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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Sun Feb 23, 2025 10:01 pm
by BareB4U
I've deliberately left several things open here (Cam's future adventures with the girls, the fate of his briefs, what Natalie might do next, whether Mary will ever have that talk with Hannah, etc.)
I like the idea of leaving these things for readers to imagine for themselves what happens. I don't rule out a sequel at some point, but I'd need a strong concept for one, rather than simply continuing the plot threads I've already laid.
It'll also be at least a while before I write another story. While I'm very happy with the way this one turned out, I need a break!
Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Sun Feb 23, 2025 10:09 pm
by BareB4U
Also, I shouldn't forget to say, thank you for all the love for this story. It means a lot to me.
Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Sun Feb 23, 2025 10:16 pm
by NudeBaG
While, obviously, we all want more (and there is definitely potential for more) I love and respect seeing the (complete) added to the title
I will DEFINITELY be reading this story from start to finish many times in the future
Thank you again for this work of art
Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Sun Feb 23, 2025 10:42 pm
by JustHere10
Can't say enough such a great story overall! I'll probably be repeating other comments but I've never been on more of a emotional roller coaster from start to finish! I love how you were able to combine heartfelt, humiliating, and making it all so realistic. I know it's an ENM story but you're story telling abilities made me root so hard for Cam and root for Mia's complete and utter downfall (forget being Ellie's friend she's evil!)
Selfishly I don't like how Mia has this blackmail over Cam's head even though she's Ellie's best friend...I wish she was put more in her place even more than that incident at the pool. Lol but really it's only because you do such a great job of describing the character's personality and I really felt like I knew Mia.
Thank you so much for your writing!!!
Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Sun Feb 23, 2025 10:59 pm
by NudeBaG
JustHere10 wrote: Sun Feb 23, 2025 10:42 pm
Can't say enough such a great story overall! I'll probably be repeating other comments but I've never been on more of a emotional roller coaster from start to finish! I love how you were able to combine heartfelt, humiliating, and making it all so realistic. I know it's an ENM story but you're story telling abilities made me root so hard for Cam and root for Mia's complete and utter downfall (forget being Ellie's friend she's evil!)
Selfishly I don't like how Mia has this blackmail over Cam's head even though she's Ellie's best friend...I wish she was put more in her place even more than that incident at the pool. Lol but really it's only because you do such a great job of describing the character's personality and I really felt like I knew Mia.
Thank you so much for your writing!!!
While my preference is for ENM, I wouldn’t mind a ENF story involving Mia and possibly Hannah.
With the powerful writing and descriptions BareB4U laid out, I would LOVE to see Cam get some revenge on Mia and prepubescent Hannah
Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Sun Feb 23, 2025 11:06 pm
by JustHere10
Agreed!!! But also Bare4U please take that as a compliment to your writing and I understand needing a break after this well thought out story!
Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 12:06 am
by NudeBaG
Okay okay!
Just ONE MORE bit of praise.
I deeply appreciate you indulging us (specifically me
) with the course of events.
I feel like a lot of authors on here feel the need to ‘subvert expectations’ if people are guessing the course of events or expressing desires for things to play out (Guilty, I know, but sorry not sorry
)
But with this story, expectations were set and you CRUSHED it when it came to delivering on those expectations.
That’s incredible.
Okay I’ll shut up now.
Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 1:39 am
by steam train
Lovely way to finish what has been a benchmark example of great fantasy ENM & ENF writing in the one magnificent story.
Thank you again for all your time and effort.
Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 2:44 am
by NudeBaG
“This is my first attempt at writing this kind of fiction. Feedback welcome. It’s not likely to be the most original story ever, but let’s see how it goes!”
This quote that kicked this whole thing off…
Holy shit!
If this really was your first attempt at this…
You have a gift.
Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)
Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2025 2:46 am
by Freesub
I liked it, though perhaps exposing Hannah feels like a loose end that should've been closed.
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