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Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2026 11:43 pm
by NudeBaG
“You chose to take all your clothes off in someone else’s house, Harry Woodhouse, and now you have to reap the consequences. I’ve got work to do this afternoon, so you’re going to have to deal with Izzy and Asha on your own. Do it quietly!”
I love how mom is pretty much sealing Harry’s fate.
Great job of including her, and using her as absolute embarrassment fodder, but not letting her involvement derail the story!
I love this story SO much!
Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2026 3:55 am
by JustHere10
Amazing continution of the story! I always love a mischievous friend adding the humiliation by taking advantage of a situation given to them instead of some cruelty!
Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2026 12:47 pm
by Robert Brooks
YES! YES! YES! This story is absolutely amazing!!

Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2026 12:28 pm
by NudeBaG
Sam, Asha and Izzy-
I doubt either Asha or Izzy will get naked, but maybe Sam will stay naked to coax Harry into staying naked (not that it seems he has a choice)
SO happy with the direction this is going!
Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2026 12:35 pm
by JustHere10
Im super interested in the direction of it too. Seems like Asha holds the power so will she embarrass her friend too or is she just interested in Harry? Also will Sam cover up if allowed or try to support her friend? I picture Sam having an angel/devil on both her shoulders. One end she wants to see more of Harry but the other side she thinks this is too mean for Harry (as described during lunch). Either way really loving this story!
Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2026 7:53 am
by CaughtOfLore
BareB4U wrote: Wed Jul 22, 2026 10:34 pm
His legs hid his balls and the tip of his penis, but half of the shaft, up to wear it connected to his lower body, was still visible, sticking out above his thighs. With a bit of adjustment, Harry could’ve poked it down between them and hidden it completely, but having run the gauntlet and sat down, he didn’t dare risk being sent back to the sink to wash his hands for a third time.
How frustrating! These sort of moments are my jam. The specificity of how he was trapped in a strange, unnatural, half-exposed state, is the kind of unique scenario that really hits for me. The fact that Harry is not just naked, but that evidence of his
attempt to hide his penis is clearly identifiable to the girls peering into his lap, is what elevates the humiliation so playfully. A visible note to the girls that says "this is private and I definitely don't want you to see it", as it sits mostly on display for them.
But then we get this:
BareB4U wrote: Wed Jul 22, 2026 10:34 pm
“Haha, that’s so funny looking!” Isobel cackled, from across the table. Harry glared at her, angry and embarrassed at his loss of dignity. “Less of that please, Isobel,” her mother warned, but she was still smirking. “Harry’s a perfectly normal little boy,” Mrs Davies continued. Harry noticed Asha snigger quietly at the word ‘little’ and winced. Sat next to him, Asha had a good view of the small tube of flesh that was still partially showing between his legs.
What a mortifying position to be in, looking down at himself, and seeing how silly it must have appeared as he held just the tip of it from view. And having that embarrassing thought confirmed, openly described as “funny looking” by the one girl there most likely to speak unfiltered.
BareB4U wrote: Wed Jul 22, 2026 10:34 pm
It was easier for Sam to conceal her privates, and she might as well be Barbie doll smooth down there, for all that Harry could see. Sam however could see about an inch of Harry’s willy poking out between his thighs. He
HAD to be aware of that, Sam thought. She looked away, to spare him further embarrassment. Her eyes met Asha’s as she looked up. Clearly Asha had been studying the same sight between Harry's legs. She flashed Sam a knowing smile.
Oof! That cataclysmic imbalance in the visibility of each of their privates. No way in hell Harry wasn't feeling every ka-thump of his heartbeat throughout that unfairness! And the icing on the cake, for Harry to then be stuck in that position at the table, knowing that every second of that meal was a second more that his fully-clothed classmate could further familiarise herself with the part of his privates that hadn’t successfully been pinched between his legs. And at such close range!
Thanks for finding such palpable beats to explore when having this play out.
Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2026 6:40 pm
by BareB4U
JustHere10 wrote: Fri Jul 24, 2026 12:35 pm
Im super interested in the direction of it too. Seems like Asha holds the power so will she embarrass her friend too or is she just interested in Harry? Also will Sam cover up if allowed or try to support her friend? I picture Sam having an angel/devil on both her shoulders. One end she wants to see more of Harry but the other side she thinks this is too mean for Harry (as described during lunch). Either way really loving this story!
Have you been reading my notes?
CaughtOfLore wrote: Sat Jul 25, 2026 7:53 am
Thanks for finding such palpable beats to explore when having this play out.
Thanks for such detailed feedback! I love reading the specifics of how things I've written have landed with readers. Always interesting to find out how closely it matches what I had in mind, and where you've found something else in it that I hadn't consciously thought about in quite that way.

Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2026 6:49 pm
by JustHere10
Hahah no you just do a great job of keeping your character's personalities in your stories consistent. Whichever way it plays out i'm excited for the next chapter!
Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2026 1:07 pm
by BareB4U
Some of you may be wondering when the next part of this story is going to appear. I'd love to blame the recent site problems, but the truth is I've fallen a bit behind.
I'll post the next chapter at some point over the next couple of days. It will wrap up this little arc at Sam's house and serve as an ending to the whole story, of sorts.
It needs to, because my available writing time is dropping from "limited" to "practically zero". I've known for a while that this would happen around now, so I'd hoped to have finished in time. But (as often seems to happen) the story grew in the telling. Whole sections got added, and events that I thought would fit into one chapter ended up expanding over two or three. That's all for the good, I feel I've written a bigger and better story as a result, but it doesn't get round my problem of lack of writing time.
I think there will still be a little bit more to come afterwards. There are a few dangling story threads that I want to tidy up, probably in one more full chapter plus a shorter epilogue. But you might have to wait a month or more before I manage to write them. It's frustrating, this close to the finish line, but it is what it is.
For now, you have Harry and three girls, unsupervised in Sam's bedroom, to look forward to soon at least.

Re: What Sam Saw - NEW 22nd July
Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2026 2:33 pm
by NudeBaG
Completely understand and look forward to it.
I myself am struggling with time.
Trying to wrap up epic stories in a satisfying and timely manner is always the challenge.