Seth's High School Humiliation (New Dec. 14)

[dsweenz71]

Thanks for the Mrs Masters scene too, you know i always love those.

It's very funny that Seth doesn't even have to be nude in Mrs. Masters scenes. People just love her. You'll be happy to know I may use her in a future story... a "prequel" to this one if you will. How did she get to where she is? Was she always okay with humiliating students? She wouldn't be the main character there either, but would be featured quite a bit. Anyway... gotta finish this story first!

[dsweenz71]

I have encountered similar problems, though my experience with AI generated art is very limited.

I just can't with the extra fingers and teeth half the time. After almost an hour the above photo is the best one I could get of girls laughing and looking up at Seth. I also tried to have one of them point at him but instead I had 3 of them giving thumbs up and 2 of them having eight fingers on a hand pointing in a random direction... anyway... this is what we get for now, weird tongues and all

[Trundle]

I have encountered similar problems, though my experience with AI generated art is very limited.

I just can't with the extra fingers and teeth half the time. After almost an hour the above photo is the best one I could get of girls laughing and looking up at Seth. I also tried to have one of them point at him but instead I had 3 of them giving thumbs up and 2 of them having eight fingers on a hand pointing in a random direction... anyway... this is what we get for now, weird tongues and all

I really like the photos and I think they add a nice little bonus to the story.

I had no idea they were so difficult to create though If it starts to get a pain to get a good picture created don't worry about it. The actual writing is the most important thing.

[imanewb]

I try to be creative, and not too predictable. It's impossible not to play into some of the many tropes/clichés of this genre but I try my best to keep it fresh

And that's precisely what keeps me, at least, coming back - as stated previously - ENM's not exactly my thing, but your story's fun, imaginative, well written with a 'whodunnit' element to it - (hmm, struggled how to phrase this bit...) take 5: sod it: there's decent characterisation/world building, including a fair bit of 'colour' (minor characters, segues, etc), an ebb & flow to the tension/intrigue whilst maintaining trajectory, is generally well paced & internally consistent allowing SoD to remain intact (so far at least)... and, drumroll pls, you don't hang around - it's coming out at a great pace (don't wear your keyboard out!)

edit to add: wrt to the chapter - good to see, from the 'believability' (gotta call it something) front some anger from Seth (no, not even I'd expect it to help him)... but on that theme now that he 'knows' his parents know about his embarrassing 'medical problem' and he'll going home be tired, humiliated and angry after another long day...

A developmental suggestion/thought: "Thanks for nothing mom/dad... could've told me you met mrs masters on Wednesday.... instead of letting me make a complete fool of myself" *storm off muttering under breath 'like i need the extra hassle' (or something along those lines).... to extend his problems to the home environment (even more than he, yet, realises vis cameras)?

edit: edited to try and improve clarity

[lugro]

It's all so devilish
Bet the scout will see a HARD game
And now that Mrs. Masters knows that Seth desperately doesn't want Sara to find out, she'll probably start plotting a way to get the girl involved.

It's cute tho, it seems like Seth is willing to do anything as long as he can maintain his relationship with Sara

[SensoryOverlord]

A fascinating story, certainly never a dull moment. The mystery of who is running this 'project' and to what purpose, reminds me a bit of the Thornwood series. But here the purpose isn't yet explained.

So... the pills. Presumably the blue ones are viagra. (You should research cialis - lasts 3+ days, can take one a day, effects cumulative.)

But the white pill - more mystery. Something to increase seminal production rate? That seems the most likely path.
Or something more devious, like an orgasm inhibitor? Penis growth? Arousal amplifier?

Something entirely experimental? Ha, maybe the organisation behind all this is just a pharma company wanting an unofficial 'field test'? No, surely not...

[Lefanto]

But the white pill - more mystery. Something to increase seminal production rate? That seems the most likely path.
Or something more devious, like an orgasm inhibitor? Penis growth? Arousal amplifier?

Arousal amplifier might be fun - but we will see.

[dsweenz71]

Just updating that I've been under the weather for a few days, and expect it'll take a few more before I recover. The next few parts are planned in my head and will be up as soon as I am feeling well enough to write Thanks for understanding.

[Lefanto]

Just updating that I've been under the weather for a few days, and expect it'll take a few more before I recover. The next few parts are planned in my head and will be up as soon as I am feeling well enough to write Thanks for understanding.

Get well soon.

[telebrace]

I'm wondering if Seth's Mom will be witness to any of his embarrassments ? We've not really seen much of his Mother. Surely that would be the ultimate rock bottom for him if she was to see him naked or erect or masturbating for whatever reason?

Gonna agree here. Seth should also be humiliated at home.