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Re: Humiliated by Finley_New 10/28

Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2025 3:10 pm
by EverythingOff
Spathic Swordmaiden wrote: Mon Nov 03, 2025 12:07 pm The look inside the girl's head was also a wonderful addition.
I hope I captured the female voice accurately. Would love to hear what you thought was authentic or not, either here or by PM.

Re: Humiliated by Finley_New 10/28

Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2025 3:18 pm
by Spathic Swordmaiden
EverythingOff wrote: Mon Nov 03, 2025 3:10 pm
Spathic Swordmaiden wrote: Mon Nov 03, 2025 12:07 pm The look inside the girl's head was also a wonderful addition.
I hope I captured the female voice accurately. Would love to hear what you thought was authentic or not, either here or by PM.
Oh, authentic female thinking is not something a male author needs to worry too much about. I have found that trying to force it makes it more artificial. Us girls don't actually think all that differently from boys when it comes down to it. It is all a matter of individuals, not gender.