Bounce House Horror

[SensoryOverlord]

When a naked and erect boy ghost walks through walls, what appears first?

Gives "ghostly apparition" a whole new slant.

'Ectoplasm' that cleans itself up. Bonus!

[NudeBaG]

Interesting! Now who is going to be spooking who?

Though I have to say, I think you missed an opportunity for some extra potential by having him actually orgasm at the moment of death.
If he'd died JUST before finishing, ruined orgasm etc. With no orgasm for weeks before (because weak heart and lack of opportunity.)
Then there'd be that whole 'spirit with unfinished business' trope to call on.
Also the 'spirit reliving their last acts' stuff, so when as a ghost he reaches orgasm,it always instantly ruins.

Then there's an obvious final resolution theme too. After many struggles he is able to move on, taking the tunnel of light. Except he's finally orgasming, stroking triumphantly.
Possibly a first for St Peter and the (suddenly a little bit more) Pearly Gates. (See, the puns just write themselves!)

I thought about all of that lol
Seems too obvious now

[NudeBaG]

Delete.

[NudeBaG]

So…
Due to a technological error, I completely LOST the latest chapter.
I’m honestly close to crying.
I put so much into it, and it progressed things beautifully.
I can’t recreate it.
I apologize, but this year’s attempt at a Halloween story is a bust.
This is a complete loss.

[Jeepman89]

I read it. It was awesome. Such a shame.

[NudeBaG]

I have a new, less ambitious Halloween story in the works.
Couldn’t go without doing something

[Jeepman89]

Looking forward to it!

[NudeBaG]

Bounce House Horror

The Johnson County Elementary/Middle School Fall Festival was underway.
For the last week in October, most of the festivities took on a Halloween theme.
Most of the booths and attractions were manned by student volunteers from the Johnson County Highschool.
At the end of the ‘U’ shaped parkinglot/round-a-bout was the Festival’s main attraction (at least as far as students were concerned):
The bounce house.
It was more of a bounce ‘mansion’, really.
Instead of the obnoxious rainbow stripes of ‘normal’ bounce houses, this one was painted to look like weathered stone.
It had a pair of flapping, inflatable ‘wooden’ doors that acted as an entrance and an exit (functionally, just big inflatable curtains.)
The 4 corner ‘towers’ were built sturdy enough to support an intricate interlaced rope ‘web’ to act as the 9 foot tall safety ceiling across the interior.
The set up was simple enough.
The ‘haunted’ bounce castle was to be manned by a 3 student team from the highschool.
This is where our main character enters.

Gordy Mellons is a relatively attractive, if not skinny, 16 year old boy.
He’s no heartthrob, but plenty of girls from the neighborhood find him to be kinda cute to downright handsome.
The 2 girls who have been paired with Gordy to run this attraction, however, do not.
Heather Cleftson is an attractive, yet ‘edgy’ 16 year old.
She doesn’t smoke, and isn’t a delinquent, but dresses in leather and denim, has a nose piercing and multiple ear piercings.
Red hair and green eyes that promise damnation… or fun.
Her exterior is definitely offputting to the more ‘conservative’ community of Johnson County.
Julie Mounders would fall into that category.
Also at 16, she is more of the ‘typical’ highschool teen-
Blonde hair, blue eyes.
Academically gifted and popular.
Not the prom-queen, and not one to acknowledge her own high standing in the social hierarchy, but aware enough to know being paired with Gordy Mellons and Heather Cleftson is an odd pairing.

“I’m not going in there with those brats.” Heather crosses her arms as the teens prepare.
“We already covered this,” Julie huffs, rolling her eyes.
“You see the kids in and start the timer.” Julie says.
She then looks at Gordy.
“You stay inside the bounce castle to help any kids who fall down or whatever.”
Gordy nods, wanting to impress the pretty Julie.
“I’ll help the kids as they exit when the timer goes off.” Julie says.
Both Heather and Julie are dressed as ‘vampiric caretakers of Dracula’s haunted castle’.
Gordy has his face painted white and gray, and a tattered white sheet with a hole for his head to poke through.
Underneath, he’s wearing black sweatpants and a black longsleeve t-shirt.
He also has black socks, but no shoes in order to protect the bouncy surface.
Gordy takes a few hops in the center as he waits for kids to start entering.
The little lights on the interior and from the open rope ceiling revealing the orangish pink fall sky are great mood lighting.
The fans that keep the castle inflated make it impossible to hear anything outside other than the timer signaling the next group of kids.
Gordy looks up at the tangled ‘web’ of ropes above as he hops.
He decides to play a little game.
He hops high, tucking his arms in or raising them above his head as he angles his upper body through the woven ropes.
He has to quickly tuck as he descends, or his arms and sheet could get caught on the ropes.

The first group of 4 kids enter.
2 boys, 2 girls.
Gordy hops carefully along the exterior as the kids take up the center.
There’s one minor collision, but as Gordy helps the boy and girl up, they laugh.
The timer goes off.
Heather calls in from outside “Clear out guys! Next group, coming in!”
The giggling kids hop through the exit.
The next group is 4 girls.
Gordy estimates most of the kids coming through will be between the age of 8 at the youngest, and 13 at the oldest.
These girls are around 10 or 11.
Gordy teasingly makes spooky noises and wiggles his fingers and arms at them, billowing the sheet.
“Time! Next group!” Heather calls in.
“That was fun!”
“Yeah! Let’s get back in line!”
The young girls exit.
The next group is 4 rowdy boys, about 12 or 13.
2 of the boys flop down on their stomachs and bounce back up.
The laugh as one if the smaller boys tries, but fails.
At one point, one the boys yanks another boy’s pants down!
“Haha! You’re still wearing tight whites?!” They tease.
“Hey!” Gordy hops in, stopping the bouncing.
“Not cool, guys.” Gordy helps the boy up and he pulls up his pants.
“Do stuff like that again, and I’ll make sure you don’t get back in.” He warns.
The ‘pantser’, a boy of about 12 or 13, sizes Gordy up.
Gordy returns the glare, not backing down from a kid younger than him.
The boys continue their minor roughhousing until Heather calls “Time! Next group!”

On and on it goes.
Kids and teens in groups of 4 cycle through the haunted bounce house with no further issues.
Between groups, Gordy hops and spins in the center of the bounce house.
As before, he’s twirling and weaving his arms and sheet between the ropes.
As he comes down, the sheet slows his arms’ descent.
It catches him between two ropes, suspending him 4 feet from the bouncy floor!
Gordy tries to free himself, but he can’t get leverage to lift off the ropes.
The sheet is wrapped around his arms, which are wrapped in the ropes!
The bundled fabric is tucked tightly under his chest, pulling his shirt up, revealing his abs!
“H-Help!” He calls out. “Heather! Julie!”
The fans and festivities make it impossible to hear from outside.
The flap behind Gordy opens and 4 more kids enter the bounce house.
“Hey! What happened to you?” A snotty voice asks.
Gordy looks over his shoulder.
It’s the 4 roudy boys he had to reprimand earlier.
“What’s it look like? I’m stuck. Help me out if here before you start jumping, okay?” Gordy rolls his eyes, cursing his luck.
“Are you gonna let us play how we want?” The boy who instigated the pantsing smirks.
“Guys, just follow the rules. No rough housing. Is that so hard? Now help me out.” Gordy says.
“You said you’d keep us out of here if we played rough, right?” The boy asks smugly.
“Well now, you can’t!”
Another boy giggles.
“Hehe! Hey! Think he wears boxers or tight whites, like Tim?”
“Ooooo!” The instigating boy grins wickedly.
“Let’s find out!”
Before Gordy can react, his black sweatpants are pulled down from behind!
“Hey! What the-?!” He gasps.
He tries to kick free, but his sweatpants bunch around his ankles, making it impossible!
“Dang!” The pantser hops around in front of him.
“Haha! Nice tight whites!” The boy taunts.
Gordy looks down.
To his horror, everything from the top of his abs to his ankles is completely exposed, leaving his underwear his only cover!
“Hey! Pull those back up and get me out of here!” Gordy struggles.
“Yeah right! You still gonna kick us out?” The pantser challenges.
“Once you get me out of here? Heck yeah I am!” Gordy foolishly threatens.
“Then, no! Hahaha!” The pantser laughs as the boys begin hopping around in a circle.
“Next group!” Heather calls in.
The boys stop and begin exiting.
“You!” Gordy shouts at one of the boys. “Tell the girl out there I need help!”
The boy looks at Gordy and smiles.
“No way! We’re getting back in line to tell everyone about the pantsless ghost!” The boy tucks out of the flap.

From behind him, Gordy hears highpitched giggling.
Hopping around in front of him are 3 girls and 1 boy, all about age 10!
“Guys! Help! Please! I need you to pull my pants up and then tell the girls outside I need help getting unstuck!” Gordy pleads.
As if they hadn’t heard him at all, all 4 kids begin giggling!
“What happened?!”
“Why are your pants down?!”
The kids begin circling, hopping around.
“I got stuck and some other kids yanked my pants down. Please help me!”
One of the girls hops in front of Gordy and begins closely examining the buldge in the front of his briefs.
“Hehehe!” She points and turns to the other 2 girls. “You can almost see his weiner!”
The other 2 girls and even the boy hop up to him for a closer inspection!
Gordy looks down.
Thankfully, the dimly lit interior of the gothic bounce house hides most of any detail that might be discerned through the tight fabric.
Still, there ARE shapes on display.
“Come on! Let’s hop!” The boy begins bouncing around.
The 3 girls are transfixed by the buldge in Gordy’s briefs.
They whisper and giggle and point as Gordy pleads.
“Please! Pull my pants up!”
“O-Okay.” One of the girls kneels, finally agreeing to pull Gordy’s pants up.
“Next group!” Heather calls.
“Oh!” She stands up. “Sorry.” She shrugs and hops to the exit with the others.
“No! Wait!” Gordy pleads, but the kids exit.

Gordy hears the flap behind him open.
He hears 3 highpitched gasps, followed by a familiar voice.
“Told you it’d be worth it if you let me cut in line!”
The pantser hops around in front of Gordy.
“You! Get me out of here!” He demands.
“Nuh uh.” The pantser grins wickedly.
“Wow! He’s really in his undies! Hehe!”
“Let’s look at his front!”
“I’ve never seen a boy in his underwear before!”
Coming around from behind Gordy are 3 young girls, probably 9-10!
They all gasp as they eye Gordy up and down.
The pantser hops around behind Gordy, out of sight.
“Girls! Please! I need you to help me pull my pants up, then go tell one of the girls outside that I need help getting down!”
The girls just giggle.
“Nope.” The pantser steps beside Gordy from behind.
“My friends are already telling all the kids in line about the trapped boy in his undies!”
Gordy gulps.
“Lots of ‘em are pretty excited to see a big boy in nothing but his undies! Haha!”
The young girls get even closer, looking directly at Gordy’s buldge!
“Please! Stop! Pull my pants up and get help!” Gordy pleads.
“Can we look inside?” One girl in a cat costume asks.
“Huh?!” Gordy gasps.
“Oh? You guys wanna see his wiener?” The pantser grins.
The girls giggle nervously.
The girl in the cat costume nods.
“No!” Gordy yells.
He thrashes, but the rope webbing holds tight, and his ankles are bound by his sweatpants.
“Ho ho man!” The pantser tucks his fingers inside Gordy’s waistband at his hips.
“Eeeee!” The girls squeel.
Gordy’s body undulates, trying to free itself, but in an instant, he feels his briefs fly down his legs!

[Jeepman89]

Awesome story, NudeBag! The suspense is killing me!

[NudeBaG]

Awesome story, NudeBag! The suspense is killing me!

Thanks Jeepman
My ‘ghost story’ was shaping up to be too ambitious, so, after losing a ton of progress, I opted to just bang out some simple Halloween candy.
My bread and butter