Mark's Revenge

Stories about girls getting pantsed, stripped and humiliated by anyone or anything.
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Annaneale wrote: Mon Aug 16, 2021 9:26 am Not really sure what to say, I think I was looking for something more. A bit of a let down.
I apologize - can you be more specific ?
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Good story, I particularly enjoyed part 1, your SPH writing is excellent. Part 2 was also good, maybe the nudity part was a bit too short/too fast-paced, and I have to agree that water dissolving clothes didn't make much sense. I liked the teasing comments the others were making (both in SPH and ENF sections) and the cameras taking pictures of the nudity. I hope I see more SPH work from you (much harder to find good ENM/SPH compared to ENF).
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The one change which would make the story more believable would simply be to make it so that Mark was able to replace the usual uniforms with ones designed to dissolve with water. They actually make those and it's a staple of JAV ENF porn videos.

Overall it was well done, and set the scene for all of the future revenge plots.
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It’s becoming clear to me that I wasn’t as overt as I should of been when describing marks plan:

“They looked amazing in the skirts and the pom poms. The outfits were white shirts, with black lettering and black skirts. Accompanied by black knee high socks and black pom poms. It was a very good look. And seeing how similar they were to the outfits he would soon be switching them with, he grew very excited. In fact, seeing them laugh, Mark felt his little cock stir in his pants.”

He did indeed switch their uniforms with water soluble clothing - I just didn’t emphasize that enough - my apologies. :shock: :shock:
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I actually inferred from context that the switched outfits were water soluble - we knew there was going to be something up with them and once the sprinklers came on we found out exactly what that was. I suppose it just enforces how different people can read the same text in a story and take different things from it or come to different conclusions as to what's going on.

Looking forward to the next exposure.
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Yeah sorry about that. Somehow I missed that detail reading through originally (and sounds like everybody did too). It's probably because it was only mentioned the one time. That's precisely why I have a tendency to frequently restate plot-relevant details as long as they continue to be in use.
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Part Three

Mark’s bedroom was wall to wall with blueprints connected with red thread and giant x’s over the women he’d exacted his revenge on. Those who were left were Britney, Alexis, and finally, Claire herself. Mark knew this would be no easy task. Having so many students exposed and embarrassed in such quick succession was highly questionable and far more eyes would be watching for devious behavior.

Plus, Britney and Alexis were hardly as easy targets as destiny and Christina had been. Both weren’t in any activities together and had different schedules largely speaking. So mark would have to either create a situation where both were present or humiliate one at a time. Britney was shockingly stupid, but ranked highly in the hierarchy of their school so was often surrounded by people that would make this task difficult. Alexis was Claire’s best friend and serious kiss ass. She was the Vice President to Claire’s commander in chief.

Luckily for mark, sometimes things literally fall right in your lap. Maybe someone way up high was looking out for mark’s interests? She was the only person who humiliated mark that also rode the same bus as him. And one day, almost a full week after the cheerleading incident, mark heard something that could certainly help him out.

“What do you mean the showers aren’t working?”

“I mean that the girls showers aren’t working! And we have to use the boys until they’re fixed!”

How in the hell was mark’s luck this good after a lifetime of bad luck.

“So what? We just share it with the boys?”

“No, the boys use the showers first and leave and then we go in.”

“That doesn’t sound great. Will there be a teacher in there?”

“Two, I guess the principle is trying to crack down on the clothing mishaps.”

Britney spoke up finally, interrupting the two strange voices by mark.

“It’s such a pain in the ass! I keep forgetting! And i end up crossing over to the boys locker room with just a towel on… it’s so embarrassing!”

Now, if it was anyone else, Mark would instantly suspect a trap. Someone trying to snake out the suspect of the fishy cheerleader strippings perhaps? But it wasn’t someone else. It was Britney. And Britney was dumber than a sack of rocks. So, Mark decided this intel was gonna be beneficial. However, he knew that her gym class was the last period of the day, which meant he had a whole day to sniff out intel for Alexis’ humiliation.

Mark embarked (or emMarked… get it?) on a journey that day. Making it all the way to 3rd period before something unexpected happened. Walking down the hallway, Mark shuffled his book bag on his back after his last class. He noticed someone was probably behind him - but everyone was behind everyone it was a school hallway. Still, he had a nagging feeling that this someone was actively following him.

“Hey, needle dick.”

Mark spun around to face Claire and Alexis. Both of whom began to giggle, probably due to the fact that he spun around like needle dick was his name.

“At least he knows.” Giggled Alexis.

“Listen mark, I know you’re the reason those sprinklers came on. And I know you’re the reason those cheerleaders all wound up half naked.”

“Well,” he said, “I don’t think that’s accurate. Two of the girls were more than half naked.” He said with a wry grin, “you knew them I think.”

Claire was simmering quietly, tapping her foot on the linoleum, her red hair seeming to glow as if on fire from her rage. Mark was immediately reminded of her absolute stunning beauty. Her small face was absolutely gorgeous, matched with the little freckles that dotted her button nose he was rather captivated. Not to mention the pert C cups that were nicely housed in a dark green tank top.

“What my friend is too polite to say at the moment is: if you think you can get away with this, you can’t. And you won’t touch another girl in this school or in the world for the rest of your life you little creep. Oh, and revenge plans is already being formed.”

“I haven’t touched anyone, sweetheart, not yet.” He replied swiftly, “Now, if you’ll excuse me.” He turned and walked face first into the wall next to the door of his next class. He heard stifled laughs and guffaws, shaking his head as he went to take his seat.

Well, that didn’t go as planned, not at all. But he still had plenty of time to brainstorm ways to humiliate Alexis. Who, by the way, definitely wasn’t getting any lower on his naughty list. He began perking his ears up, listening intently throughout the day. And again, right in his lap, destiny fell.

Literally, Destiny fell on top of mark as she was walking past him in class, “Ew get off of me.”

“You fell on me!” He whispered angrily.

“Quiet everyone…” the teacher muttered without looking up from his desk.

“Shut up, you disgusting little dick loser, you’re so gross.” She whispered back.

“At least I don’t have a jungle in my pants.” He retorted, and loud enough for a few students to start laughing, enough to cause the teacher to actually pay attention to the class and calm everyone down. Destiny’s light skinned cheeks were bright red, and she turned her test in as quickly as she could to go back to her seat. Mark’s ears were still perked, and he heard exactly what he wanted to. When she sat down, one of her friends began whispering with her. Shuffling her desk a little closer so they weren’t eavesdropped on.

“Hey don’t listen to him. You shaved remember?”

“Yeah but everyone remembers me as the girl with the hairy bush! People keep taping razors to my locker! And it was filled with shaving cream!”

“I know, I’m telling you, you need to go to Alexis’s pool party next week, it’ll help you take your mind off things.”

“How? Alexis and Claire haven’t even talked to me since the incident, how do we know if I’m still invited?”

“I’m sure you are. Cmon, we should go, show them how sexy you are!”

“They already know! They all saw me butt naked!!!”

Mark smiled wide. A pool party? Alexis? That was a prime and golden opportunity that could not be missed. Yes, destiny and Destiny were definitely on his side, willing or not. He began writing out sticky notes over and over again, sticking them to students and desks and lockers. And he did it throughout the day up until the last class of the day. What did each sticky note say? Last period of the day, locker rooms, bring your friends

***

Britney stripped down to her mismatched underwear as the girls filed over to the boys locker room. The girls had gotten used to Britney’s shenanigans and just left her by herself shaking their heads as they went. With the girls gone, Britney felt more comfortable by herself to strip down. Removing her blue bra, her enormous triple D cups bounced free. She was incredibly self conscious of her boobs. The other girls often made sly comments about them, her mother told her it was because they’re jealous of their size but Britney wasn’t so sure. They always said her breasts looked liked googley eyes. Her nipples were huge, and had no clear beginning or ending on her boobs. While soft and lightly pink, they seemed to point in different directions very awkwardly. And the tremendous size of her bosom meant that anytime she moved they would bounce around and look in different directions, hence, googley eyes.

Her blonde hair with brown highlights let down were able to cover the tops of her breasts but not her nipples. Still, enough was covered to make her feel less insecure of their size. She lowered her bright pink thong and smiled at her black landing strip. She liked the contrast of her natural black hair color with her pale milky flesh and bright blonde hair. Her lips were puffy and hung a little lower than most girls but she still had a nice tight vagina as far as her and her boyfriends were concerned. Her huge butt bounced and rippled generously as she wrapped a towel around her and headed to the showers.

The white towel was only two inches below her pussy and 3 inches above her cleavage, of which there was still quite a bit. She walked over to the shower room where surprisingly none of the girls were located. She tried one, then two, then a third, and just before she tried the fourth she remembered they were broken. She hit herself on the head and contemplated getting dressed again before crossing over. But just as she had the last two days, she decided to grin and bear it and just go across in the towel. She returned to gather her belongings and found them missing. That’s not great, but maybe she forgot that she already took them to the other locker room?

***

A lot of this plan relied on Britney’s utter stupidity, but he was hopeful and positive it would still work. And as he gathered her underwear and clothes and shoes and socks, he watched her absentmindedly attempt to turn another shower on. Yeah, this would go fine.

***

Britney tied the towel as tightly as she could around herself before opening the door and walking out into the hallway. Usually, the most shocking thing to her was the immediate cold temperature of the linoleum on her bare feet. Her pink toenails and stubby toes curling as she darted across the floor to quickly join the others. Instead, the most shocking thing today was the large group of students assembled in the halls. The other times she’d done this there was no one except maybe one girl. The gasps that followed made her face turn bright red.

She gripped the towel tightly as every head was turning her way, snickering and eyes widening as they saw arguably one of the hottest girls in school in a skimpy tight white towel. Her face was red as a tomato as she froze in place, wondering whether or not to return to the girls locker room or just go to the showers.

“Hey Brit, let’s see under the towel baby.” Shouted a guy from the back, this began a slippery slope of horny guys and jealous girls to start catcalling the beautiful bimbo.

“That towel is pretty short honey.”

“Bend over I think you dropped something!”

Britney, of course, looked down to see if she dropped something which she hadn’t. When they snickered louder she grew more embarrassed.

***

Mark climbed out of the locker in the girls locker room and quickly hurried to the door to briefly open it, and grab a corner of her towel before shutting the door on it and locking it. And now, the rest was up to fate and Britney’s stupidity. Hopefully he didn’t underestimate her. He leaned on the door, his back to her back, and pulled out his tiny dick to stroke it at the sound of whatever was going to happen.

***

Britney decided enough was enough. The crowd was growing larger and larger and everyone was mocking her towel and how short it was and she decided she was just going to take a shower and be done with all of this. She took a step forward and felt the towel unravel and collapse in a heap on the floor. Britney, the ditz that she was, simply froze with her hands at her sides and her naked body on full display.

The boys were absolutely astounded at the beauty before them. Her shocked mouth hung open and her arms dangled at her sides while her big tits swung softly, her large pink nipples pointing every which way. Her toned and smooth stomach of bright white skin led to the stark black landing strip above her pussy, exposed to everyone in the halls. As all the kids began to point and laugh and comment at Britney’s body, she finally woke up and shrieked as loud as humanly possible.

“Check out the hooters! They’re huge!”

“Those nipples are huge! And floppy!”

“Looks like the carpet doesn’t match the drapes sweetheart!”

“She’s got some meat flaps on her dude damn! That pussy is hanging!!”

“Someone take a pic!”

“Smile for the camera big titties!”

And just like that, Britney was bombarded with flashing cameras and cell phone clicks. Ridiculous Snapchat filters framed her in a more ridiculous sight as she tried to shield her body from the crowd. Her tits spilling out of her tiny hands. She was upset to find her lips were moist and sopping when she brushed against them to hide. She let out a little moan that no one could hear as her clit pointed out and rubbed against her fingers. She bit down on her lip and turned around to go back inside the locker room. Never mind just picking the towel up and covering herself, she wanted to get out of there.

“Woah!”

“Holy shit!”

“Check out that ass!”

“It’s massive!”

She struggled to pull on the door, using both hands and the harder she pulled the harder her big butt cheeks clapped for the crowd behind her. A girl emerged from the crowd and snorted in derision, “oh my god, look at all that cellulite on her fat ass!”

Everyone’s laughter reached a higher pitch and Britney was absolutely smitten. Braver souls began taking slow motion videos of her bouncing tits as she pulled on the door handle. You could actually hear her ass and tits jiggling and clapping against her skin. Something several videos picked up on that were instantly plastered on Facebook or twitter. “Big booty blonde bimbo with jumbo tits forgets her towel” would be trending at #1 on Xhamster and red tube for a full week after today.

As for Britney herself she was struggling not to cum from the friction of her legs against her labia. As she pulled on the door she heard someone softly moaning on the other side, and the slight fap of skin. Enraged, she tried to pull even harder one last time and fell. Slipping on the towel she landed on her ass in front of everyone with her legs spread and her pussy completely exposed along with her little puckered asshole. Her tits spilled to the sides of her body, pointing in opposite directions.

“Woah, dude look look!”

“OH MY GOD” screamed a girl.

Her pussy was glistening and streaming slowly out onto the floor, “oh no, no no no don’t look!” Britney shouted, clapping both hands over her exposed, gaping, open vagina. She squealed as soon as she did it, sticking her legs out and curling her toes as she screamed and came in front of everyone. Furiously rubbing her clit as she did. When she woke up from that earth shattering orgasm she looked around to see open mouths of shock, laughing faces at her embarrassment, and cameras pointed to capture every second of her climax. She simply covered her face and curled in a ball, effectively rubbing her own juices on her face as teachers rushed through the crowd.

***

Mark walked out of the back door of the locker room and circled around the pool toward the buses that were waiting for the students to leave the school. He was watching the texts and Snapchat stories of her beautiful body as he stood on the door and jerked off quickly to Britney’s humiliation, cumming twice in the span of 4 minutes. As he boarded his bus and explained the teachers let him leave early to the driver, he perused online to see the mocking comments and reactions to Britney’s display. Before finding a video that shocked him, Britney spread eagle on the floor rubbing herself until she screamed and oozed her pussy juices all over the floor. It was one of the hottest things he’d ever seen.

***

Alexis and Claire watched the videos, struggling not to laugh as Britney watched them, disheveled on her front porch in a baggy grey outfit that covered everything but her face.

“Googley eye tits are on everyone’s minds now.” Claire muttered, causing the two girls to laugh.

“It’s not funny!” Britney shouted.

“Oh please, I’m doing you a favor, you’re probably soaking through your panties now that I said that you little slut.”

“Shut up! You wanna talk about panties? I’ll tell everyone about your lucky pair!”

Alexis stayed quiet as Claire quietly addressed Britney, “listen to me you little horny skank, you’re lucky we’re even talking to you. Everyone at school has seen every inch of you, no one has to ever wonder what you look like under those clothes again. You might as well be naked for the rest of your life, because for the rest of your life everyone you meet and see will only see you as the floppy titted bitch who came all over herself in the middle of school with fake blonde hair. You told us to come over here to help so we’re here to help we didn’t even try and talk to destiny or Christina. So what do you want. Googles.”

Britney flushed, humiliated and defeated, before whispering softly, “someone did this to me, and he was jacking his dick on the other side of the door; he must’ve locked me out. Mark, isn’t that who you think it was. You think hes the same one who embarrassed Christina and destiny. Now he got me. I think you two are next.”

The three of them sat on that for awhile. Before Claire finally spoke up.

“Okay, I have a plan, but it’s risky. And I don’t think mark will ever show his face again - but we have to try.”

“Anything to get back at him.” Britney replied.

To be continued

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Hey all, hope you guys liked this latest chapter, I’m pretty proud of it. Any and all feedback is appreciated. Don’t know when I’ll get the last two parts out but I haven’t forgotten don’t worry!
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