Twas the Night Before Christmas_New January 23

[NudeBaG]

You’re doing well keeping the pace building along with anticipation.
It’s a good tease.
Just hoping it has a good payoff

[TeenFan]

Twas the Night Before Christmas
Chapter 6. Tit For Titty


It was eerily similar to having a nightmare. I wanted to wake up but knew this was no dream. This was really happening to me.

I lie in bed on my back. Suzie, the guest overstaying her welcome, the guest thrust upon me in what should be my place of peace and
safety, had taken over my life, my very existence. She is pretending to be a doctor. I'm pretending to be a sick patient, all so I can keep
her from figuring out I'm trying to protect the privacy of my privates under the sheets.

Suzie turned on the flashlight and it's shining right into my face. It's one of those fairly bright flashlights that uses four C size batteries, around
eight inches long, two inches wide at the lighted end.

"Okay now. Open wide and say Ahhh."

Suzie shines the light into my mouth, moves the flashlight closer till it mostly shines only on its target which happens to be the back of my
throat. With some beams of light still getting to my eyes, Suzie's head is mostly a shadowy silhouette.

"Hmmm...Ahemmm....Uh huh...that is strange you say your throat hurts. I don't see anything wrong here. No redness or swelling do I see."

Suzie shines the light under my chin. "Uh Oh, there's a big lump in your throat. Maybe you swallowed something that didn't go down."

The fake doctor without a degree runs her fingers across the front of my throat. Sure enough, she finds a big lump there.

"You got an apple stuck in your throat," says pretend doctor know it all. "Don't you know you can't swallow a whole apple. I'm afraid that's never gonna come out."

I knew immediately that Suzie was diagnosing me with having an Adam's Apple. Mine is fairly prominent, sticks out like a big ol lump in the
throat. After my voice changed a year ago, I was amazed how that lumpy mass would slide up and down when I made alternating high and
low vocal sounds. It was one of many mysteries about the changes in my body during my 14th year.

The flashlight is brought back up to my mouth again. Suzie sticks the lighted end of the flashlight into my mouth, just past the lips.

"Close your mouth around the flashlight. This is so cool. I love doing this."

I do as instructed. When my mouth closed over the circular lighted end, I could see the orange glow coming from my face. Some portion of
the light could travel through the skin of my cheeks. I knew all about this of course. I suppose every kid does. Suzie then pulls the light out,
and she sticks the flashlight into her own mouth. Her face glowed like a Halloween pumpkin, a ghoulish visage that would be scary to little
children. Even her eyes seemed to glow brighter.

I've seen how a strong flashlight, when placed against the palm of the hand, will make the hand glow a reddish color. One can see some
details of blood vessels running through the hand. I've taken this a step farther in trying to see parts that are internal. Once I placed the
flashlight, the very one that Suzie has in her mouth, up against the backside of my ball sack. I've noticed that when it is warm the balls
droop lower than when it's cold. Last summer, on a particularly warm night, I put the flashlight behind the balls to see how well I could
see the individual testes hanging in the sack. It didn't work as I hoped it would. Even loose hanging, balls are thicker than the flat side of
the hand. It glowed around the edges, but I could not see any light shining through the middle.

I couldn't help but think how the flashlight, which had once been pressed against my nutsack, now had Suzie's lips wrapped around it.
For the first time all night I laughed. Suzie must have thought I found her face to be hilarious. If only she knew what I was really laughing
about.

Suzie took my laughing as an invitation to do more faces. She climbed on top of me. That girl straddled my body, then sat down on my
stomach, though she thankfully kept most of her weight on her knees. With the light in her face, Suzie went through a serious a crazy
facial contortions, sticking her tongue out, baring the teeth, making it look like she is a ravenous creature about to bite my head off. I
continued to laugh, wondering what she would think of next. I didn't have to wait long.

Suzie leaned over me, getting onto all fours like a dog. She backed up a little to where her head was directly above my chest. Once
again, she laid her head down on my chest, turning her head to the right. This time she isn't looking down, but off to my left.

"What are you doing now?" I asked.

"I'm checking your heart again. It's not so rapid this time. You are more relaxed. That's good."

If I was more relaxed that changed with what she started doing. With the fingers of her right hand she grabbed and twisted on my left
nipple. Two fingers squeezed the nipple, then the thumb rubbed over it for several seconds. She resumed lightly twisting and squeezing.
The flashlight lay by the side of my body for this titty touching. Then the light is picked up, and the beam shone directly on that same
nipple. Suzie lifts her head up and she carefully examined both my nipples.

"Okay doctor, what the heck is that for?"

"I'm checking for tittyitis. You don't have tonsilitis, but I must be sure your titties aren't infected." Suzie snort laughed, barely able to keep
her humor under control.

"Boys don't have titties I told you...But I guess you have to be thorough. Do I get a good checkup? Am I healthy enough, doctor?"

Suzie didn't' answer. Turning the flashlight off and setting it down, she rubs my chest in a massaging motion with both hands. "I can feel those pushup muscles you were talking about. What are these called again, these muscles?"

"They're called pectoral muscles. I guess you didn't study too well in med school," I laughed at my joke, a rare time I could tell this girl she
didn't know what she is talking about.

I'm laughing and Suzie is laughing. Suddenly she sits down, she leans her body down and with a shove of her arms her body moves backwards.
Her body slides down toward my legs. The covers slide down toward my legs. Suzie's bottom bumps into something.

"Ooh, what's that?" Suzie says in surprise, her body suddenly coming to a halt. Maybe realizing what her rear end had encountered, Suzie
lifted herself back up.

Looking down, I see the covers had been pushed far enough the end of my dick is poking out beyond the sheet. For once I move faster
than the girl did. Before Suzie could look down underneath her body, before she could see what she had accidentally uncovered, I reached
a hand down between her legs to grab the covers. With a yank I bring the coverage back to the lower stomach area. Just in time to, as
any delay would have resulted in Suzie seeing some penis.

The covers are yanked partially back up, thank goodness. However, I can see and Suzie can see the part of the covers lifted up. There is a rise
that can be seen, not a tenting effect, but a noticeable bulging out from that area Suzie happens to have the back end of her body hovering over.
If she sat down her ass would land directly on top of that rise, and with how hard it is there would be no mistaking what it is.

I have to distract her. Somehow, I got to get those eyes, her natural curiosity away from that part of the bed where our two bodies are most
intertwined.

"Can I listen to your heartbeat?" I ask with hope and dread. "It's only fair. You've had your hands all over me."

For several seconds Suzie looks into my eyes. She glances down at my chest, then looks back up again.

"I guess that's only fair." Suzie moved her body off of straddling me. She moves to her side of the bed. Taking a lying on the back position,
the young girl puts her arms down to the side. Suzie remained completely on top of the covers.

I rolled over toward Suzie's prone body. I adjusted the covers higher on my body, while glancing at Suzie from head to toe. I was amazed she
didn't get at least halfway covered up under the light blanket. That girl must be super warm blooded.

Since permission had been granted to listen to her heartbeat, I lay my head upon her chest. My right ear is directly in line with the sternum,
the heart directly beneath. This puts my face, my eyes looking slightly downward since that is what the body angle allowed for. I adjusted
my position, moving my body downward. I could then get my head on her chest with my eyes being able to see the rise of her small
breast. I can hear her heart beating, but whether it's faster than normal I have no idea. I'm not counting the beats. My left hand is getting
itchy fingers wanting to take hold of Suzie's tit.

I never thought of grabbing Suzie's tit before. It's a strange and wonderous craving. I must stay in control, so I slide my hand onto her
stomach. That is what she first did to me, placing her hand down at my belly button. After about a minute I lift my head and prop myself
up on the elbow. This has me still sort of leaning over her. I look down at her chest, at the tight green sleeveless t-shirt.

My eyes are glued there as I say, "Your heart sounds A-Okay to me. Nice and strong. All that sports working out is keeping you in great shape."
For once I'm the talkative one. I want to keep talking in that position so I can continue to gaze upon Suzie's chest. "Do you have any ailments
young lady? Any injuries I should know about?"

Suzie giggles, and her eyes wander back and forth. I can see her mind is whirling, contemplating a proper answer.
"I twisted my ankle once," Suzie replied to my inquiry as to the state of her health. "I sprained a wrist. Had a calf strain. And I pulled a
ribcage muscle."

Suzie continued to amaze me, as she grabs the flashlight, turns it back on and presses it into my hand. Then she raises the left arm, placing the
left hand behind her head. With the right hand she pulls the bottom of her shirt outward. Mostly it's on the left side, the tugging on her
shirt to pull it around six inches from the skin of her stomach making a big gap.

"I pulled a muscle on the left side of my chest. Sometimes it pains me, Scotty." Her voice sounded almost hurt, pleading for attention.

Typically an open invitation, a physical one, would be a raised window, or a door left unclosed and unlocked. I've never heard of clothing
being lifted up being an invitation to explore, but that is what it seemed to me. With her fingers holding the material raised up like that, with
the lit flashlight handed to me, I knew what the signal probably means. Suzie wants me to put my hand up her shirt!

[Themarble]

This game of doctor is progressing very well! Susie has now seen a certain lump in the sheets and I'm sure she is eager to finally see what's under there. Perhaps she doesn't realize how little covering there would be under there.

[NudeBaG]

Still enjoying this one a lot

[Jeepman89]

Great chapter.

[Freesub]

Yeah this is just a really good mixture of embarassment and genuinely the two liking each other. You love to see it.

[TeenFan]

Yeah this is just a really good mixture of embarassment and genuinely the two liking each other. You love to see it.

Even up to this point in the story, if Scott were asked, "Do you like Suzie?" he would probably say NO. He finds her annoying and a know it
all and he can't help it he's falling for her, beginning to like her...he just doesn't know it yet.

It can't be this easy. Too soon for "Happily Ever After".

[NudeBaG]

Yeah this is just a really good mixture of embarassment and genuinely the two liking each other. You love to see it.

Even up to this point in the story, if Scott were asked, "Do you like Suzie?" he would probably say NO. He finds her annoying and a know it
all and he can't help it he's falling for her, beginning to like her...he just doesn't know it yet.

It can't be this easy. Too soon for "Happily Ever After".

For right now, All I’ll say is this:

This is my favorite thing you’ve ever written.
It’s simple in set up, and has a perceived time limit in which events can take place.
I say stick with that, and lean into the characters and situation.
I like the more playful approach that Suzie has.
Scott is already aroused, so just play with the reveal and let things unfold naturally via youthful curiosity

[TeenFan]

It’s simple in set up, and has a perceived time limit in which events can take place.
I say stick with that, and lean into the characters and situation.
I like the more playful approach that Suzie has.
Scott is already aroused, so just play with the reveal and let things unfold naturally via youthful curiosity

Thank you very much. I am enjoying creating this small ENM world.

Themarble already asked me if this story will only last for the night, or extend into the next day.

I don't have an ending in mind yet. However, I originally planned it to be only the night before.
The short use of flashbacks is sufficient for character development. Also a lot can happen in the night between midnight (when this
story began) and sunrise the next morning.

[NudeBaG]

Keep Suzy as a ‘tease’, never revealing *too much of herself, but absolutely taking advantage of Scottie’s lack of clothing.