ʏƚƚɘᙠ ʞɔu⅃ bɒᙠ

[Humilatron]

:ᴎoiƚqiɿɔꙅɘᗡ
⸮ɘd oiɿɒᴎɘɔꙅ ɿɘʜ ||iw ƚɒʜw ƚuᙠ .ɘɔɒᎸ ɿɘʜ ƚob ƚɒʜƚ ꙅɘ|ʞɔɘɿᎸ ƚʜǫi| ꙅɒ ||ɘw ꙅɒ ꙅɘʏɘ ʏɒɿǫ bᴎɒ ɿiɒʜ ᴎɿuduɒ ƚʜǫi| ǫᴎo| ,ƚƚud ||ɒmꙅ ɒ ,ꙅdood ||ɒmꙅ ꙅɒʜ ɘʜꙄ .b|o ꙅɿɒɘʏ ꙅ'ɘʜꙄ .ꙅoiɿɒᴎɘɔꙅ bɘʞovᴎiᴎu ,bɘƚɔɘqxɘᴎu ,ǫᴎiƚɒi|imuʜ ᴎi Ꮈ|ɘꙅɿɘʜ ꙅbᴎiᎸ ᴎɘƚᎸo ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ ʞɔu⅃ ʏbɒ⅃ Ꮈo ɘbiꙅ ɘʜƚ ᴎo ƚoᴎ ꙅi oʜw |ɿiǫ ʏꙅmu|ɔ ɒ ꙅ'ɘʜꙄ .ꙅbᴎuoꙅ ɘʜꙅ woʜ ʏ|ƚɔɒxɘ ꙅi ʏƚƚɘᙠ ʞɔu⅃ bɒᙠ

ᴎwoƚᴎwoᗡ ꙅɘoᎮ ʏƚƚɘᙠ : ƚɿɒꟼ
.ꙅɿoƚɔɘɿiᗡ Ꮈo bɿɒoᙠ ɘʜƚ Ꮈo ƚᴎoɿᎸ ᴎi ǫᴎiɿɘvi|ɘb ɘd oƚ ǫᴎioǫ ꙅɒw ɘʜꙅ ᴎoiƚɒƚᴎɘꙅɘɿq ǫid ɒ bɒʜ ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ ᴎwoƚᴎwob ʏɒb ƚɒɘɿǫ ɒ ɿoᎸ ʏbɒɘɿ ꙅɒw ɘʜꙄ .ƚiuꙅƚᴎɒq ʞɔɒ|d wɘᴎ bᴎɒɿd ɿɘʜ ᴎi ᴎiɒɿƚ ʏɒwduꙅ ɘʜƚ ǫᴎibiɿ Ꮈ|ɘꙅɿɘʜ bᴎuoᎸ ꙅᴎɿuᙠ ʏƚƚɘᙠ

.qoƚ ɘʜƚ bɒq oƚ ɿɘqɒq ɘuꙅꙅiƚ bɒʜ ƚɒʜƚ ɒɿd ʞᴎiq ǫᴎiʜɔƚɒm ɒ ɘɿow ɘʜꙅ ꙅƚɿɒɘʜ bɘɿ ʏ|ʞɿɒqꙅ ǫid ᴎi bɘƚɒɿoɔɘb bᴎɒ ʞᴎiq ƚʜǫiɿd ɘɿɘw ʜɔiʜw ɿɒɘwɿɘbᴎu Ꮈo ɿiɒq ʏʞɔu| ɿɘʜ ɘɿow ɘʜꙅ ƚiuꙅƚᴎɒq ɿɘʜ ʜƚɒɘᴎɿɘbᴎU

.ꙅɿoob ɘʜƚ ᴎɘɘwƚɘd ƚʜǫuɒɔ ꙅɒw ƚiᎸƚuo ɿɘʜ ɘᴎo ,ʏƚƚɘᙠ ɿoᎸ ʏ|ɘƚɒᴎuƚɿoᎸᴎU .ɿɘʜ bᴎiʜɘd ƚuʜꙅ ɿoob ɘʜƚ ,bib ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ bᴎɒ ,ᴎiɒɿƚ ɘʜƚ Ꮈo ƚuo bɘqqɘƚꙅ ɘʜꙅ ,ᴎoiƚɒƚꙅ ɿɘʜ ƚɒ bɘqqoƚꙅ ʏ||ɒᴎiᎸ ƚi |iƚᴎu ʞɔɒɿƚ ɘʜƚ ᴎwob bɘqqiƹ ᴎiɒɿƚ ɘʜƚ ꙅɒ ʏ|ƚᴎɘiƚɒq bɘƚiɒw ɘʜꙄ

.ɘvodɒ ꙅƚɘɘɿƚꙅ ɘʜƚ oƚ qu ƚuo bᴎɒ ꙅ|ɘᴎᴎuƚ ɘʜƚ ᴎwob ǫᴎibɒɘʜ ʞɿow ɿɘʜ oƚ ʏɒw ɿɘʜ bɘuᴎiƚᴎoɔ bᴎɒ ,|ɒɘb ɒ Ꮈo ǫid ƚɒʜƚ ƚ'ᴎꙅɒw ƚɘʞɔɒꞁ ɘʜƚ ƚɒʜƚ bɘbiɔɘb ʏƚƚɘᙠ .ɘꙅuo|d ɘƚiʜw ɿɘʜ bɒʜ ||iƚꙅ ʏƚƚɘᙠ .ᎸᎸo bɘqqiɿ ƚɒʜƚ ǫᴎiʜƚ ʏ|ᴎo ɘʜƚ ꙅɒw ƚɒʜƚ ʏ|iʞɔu| ƚud ,ꙅᴎɘqqɒʜ ꙅiʜƚ ꙅɒ ɘꙅiɿqɿuꙅ ᴎi ꙅ|ɒɘupꙅ ʏƚƚɘᙠ .ᴎiɒǫɒ ᴎɘɘꙅ ɘd oƚ ɘɿɘʜwoᴎ ᎸᎸo ꙅqiɿ ƚɘʞɔɒꞁ ꙅ'ʏƚƚɘᙠ ,ꙅʞɔɒɿƚ ɘʜƚ ᴎwob ǫᴎiqqiƹ ,ᎸᎸo ꙅɘʞɒƚ ᴎiɒɿƚ ɘʜƚ ꙅɒ bᴎɒ ,ꙅɿoob ɘʜƚ ᴎɘɘwƚɘd ƚʜǫuɒɔ ƚoǫ ƚiuꙅƚᴎɒq ɿɘʜ oƚ ƚɘʞɔɒꞁ ɘʜT

.ꙅqꙅɒǫ bᴎɒ bᴎuoɿɒ ꙅʞoo| ʏƚƚɘᙠ

"!ʞ|ɒw I Ꮈi ƚi ɘʞɒm oƚ ɘ|dɒ ɘd ƚ'ᴎow I .ᴎwoƚ ꙅꙅoɿɔɒ ʏɒw ɘʜƚ ||ɒ m'I !qoƚꙅ ǫᴎoɿw ɘʜƚ ᴎo ᎸᎸo ƚoǫ I !oᴎ ʜO" .ꙅɘiɿɔ ʏƚƚɘᙠ

".ƚɘɘɿƚꙄ ꟼ 000 ƚɒ ɘɔiᎸᎸo ʏm oƚ ɘm ƚɘǫ ɘꙅɒɘ|q ,iH" .ᴎi ꙅdmi|ɔ ɘʜꙅ bᴎɒ ɿɘvo ꙅ||uq ixɒƚ ɘʜƚ ʏ|iʞɔu⅃ .qoƚꙅ oƚ ƚi ƚɘǫ oƚ bᴎɒʜ ɿɘʜ ꙅɘvɒw bᴎɒ ixɒƚ ɒ ꙅƚoqꙅ ɘʜꙄ .ꙅʞɿow ƚɒʜƚ ᴎoiƚu|oꙅ ɒ bᴎiᎸ oƚ ǫᴎiqoʜ ɘɔɒ|q ʞɿow ɿɘʜ Ꮈo ᴎoiƚɔɘɿib ɘʜƚ ᴎi ǫᴎiʜɔɿɒm ꙅƚɿɒƚꙅ ʏƚƚɘᙠ

.ƚuo ꙅ||ɘʏ ɿɘviɿb ixɒƚ ɘʜT "!ʏɒq ɒƚƚoǫ ɘv'uoY !ʏɘH" .ʏɿɿuʜ ɒ ᴎi ixɒƚ ɘʜƚ Ꮈo ƚuo ꙅƚɘǫ ʏƚƚɘᙠ .ꙅɘƚuᴎim 0 ƚuodɒ ᴎi ɘɔiᎸᎸo ɿɘʜ oƚ ʏɒw ꙅiʜ ɘʞɒm oƚ ɘ|dɒ ꙅi ɿɘviɿb ixɒƚ ɘʜƚ bᴎɒ ɔiᎸᎸɒɿƚ Ꮈo ƚo| ɘ|oʜw ɒ ƚ'ᴎꙅi ɘɿɘʜƚ ,ʏ|iʞɔu⅃ .ǫᴎib|iud ɿɘʜ ꙅbɿɒwoƚ ǫᴎibɒɘʜ ƚuo ꙅ||uq bᴎɒ ,ꙅboᴎ ɿɘviɿb ixɒƚ ɘʜT

.ɘƚɒ| ooƚ ꙅi ƚi |iƚᴎu ɘuꙅꙅi ɘʜƚ |iƚᴎu ɘƹi|ɒɘɿ ƚ'ᴎꙅɘob ƚud ,ʞ|ɒw oƚ ꙅƚɿɒƚꙅ ɘʜꙄ .ɿɘʜ bᴎiʜɘd ɿoob ɘʜƚ ꙅƚuʜꙅ ʏ|ʞɔiup ᴎɘʜƚ bᴎɒ ʏɘᴎom ɘʜƚ ɿɘviɿb ixɒƚ ɘʜƚ ꙅbᴎɒʜ ɘʜꙄ .ƚɘ||ɒw ɿɘʜ ƚuo ꙅ||uq bᴎɒ ɘꙅɿuq ɿɘʜ oƚᴎi ꙅɘʜɔɒɘɿ bᴎɒ ,bᴎuoɿɒ ꙅᴎɿuƚ ʏƚƚɘᙠ

ƚɿɒꟼ

".ꙅɘƚuᴎim wɘᎸ ɒ ƚꙅuꞁ ᴎi ǫᴎiƚɘɘm ƚɒʜƚ oƚ ƚɘǫ oƚ bɘɘᴎ I ⸮ob oƚ ǫᴎioǫ I mɒ ƚɒʜW !oᴎ ʜO" .ꙅɘꙅɿuɔ ʏƚƚɘᙠ .ɿɘʜ ꙅɘɿoᴎǫi ɘʜ ƚud ,qoƚꙅ oƚ ɿɘviɿb ixɒƚ ɘʜƚ ɿoᎸ ||ɘʏ oƚ ꙅɘiɿƚ ɘʜꙄ .bɘꙅoqxɘ Ꮈ|ɒʜ qoƚ ɿɘʜ Ꮈo ƚꙅom ʜƚiw ƚᎸɘ| ꙅ'ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ ꙅʞɘiɿʜꙅ ʏƚƚɘᙠ .ʏbod ɿɘʜ Ꮈo ᎸᎸo ꙅqiɿ ɘꙅuo|d ꙅ'ʏƚƚɘᙠ ,ixɒƚ ɘʜƚ Ꮈo ɿoob ɘʜƚ ᴎi ƚʜǫuɒƆ

.ɘꙅᴎoqꙅɘɿ ᴎi ɘ|ƚꙅiʜw oƚ ɘᴎoʏɿɘvɘ ǫᴎiꙅuɒɔ ƚᴎoɿᎸ qu ꙅʞ|ɒw ʏ|ƚᴎɒƚɔu|ɘɿ ʏƚƚɘᙠ .ƚᴎoɿᎸ ɘʜƚ ᴎi ƚɒɘꙅ ʏƚqmɘ ᴎɒ ʜƚiw bᴎuoɿɒ ||ɒ ƚiꙅ ꙅɿoƚɔɘɿiᗡ Ꮈo bɿɒoᙠ ɘʜƚ ꙅɒ bɘɿ ǫᴎiʜꙅu|d mooɿ bɿɒod ɘʜƚ ꙅɿɘƚᴎɘ ɘʜꙄ .ʜɔƚiʜ ɒ ƚuoʜƚiw mooɿ ǫᴎiƚɘɘm ɘʜƚ oƚ ꙅɿiɒƚꙅ ɘʜƚ qu bᴎɒ ꙅɿoob ɘʜƚ ʜǫuoɿʜƚ ꙅɘʜꙅuɿ bᴎɒ ꙅꙅim oƚ ƚᴎɒƚɿoqmi ooƚ ꙅi ǫᴎiƚɘɘm ɘʜƚ ꙅɘbiɔɘb ᴎɘʜƚ bᴎɒ ƚᴎɘmom ɒ ɿoᎸ ꙅʞᴎiʜƚ ʏƚƚɘᙠ

.ɘƚɒ| ooƚ ꙅ'ƚi |iƚᴎu ɘuꙅꙅi ᴎɒ ɘƹi|ɒɘɿ ƚ'ᴎꙅɘob ɘʜꙅ ƚud ,ɿiɒʜɔ ɿɘʜ ᴎi ᴎwob ƚiꙅ oƚ ꙅɘbiɔɘb ɘʜꙄ .ʜƚiw ɿɘvo ǫᴎiƚɘɘm ꙅiʜƚ ƚɘǫ oƚ ǫᴎiƚᴎɒw ꙅɘʜꙅu|d ʏƚƚɘᙠ

.ɘ|oʜw ɒ ꙅɒ ʏᴎɒqmoɔ ɿuo ƚᴎɘꙅɘɿq ɘw woʜ ᴎi ɘǫᴎɒʜɔ ɒ ꙅi ᴎoiƚiꙅoqoɿq ƚꙅɿiᎸ ʏM" .ꙅʏɒꙅ ʏƚƚɘᙠ ",ʏᴎɒqmoɔ ɘʜƚ ǫᴎivoɿqmi ɿoᎸ ʜɔƚiq ʏm ǫᴎiƚᴎɘꙅɘɿq ɘd ||iw I ʏɒboT !ɘmoɔ|ɘW" .ɿɘƚuqmoɔ ɘʜƚ ᴎo ꙅɘbi|ꙅ ɿɘʜ qu ꙅ||uq ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ ɿiɒʜɔ ɿɘʜ ƚɒ ᴎwob bɘƚɒɘꙅ ᴎoiƚɒƚᴎɘꙅɘɿq ɿɘʜ ꙅᴎiǫɘd ʏƚƚɘᙠ

".|ɒᴎoiꙅꙅɘᎸoɿq bᴎɒ ,ɘviƚɔuboɿq ,ɘɿuƚɒm ꙅɒ ᴎɘɘꙅ ꙅi ʏᴎɒqmoɔ ɿuo ƚᴎɒƚɿoqmi ꙅ'ƚI" .ᴎɘɘɿɔꙅ ɘʜƚ oƚ ꙅᴎoiƚom ꙅɘʞɒm ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ bɘᴎɘqqɒʜ ƚꙅuꞁ ƚɒʜw ɘƹi|ɒɘɿ ƚ'ᴎꙅɘob ɘʜꙅ ƚꙅɿiᎸ ƚɒ ƚud ,ꙅƚᴎɘꙅɘɿq ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ ɿɒɘwɿɘbᴎu ɿɘʜ ƚꙅuꞁ ᴎi ꙅbᴎɒƚꙅ ʏƚƚɘᙠ ɘɿɘʜT .ɿiɒʜɔ ɘʜƚ Ꮈo ƚɒɘꙅ ɘʜƚ oƚ ʞɔiƚꙅ ꙅƚᴎɒq ɿɘʜ ɘbɒm ƚɒʜƚ ɿiɒʜɔ ɿɘʜ ᴎo ɘu|ǫ ꙅi ɘɿɘʜƚ ꙅɒ ʏbod ɿɘʜ Ꮈo ᎸᎸo qiɿ ꙅƚᴎɒq ɿɘʜ ꙅɘob ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ ƚud ,ƚᴎioq ɒ ɘʞɒm oƚ qu ꙅbᴎɒƚꙅ ʏƚƚɘᙠ

.ꙅʜǫuɒ| Ꮈo ǫᴎi|Ꮈiƚꙅ ɘʜƚ ꙅɘɔiƚoᴎ oꙅ|ɒ bᴎɒ ɘƹɘɘɿd ɒ ꙅ|ɘɘᎸ ʏ|ᴎɘbbuꙅ ʏƚƚɘᙠ

.Ꮈ|ɘꙅɿɘʜ ɿɘvoɔ oƚ ꙅƚqmɘƚƚɒ ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ ƚᴎɘmꙅꙅɒɿɿɒdmɘ ᴎi ꙅɘʜꙅu|d bᴎɒ ꙅ|ɒɘupꙅ ɘʜꙄ .ɿɒɘwɿɘbᴎu ɿɘʜ ƚꙅuꞁ ᴎi ǫᴎibᴎɒƚꙅ ꙅ'ɘʜꙅ ƚɒʜƚ ꙅɘƹi|ɒɘɿ bᴎɒ ᴎwob ꙅʞoo| ɘʜꙄ

.ǫᴎiʜǫuɒ| ƚuo ꙅƚꙅɿud ɘᴎoʏɿɘvɘ ƚᴎioq ꙅiʜƚ ƚA .Ꮈ|ɘꙅɿɘʜ ɿɘvoɔ oƚ ꙅɘiɿƚ ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ ɘɿom ᴎɘvɘ ꙅɘʜꙅu|d ʏƚƚɘᙠ .moƚƚod ɘɿɒd ɿɘʜ ɘᴎoʏɿɘvɘ ǫᴎiwoʜꙅ ɘ|bbim ɘʜƚ ᴎwob ꙅqiɿ ɿɒɘwɿɘbᴎu ɿɘʜ ,ɘƚomɘɿ ɘʜƚ ɿoᎸ ᴎwob ꙅɘʜɔɒɘɿ ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ bᴎA .bᴎuoɿǫ ɘʜƚ oƚᴎo ɘƚomɘɿ ɘʜƚ ꙅqoɿb ɘʜꙅ ,ꙅɘob ɘʜꙅ ꙅɒ ƚuᙠ .ᴎoiƚɒƚᴎɘꙅɘɿq ɿɘʜ ꙅɘuᴎiƚᴎoɔ oꙅ|ɒ ɘʜꙅ ,Ꮈ|ɘꙅɿɘʜ ɿɘvoɔ oƚ ꙅɘiɿƚ ɘʜꙅ ꙅA

"!ǫᴎiʞoo| qoƚꙅ ɘꙅɒɘ|ꟼ" .ƚuo ꙅɘiɿɔ ʏƚƚɘᙠ

"!ꙅɘmɒǫ ɘꙅɘʜƚ ɿoᎸ ɘmiƚ ɘvɒʜ ƚ'ᴎob ɘW !ᴎoiƚɒƚᴎɘꙅɘɿq ɿuoʏ ʜꙅiᴎiꟻ !ʏƚƚɘᙠ" .ʏƚƚɘᙠ b|oɔꙅ oƚ ꙅɘbiɔɘb b|oᎸᴎu ǫᴎiʜƚ ɘ|oʜw ꙅiʜƚ ǫᴎiʜɔƚɒw ᴎɘɘd ꙅɒʜ oʜw ꙅꙅod ɿɘH

slooF lirpA

[Revengedpirate]

I like that you've written the whole thing backward and upside down, was this on purpose, if so could you possibly translate it so it's readable? lol i dont mind reading it in its current form but i am struggling with a couple of the sdrow lol

[Humilatron]

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[Revengedpirate]

Love the story so far, have you written any more parts?

[dublinjohn]

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slooF lirpA

The key take away

[SDS]

That is some good effort!

Well done... Can't belive I missed AF day this year I had somthing funny planned that will have to wait for next year...