Closed Pool

[Buckaroo]

I hope you continue this soon, it's my favourite out of everything you write.

Okay. I'll need to review what I've written and I'll work on it.

[Buckaroo]

I hope you continue this soon, it's my favourite out of everything you write.

I'm working on it now.

Is there something about the story that you specially liked or disliked?

[Freesub]

I hope you continue this soon, it's my favourite out of everything you write.

I'm working on it now.

Is there something about the story that you specially liked or disliked?

I love that the sister seems to enjoy keeping them both naked, the mutual nudity and their embarassment-yet-excitement is really good.

[Spathic Swordmaiden]

I agree with freesub. I would love to see the lifeguard trying to extend and facilitate the protagonist and her sister's nudity around the pool some more. Preferably when there are more people in attendance.

[rafix]

First half of the story wasnt that bad, but with that punishment part and everything it become obviously fake, because theres no way it would happen in real life.

[TeenFan]

First half of the story wasnt that bad, but with that punishment part and everything it become obviously fake, because theres no way it would happen in real life.

I like a certain amount of realism in these stories. But if you took out every one that had unrealistic scenes there would be very
few stories to read. Some of the stories I wrote could happen in real life, but most have sections that are highly unlikely to ever happen for
real. It's the same way for ENF topics as well.

[Buckaroo]

First half of the story wasnt that bad, but with that punishment part and everything it become obviously fake, because theres no way it would happen in real life.

The story was written for the late 70's to early 80's time frame and there were only 3 people there, the lifeguard, Mark and Christy.

[Buckaroo]

I'm working on the next chapter and I realize I made a few minor mistakes in the last two uploads. I might try to fix them in the future.

[Buckaroo]

As she got to the ladder, she paused for a several seconds before climbing out of the pool. As she climbed up the ladder, I was able to catch up to her and swatted her bare butt and she let out a light scream, “ahhhh.” After getting to the top of the ladder she looked down at me with a smile and said, “I guess I’m it now, look out, here I come.”

I turned and swam as fast as I could towards the middle of the pool. Christy dove into the pool and swam under water and before I could even get 20 feet away, she had swam past me and jumped up ten feet in front of me. The sight of her jumping out of the water surprised me; water flowing down her huge giggling breasts.

After clearing her face of water and hair, she asked me, “would you like to walk around the pool?”

I replied, “sure.”

We swam over to the ladder and I watched as she climbed up the ladder with the water flowing down over her bare butt. After climbing up the ladder, I moved over to her left side as we walked around the pool. I couldn’t take my eyes off her huge breasts as they bounced as she walked.

I was feeling a lot of excitement, and after flopping around a few steps, my penis became hard and was pointing straight out in front, waiving side to side. As I was watching her breasts, she was staring at my penis, and she commented, “your penis is hard again.”

I smiled and replied, “I can’t control it, it has a mind of its own.”
This time my penis remained hard, unlike the other two times, in the last half hour, that it only stayed hard for less than a minute. I was feeling a lot of pleasure watching her beautiful breasts bounce.

We walked around the pool three times; my penis stayed hard for almost two whole trips around the pool, and eventually went flaccid, flopping around and eventually bouncing off my thighs.

After the third lap, the lifeguard yelled, “okay, something has come up and we are going to have company real soon. Get your swimsuits on.”

Surprised, Christy said, “help me find my bikini top,” and ran over to her bikini bottoms and tied the strings up, and slipped her bikini bottoms on, while I dove into the deep end of the pool looking for her bikini top.

I looked around the deep end and couldn’t find her bikini top. After putting her bikini bottoms on she dived into the deep end also looking for her bikini top.

After two or three minutes looking for her top, we heard some noise coming from behind the middle hallway door. We both swam to the ladder opposite to the door and Christy climbed up first, with me right behind her. As she stepped up onto the deck, six teenagers, four girls and two boys, walked out into the pool area. Christy covered her breasts with her hands, but I was still naked.

I quickly stepped up onto the deck. Christy was able to cover most of her breasts with her hands, but there was no way I could cover my penis with my hands. She ran to the girls changing room and I ran to the boys changing room. My penis flopping around erratically back and forth the whole way to the changing room. I could hear the girls gasping and a couple girls saying “oh my god, it’s huge.”

As Christy reached the girls changing room, with everyone behind her, she had to let go of one of her breasts to reach for the door handle. As she pulled on the door, she discovered that the door was locked from the other side.

As I reached the boys changing room, I grabbed the door handle, I discovered that the door was locked from the other side. With Christy covering her breasts with her hands and me bare as naked, I looked around for a solution, and Christy yelled, “sis, the changing room doors are locked.”

I could hear her sister laughing from up on the balcony, and then yelled, “I’ll be down in a minute to unlock the doors.”

I was embarrassed standing bare ass naked in front of the teenagers as they walked around the pool area. The four girls stared at me the whole time.

It took a couple minutes, and she finally opened the girls changing room for Christy, and a minute later, opened the boys changing room door for me. I ran inside and got dressed.

[Freesub]

Nice to see this story back again! I wonder if they'll end up having to spend some time naked together