Great story, Vanessa. Very erotic, and escalates at a good pace. Worth the 10+ hours it takes to read.
I was surprised that there was no mention of kissing on the mouth, despite all the sexual activity. I wish there was more lesbianism, maybe even between Amber and her mother. It's too bad that Amber only had PIV sex with her father since I'm sure her brothers wanted a turn. And an ending would've been nice with her whole family telling her how much they love her and maybe even apologizing for picking on her
Revenge is a Dish Best Served ……… Using her Developing Body.
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