MaireadM wrote: Wed Oct 01, 2025 7:30 pm
Will Jacqui provide any entertainment when she has him
In her bedroom.
Good question! Would you want her to, or is it more fun to keep the nakedness lopsided???
I like it when the girl is being provocative with her appearance. A tank top with no bra on, short shorts, or a button shirt with several top
buttons undone...that sort of thing. Keeps the guy aroused constantly, even before she gets his clothes off.
Some readers don't want any skin at all showing on the girl, and are Clothed Female purists.
I personally think it would be a ton of fun having Jacqui naked as well. It would be so much fun for them exploring each other’s bodies and learning about the opposite genders.
I definitely do understand if you just want to keep it ENM though.
MaireadM wrote: Wed Oct 01, 2025 7:30 pm
Will Jacqui provide any entertainment when she has him
In her bedroom.
Good question! Would you want her to, or is it more fun to keep the nakedness lopsided???
I'd say some mutual nudity, at least temporary, will only be more enjoyable.
Perhaps after making him show himself off naked to all her friends, Jacqui will need to apologise to him, and the only way to do that is to give him a private show.
Congratulations on a great plot and writing style. I am enjoying this story greatly. Jacqui didn’t exactly clarify if it would be just her home after school, leaving open the possibility her friends might be there too!
MaireadM wrote: Thu Oct 02, 2025 5:39 pm
I love it so far but mutual exposure would be fun.
However I don’t want to derail a good storyline
In this story, I might be a bit more of an ENM purist, as the lopsidedness adds to his embarrassment and discomfort. That said, there's nothing wrong with Jacqui teasing him a bit with what she's got!
TeenFan wrote: Thu Oct 02, 2025 3:13 pm
Some readers don't want any skin at all showing on the girl, and are Clothed Female purists.
I'm not a CFNM purist by any sense, but it may work best for the tension in the relationship between the two. However, I don't outline my stories in advance, so each part is a bit of a surprise to me as I write it. So you never know.
Emily wrote: Thu Oct 02, 2025 3:27 pm
This is a really fun and cute story so far
I personally think it would be a ton of fun having Jacqui naked as well. It would be so much fun for them exploring each other’s bodies and learning about the opposite genders.
I definitely do understand if you just want to keep it ENM though.
Thank you for the comment, and I'm glad you like the story so far! It would absolutely be fun to have him explore her as well. And maybe that will come at some point. But I think the first few chapters will focus mostly on his exposure, discomfort, and embarrassment. I think the pure ENM helps add some tension.
steam train wrote: Fri Oct 03, 2025 10:13 am
Congratulations on a great plot and writing style. I am enjoying this story greatly. Jacqui didn’t exactly clarify if it would be just her home after school, leaving open the possibility her friends might be there too!
Thanks so much. I'm glad you like my writing and that you're enjoying the story.
That's an interesting thought. No spoilers... but hmmm.
I'm working on the next chapter now, and hopefully it will be ready to post early next week. Thanks again for all your comments. I really like hearing what you think would be fun in the story.
