift of light, magnified.

“Now, let’s try a profile pose,” the instructor announced. “Jennifer, if you could turn to your right, facing the windows, and perhaps lift your left arm gently towards the ceiling, as if reaching.”

Jennifer turned, feeling even more exposed as her side, the curve of her stomach, a tiny pooch imperceptible to most, the line of her spine, her tight, small buttocks now presented to the class. Lifting her arm made her delicate ribs stand out, and she felt a sudden, acute awareness of her collarbones, her shoulder blade. She imagined the crude drawings that were no doubt recording for this moment for eternity. She would so happily burn them if given the chance.

“No, not like that. Relax your hand. It should feel natural, relaxed, like a child reaching towards the sun. Rachel, can you help her?” the professor critiqued.

She mimicked Rachel’s movements, softening her hand, relaxing her flexed arm. “Good job, you've got it," Rachel soothed.

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Jennifer felt herself warm. Rachel stirred more emotions within her. Her mind frantically raced between humiliation and pleasure. The chaos of her mind pulled her in what felt like six directions. The instructor, oblivious to Jennifer’s internal torment, continued to guide her through poses. Each one felt progressively more intimate, more embarrassing.

“Alright, now, let’s try a seated pose. Jennifer, if you could sit on the stool here,” the instructor indicated a simple wooden stool, “facing slightly towards the left. Perhaps bring your knees up, wrapping your arms around them, leaning forward a little.”

Sitting down felt like a slight relief, but the new angle offered a fresh wave of exposure. Her thighs, pressed together, seemed to bulge slightly, her stomach folded. Wrapping her arms around her knees brought her breasts into fuller view, pressing them together. She felt utterly vulnerable. Her nipples hardened, a betrayal she could feel but hoped none could see. The pink flush on her skin deepened. Her horniness was now undeniable, a confusing, unwelcome companion to her furious blush. It was almost as if her body, overwhelmed by the intensity of the situation, was reacting with a perverse surge of arousal, a natural mechanism gone wildly awry.

“Good, good,” the instructor murmured, walking around the platform, adjusting a light. “Now, Jennifer, can you perhaps part your legs slightly? Relax them. And maybe tilt your head back, looking up. Like a Greek sculpture. Contemplate the mysteries of the universe.”

Jennifer obeyed, her legs parting just a fraction, revealing more of her inner thighs, her pubic mound. She could feel every muscle in her inner thighs clenching and unclenching, a nervous tremor that was also a subtle pulse of pleasure.

“No, no, part your legs a bit more, please. You’re simply too stiff. Rachel, could you be a dear and help her?”

And so Rachel was there again, gently parting her legs, revealing her inner sex to a room full of what she presumed to be very, very horny boys. Though she could not judge them given her own sexual predicament. Her clitoris throbbed with betrayal as Rachel touched her thigh.

Her gaze, directed upward as instructed, prevented her from seeing the faces of her peers directly, but she could feel their eyes dig deep into her crevices and secrets. She imagined Riley's smirk and Kate’s shocked eyes. Rachel, she knew, was enjoying every minute of this.

The poses became even more challenging, pushing Jennifer further into her discomfort and escalating arousal.

“Now, let’s try a reclining pose,” the instructor said. “Jennifer, if you could lie on your side, knees slightly bent, perhaps one arm extended gracefully above your head.”

Jennifer lay down, the hard surface of the platform cool against her bare skin. Her breasts spilled slightly, the curve of her stomach was more prominent, her hips spread. She felt completely open, splayed out for their consumption. The shame burned throughout her body, but the arousal, too, was a persistent, undeniable. She felt a trickle of wetness, and her cheeks ignited. This was unbearable.

“Excellent,” the instructor praised. “Now, let’s get a different angle. Jennifer, could you return to the podium and face away from the class? Yes, yes, exactly. Now perhaps arch your back slightly, lifting your hips, bringing your hands to rest lightly at your sides.”

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Jennifer turned, her eyes momentarily meeting Rachel’s. Rachel was standing near an easel, not drawing, just watching, a faint, unreadable smirk playing on her lips. Jennifer quickly looked away. Arching her back pushed her butt outward, giving the young art students an impressive view that would have never been given freely otherwise. Jennifer tried not to think about what all they could see back there, though she was sure Rachel would have been happy to tell her. The vulnerability felt overwhelming, and the internal struggle between humiliation and the unsettling throb of arousal was practically torture. Every single nerve ending in her body felt alive, electrified. She could feel tiny beads of sweat forming on her brow, her armpits.

The clock on the wall seemed to mock her, its hands crawling like a snail. How long could an hour go on for? She endured a series of increasingly elaborate and revealing poses: kneeling with her head thrown back, one leg extended; standing with her hands clasped behind her head, her chest thrust forward; bending over slightly, presenting her backside to the room. Each pose stripped away another layer of her composure, her dignity, leaving her raw and tingling. Her muscles ached from holding the unnatural positions, but the physical discomfort was dwarfed by the emotional agony of sexual tension. She was a paradox of shame and yearning.

She could almost hear the thoughts of her peers, the silent judgments, the curious assessments, the blatant lust from the male students. She felt her face heating up again and again, a continuous blush that never truly faded. Her mind still yet screamed to cover herself, but her body refused. It continued attack her, her pussy throbbing with delight. She hated it, every single humiliating second, yet a part of her, a forbidden part of her, felt practically electrified by the experience.

Finally, agonizingly, after what felt like an entire lifetime, the instructor’s voice broke through the haze of Jennifer’s self-consciousness. “Alright everyone, that’s time! Thank you, Jennifer, for your excellent modeling tonight. And you, Rachel, for being so helpful with her posing. I hope so much that you’d come back, Jennifer.”

“Any time, professor. I’m just glad you didn’t have to cancel the class,” Rachel replied.

“Yes, it was very kind of you and Jennifer to reach out at the last minute. Jennifer, truly, feel free to contact us any time. We would be happy to have you come back again.” Jennifer gave a nervous laugh. Not in a million years am I EVER coming near this building again, she thought. “And Rachel, we would be delighted to have you model should the inspiration ever grab you.”

“Oh, that’s lovely, but unfortunately, I, erm, am quite busy with my track team obligations,” Rachel stammered nervously.

“Oh, that’s no problem, Rachel. I’d be happy to help cover those for you. I wouldn’t want you to miss out on this experience,” Jennifer said.

So, Jennifer had chosen violence. Rachel couldn’t help but chuckle.

“I’ll try my best, but I can’t make any promises. Hectic schedule with regionals coming up. Anyways, we REALLY must be going, but thank you so much, professor,” Rachel said curtly as she dragged Jennifer back into the changing room. There was no chance in hell she was going to model nude for the art class. Maybe in Jennifer’s dreams. Even she wasn’t that bold.

“Here,” Rachel said, her voice low and surprisingly comforting, “you must be freezing. And exhausted.” She expertly hooked Jennifer’s bra behind her back and helped her step into her panties. Jennifer’s hands shaking slightly. The soft fabric against her raw, exposed skin felt like salvation. She quickly found herself fully dressed again. Her precious clothes felt so soft and comforting, as if they had been tailored by an angel. A wave of profound relief washed over her as the tension in her muscles began to dissipate.

Rachel stepped closer, her hand reaching out to gently touch Jennifer’s flushed cheek. Her fingers were cool against Jennifer’s burning skin. “You did good, Jen,” she murmured, her thumb stroking lightly. “Really good. I’m pretty sure they’ve never had a model as hot as you before,” Rachel complimented.

Jennifer looked up at Rachel, her eyes still wide with the residual shock and humiliation of the past hour. But now, as Rachel’s touch lingered, as her emerald eyes, usually so sharp, gazed at her with a new, tender warmth, something shifted inside Jennifer. The shame began to recede, replaced by a strange, overwhelming surge of emotion. It was anger, yes, at Rachel for putting her through this, but beneath it, an undeniable flicker of attraction. The sheer audacity of Rachel’s stunt had been infuriating, but also, perversely, incredibly hot.

“You… you set me up,” Jennifer whispered, her voice barely audible.

Rachel’s lips curved into a soft, knowing smile. “I did. You wanted revenge, a public spectacle. Punishment. And so, I gave it to you.” She leaned in closer, her voice dropping to a seductive whisper. “Did you enjoy it?”

Jennifer swallowed hard, her gaze fixed on Rachel’s lips. The memory of the scrutinizing gazes, the overwhelming exposure, the bewildering arousal… it all coalesced into a potent, intoxicating mix. She felt a blush creep back up her neck, but this time, it was from a different kind of heat.

“It turned me on,” Jennifer admitted, the words spilling out before she could stop them, raw and honest. “That you… that you turned the tables on me. That you dared.”

Rachel’s smile widened, a triumphant, satisfied gleam in her eyes. “I thought that might be the case.” She moved closer still, her hand sliding from Jennifer’s cheek to cup the back of her head, her fingers tangling in her short blonde hair. “I know you like it. The humiliation, the loss of control. I think a part of you might have even wanted to lose that bet on the race track,” Rachel mused.

Their lips met then, a slow, deep kiss that was both a surrender and a victory. It was a kiss that acknowledged Rachel’s dominance, her cunning reversal, her conquest over Jennifer, and the undeniable desire that had somehow blossomed between them. It was a promise that their complicated, thrilling game was far from over, but that from now on, they would play it together.

Hand in hand, Jennifer wrapped in Rachel’s red sweater, they walked out of the art studio, leaving behind the studio that had long since emptied out. They left the community center and stepped out onto the bus, sharing a booth by the window, the setting sun painting the sky in fiery hues that mirrored Rachel’s hair.

The score was finally even, at least for now. Though Jennifer knew, with a spark that raced through her veins, that she would win the next round for sure.

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Re: It's Just a Collar (Complete - 7/19)

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With that, the story has come to a close. While I'm sure there are many more adventures for Jennifer, Rachel, and certainly the purple-haired Kate in the future, I feel this story has reached its conclusion. That being said, as an extra bonus, I wanted to share a few captions and extras of 'alternative endings' to certain chapters. While these ideas won't get a full chapter behind them, I've provided some short little blurbs of what could have been in a parallel universe.

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Rachel nervously covered her chest with a deep blush as she tiptoed out of the darkness and onto the brightly lit field. It wasn't supposed to be like this, thought. The previous night, when the up-and-coming new recruit Jennifer had suggested a race for all the marbles, Rachel had reluctantly agreed. She thought perhaps this would be an important lesson in humility for Jennifer. However, things had not gone according to plan.

"If you don't get moving, I will march you across that field myself, red," Jennifer threatened.

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Rachel stood in front of the track line with an air of nervousness about her. Only a short time before, she had confidently announced that the unfortunate girl who came in last place would have to run an extra lap completely naked. She never thought that unfortunate girl would be her, the 'captain' of the track team.

Jennifer, a spunky freshman recruit with short blonde hair, couldn't stop laughing, as this was in fact not the first time Rachel had lost to her, and it certainly wouldn't be the last.

Dana glanced nervously at Riley. Wasn't this all a bit much? But Riley, an athletic girl with abs of steel, grinned with amusement. It was only fair. Rachel had suggested it, after all.

Kate, a veteran of the team, blushed fiercely at her close friend's naked debut.

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Rachel waited nervously for Jennifer to return. She couldn't quite believe that she was just 'letting' this happen, though she didn't have a whole lot of choice in the matter.

As captain of the track team, she thought it would be easy to put Jennifer in her place. However, she had greatly underestimated Jennifer's desire to win at any cost. Now she found herself at Jennifer's apartment without a hint of dignity, her clothes surrendered at the front door. Her day had been spent obediently answering her incessant demands with "yes ma'am" or "no ma'am."

When she said she'd do 'anything' to keep her captain title, being tied up naked and tickled was definitely NOT what she had in mind.
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Re: It's Just a Collar (New 7/18)

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cradulich wrote: Sat Jul 19, 2025 6:09 am Loved the story but I do have to wonder how many people on this site read The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
I literally wrote an ENF parody of the first book. I'd say plenty of us know the series.

Also hooray for art class antics! You'd think Jennifer would learn to cut her losses some day, but she won't. She'll be in the retirement home trying to finally settle the score, somehow getting tricked into strip BINGO.
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Re: It's Just a Collar (Complete - 7/19)

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Thanks for the very enjoyable story, MissAriel. The ending was very satisfying as well: I have never liked bad endings where the girl's life is ruined, because they make me sad.

As a side note, while nude art modelling is a very common trope in ENF stories, I think it's one of the least embarrassing experiences in reality. Running a lap completely naked in front of your teammates is much worse! A nude model is supposed to be naked, so nobody really cares, especially not art students who are only focused on drawing.
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Re: It's Just a Collar (Complete - 7/19)

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Well the teammates were there too, drawing her, and I'm sure plenty of those drawings will wind up taped to the inside of lockers for the lawls. Hard to describe modeling as not as embarrassing when you factor in the explicit level of posing involved, including with men in the group seeing it all.
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