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Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/24/2025

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2025 10:29 pm
by Jeepman89
Really enjoying this. I can imagine what will happen when he finds out he's not really invisible. LOL

Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/24/2025

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2025 10:30 pm
by Themarble
Let's hope that Jack isn't capable of any ectoplasm! Or rather hope!

I imagine the charade will drop soon and the jack will be embarrassed or perhaps it doesn't! Perhaps he goes on to think the ring works. Trying it in class?

Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/24/2025

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2025 10:41 pm
by NudeBaG
Themarble wrote: Fri Oct 24, 2025 10:30 pm Let's hope that Jack isn't capable of any ectoplasm! Or rather hope!

I imagine the charade will drop soon and the jack will be embarrassed or perhaps it doesn't! Perhaps he goes on to think the ring works. Trying it in class?
Oh no.
Jack definitely realizes he isn’t really ‘invisible’, but how will his classmates react as the ruse drops?
And how does he react to their reactions?

Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/24/2025

Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2025 3:16 am
by EverythingOff
Very fun story. I can't wait to see what the big reveal brings for everyone!

Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/23/2025

Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2025 3:11 pm
by NudeBaG
NudeBaG wrote: Fri Oct 24, 2025 8:52 pm
EverythingOff wrote: Fri Oct 24, 2025 8:13 pm It's just a two-part story? That's fine, just curious. Setting my own expectations! :D
Going into Part 3 now✌🏻
This will be the conclusion.
It was going to end in Part 2, but it I felt it would have been too long.
Might have been a lie😅
There MIGHT be 2 more parts to go lol

Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/24/2025

Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2025 3:14 pm
by Jeepman89
The more the merrier!

Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/24/2025

Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2025 3:33 pm
by NudeBaG
Jeepman89 wrote: Sat Oct 25, 2025 3:14 pm The more the merrier!
I really did think I had the ending ready to go, but it felt rushed and anticlimactic.

Next chapter should be up in a few.
We’ll see where things go from there✌🏻

Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/24/2025

Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2025 4:21 pm
by NudeBaG
NudeBaG wrote: Fri Oct 24, 2025 10:41 pm
Themarble wrote: Fri Oct 24, 2025 10:30 pm Let's hope that Jack isn't capable of any ectoplasm! Or rather hope!

I imagine the charade will drop soon and the jack will be embarrassed or perhaps it doesn't! Perhaps he goes on to think the ring works. Trying it in class?
Oh no.
Jack definitely realizes he isn’t really ‘invisible’, but how will his classmates react as the ruse drops?
And how does he react to their reactions?
So, I’ve re-thought this as I write and things evolve.
The realization hasn’t come yet.
I was having trouble figuring out how all those girls could keep up the ruse, but I think I worked it out😈
Like I said, I thought I had the ending locked, but things are still rolling.

Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/24/2025

Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2025 4:41 pm
by Jeepman89
Looking forward to the next part.

Re: The Invisible Boy NEW 10/24/2025

Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2025 4:46 pm
by NudeBaG
Jeepman89 wrote: Sat Oct 25, 2025 4:41 pm Looking forward to the next part.
Should drop soon.
Getting to a good break now✌🏻
Might get Part 4 up yet today as well