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Re: Lily's Valentine's Day (EUF) (Part 1/3)
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2026 5:19 pm
by Moonshine+CC21
SixPathsKeyblader wrote: Fri Feb 13, 2026 1:22 pm
As of the time I am making this comment, I haven't read part 3 yet, and I'm assuming by 'constant pantsings' you are referring to Max constantly pantsing Lily in part 2. Anyway, I was fine with it. I can see what you mean by a little repetitive, but it's not a big problem if you ask me. Perhaps if you wanted to spice things up just to make it a little less repetitive, you could have either had Lily change into a different pair of panties after she showered, so that her subsequent pantsings would expose a new pair. Or, you could have perhaps played around with a little more exposure, just as like a Valentine's day special type of thing. What I mean by a little more exposure is: Earlier in the chapter, Max had joked about Lily baking in her bra and panties. You could have actually made that come to fruition somehow. Alternatively, while I know you usually don't do ENF (you normally stick to EUF), but the part where Lily took a shower could have been the perfect opportunity to slip in some light ENF, having Max accidentally walk in on her while she's naked or something like that. These are just ideas for making it a little less repetitive if you didn't like the repetition so much.
Yeah repetitiveness doesn't bother me all that much especially when pantsing is involved I was just think of other people since sure I do normally write what I want but I do like to see if there's a balance.
Yeah I wouldn't of known how to do her in bra and panties. then again she is chill so maybe she would've pulled her shirt up enough to expose her bra while her pants are down. Shower thing I'll probably do at some point in another story. Infact I'd like to talk to you about this series going forward in PMs if you don't mind
Re: Lily's Valentine's Day (EUF) (Part 1/3)
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2026 5:29 pm
by Moonshine+CC21
Freesub wrote: Fri Feb 13, 2026 2:27 pm
I like it, but my only complaint is the character progression doesn't feel like it goes anywhere across stories. Max is always pulling her pants down, Lily is always embarassed, but that's about it. They never go beyond panties, nor do they progress their relationship much(although maybe they will in subsequent parts of this) , and there doesn't seem to be any reverse pantsings either.
Maybe it's just a creative choice by design, but this is just my take on it. I enjoy the writing regardless.
thank you. I see what you mean. I'm intending it to be a longer drawn out series. Sure I've talked about having them get together but I don't want it to happen too early. Guess it doesn't help that I started it when they've already been friends for 2 years so there's no look at what they were like around eachother in year 7, apart from flashback stories and even then they're pantsing focused rather than relationship focus.
As for not going beyond panties, I'm presuming you mean why doesn't Max try to get Lily naked or pull her panties down. as for that I think that goes a bit beyond teasing. that's just me though.
reverse pantsings I'll definitely get on with at some point. I'm presuming that you want Lily to retaliate by pulling Max's pants down. someone abit ago did actually like how I wrote but was enm enjoyer and wanted to see a role reverse or a story where a boy gets pantsed so yeah I'm a bit overdue about agreeing to do one at some point.
Re: Lily's Valentine's Day (EUF) (Part 1/3)
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2026 5:32 pm
by Moonshine+CC21
Darky wrote: Fri Feb 13, 2026 2:55 pm
It’s a good story. I don’t mind how often he pantsed her, it can’t be enough. So yeah, keep it up love to see where it goes. I mean he can take the pantsing to another level by pantsing her in public places to get Lily really embarrassed. But if not..hey also good. It’s your story and I love it!
thank you. Oh I agree it can never be enough. he does that. but then again I think I've only ever said but never wrote him doing it in full on public. sure he doesn't want to embarrass her too badly but maybe I'll do a flashback story where he's been pantsing her since befriending her and he goes too far when he does it in public