The Real Story of Hansel and Gretel

[TeenFan]

The Real Story of Hansel and Gretel
Chapter 1. The cottage near the woods


Way back a long time ago, at the edge of a deep, dark forest, stood a little cottage where Hansel and Gretel lived. At fourteen years old,
Hansel was tall for his age, lean and exceedingly handsome. The son of a woodcutter, he has a strong grip with arms that are nicely muscled.
Hansel's curly blond hair was much talked about by the girls of the village nearby. Many a young maiden blushed and batted her eyes when
Hansel spoke to them. Hansel could have played around with the village girls, but he was completely devoted to his sister, Gretel.

The sister's silky-smooth vanilla creme hair matches the brother's in color, but hers is straight. Their eyes are a perfect match, light brown
like clover honey. Every adult in the village said twelve year old Gretel was most adorable with a sweet disposition. Everyone loved and
respected Hansel and Gretel, everyone except for their stepmother.

Hansel and Gretel's father is a strong man physically; he was weak of mind and let his new wife henpeck him constantly. Whatever the wife
wanted she got. What the wife doesn't want is children. From the beginning of the marriage the stepmother considered the two kids to be
nothing but a nuisance, little more than competition for food and resources. Stepmom is the opposite of her tall and slender husband,
being round cheeked with thick calves and being of normal height for a woman. Stepmom loves to eat, and her body is shaped accordingly.

This region of Germany is in the grips of a severe drought. Many of the crops have failed. The entire garden at the cottage has dried up and
withered away to husks and weeds. At mid-summer, Hansel's britches fit more loosely than they did the previous winter. This was due to the
family having less food to eat. This was due to Hansel giving a portion of his own meals to the sister. It's hard to tell, but underneath the
layers of clothing, little Gretel was plumping out nicely in all the places a young lady should. The blossoming is in progress as the girl nears
the teenage years.

Even though the big brother kindly and willingly shared his portion with Gretel, the stepmom ranted and raved at the cost of feeding the
children. As the daughter of the village Pig Keeper, the stepmom grew up without missing a meal. Stepmom is conditioned to having
bacon for breakfast, ham for lunch, and pork chops for dinner. Ever since she married the woodcutter it's been barbecued bony squirrel or
possum pot pie with a side of beans. Oatmeal and barley cakes is the typical breakfast, and she's just about had enough of it.

With the drought so severe, the stream near the house is nearly dried up. It takes more effort to get down to the lower level of the stream
to fill a bucket of water. It takes many buckets to fill the four feet long oval shaped wooden tub. Two times each week Hansel and Gretel
each carried two pails of water from the creek to the cottage, a trip of nearly 100 meters. On bathing days, the stepmom kicks the two
children out of the house when she takes her bath. The children did all the work; the stepmom bathes in the water at its freshest and
cleanest. Then Gretel was allowed in the house to take her bath. Finally, when the water is murky gray, Hansel is allowed his bath.
Of course stepmom and sister remain inside as Hansel sits in the tub, which is in the kitchen near the stove. Gretel doesn't look over very
often, mostly keeping her focus on her chores in the kitchen as Hansel attempts to maintain his dignity. Most of the time Hansel can
undress and slip into the water while sister's back is turned and stepmom is occupied with something else. But it didn't always work
out that way. Sometimes stepmom used bathtime as a punishment.

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Hansel's shirt is soaked with sweat by the time the third trip from the creek is done. He and Gretel pour the four buckets of water into the
wooden tub. It takes twelve bucket to fill it to the preferred level. The brother/sister pair kept their voices low, walked tippy toe on
the wooden planks. Stepmom is angry. When she is upset, stepmom doesn't like noise. The noise of dishes breaking put stepmom into this
foul mood. In putting away the dishes from breakfast up on the wall shelf, clumsy Gretel didn't notice the family's black cat curled up on the
floor, and she tripped over it. Dinner plates crashed, the cat screeches, Gretel shrieks with surprise and she begins to fall over. The quick
reflexes and Hansel's muscles kept her from hitting the floor. However, in catching his sister, Hansel knocked over the water pitcher which
ended up in a dozen shards on the floor.

Stepmother comes running from the bedroom. Seeing all the ceramic pieces strewn about, stepmother strikes out first asks questions
later. She slaps both the children.

"Such naughty monsters. You broke those on purpose." Stepmom glares at the stepchildren.

"I tripped over the cat. I didn't mean to," Gretel says. The girl was saying she is sorry when she got another slap across the face.

"Don't talk back to me. There are no excuses for breaking good dishes. You will both pay for this. Clean up this mess. After that fetch
water for the tub. It's bath day. I wish I could wash you two right out of my hair and be done with you."

After the tub was filled with water stepmom took her bath while Hansel and Gretel sat on the steps of the front porch. The girl cried as
Hansel tried to comfort her. When the front door opened, Gretel got up to go inside. As soon as the girl is inside the house, stepmom
pokes her head out, "You too, boy. Inside with you."

Hansel gets up, not knowing why he is being asked to come into the house at this particular moment. He is wise enough not to ask
questions, just do as he is told.

Bringing both children to the tub, stepmom makes her intention clear, "I don't have the patience, and you don't have the time to take
separate baths. I have more chores for you to do the rest of the day, so off with your clothes, both of you."

[TeenFan]

This is going to be my Halloween story for this season.
As you know, there is a hungry witch in this old Fairy Tale. However, the story most of you have heard before is the sanitized, cleaned up
version kept to a minimum merely to frighten the little children from straying too far away from home. This true version will scare
the pants off of the grownups.

[flyingmonk]

Well, that is a bit of a twist on the ole tale. Be interesting to see where this goes.

[Themarble]

I know I'm going to enjoy this Halloween tale! And it gets right away with them needing to strip at the end! I can't wait to see what Hansel ends up packing!

[SensoryOverlord]

Cool! Fairlytale porn, I wish there was more of it. Err... well, that I know of.
This should be fun. The nasty stepmother, hopefully has some nasty but hot ideas.

I wonder if 'hungry old witch' implies actual magic? Another potential spicy ingredient in the fairytale stew.

De-sanitize to the max!