Amy - Losing Control; Chapter 6 - October 16th 26

[NoPoint11]

Great story, I can’t wait to see the next part!

[ASF87]

next part?

[1pantielessZoe2]

Great story, I can’t wait to see the next part!

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Chapter 3 – Sliding down


Amy let her eyes wander around, taking in the bustling waterpark. Kids and teenagers splashed in the pools, while their parents relaxed on comfortable loungers. Others wandered around or stood in line for one of the many thrilling slides.

To her complete surprise, walking around the place topless and clothed in nothing but the pair of white panties that Emma gave her, didn’t incite people to give rude comments or have them come after her with torches and pitchforks. Though her inner tension remained, Amy noticed herself calm down from the stressful situation that just happened.

A life guard had stopped her and Emma and told them that they couldn’t enter the pools because of the way Amy was dressed. Thankfully, just in time, their swim coach Ms. Hendrix had stepped in, talking to another lady, who eventually allowed Amy to stay the way she was. Topless, almost naked, with the exception of a weirdly cut pair of panties and the four wrist and ankle “slap bracelets”.

As they walked, the girls came across two middle-aged men engaged in a heated debate at the edge of a small pool for young kids. Most likely, they were supposed to watch their children while the moms enjoyed a drink at one of the bars.

When Amy and Emma came closer, the men suddenly became quiet, while their heads turned towards them. The one man with the grumpy expression changed into a friendly smile, and the other raised his hand, waving at the girls. Amy, not thinking much about it, waved back.

The way the men smiled, looking directly at her, while giving nods of approval gave her a funny sense of attention that simultaneously was nice but also a little strange. There was a tingle deep inside Amy that radiated through her body in pleasant ripples. As this feeling, fueled by the men’s stares, grew stronger with every second, Amy couldn’t help but blush deeply. The attention was still embarrassing.

All the while, Emma had to suppress giggling at the men's obvious interest in her friend.

“Amy certainly draws some eyes” she thought.

Finally, they reached the edge of the biggest pool they could find. Emma then nudged Amy's shoulder, pointing at a slide that didn't look too wild and had a queue that wasn’t very long.

"Let's try this one first. We should work our way up," Emma suggested with excitement.

Amy nodded, her voice a little shaky. "Yeah, but you go first."

As they queued for the slide, Amy observed other people having so much fun, going down the slides, their screams of thrill echoing through the air. Bit by bit, her own excitement for the fun things that might lay ahead of them, returned.

“Maybe it isn't so bad after all”, she realized, a small smile playing on her lips. “I can still have fun.”

There were only a handful of people in front of them, and the girls were almost at the top of the stairs already, when suddenly Amy felt someone poke her against the part of her left butt-cheek that was left exposed by the skimpy panties she was wearing.

Amy turned to discover a small boy, no older than maybe six or so, and his mom standing behind them. The woman seemed to be in the middle of a conversation with another woman next to her.

The boy smiled up at Amy innocently. "You can't swim?" he asked, his head tilted to the side, giving Amy a look of curiosity.

The odd question startled Amy. "Of course I can swim!" she replied in confusion, her brows furrowing.

The boy pointed at one of the pink bracelets Amy was wearing. "I had to wear them, too. But mine were blue and I learned to swim, so I don’t wear them anymore. And I always only wore one! Why did they give you four?" he asked, his eyes wide and filled with genuine interest.

Amy then remembered what the lady from earlier had said. Kids, who didn’t yet know how to swim properly wore these bracelets for the lifeguards to keep an eye on them.

"It's, uh... because... um...," Amy stumbled over her words. There it was again, her embarrassment returned almost instantly. Her face burned from turning pink from blushing.

Noticing her friend’s predicament, Emma stepped in. She put her arm around Amy's shoulder, pulling her closer.

"It's because she's not wearing a bikini top. The lifeguards must know that she's allowed to go topless, so she's made to wear the bracelets," she explained, her voice confident.

Amy’s head snapped at Emma’s betrayal in disbelief.

“Why would she just blatantly tell him like that?”

Amy’s mind was racing. Didn't Emma understand how vulnerable she felt?

The boy's eyes widened as he seemed to realize.

"Oh. So… But…” the boy was not quite sure what to make of this situation.

“But why don't you wear something… there?" he asked pointing right at Amy’s chest. He the broke out in a giggle. His voice was filled with childish innocence.

"I lost it before coming here," Amy finally said sighing, her hands fidgeting nervously at her sides.

The boy then giggled even more.

"You've got little boobies!" he blurted out without any inhibition, his words echoing in the air.

Immediately, Amy felt her head turn red in shame from the unwanted attention, and it got even worse when the boy’s mom turned around.

"Billy, what did you just…?" she began to say, but her words trailed off as her eye fell on Amy. "Oh my! Billy, it's rude to say that," the mom scolded her son, not taking her eyes off Amy.

"But mommy! Look! I can see her nippies. They look different from mine. They are all pointy!" Billy said chuckling.

Emma cracked up at the boy's cute and innocent silliness. He didn't mean to be rude, but his curiosity brought all the attention to Amy's bare chest, making her squirm from embarrassment.

Amy was too stunned to respond.

"Yes, because when girls get older, their… um… nipples grow and… uh… later on they get breasts. And then they need to wear bras, just like your sisters." the mom tried to explain in a casual manner.

"Oh… yeah…" the boy said with a thoughtful expression, his eyes down at the ground, as if he was thinking about something.

"Sorry girls. Little Billy has to ask questions all the time. He can't help himself," the mom told them. She seemed quite friendly and not at all irritated by Amy. A warm smile played on her lips.

Amy felt a little better, since she had expected a much worse reaction from people.

"Hey, it's our turn!" Emma said, nudging Amy, who was glad that the awkward situation would finally be over, a sense of relief washing over her.

When the green light lit up, Emma went down the slide first. Amy watched her friend disappear down the slide’s tube. She could hear her friend’s screams, which excited her even more. A moment later, Amy saw Emma shoot out at the other end of the slide, hitting the water with a big splash. Amy's heart was racing. With every second she waited for the green light she got more excited, her palms sweaty in anticipation.

Amy’s knees felt week as she looked down the slide. Even though it wasn't the highest or most twisty one, it still looked quite steep from up here. It bent like an S and had a little ramp at its end.

Finally, the light went from red to green, and it was Amy's turn. She took a deep breath, gathered some courage, and sat down on the slide's edge. Using her hands, she then slowly pushed herself forward until gravity took over, and she began her descent down the slide's plastic half-tube.

Adrenaline rushed through Amy's veins as she quickly gained speed, reaching the first bend. As she passed through, she felt the forces push her body to the side, making her ride up the tube’s wall. Amy heard herself scream from the exhilarating experience, her voice echoing through the slide, her heart pounding in her chest.

After passing the second bend, she already approached the small ramp with a lot of speed and subsequently was flung up into the air before coming down with a big splash. Amy found herself submerged and quickly swam back up.

When she resurfaced, Emma was already there, smiling from ear to ear.

"That was awesome! Let's do that again!" she exclaimed, her eyes sparkling.

Amy nodded enthusiastically. Her heart was still pumping fast. The slide was so much fun, adrenaline coursing through her veins, making her feel alive and carefree.

They climbed out of the pool and walked the short distance to get back in line for the same slide once more. The wait was shorter than the first time, and the girls were halfway up the stairs before meeting the end of the line.

"I didn't expect it to be so much fun! You go down so fast!" Amy said, still amazed by the slide, her voice filled with great joy.

"Huh? Oh yeah, sure." Emma murmured. She seemed distracted, her gaze on Amy and her brows furrowed slightly. Amy noticed that her friend was not looking at her directly but somewhere lower on her body. A sense of unease crept up her spine. What was Emma looking at? Amy wondered.

She was about to follow Emma's gaze, but before she could, someone shouted from below. "Oh my god, it's Emma and Amy! Hey girls!"

The girls looked down and saw Valerie Simons and two of her friends quickly coming up the stairs behind them. Amy and Emma were at the end of the line, so Valerie and the other two girls quickly caught up to them.

"Damn. Did someone lose a bet or something?" Hannah, one of Valerie's minions, said visibly amused, her lips curled into a smirk.

Amy's heart sank. These girls were probably the last people she wanted to see her like this, a wave of dread washing over her, her palms suddenly clammy and her mouth dry.

Emma stepped up for her speechless friend. "No, Amy just lost her swimsuit, so she decided to go in her panties. It's no big deal," she said defiantly, her voice steady and calm.

"Oh wow. I could never go out like this. I mean, you're practically naked. Aren't you embarrassed at all?" Amber, the beautiful redhead and Val's second in command asked, her tone a mix of curiosity and disbelief, her eyebrows raised in suspicion.

Amy, utterly shocked to see these girls, quickly brought one arm in front of her chest. She knew she wasn’t supposed to do this but her embarrassment simply won over her resolve to not draw more attention to her chest.

Amy’s face flushed in a deep red. Her heart was pounding in her ears. Valerie and her friends were notorious bullies. Val's family was devilishly rich, and no one, including faculty and even the principal at their school, dared to cross her. If someone did, their life would turn into a nightmare.

Amy had heard a story about another girl who had made the mistake of sitting on Val's chair during lunch break. She hadn't been aware of Val's reputation and refused to leave when asked. A few days later, pictures of the same girl standing naked on the school’s well-lit football field, with the words "dumb bitch" written on her forehead, circulated throughout school and town. Almost every kid had seen them. Shortly after, the girl had to relocate and move away. Val and her bully friends were never blamed to be the perpetrators, but everyone knew that Val must’ve been behind all of this, her reputation preceding her like a dark cloud.

"Hey, don't you worry Amy. You really don't need to be shy around us. We're girls too, you know? I think it's kinda dope the way you, uh..., present yourself," Valerie said with an unexpected friendly voice. Her eyes softly roamed Amy, a smile playing on her lips. Even Amber and Hannah seemed surprised by Valerie’s words, their expressions shifting from mean amusement to something closer to uncertain caution.

"Yeah, it's... quite… brave?" Amber said hesitantly, looking first at Valerie, who nodded back at her, and then at Amy directly.

"It takes a lot to walk around like… this," she continued, her gaze lingering on Amy.

Amy expected mockery and harassment from these girls, but instead, they sounded weirdly supportive. She wasn't sure how honest they were, though, a nagging doubt lingering in the back of her mind, making her feel very uneasy.

Emma saw that Amy was covering herself still and knew that she needed some help to overcome her embarrassment. She grabbed Amy's arm and pulled it to her side, her grip firm but gentle.

"See? I told you. No one cares that you are topless. You should listen to me more," she said encouragingly, a warm smile on her face.

"Oh Amy, you're so cute like that! Looking all embarrassed and all I mean," Val said, her tone definitely teasing, a playful glint in her eyes.

"Yeah, just like my little brother when he peed his pants that one time," Hannah quickly added chuckling.

"I like the way her nipples point at us. Are you cold Amy? Because I bet they could cut glass the way they are right now," Amber mentioned, her eyes lingering on Amy's chest.

Amber, Valerie and Hannah giggled at the last comment, which made Amy blush deeply, her embarrassment back in full force. The reality was that she didn't feel cold at all right now. Quite the contrary. Her head felt like it was on fire, hot from the embarrassment she experienced, her skin flushed and her pulse racing.

No, her nipples were rock hard simply from being exposed. Every look she received made them tingle in response, the sensation both unexpected and strangely pleasurable. Amy didn’t know what was happening to her and why her body reacted in such a strange manner.

"Look, hehe, it’s not only her nipples! It looks like she has a little gemstone inside her panties!" Hannah said, pointing at Amy's crotch.

Amy looked down her body, and what she saw hit her like lightning. She gasped, eyes wide in disbelief.

"Yeah, it's amazing. I would've never thought a girl like you Amy would dare put everything on show like that, but here we are," Valerie said, chuckling, eyes gleaming. Her voice was filled with amusement and even a hint of admiration.

Amy's panties had turned almost totally see-through. The white cotton material did exactly nothing to hide her most private place anymore. The wet fabric clung to her like a second skin, making every crevice and fold visible down there. For all intents and purposes, Amy stood completely naked, her most intimate parts on display for the whole world to see.

And Amy was made painfully aware of what Hannah’s comment about the ‘gemstone in her panties’ was all about. She saw her own clitoral hood bulge out against the thin fabric of the useless pair of panties.

Amy always hated the way that this specific part of her most intimate anatomy was formed. The way the fleshy fold showed between her lips was so different from how the other girls looked down there. Emma too. Earlier, in the changing room, she had the chance to compare herself to her friend and she too was all tucked away.

And it was so clearly visible!

Screaming, Amy's hands shot down to cover her exposed privates. Who else had seen her like this? This was a nightmare! Valerie and her friends would tell everyone what they'd seen! She was done for!

Amy was mortified. Everyone’s attention was on the part she was just as self-conscious about as she was about her nipples. She just wished to shrink into herself and disappear, her face burned with shame.

"Hey Val, do you think Amy is some kind of pervert?" Hannah chimed in, her eyebrow raised in question, her lips curled into a smirk.

"I don't know. Maybe. I heard of people who get off on exposing themselves in public," Valerie said with an amused chuckle.

Amy's flight instincts finally kicked in. She quickly turned around and saw that in that exact moment the light for the slide went green again. There was a group of three boys in front of her, but they were arguing about who was to go down the slide next. They were completely oblivious to the drama unfolding behind them.

Without hesitation, Amy took that opportunity, darting away from Emma and the other girls. She managed to slip past the younger kids in front of her, who were perplexed by the sight of Amy's almost naked butt, their eyes wide with surprise and their mouths agape, whispers of "What the...?" and "Did you see that?" following in her wake.

They all watched the strange girl take a big head-on dive towards the slide, which actually looked quite impressive. Amy heard the boys complain, their voices distant, but she was already going down the slide. This time head first, the adrenaline surging through her veins once more, a mix of fear and exhilaration coursing through her.

On her way down, something quite unexpected happened to Amy. The slide was built from multiple small segments, with each plastic segment interlocked with the next one in an overlapping way. At every junction, there was a very slight groove in the slide that Amy felt on her skin. The sensation was both unfamiliar and intensely pleasurable, making her gasp and her body tingle with every pass.

When she went down the slide the first time, she was on her back, and it wasn't as noticeable. But now that she went down on her belly, it felt ten times more intense. With every groove she passed over, it felt like her already super sensitive nipples got flicked by a small finger. And even worse: she felt the exact same sensation further down on her little ‘gemstone’, the intensity building and the pleasure growing with every passing moment.

Amy didn’t count, but there were at least twenty or so of those grooves. Each time she passed one of them, electric jolts shot through the whole of her young body, making her gasp and flinch. Her body felt like it was on fire, all of her being reduced to the feeling in her nipples and her clitoris.

In the end, she landed in the water just like before, but this time her stimulated areas felt burning hot while the water felt like ice cubes pushed against them. The contrast in sensation was unlike anything Amy ever experienced. Her whole body shivered.

Knowing that there wasn't much time left before Val and her friends would come down the slide as well, Amy hurried to swim towards the pool’s edge and leave via the ladder. She was already half-way out of the water when she froze looking down herself.

What she saw almost made her faint.

SHE WAS NAKED! COMPLETELY NAKED! The transparent panties, her last piece of clothing, was now gone, too! In an instant, Amy let herself fall back into the water, nervously looking around. Her mind raced in complete panic and her body shook overwhelmed with the situation. Her heart felt like it was about to burst out of her chest.

It seemed as if no one had seen her, but now her plan of leaving the water and hiding in the changing room from Val and her friends wasn't an option anymore. A sense of desperation and helplessness suddenly overwhelmed her. It made her want to scream. Her eyes stung from unshed tears, not knowing what to do next.

Amy turned around seeing that two of the three kids who had been standing in line in front of her and Emma were already back in the pool. She knew that she had to be quick in finding her panties. Her mind raced in desperation, her limbs trembling with a sense of urgency.

Amy swam back towards the area at the slide, diving down to look for her lost panties. Without diving goggles, she had a hard time seeing anything under water. Everything was blurry, the water distorting her vision and making it impossible to make out any details, her heart sinking with every passing second. More panic set in. She had to find these panties! Urging her to act fast, her heart pounded in her ears like a drumbeat.

Amy swam back to the surface to refill her lungs with air and saw that now the third boy was in the water also. Just as she surfaced, all three of them looked over at her before starting to swim towards her.

"Great, what do they want?" Amy wondered. Her mind raced with possibilities. Her body tense everywhere, a mix of fear and apprehension filling her heart.

Amy wasn't interested in talking to anyone right now, especially in her naked state. She knew that finding her lost panties without goggles was very unlikely, and so she decided to swim away from the boys in the hopes that they would leave her alone.

Unfortunately, Amy wasn't able to lose the boys, and she quickly got cornered at the shallow end of the pool. If she swam any further, she would have to stand up and expose herself to everyone, which wasn't an option.

Amy’s mind raced with the harrowing thought of such a scenario. Her body trembled; her heart ached with the weight of her predicament.

But the events that would follow were more than unexpected.

[NoPoint11]

Next part please

[jojo12026]

Yes please!

[clockspinning]

Was the original author Krylb and you changed the names and ages because if not... this is suspiciously similar to another story. Yes I know you stated at the beginning you had permission but... just saying

[Freesub]

Was the original author Krylb and you changed the names and ages because if not... this is suspiciously similar to another story. Yes I know you stated at the beginning you had permission but... just saying

I don't understand your point, he literally said he decided to make edits instead of just reposting it and he has permission... What is your point here?

[1pantielessZoe2]

Was the original author Krylb and you changed the names and ages because if not... this is suspiciously similar to another story. Yes I know you stated at the beginning you had permission but... just saying

So to clarify. "Amy - Losing Control" is an original story, which was heavily inspired by the first chapter of the story of Erica written by Krylb.

BUT it is not a copy and it deviates from Erica's journey in many significant ways.

I can understand the confusion, though. With the release of chapter 4 I will put up a disclaimer front and center.

[clockspinning]

From the OP it appeared to me that "Amy - Losing Control" was the original title and you were continuing a story named that. Meaning that the person you got permission from may have been the plagiarist if it were another, which is why I mentioned the original author's name. I did not mean to offend, just clarify whose permission you had.

[1pantielessZoe2]

From the OP it appeared to me that "Amy - Losing Control" was the original title and you were continuing a story named that. Meaning that the person you got permission from may have been the plagiarist if it were another, which is why I mentioned the original author's name. I did not mean to offend, just clarify whose permission you had.

No offense taken. It's actually quite simple.

Amy - Losing Control, written by the original authour Lisa_the_brave -> initial setup heavily inspired by Erica (krylb), which is not plagiarism

After deletion I got permission from Lisa to repost and continue the original story (Amy's story, not Erica's). There is no infringement on anyone's property.

Hope that helps.