Yeah I had to cut nearly all descriptions, including describing the girls uniform in any detail or giving any clues about what Sarah looks like aside from "long hair" and "skirt". This just leaves that up to the next writer I guess. I also had another misogynistic metaphor involving Lot's wife, aka Salty McPillar, but I never had the room for it and I probably had enough of that already with the Eve lines.Humilatron wrote: ↑Fri Feb 25, 2022 3:01 am In terms of cutting it close, I was referring to the word count. Literally 2-4 words (exe) away from hitting the limit lol
Look, I'm the type of guy who back in school always used to come dangerously close to the word limit the teachers would give us on our reports. One of my teachers made certain I knew that I was the only student she'd ever had across years of teaching who always came close to the maximum size instead of the minimum size like all of the normal kids.