Nakation

[Noclothes]

This story keeps getting better I'm glad it has come back and I can't wait to see the rest of the vacation and if this extends to back home

[Sanford7727]

I'm glad you are enthusiastic and giving on your own take on this - but honestly, the addition of this "Margarita" would only detract from the story so far. It's very out of place.

As a standalone story it would work fairly well though.
Naturally, it's only my opinion and others may feel differently.

Yep. And this was way too rushed. We had a great story and setup going here, but I fear that this author caved to the pressure of the requests and felt too obligated to just "get something out there." This felt very rushed and confused. I've read the entire story up to this point, but I didn't even know who some of the people were in this "chapter."

We just need a naked and nervous girl stuck wandering around a vacation resort while everyone enjoys the view. If we are lucky, some other girl might decide to show some solidarity with her at some point and "lose" her top, or, maybe even her entire swimsuit.

[Freesub]

I'm glad you are enthusiastic and giving on your own take on this - but honestly, the addition of this "Margarita" would only detract from the story so far. It's very out of place.

As a standalone story it would work fairly well though.
Naturally, it's only my opinion and others may feel differently.

Yep. And this was way too rushed. We had a great story and setup going here, but I fear that this author caved to the pressure of the requests and felt too obligated to just "get something out there." This felt very rushed and confused. I've read the entire story up to this point, but I didn't even know who some of the people were in this "chapter."

We just need a naked and nervous girl stuck wandering around a vacation resort while everyone enjoys the view. If we are lucky, some other girl might decide to show some solidarity with her at some point and "lose" her top, or, maybe even her entire swimsuit.

I'm pretty sure this is not the author of the story, rather a different user giving their continuation.

[Sanford7727]

I'm glad you are enthusiastic and giving on your own take on this - but honestly, the addition of this "Margarita" would only detract from the story so far. It's very out of place.

As a standalone story it would work fairly well though.
Naturally, it's only my opinion and others may feel differently.

Yep. And this was way too rushed. We had a great story and setup going here, but I fear that this author caved to the pressure of the requests and felt too obligated to just "get something out there." This felt very rushed and confused. I've read the entire story up to this point, but I didn't even know who some of the people were in this "chapter."

We just need a naked and nervous girl stuck wandering around a vacation resort while everyone enjoys the view. If we are lucky, some other girl might decide to show some solidarity with her at some point and "lose" her top, or, maybe even her entire swimsuit.

I'm pretty sure this is not the author of the story, rather a different user giving their continuation.

It was. I tried to clear that up when I changed it from the author to "this author" but I wasn't very clear. It was pretty clear during the first sentence that something was wrong.

[Freesub]

Yep. And this was way too rushed. We had a great story and setup going here, but I fear that this author caved to the pressure of the requests and felt too obligated to just "get something out there." This felt very rushed and confused. I've read the entire story up to this point, but I didn't even know who some of the people were in this "chapter."

We just need a naked and nervous girl stuck wandering around a vacation resort while everyone enjoys the view. If we are lucky, some other girl might decide to show some solidarity with her at some point and "lose" her top, or, maybe even her entire swimsuit.

I'm pretty sure this is not the author of the story, rather a different user giving their continuation.

It was. I tried to clear that up when I changed it from the author to "this author" but I wasn't very clear. It was pretty clear during the first sentence that something was wrong.

Yeah, it just doesn't fit in whatsoever with the story. The whole vibe of it is "girl who has to reluctantly be naked around people" , not a family drama.