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Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2023 6:41 am
by DrWhoFanJ
And here it is already! I usually try and leave a one-chapter buffer between where I’ve written and where I’ve posted, but I decided you’ve waited too long for this chapter already!
CHAPTER 9

Shane knew full well he could not let his shirt escape him, but also knew full well he couldn’t bring himself to debase himself like that, certainly not this early in the proceedings!

Realising a third option he had hereto overlooked, Shane started heading for the door to deal with his raging boner in the showers.

“Leaving so soon, Weeny? Your choice, of course, but it would be a shame if you lost all these valuable things of yours just ‘cause you couldn’t stop being a boner boy!”

“I’m sorry, but what‽” Shane was so shocked by this news that he again failed to notice that his boner was getting excruciatingly close to breaking his jeans entirely.

“Like I said, you’re free to leave at any time, but only you and what you’re wearing at that time; everything else is considered forfeit. The choice is yours: Explain to your parents how you’ve lost basically everything you own, or stay for the chance to keep as much of it as you can.”

Realising the “choice” was effectively null as he definitely couldn’t abandon many of the things from the bags, Shane resumed his central seat in the auditorium, and reluctantly started tugging on his dick, which was still rock-hard even after all that scene!

Well, reluctantly at first, but he soon got very much into it with all the arousal from the dancing, practically-naked girls putting on a show just for Shane himself.

He got so into the rhythm of his wanking, timing each tug to align with the upward bounce of the exposed boobs in front of him, that he didn’t even notice…


Swimsuits from Thornwood series used with permission of Ribeye98.

Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2023 10:34 pm
by DrWhoFanJ
CHAPTER 10

He got so into the rhythm of his wanking, timing each tug to align with the upward bounce of the exposed boobs in front of him, that he didn’t even notice…

…all the cameras now pointing directly at his crotch waiting to capture the money shot!

With a final pant and grunt, Shane let loose the largest splurge of cum he’d ever achieved in his life. So voluminous was his ejaculate that it landed on the girls’ exposed tits (later to go viral again separately from the resultant mass showering), and even reaching far enough to land a few large globules in Shane’s own bag full of the things still to be sold in the auction!

“Well, that was definitely not what we had in mind for this round, but I think you’ve definitely earnt the entire rest of your clothes from that display, Shane! Come and get your prize from this… cum-stained table, you messy boy!”

Only now in the post-nut clarity did Shane notice that everyone’s phones were being returned to their pockets en masse across the entire hall.

“Were you… filming that‽” he asked, horrified at the realisation that not only had everyone there seen it, but that his most private of actions was now easily accessible for anyone anywhere to view whenever they wanted.

“You really think we wouldn’t‽” Jack replied, “Don’t worry, everyone here’s already agreed nothing of this will leave here without your permission, so it’s entirely your decision whether you feel like letting others see anything. Though I will say you could easily make loads of money from selling it as a HD porn cumshot vid!

“Anyway, you’ve earnt the rest of your clothes now, so feel free to get dressed again if you want. Not sure there’s much point any more, though, since we’ve all seen every bit of you now!

“Actually, no, wait. I have a better idea. Can we have James down here again? Give them both a big round of applause, everyone!

New proposal: I’ll ask you, James, five questions. For each one you get wrong, you must remove an article of your clothing while Shane gets to put on one of his. Whoever is wearing the least once all five questions have been asked must surrender everything they had on them when they entered the room, and everything they have received since. Are you both ready?”

“What’s in it for me?” asked James, confused why he should accept this offer.

“Good question. If Shane loses, you get to keep his undies and your voucher, and he also loses control of the videos we all just took and we’ll be free to share them with whoever we choose. So let me remind you that every single person here (bar Shane) is rooting for you! AREN’T WE, GUYS‽”

A resounding “YES! GO JAMES!” exploded from the assembled crowd of students eager to see the results of the game. Would they get to see a second boy completely exposed, or would they get free rein to share their videos of Shane’s shame? Whichever it will be, they all know they’ll never forget this day for as long as they live.

Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2023 3:10 pm
by Robert Brooks
another great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!

Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2023 3:55 pm
by Thesyguy
Nicely done, out of curiosity is Shane considered a nerd or popular by his peers?

Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2023 5:40 pm
by Robert Brooks
Hey Dr Who Fan,

Anything new? Still eagerly awaiting chapter 11!
I hope you’re doing well and plan to post another story soon :)

Best wishes, Bobby

Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2023 2:58 am
by syca3
Loved him being forced to ogle. Fascinating scenario overall.

Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2023 3:07 pm
by dsweenz71
I am also still hoping this story receives more chapters :) I know it has been a while, but it's never too late!

Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2023 5:01 am
by DrWhoFanJ
Sorry, everyone, but this isn’t a new chapter, more an explanation of why there haven’t been new chapters for nearly nine months.

(TL;DR: I haven’t forgotten it; it’s just that circumstances have conspired against me having the time to get back to writing this.)


Shortly after posting the last chapter, my college courses started ramping up towards exam season for September (with the significant reduction in free time that entails), and I’ve been not particularly well since then (so not really been in a state compatible with extended writing).

Add to that that I also lost the document where I’d been planning and drafting the rest of the story, and you get the reason this story would appear to have been abandoned.

I even considered offering to let someone else continue in my absence (with the option to either alternate chapters or me to simply continue from their endpoint once I become available again), but that inherently runs a not-inconsiderable risk of interfering with that author’s other ongoing stories that are far better-written than I could ever hope to achieve myself.

[If I still haven’t resumed work on this once you’ve finished SHSH (or you want a well-deserved break from it), then you’re welcome to turn your talents to progressing this one on my behalf, dsweenz71!]

Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2023 3:31 pm
by dsweenz71
DrWhoFanJ wrote: Mon Dec 11, 2023 5:01 am [If I still haven’t resumed work on this once you’ve finished SHSH (or you want a well-deserved break from it), then you’re welcome to turn your talents to progressing this one on my behalf, dsweenz71!]
I am honoured with the offer DrWhoFanJ :D It's flattering that you would trust this story for me to round out.

However, when I find a story I like, I want to be surprised by the author's path for the story... not my own. If I was to take your story over, I would stop loving it in the same way, because I would already know everything that was going to happen and the details would be coming from my own mind... making it less 'sexy' as a story to myself because I am bound by my own details and descriptions. It's a bit hard to explain, but I hope that makes some sort of sense.

You did mention collaborating, such as writing alternating chapters. I could, potentially, be open to this idea... If you aren't able to continue before I finish my current story (although I truly hope you are able to! My first choice is to be a reader of this story), feel free to remind me and maybe we could write the rest together. I would hate for this to go unfinished forever :P

Re: The Clothes Sale

Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2023 11:22 am
by Robert Brooks
DrWhoFanJ wrote: Mon Dec 11, 2023 5:01 am … my college courses started ramping up … and I’ve been not particularly well since then … I also lost the document where I’d been planning and drafting the rest of the story.
Sorry to hear that Dr Who Fan, I hope you’re now on the road to recovery. I’d assumed your college course was ramping up so was anticipating a pause for a while, sorry to hear you’ve also been unwell.

Well, there’s no rush of course! I agree with Dsweens, in that continuing another writer’s story takes the fun out of it for the person taking over — the excitement of reading a brand new chapter for the first time is magical! Trying to mimic the style of writing, so as to keep it feeling consistent, is also quite tricky.

I hope you gradually come round to writing again and manage to work out a new roadmap document. Perhaps after a break from it, some new ideas may come!

Wishing you all the best,
Take care,
Bobby