Author's note: I'm typically just a reader but figured I'd try out some writing to help contribute. I usually struggle with different point of views so please let me know if it confusing. The story does start off with some mild EUF but it's mainly an ENM story. I don't plan on making this a long story or commit to a lot of chapters but we'll see depending on the interest.
Jack stared at the endless pile of junk that has crowded his garage. "I can't believe I have to clean all this crap up. I'm 14 years old! I should be hanging out with my friends, go to the pool, or some other kind of summer adventure during my break...not this!" 30 minutes passed and Jack was finally gaining some momentum on the cleanup.
"Hey Jack! What are you doing?!" This caused Jack to flinch at the unexpected company and knocking over some boxes in the process. "Alyssa...Hey" jack said still trying to recover from being surprised. Alyssa was Jack's childhood friend. They were the same age, grew up in the same neighborhood, and spent a lot of time together over the years.
"Oh uhh my mom said I had to clean out the garage before I could go out and play." He said still trying to recover from the sudden company. Alyssa felt bad for frightening Jack and decided the help clean up some of the boxes that she indirectly knocked over. During the process she noticed an unique looking box that looked like a board game. "Is this an old game we've never played before?"
Jack inspected the title of the game "&;$;)/;$-". He didn't recognize it nor did it look like a language from this world. "No clue but we should put it back where it came from." "Awh come on let's open it and play I have nothing to do today" Alyssa pleaded. This was new to Jack. Usually he's the one always willing to just try something out without knowing the details while she was usually the one being extra cautious.
"I guess I have been working hard lately..I'm sure a little break wouldn't hurt." Alyssa jumped in joy and was already opening the box and trying to decipher the rulebook. Jack took out the device and a purple and blue gem that was inside. It was octagon shaped serving as a table but also had a mini screen in the base of it. Despite being dusty it looked pretty high tech. Alongside that was some cards with no text just pictures of warriors, maidens, gods, merchants, etc.
"I can't read any of this!" Alyssa cried out in the background. But right on cue the device beeped out *intiating setup* and started to scan Alyssa from head to toe. *tanktop, bra, shorts, panties, shoes, and socks*. "Ahh hey!" Alyssa yelped and covered her hands on her chest and in between her legs as if the machine just stripped her. In reality it did no such nothing, but the fact that it spelled out everything she was wearing felt like a violation. The device proceeded to do the same to Jack *t-shirt, shorts, underwear, socks, shoes*
*commencing first round. Play your 1st card*
Jack was a bit weirded out but just shrugged and played a bear looking beast first. "Come on Alyssa play a card you're the one that wanted to play." "Alright alright but I don't have a good feeling about this game anymore!" She looked at her cards beyond confused but ultimately ended up playing a human that looked to be handling some brass knuckles. The cards were played and a little holographic display appeared and showcased the battle. The beast slaughtered the human.
The device scanned Alyssa again and instantly her shoes disappeared and its trace zoomed into the storage compartment of the device. "What just happened!! Those were my favorite pair of shoes!" Alyssa smacked the table and noticed that it caused a little counter ticker on the board to jump from 2 to 3.
*initiating round 2*
"Uhh I'm not sure but it's saying we have to play another card" Jack was beyond confused but his curious mind couldn't help but think what would happen if she lost again.
After the last display of cards Alyssa felt like she was starting to pick up on the game and placed a giant cyclops looking creature. Jack decided to play a small little fox. The hologram proceeded and the cyclops couldn't hit the little fox and ended up accidently smashing itself in the face ultimately losing the battle for Alyssa. She jumped off the floor... "You've got to be kidding me you dumb ogre!"
Jack witnessing her tantrum and his eyes were suddenly looking elsewhere. *poof* just like that Alyssa lost her socks tanktop, and shorts and stood there in her black little bra and rainbow colored panties. "Do you think I'll find gold underneath that?" Jack teased. Confused by the comment Alyssa looked down..."AHHHH don't look!!!" And her hands shot down to cover her childish underwear and bra that didn't leave a lot to the imagination.
Jack wanted to be respectful but what 14 year old wouldn't look especially when it's his childhood friend! He noticed how red Alyssa's face, her chest that was a little small but filled her tiny frame perfectly, and the cute little underwear that looked straight out of a 10 year old's closet.
"I'm done with this game!" Alyssa frantically putting the game away and picked up the purple gem. *duel ending* just as magically as her clothes disappeared they re-appeared on her body like normal. Her embarrassment dwindling as everything was back to normal. "That was fun! Playing random cards really seemed to help." Jack said. "For you...maybe" mumbled Alyssa.
She was still trying to process what happened. The game seemed to be some kind of duel stripping simulation, each round getting higher stakes with the counter ticker, and picking up the purple gem seemed to end the game but what did the blue gem do? The battles didn't go her way but still felt strangely calculated in a not obvious way. She was close to figuring out the game while Jack appeared clueless as ever. He saw her in her undies and even teased her about it! It wasn't fair. She wanted Jack to feel just as embarrassed as she was. Her cheeks still blazing thinking about it. She had a plan..a risky one but if she's right..
"Jack we should play again tonight. We could even invite Jenna over to play." Jack was surprised to hear this but his face lit up. He was all too eager to see his friend or Jenna in their undies. "My mom is working late tonight...sure let's do it! Come over at 8pm and bring Jenna."
Magical Card Game
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I like the idea... kinky Jumanji
I'm sure Alyssa and Jenna will have a lot of fun with this. Looking forward to next chapter!
I'm sure Alyssa and Jenna will have a lot of fun with this. Looking forward to next chapter!
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i like this kind of concept, and you did a great job writing this first chapter. nice job.
While i understand you don't want to commit to a long story and or a lot of chapters, i hope it's not too short either, because it is such a fun premise.
Maybe just give yourself a hard limit of like 3-5 chapters to wrap it up. Or higher if you really enjoy writing it.
While i understand you don't want to commit to a long story and or a lot of chapters, i hope it's not too short either, because it is such a fun premise.
Maybe just give yourself a hard limit of like 3-5 chapters to wrap it up. Or higher if you really enjoy writing it.
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Indeed, a great premise...I would speculate that, although longtime childhood friends, Jack & Alyssa have thus far never seen each other naked. That could soon change.
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Intriguing idea you should try and do enough chapters for Alyssa to get some payback on Jack, but it doesn't have to be long and drawn out a few chapters should work and you can bookmark if you ever want to come back to it and continue it.
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