The Invisible Boy (Complete) 11/20/2025

[NudeBaG]

I'm sorry he is sobbing about it. I hope the girls do a lot to "comfort" him. If I were writing the story, I'd like to see some reciprocity. I realize that may not happen. But I hope they are kind to him and that he's okay.

I’m gonna edit it real quick.

[NudeBaG]

I'm sorry he is sobbing about it. I hope the girls do a lot to "comfort" him. If I were writing the story, I'd like to see some reciprocity. I realize that may not happen. But I hope they are kind to him and that he's okay.

I edited it slightly.
I didn’t like the sobbing angle either

[Barely2]

Super story. Very well told. Was lots of fun to think back on my early ultra-shy teenage years and almost relate, somewhat. Thanks.

[Surfboy]

So many things make this story enjoyable:
-The girls' fondness for him and enjoyment of seeing him (never mean; always full of wonder and admiration)

I've only finished chapter three, but I wanted to pause to agree with this whole-heartedly!
I love that the girls are having fun and enjoying it. I love the innocence. I love that it's not an SPH story...just a bunch of young girls innocently enjoying seeing a naked boy.

Okay....back to the story!

[NudeBaG]

The Invisible Boy Finale & Aftermath

“Jack-?”
Fiona and Meryl say in unison as they step forward.
The instant they move for him, Jack turns and runs out of the room.
Fiona follows, hot on his heels, she’s even reaching for him, though she doesn’t have a CLUE as to what she can do.
The feelings of guilt and the feelings she has in general for Jack are confusing and overwhelming.
Meryl wants to follow, but she feels anger at both herself and her classmates.
This is NOT how this was supposed to go!
Meryl sees Fiona go after Jack, and decides to let her handle it for now, if she thinks she can so something.
She turns and stops anyone else from following.

Jack spills into the hall, running for the bathroom.
Before he can close the door, Fiona pushes him, almost tackling him into the bathroom.
She closes and locks the door.
It’s pitch black!
“G-GET OUT!” Jack sobs!
Fiona clutches her chest.
Jack’s tone hurts her!
“Jack! I’m sorry! You weren’t supposed to-!” Fiona pauses.
She didn’t even know what the ultimate ‘plan’ was!
All Jack’s sister’s friends had told them was that Jack would be naked, and he thought he was invisible!
“LEAVE ME ALONE!” Jack sobs.
He feels humiliated.
This whole night-
It was just a joke?!
Why?!
Because he was a little gullible?!
“Jack! I thought your sister was just playing around! None of us actually thought you’d really be NAKED and think you were invisible!” Fiona winces as the words leave her mouth.
Although true, she can tell they will only make Jack feel even worse.
“Jack! I-“ Fiona pauses as she feels her heart thudding in her chest beneath her hand.
“YOU ALL TRICKED ME! YOU SAW EVERYTHING-! YOU SAW ME…” Jack’s voice catches.
Fiona again thinks about how she felt when she heard the plan.
She thought it was mean-
Cruel.
Just because he ‘annoyed’ Meryl?!
But she couldn’t and WOULDN’T stand up for her.
She could only act on how SHE feels.
When she heard the plan, she hadn’t been thinking of it as a prank.
She’d been so caught up with seeing Jack naked, the excitement overrode everything!
Of course she wanted to see her crush naked!
This whole night though-
They’d been LYING to Jack.
Fiona hated that!
It was time for some truth.
“We ALL were in on the joke. But you know what?! I’m glad!” Fiona gasps as the words leave her mouth.
She continues to let her emotions guide her.
“You make me laugh.” She says.
“SO YOU LAUGH AT ME?! ESPECIALLY NOW THAT YOU’VE SEEN ME NAKED, HUH?!” Jack snaps.
“Jack! No!” Fiona throws herself at him. “YOU ARE funny! You make me laugh because you’re funny!”
Fiona feels Jack trying to pull away, but she’s backed him against the wall.
“Jack-“ she lifts her hands and places them on Jack’s skinny chest.
Jack swats her hands away, but she persists.
She can’t explain it, but she’s being ‘compelled’.
Alone again in the bathroom with her crush, her hormones are in overdrive!
“Jack! What can I do to make this right?!” She pleads.
“NOTHING!” Jack sobs, his voice breaking.
Fiona knows he’s right.
She alone can’t possibly ‘fix’ things.
She, and everyone else at the party have seen everything Jack has to offer.
“Jack, you-“ Fiona starts, but Jack cuts her off.
“YOU ALL HAD ME NAKED! THE ENTIRE time!” He hisses. “You could see me and you all know about-!”
He winces.
Gah!
Every girl here has seen him masturbate as well!
“What, Jack?” Fiona asks, sweetly.
This close, even though it’s dark, Fiona’s eyes are adjusting.
She can see Jack’s pained face.
“Y-You all touched-“ Jack whispers, barely audible.
“Oh!” Fiona remembers.
It’s something she’ll never forget!
With him right in front of her like this, Fiona fights the urge to touch him again!
She IS curious though.
Why HAD her touch made him do ‘that’?
Fiona lets out a trembling sigh.
“Jack?” Fiona feels those hot ‘tingles’ flowing.
“Why did you do ‘that’ when I touched it?” She asks.
Jack begins panting.
“I- It- I can’t!” Jack sobs.
Fiona can see him cup his hands over himself in the dark.
Seeing him touch himself, even just to cover has her hormones racing.
A sudden idea hits Fiona.
“Jack? What if I were naked, too? Hah!” Fiona gasps as she voices the suggestion before she realizes the offer she’s making!
“Wha-?!” Jack gasps.
Fiona takes a deep breath.
Fiona catches herself.
“I just mean, what would you ‘do’ if I were to get naked like you?”
Fiona feels dizzy now.
She’s alone-
In a dark bathroom-
With her naked crush-
OFFERING to get naked as well?!!!
She replays the thought.
‘her naked crush’.
Jack doesn’t know!
No!
Before Fiona promises ANYTHING to Jack, she needs to know!
HE needs to know!
“Jack?” Fiona asks.
“Y-Yeah?” Jack whispers timidly.
“What, um, what would you do?” Fiona asks.
“I- Um, I don’t-“ Jack stammers. “I mean I don’t know, but- if, you want, to-“
“Hah!” Fiona gasps. “No! Jack! I can’t- I didn’t mean-! Whoa! No.” She stammers.
“Why not?! I’M naked! Why shouldn’t everyone else?!” Jack yelps.
Fiona feels that guilt again.
But no.
And she definitely doesn’t like the idea of Jack seeing the other girls naked!
There’s another awkward silence.
Fiona hears something.
Like a soft but rapid ‘rubbing’
“Jack?” She asks.
The sound stops.
Was he playing with himself again?!
Fiona desperately wants to see that again!
But she remains composed.
“Do you-“ her voice catches. “Do you ‘like’ anyone?”
“Huh?” Jack asks.
“Like, a crush, er, whatever?” Fiona brushes her hair behind her ear.
Jack thinks about Henna.
But now, all he sees is her pointing and laughing.
His heart momentarily breaks and he shuts his eyes tight.
The silence is crushing to Fiona.
She KNOWS Jack likes Henna, but-
Again, something inside acts FOR her.
“I do.” She offers.
“Huh?” Jack asks softly.
“Jack, I-“ She hesitates.
There are few moments more nerve racking in a young persons life than confessing feelings for someone.
“Jack. I like you.” She says flatly.
Jack’s heart stops.
He’s silent as his entire time with Fiona plays out in his mind.
Her laughing at his jokes and ‘magic’ tricks.
Her going out of her way to talk to him.
Her sitting with him at lunch and making origami out of napkins with him.
And then he thinks about her touching him again.
Her pretty smile.
Jack resumes tugging his penis.
Fiona pictures Jack in front of her, masturbating, JUST for her.
Fiona steps away.
“Pfoooo.” She exhales. “Jack.”
Jack gulps and pauses as he assesses.
“Jack. I like you. And I’m sorry we tricked you.” Fiona stands.
There’s another long silence.
Jack is filled with too many emotions!
“I’ll leave you alone and go get your ghost sheet.” Fiona turns towards the door.
“W-Wait.” Jack whispers.
Fiona stops.
“Y-You, ‘like’ me?” He whimpers.
Fiona feels her heart thump as she turns to face Jack again.
“Yes. I do.” She says sweetly.
“Even though you’ve seen me-“ Jack gulps.
He can’t say it!
He can’t admit to it!
Fiona steps closer to him.
“Oh! Hah!” She chuckles. “Yes! Jack!”
She doesn’t have the courage to tell him just how much she enjoyed seeing him naked and seeing the way he touched himself and the way touching him made her feel!
“Um, Fiona- I-“ Jack pauses.
“I- I- I-“ Jack feels the situation pushing him, but he can’t help seeing Fiona differently now.
Young pre-teen hormones are a pain.
“I like you, too.” Jack feels his heart leap at the admition.
Fiona also feels the butterflies overwhelm her!
“Hmhm!” She chuckles.
The admition of feelings has both of them in a tissy!
Fiona steps closer to Jack.
“It’s so dark, I can barely see you. Hmhm!” She chuckles, nervously.
Jack is backed all the way against the wall again.
“W-What are you-?” Jack stammers.
Fiona leans in and gently kisses Jack.
Just a small peck on the lips, but elevated by the fact that Jack is naked!
Fiona feels hot!
Her first kiss with Jack!
In the dark-
And he’s naked!
Fiona takes Jack’s hand and turns, leading them to the bathroom door.
“W-Wait!” Jack gasps.
Fiona pauses.
“What?” She asks.
“I’m still naked!” Jack whispers.
“Oh! Right! Sorry. Hmhm!” Fiona whispers.
“But, you know, everyone’s already SEEN everything, so…” She whispers.
“But, I’m-“ Jack pauses.
“Huh?” Fiona asks.
“My- you know- it’s-“ Jack shivers.
Fiona moves her free hand to touch Jack’s torso.
She slides her fingers down his smooth skin until the graze a soft, floppy tube of flesh.
“F-“ Jack can’t even finish her name!
“Oh.” Fiona whispers.
Jack trembles!
Standing up, Fiona’s touch isn’t enough to put him over the edge, or even make him hard like last time.
Fiona is thrilled to be touching Jack’s penis again!
Even though it isn’t hard, it’s still a rush for her!
Jack isn’t squirming this time.
He’s letting Fiona touch his penis willingly!
“Hmmm.” Fiona gently squeezes. “It isn’t sticking up anymore?” Fiona asks.
“N-No.” Jack stammers.
Fiona thinks about her classmates waiting outside.
“Jack-“ she hesitates. “We’re, ‘together’ now, right?” She asks, smiling sweetly.
Jack feels his heart leap.
“Y-Yeah.” Jack gulps. “But my- I’m- I’m not- They’ll all see me like-“
Fiona moves her hand away and takes Jack’s hand, squeezing gently.
“It doesn’t matter.” She whispers.
Jack squeezes her hand back.
Fiona leans in, kissing Jack on the lips again!
This time, they both linger, relishing the soft, intimate contact.
Fiona pulls away slightly.
“Wow. Hmhm!” She whispers softly.
“Y-Yeah.” Jack whispers.
She opens the door.
Reflexively, as the light from the livingroom coming down the hall illuminates the bathroom a bit, Fiona looks at Jack’s naked body.
His penis is little and floppy.
Fiona holds in a chuckle.
“Finally!” Meryl says, standing up in the hall.
Fiona and Jack step out and stand in front of Meryl.
Jack cups his free hand over his crotch, hiding everything.
They can hear shrieks and gasps, and what sounds like a chainsaw and scary music playing from the living room.
“Jack, here.” Meryl holds Jack’s ghost sheet out to him.
Jack scowls at her.
“Jack, I am SO SORRY! Put your sheet back on, and we can go home.” Meryl continues to hold the sheet out.
Jack looks at Fiona.
Fiona smiles and bites her lip, not breaking eye contact.
Jack looks at Meryl.
Meryl looks confused as she shakes the sheet for Jack to take it.
Jack uncovers.
Meryl’s eyes drop to his crotch and grow wide.
“Whoa! Jack! Come on! Put your sheet on and I’ll take you home.” She repeats.
Jack looks at Fiona again.
She’s still smiling, but looking into Jack’s eyes now.
“Wanna go watch the movie?” He asks.
“Oh? Mhm! Hmhmhmhm!” Fiona chuckles.
The 2 step passed Meryl as Jack leads Fiona to the den.
“Jack! Wait!” Meryl grabs his arm, stopping them. “Look! I’m sorry! You know you’re still naked, right?!”
Jack feels himself blush, but then feels Fiona squeeze his hand again.
“Yeah. I know.” Jack says coldly.
He snatches the sheet from Meryl and tosses it over his shoulder.
He then pulls Fiona into the den.

They enter the den and see the lights are off and everyone is huddled on or near the couch, watching a horror movie.
Talia pauses it and stands up as Jack and Fiona enter.
Jack’s classmates giggle, but stop and stand up to look at them.
Henna hops over to him, grinning and giggling!
“Oh my god! Why are you still naked?! You know we can all see you, right?! Hahaha!” She teases.
Sally and Christa pop up, too.
Fiona is still holding his hand.
“Yeah, Henna! He DOES know!” Fiona scolds.
Jack looks at Henna.
The girl he USED to have a crush on.
Looking at her used to give him butterflies, AND a boner.
But right now, his penis stays soft.
Jack looks at Sally and Christa.
“Sorry we tricked you, Jack.” Sally says.
“Yeah. Sorry, Jack.” Christa adds.
Both girls continue to smile and stare, making it obvious that they aren’t ‘really’ sorry.
Fiona squeezes his hand again.
“I’m not.” Henna smirks.
Jack momentarily feels the urge to turn and run.
Or to pull the sheet back over his head and body.
Jack then remembers Fiona’s words in the bathroom.
Everyone’s already seen everything.
She’s right.
It doesn’t matter now.
Instead of running-
Or breaking down in humiliation-
Jack looks at Henna and wags his hips, making his limp penis flop side to side off his hips!
Everyone stands in stunned silence for a moment before bursting into laughter!
Jack gives a few forward thrusts, flopping his penis and balls up and down between his legs!
“OH MY GOD! JACK! WHAT THE-?! HAHAHAHA!” Henna joins the others in laughter.
Jack looks at Fiona.
She’s blushing and smiling at him.
Jack looks down at her hand in his.
He feels his heart thumping.
Holding hands with Fiona-
It’s nice.
Really nice.
“Jack!” Meryl gasps. “Seriously! Put your sheet back on! Game’s over!”
“Awwwww!” All the girls groan in unison.
“Why?” Kace asks.
“Yeah! Let him stay naked!” Ferris adds.
“Yeah!” All the girls cheer.
Jack feels his penis twitch.
Reflexively, he cups his free hand over it.
“Jack?” Fiona asks.
He looks at her again.
She’s smiling at him, looking into his eyes.
He uncovers.
Her eyes never leave his, but she smiles.
“Well, we just started the movie, so have seat and lets get scared! Hmhmhm!” Talia chirps as she turns off the lights.
Fiona pulls Jack over to the couch.
Kace and Ferris get up so that Jack can sit in the middle.
Henna and Fiona sit next to him on one side, while Sally and Christa sit on the other.
Meryl and her classmates all sit on the floor around the couch.
Fiona keeps holding Jack’s hand as they sit shoulder to shoulder on the couch.
She purposefully rests their hands on Jack’s thigh and snuggles against him.
It feels really nice.
Jack has butterflies!
Fiona and he gently slide their fingers along one another’s.
It’s incredibly intimate.
Fiona doesn’t budge.
She doesn’t make a move beyond holding his hand and snuggling.
Sally, on the other hand takes advantage of the dark, as well as her position at Jack’s side.
At first, she just pokes at Jack’s flaccid penis with her index finger.
But soon, she gently grabs it and squeezes!
“Hah!” Jack gasps.
In a moment of brightness from the screen, Christa, Fiona and Henna notice Sally’s fondling!
Immediately, Christa reaches over Sally’s lap and Henna reaches over Fiona’s!
Fiona herself continues holding Jack’s hand.
As the scene on the tv transitions to dark again, Henna, Sally and Christa begin fondling Jack’s genitals!
At any given time, there’s a hand squeezing or tugging his penis-
Or fingers poking and cupping his balls-
Or fingers tracing the smooth skin of his groin!
He squeezes Fiona’s hand as his body trembles.
Fiona looks on as her classmates’ hands grope Jack’s genitals!
But feeling Jack squeeze her hand is enough.
She nuzzles her shoulder and head against his, taking note that Jack’s penis remains limp.
Jack feels like he’s being tortured in the best way possible!
He’s getting to snuggle and hold hands with Fiona!
A new, and exciting relationship that has his heart racing and filling his gut with butterflies!
He’s also being fondled by 3 other classmates!
He’s completely spent however, so his penis remains soft and little.
None of the 3 girls seem to care, however.
They seem content to simply touch Jack however they please.

Meryl turns her head to check on Jack as the movie continues.
She takes in the scene at once.
He and Fiona holding hands, snuggling, while his other 3 classmates fondle him!
Jack has his eyes closed, nuzzling his head against Fiona’s.
Fiona has her eyes closed as well, a soft smile on her face.
She thinks about stopping them, but then looks at Fiona and Jack.
Things seem to be going okay for Jack at the moment.

The aftermath:

The movie ends and Talia stands and turns on the light as the girls stretch, and rub their eyes before shifting to Jack as his classmates pull their hands away from Jack’s genitals as they stretch.
“Awwwwwwww!” Kace coos.
“Oh. My. God! That’s too cute!” Ferris beams.
Meryl smirks.
Fiona and Jack are asleep, slumped against one another, still holding hands and nuzzling.
Henna stands and shakes her head as Sally and Christa giggle.
Sally points at Jack’s limp penis.
“It looks floppy again!” She whispers.
Henna steps over and kneels in front of Jack.
She leans in and examines his penis closely.
She grins at Sally and Christa.
She then reaches forward and gently pinches Jack’s penis!
“Gah! It’s so squishy when it’s like that!” She grins, but scrunches her face.
“Mmmmmm.” Jack moans.
The older teens gather around, holding back laughter.
“I wonder if it’ll stick up again.” Sally whispers.
Christa leans over to watch, grinning wide.
Henna then tugs a bit harder, just once, but it’s enough.
Jack’s eyes snap open as he lifts his hips.
He sees Henna grinning wickedly as she pinches his limp penis!
“Aaah! H-Henna?!” He yelps.
Fiona sits up and stretches as Jack rises to his feet.
Henna keeps kneeling, but also keeps tugging on Jack’s limp penis!
“Stop!” Jack yelps, slapping Henna’s hand away.
“Henna!” Fiona yelps.
“Alright, alright!” Meryl scolds.
“Hmhmhmhm!” Henna chuckles as she lets go and stands up.
After all the excitement of the night, Jack’s penis remains limp.
Fiona stands and picks up Jack’s ghost sheet which had fallen to the floor.
She hands it to Jack.
He wraps it around himself.
“We should get going.” Meryl sighs.
“Yeah, parents should be getting here soon.” Talia says collecting trash into a large bag.
“I’ll help clean up.” Kace stands.
“Me too.” Ferris adds.
The older girls help clean up while Jack and his classmates gather around Meryl and Jack.
“Before you guys go,” Henna smirks. “Give us ONE MORE peak at ‘little Jack’, hmm?”
“Yeah! Hehehe!” Sally chirps.
Christa excitedly nods.
Jack looks at Fiona.
She smiles, biting her lip and nodding.
Jack lifts the sheet and wags his hips, making his limp penis bounce around again.
The girls all laugh and clap.
“Best Halloween ever!” Henna smiles.
“Yeah! We got to play with naked Jack all night!” Sally adds.
“Yeah, Jack! We ALL know what you look like NAKED now!” Christa adds.
Jack feels his nerves creep in again, but also feels the thrill.
Fiona tugs his sheet back down, much to everyone’s surprise.
“Jack. Stop it! Hmhm!” She chuckles.
“Come on, Jack.” Meryl rolls her eyes.
Fiona follows them to the door.
Meryl steps out as Fiona grabs Jack’s arm.
“Hey, um-“ She brushes her hair behind her ear.
She then leans in and kisses Jack on the lips again.
Jack’s heart pounds and his gut fills with butterflies.
“Maybe you can teach me some magic tricks some time?” Fiona blushes and smiles.
Jack smiles wide and his eyes light up.
“Y-Yeah! Definitely! I’ve been practicing this new one, where I make someone levitate and, well, I haven’t quite got the hang of it yet, but-“
He’s cut off as Fiona giggles and shakes her head.
Jack blushes.
“S-Sorry. I just meant that- if you wanted to-“
Fiona leans in one more time and kisses him.
“I wouldn’t mind being your ‘magician’s assistant’, I guess?” She blushes.
She looks down at Jack’s sheet again.
“As long as I can play with your ‘magic wand’ hmhmhmhm!” She chuckles.
Jack feels his penis twitch.
“Jack!” Meryl calls from the car.
“Um, yeah. Haha!” Jack laughs nervously.
“Happy Halloween, Jack.” Fiona smiles.
“Happy Halloween, Fiona.” Jack blushes.

[Jeepman89]

A Happy Halloween indeed! Thanks for the fun story, NudeBag.

[EverythingOff]

Nicely done. A very sweet story with a happy ending. You did it.

[Surfboy]

I knew I liked Fiona!
I would like to see Henna get what's coming to her for wanting to tell everyone at school.
Maybe sometime down the line in the ENF stories?
Anyway, great story with a sweet ending. Loved it! And hopefully, it built Jack's confidence.

[NudeBaG]

I knew I liked Fiona!
I would like to see Henna get what's coming to her for wanting to tell everyone at school.
Maybe sometime down the line in the ENF stories?
Anyway, great story with a sweet ending. Loved it! And hopefully, it built Jack's confidence.

I don’t really dabble in ENF too much, and with my female writing partner being too busy to ‘really contribute beyond consultation, I don’t know if I could pull it off.

As far as Henna wanting to tell everyone at school, I don’t think it would go quite the way we’d think.

Henna *could make fun of Jack for his gullibility and for masturbating, but like Sally and Christa, she was still thrilled by seeing Jack naked.
I don’t think Jack’s classmates considered him to be ‘lacking’ anything physically.
Henna just thinks Jack is stupid. (Which he may have been) but let’s hope he wises up a bit after tonight. Lol.
But as far as being able to mock him for any shortcomings, I don’t think she’d be able too, especially not around Fiona.
Henna may not feel anything emotional towards Jack, but I think she can admit she liked what she saw
Worse case scenario, it only makes MORE girls want to see him naked.
And it definitely makes Henna, Sally and Christa want to see other boys in their class naked as well.

[BareB4U]

Nice ending to a fun story. I couldn't tell which way this was going to go. I'm glad you went with the remainder of the evening being fun for Jack too.