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I finally managed to set aside some time to read this entire story—and I’m really glad I did. It’s a very entertaining and rather cute “coming-of-age” tale, with a little bit of everything—tension, embarrassment (escalating to downright humiliation), a touch of dominance and submission (in an endearing way), and much more.

The quality of your writing is superb, and I really appreciate the nice, full chapter lengths. It’s great to have a new, talented writer on board. Thanks for sharing your work with us—and please keep it coming!

So satisfying to see girls having fun with their naked guy with no regard for his humiliation. In the future he will be glad he had this experience.

Great writing!

This story is so fun and hot love everything happening to him Laura has brought some fun and new embarrassment
Excited for sprinkler chapter

Blondie wrote: Fri Oct 17, 2025 6:34 pm I finally managed to set aside some time to read this entire story—and I’m really glad I did. It’s a very entertaining and rather cute “coming-of-age” tale, with a little bit of everything—tension, embarrassment (escalating to downright humiliation), a touch of dominance and submission (in an endearing way), and much more.

The quality of your writing is superb, and I really appreciate the nice, full chapter lengths. It’s great to have a new, talented writer on board. Thanks for sharing your work with us—and please keep it coming!

Thanks so much for reading and for the compliment!

Skylar21 wrote: Sat Oct 18, 2025 3:59 pm So satisfying to see girls having fun with their naked guy with no regard for his humiliation. In the future he will be glad he had this experience.

Great writing!

I think that's the key. They have zero regard for his humiliation, and Jacqui really seems to revel in it! Thanks for reading my story.

lovaboitoy wrote: Sat Oct 18, 2025 4:28 pm This story is so fun and hot love everything happening to him Laura has brought some fun and new embarrassment
Excited for sprinkler chapter

Appreciate it. Thanks for the comment. Yeah, the sprinkler chapter will be coming. I think it will be chapter 9. There's a bit of the story that needs to come out in chapter 8 first, before the sprinkler. Jacqui and James will be alone in the bathroom. It should be interesting.

Just very happy to have this story

Chapter 8: Jacqui Teases James in the Bathroom

Jacqui was running so fast down the stairs, I felt like a dog being dragged by his leash. We got to the bottom of the stairs and she was about to open the door to take me outside. I stopped cold.

"Jacqui! Come on! I can't go outside naked!"

She turned an looked at me, kind of like she was giving me a pep talk before a big game. "James, come on! It'll be fun! We need to recreate the sprinkler video. You were naked outside then, so you need to be naked outside now."

"But I was four years old!"

"It doesn't matter. Look out world, here comes Naked James! You can do it! You've got this!" And she flung the door open, took me firmly by the hand, and dragged me outside. Oh my god.

She said, "Okay, we need to go get the sprinkler and a hose."

Then she looked at Laura. "You wanna borrow a swimsuit?"

Laura nodded. "Sure!"

"Okay. Go to my room and pick one out. I've got a few in the bottom dresser drawer. Then meet us outside."

Laura ran into the house to change. Meanwhile, Jacqui, still dragging me around by the hand, brought me into their mud room and grabbed a sprinkler and a hose.

"Here, put these by the back door," she said to me, handing me the two items.

I put the items sprinkler and hose down. Then she started leading me to the laundry bathroom. She looked around to make sure Laura didn't see us, and then she quickly pulled me into the bathroom with her and closed the door! I was naked, alone in the bathroom, with Jacqui!

She rummaged around in a cabinet and pulled out a bikini top and bottom. I freaked out.

"Hey! The princess backpack was one thing. But there is NO WAY that I'm letting you put that bikini on me!" I said.

She just laughed. "No, silly. This isn't for you. It's for me. You don't think I want to get my clothes all wet in the sprinkler, do you?"

Wait. Just wait a second. Was she going to change into her swimsuit right there in front of me? Was I finally going to get to see her naked? So many questions circling in my mind. The anticipation of getting to finally see her naked. All this humiliation of the Simon Says and letting Laura see me, it was all finally paying off!

She was standing directly in front of the vanity and I was standing with my back to the door, facing her. I was getting nervous, and I was getting hard. I covered. I didn't want her to see. But she noticed that I covered.

She took a step toward me and got a weird look in her eyes. Then she set her swimsuit on the vanity and brought her hands up to my chest, and she started tracing little circles and patterns on my chest and belly.

"James?" she said quietly.

I was super nervous. She kept lightly touching me with her fingertips as she talked to me.

"Yeah?" I asked.

Still quiet, she said, "How come you didn't answer before when I asked if you 'liked' me?"

Wow.

"Um, I guess I was shy."

She smiled a really kind smile. I like all her smiles, but that smile is my favorite.

"So," she said, "you were too shy to admit it?"

I couldn't even talk. I just nodded. This was an embarrassing enough conversation, let alone that I was having it with her naked!

"But you said you already knew," I said.

She nodded. "Yeah. Pretty much. I've known that you've been in love with me since like fourth grade."

Oh my god. She knew this whole time that I've been in love with her? For two years???

Still lightly running her fingers over my belly and chest, she joked, "You're an idiot, James."

"What do you mean?"

"Well, you never picked up on how I feel about you."

"What are you talking about?"

"You're an idiot."

"But you're so out of my league." It was true. She was so pretty and sweet and smart. I was just this plain old stupid kid.

"James Emerson Bradley! That's such baloney. You're one of the cutest boys in the class, and you know it."

I really didn't know it. And it wasn't true.

"All the girls think so. They talk about you. Did you know that? They talk about you behind your back. They say how cute you are, and half of them are mad at me because they know you like me. I bet you didn't know that."

"Um, no. I didn't."

"That's because you're an idiot."

We stood there a minute. She had stopped moving her fingers around my chest, and her hands were on my hips. I was still covering my front.

With a coy smile, she broke the silence. "Am I making you nervous?"

I nodded.

"How nervous?" She was peeking down there to see if I was hard, but I was covering.

"Um, nervous enough," I said, basically confirming I was hard.

"Let me see."

"Jacqui!"

"Let me see it, James! I want to see it!"

"Jacqui! Please!"

"What's the big deal??? I've been seeing it all day! I saw it yesterday at the clinic, I saw it this morning before school, I mean, I even saw you skip around the room with your hands on your head! Why can't I see it now?"

"Because I'm embarrassed, okay?"

"Embarrassed! Why??? That's so silly!"

"Wouldn't you be embarrassed to be naked in front of me?"

She thought about it for a second. Then she said, "Actually, no. I don't think I would be. I think that when I let you see me, I think it will be exciting and fun. I don't think it should be embarrassing at all."

"Well that makes sense for you. You're a girl. You're really pretty, too. What would you have to be embarrassed about?"

"Wait. You think I'm pretty?" She gave me this look, like she was flattered.

Now I was really embarrassed.

"Well, yeah. But still! I don't care if you would be embarrassed or not. I am! This whole thing, with the exam table, and you making me skip around the room, and letting Laura see me??? My god! It's like the definition of embarrassing!!!"

"Well, you know what, James? I think you're cute when you're embarrassed. And you know what else? Because I think you're so cute when you're embarrassed, I've made a decision just now. I'm going to go out of my way to embarrass you as much as I possibly can. And if you ever want to see me naked, you're going to have to deal with it. And yeah. That means I'm going to make you do all kinds of crazy stuff at the sprinkler... right in front of Laura—and on video, too! And I'm sooo going to just absolutely humiliate you in front of Tracy and Christine. After all, that's what you told me you like, right? You like to be embarrassed and then play with yourself and think about it? So suck it up, because you're not getting your clothes back until I'm done with you!" And she just took her hands and pulled my hands away from me. I was surprised. It popped out. It was pretty hard. She was staring at it. She was transfixed.

Then she looked at me. I was blushing.

"Why are you so afraid of being hard in front of me? What's so horrible about being hard? I don't get it."

"Well, I mean, it's private. You know? It's just embarrassing."

"Ugh! I can't take it anymore with the 'embarrassing'! You shouldn't be embarrassed for me to see it, James," she scolded.

I didn't respond. I didn't know what to say.

Then she said, "I want to touch it soooo bad. I'm not going to. It's not the right thing to do. Not yet, anyway. But I want to sooooo bad. How does that make you feel? I want to run my fingers up and down it and feel how smooth the skin is. It looks so smooth. My cousin told me she even put her tongue on one. What do you think about that??"

"Um, very nervous."

She smiled her warm, kind smile.

We stood there a minute, not moving, me looking into her eyes, and her eyes looking down at my privates.

Then, still holding my hands, she said, "Do you like it when I tease you?"

This was getting real. "Um, maybe. Sometimes. It depends."

"My cousin says that boys like to be teased. Actually, she said they 'need' to be teased. She says it's good to tease boys that you like. And I've sure been teasing you a lot... if you understand what I'm saying."

I did. This was a lot to take in. I was real still, but my heart was pounding.

"So, James, I'm going to tease you a little bit right now. Do you mind?"

"Um, no." I really was kind of under her spell.

She smiled. "Good."

She let go of my hands and grabbed a big bath towel from the shelf.

"Here, hold this up by the corners. Hold it between us, all the way in front of your face and body, so you can't see me at all."

I didn't know what she was up to, but I did what she said. I held one corner of the towel in my right hand and another corner of the towel in my left hand, and I lifted it up so it went from above my head all the way down to the floor.

"Like this?" I asked.

"That's right. Now, James. Can you see me?"

"No." That was the truth. All I could see was the towel. It was basically covering me—and her—from head to toe.

"Okay, James. Now, my cousin said that you should only go with a boy you trust."

"Wait! You want to 'go' with me???"

"Well, maybe. But I need to know if I can trust you. So I'm going to test you. Okay? We're going to do a little trust test."

"Um, okay." I still didn't get where this was going.

Then she said, "I'm going to change into my swim suit now."

My heart stopped. "What???"

"That's right, James. You're going to hold this towel up so you can't see anything. And I'm going to take off my shirt and shorts, and I'm going to be completely naked. Right here, just less than a foot away from you. Just on the other side of the towel. And like I said, I do want you to see me naked. But not yet. I want you to earn it. My cousin says boys need to earn things like that. So this is a trust exercise. I'm trusting you to hold that towel up and not peek. Because it's totally in your hands, literally. I could be naked, and you could drop the towel and look at me and see everything. But I'm trusting that you won't do that. Does that make sense?"

I could hardly speak. "Um, yeah. I understand."

My throat was dry and my heart was racing. Was she telling the truth... or was it some kind of trick? I was shaking pretty good, but I stood and held the towel as steady as possible.

I heard rustling behind the towel. "I'm taking off my shirt. And remember, I'm not wearing a bra. So when the shirt comes off, I'm topless. Can you handle that?"

I didn't say anything.

I heard more rustling. Then I saw Jacqui's hand come around the towel with her shirt in her hand! And she dropped her shirt right at my feet! Oh my god! She was topless back there!

"Okay, James. I'm naked except for my shorts. Are you ready for me to take them off?"

"Um, yes, Jacqui. Yes."

I heard more rustling. Oh my god, I wanted to drop that towel so bad! You have no idea! But I held it still. Or at least, as still as I could.

Then, no way! She brought her hand around the towel, and she was holding her shorts! She was naked on the other side of the towel! She dropped the shorts at my feet.

"James?"

"Yeah?" I hardly made a sound.

"I'm naked. What do you think of that?" I could hear the teasing tone in her voice. She knew she was driving me insane, and I could tell she was enjoying it. I wanted so bad to drop the towel—or at least peek over it, but I knew I couldn't. But it was making me absolutely crazy knowing she was naked back there—and I couldn't see her.

"Isn't this exciting, James? We're both naked. Just naked here with each other. Are you all the way hard?"

I was. "Um, yeah..."

"I'm excited too, James. And I know you want to drop the towel. But you're holding it up. That's how I know you're the real deal. That's what trust is."

I didn't move. I don't even know if I was breathing.

Then I saw Jacqui's hands come over the top of the towel, and she started to move it down. Oh my god. Was she going to let me see her??? She moved it down a bit. We could now see each other's eyes. Wow, was she pretty. If I wasn't in love with her before, I sure was now. She lowered the towel a bit more. I saw her nose. Then her mouth. Then her neck. How far was she going to go? But she stopped. We were both holding the towel between us, just above our chests. We couldn't have been standing more than five or six inches apart. Our hands were touching.

Then, all of a sudden, I realized she was standing in front of the vanity mirror. Oh my god. If I moved just like three inches to the right or left, I'd be able to see the reflection of her naked from the back. But then she saw me trying to look.

"James, I know. I know the mirror is behind me. Are you getting a little glimpse? That's fine. But don't move over. Because I want to make it really special when you see me the first time. No boy has ever seen me. You're going to be the first one. I've already decided. I actually decided a long time ago. I bet you didn't know that. Yeah. I decided a long time ago that I wanted you to be the first boy to ever see me naked. And you will see me. I promise. And I'm not just teasing. I mean it. I promise. You will. Trust goes both ways. And you'll be the first boy to ever see me. And I was the first girl to ever see you. I think that's pretty special. So don't peek too much in the mirror. If you catch a glimpse, okay. I understand. But don't look. I don't want you to look, yet. We'll wait and make it really special. I promise."

I just stood there in complete shock, not having a clue what I should say. So I didn't say anything.

She was very quiet. Then she spoke.

"James, I don't think you have, but have you ever kissed a girl?"

I shook my head.

"Do you want to kiss me?"

She was actually kind of nervous and shy about asking me.

I nodded.

We stood in silence for a long minute. Then we inched a little closer. She said, "This is exciting. Remember it, James. It's our first kiss. And we're naked. And I trust you. And you're nervous." Then she peeked over the towel and looked down at me, and she giggled a little. "And you're hard. And I think that's sweet. You shouldn't be embarrassed about being hard. I like it. So I hope we both remember this for ever and ever."

We moved closer together. We closed our eyes... and it happened. Wow. It just happened. Her lips felt so warm... and soft... and smooth. It was just a very simple kiss on the lips. Very gentle and quiet. But it was everything in the world.

It lasted maybe two or three seconds.

Then we pulled back.

She was smiling.

We were quiet for a minute. Then she asked, "Does this mean we're going together?"

"Um, if you want it to."

She nodded.

We stood there. Silly kids in love. There was no outside world. It was just us.

Then, finally, she broke the tension, saying, "Okay, James. I need to get my suit on!"

The towel remained above our chests. Then, still facing me, she took a small step to her side. Oh my god! She had moved and I could see the reflection of her whole backside in the mirror! Oh my god! She forgot, and I got to see her back and her butt! My jaw must have hit the floor.

She saw me looking. She glanced over her shoulder at the mirror, and then she looked at me. She gave me a knowing smile. It wasn't a mistake. She did it on purpose. She let me have a peek.

"Now hold the towel up so I can put on my swimsuit."

I did. I held it up. I was in heaven. I heard rustling around behind the towel, and the next thing I knew, she grabbed the towel out of my hand, opened the bathroom door, and raced down the hall and out to the yard, leaving me in the dust.

"Come on, James!" she yelled after me. "We've got sprinkler games to play!"

Fantastic job!
I loved the sweet little scene!
It’s character moments like this that elevate a story beyond the sexual/embarrassment factor.
And YES!
Now James is hard!
But the sprinkler might be an issue
I look forward to more embarrassment, more EXCITEMENT and yes, more sweet moments like this one

I love, love, LOVE this chapter! So sweet, so tense and so hot, all at the same time!

When it was being debated earlier on, I was very much in the "keep the nudity one-sided" camp. I thought it would ruin the dynamic if James ever actually saw Jacqui naked. But in chapter 7, I found myself hoping James doesn't end up losing all of that potential Naked Jacqui Time. I think I was starting to feel sorry for the boy.

So chapter 8, for me, is all kinds of brilliant and sets up lots of interesting possibilities going forward. I think you're my favourite writer on here at the moment. I'm also very impressed (and envious ) by how many stories you've managed to churn out in such a short time!