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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 13 - 5/28)
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2025 6:15 am
by computerphoto
elysianempire wrote: Sat Apr 12, 2025 3:54 am
computerphoto wrote: Sun Jul 07, 2024 2:19 am
To punish her more and make her feel even more naked, should take Lia shoes away too and make her go barefoot everywhere.
it makes sense for any indoor location or a well kept front/backyard. But every where else that's highly dangerous and will cause cuts and bisters from walking on cement(to to mention later leg iussues from the act of walking on hard ground without protection). even stepping on a pebble, even if it doesn't break skin can lead major injues that can cause the leg to be amutated. This is why service tech guys is always using a cushioned matt to prevent such things when keeling.
https://www.barefooters.org/top-ten-barefoot-myths/ There are many sources I have run across, and some have even been mentioned on different stories too, so what you are saying is not totally true.
Re: Lia's new reality (Part 18 - 4/10)
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2025 7:47 am
by superevil7
You do know it's fiction, right?
Re: Lia's new reality (Part 18 - 4/10)
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2025 12:44 pm
by Bucket
Holy shit, what an unbelievable chapter! This story continues to get hotter and hotter as it progresses. Loved the latest chapter!
Re: Lia's new reality (Part 18 - 4/10)
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2025 2:41 pm
by elysianempire
superevil7 wrote: Sat Apr 12, 2025 7:47 am
You do know it's fiction, right?
Yes i do. That's why i somewhat joke about it near the end with "with the serious stuff out of the way". though my critisims of the parents not doing research was pretty serious. That and i was mostly throwing out ideas or possible plotlines that our aurthor could consider at least in part.
Like how the wider state gov'n might look at this, with Steven campaigin to become part of it, via DA. Or the local reaction to his possible new policies. From normal parents, while probaly liking that Steven is taking such an aproch with his daughter feels very diffrently when it comes to theirs, lead to them having many reactions to it. Then you got the more experiance Exibihtionist that might be outspoke about some of the policies or methods used, weather for their own sake or others is up in the air. Same with nudist families.
Re: Lia's new reality (Part 18 - 4/10)
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2025 5:53 pm
by perseus
elysianempire wrote: Sat Apr 12, 2025 2:41 pm
superevil7 wrote: Sat Apr 12, 2025 7:47 am
You do know it's fiction, right?
Yes i do. That's why i somewhat joke about it near the end with "with the serious stuff out of the way". though my critisims of the parents not doing research was pretty serious. That and i was mostly throwing out ideas or possible plotlines that our aurthor could consider at least in part.
Like how the wider state gov'n might look at this, with Steven campaigin to become part of it, via DA. Or the local reaction to his possible new policies. From normal parents, while probaly liking that Steven is taking such an aproch with his daughter feels very diffrently when it comes to theirs, lead to them having many reactions to it. Then you got the more experiance Exibihtionist that might be outspoke about some of the policies or methods used, weather for their own sake or others is up in the air. Same with nudist families.
Thank you for reading my story! I hope you are finding things about it to enjoy.
I appreciate all your feedback. Realism has not ever been something I've cared much about. I just try to write the kind of story I would want to read. I've made some attempts to explain the legality of whats happening but its not a huge concern of mine. I just like to make scenarios where a girl is made to be naked for whatever reason. I probably won't address Lia's periods. I used to run track in high school and some of the smaller girls on the team would talk about how they weren't getting theirs due to the activity. In my head, Lia is simply not getting hers at the moment.
Again, I appreciate the feedback, but I will warn that realism is not a big deal to me and it probably won't be as it goes on too.
Re: Lia's new reality (Part 18 - 4/10)
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2025 5:54 pm
by perseus
Bucket wrote: Sat Apr 12, 2025 12:44 pm
Holy shit, what an unbelievable chapter! This story continues to get hotter and hotter as it progresses. Loved the latest chapter!
Thank you so much! I was actually a little worried I may have push things too far in this one. Glad you enjoyed it!
Re: Lia's new reality (Part 18 - 4/10)
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2025 9:02 pm
by Bucket
perseus wrote: Sat Apr 12, 2025 5:54 pm
Bucket wrote: Sat Apr 12, 2025 12:44 pm
Holy shit, what an unbelievable chapter! This story continues to get hotter and hotter as it progresses. Loved the latest chapter!
Thank you so much! I was actually a little worried I may have push things too far in this one. Glad you enjoyed it!
No need to worry. This story is astonishingly good, and it's consistently getting better and better. Just hoping there's a new chapter soon!
Re: Lia's new reality part 18
Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2025 9:26 pm
by Skylar21
perseus wrote: Fri Apr 11, 2025 1:58 am
Diana slipped a sleeping mask over Lia’s eyes; she couldn’t see anything. All she could do was lie there, spread open, not being able to see what was going on around her.
“We’re going to the mall tomorrow; there are some things we need to get.” Diana said.
This is a particularly hot chapter, with the bondage and Lia's embarrassment in having her brother rub cream on her. He ignored her pleas to "wait."
Shopping at the mall should be interesting.
Re: Lia's new reality (Part 18 - 4/10)
Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2025 4:35 pm
by mavfan1
perseus wrote: Sat Apr 12, 2025 5:54 pm
Thank you so much! I was actually a little worried I may have push things too far in this one. Glad you enjoyed it!
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I absolutely loved how you pushed things! I'm looking forward to more of Lia being horribly embarrassed while also craving the attention and the orgasms at the hands (literally) of family and friends!
Re: Lia's new reality (Part 9 - 1/30)
Posted: Thu May 01, 2025 12:16 am
by LittleFrieda
perseus wrote: Thu Feb 01, 2024 6:32 amI may not be conveying these ideas as effectively as I think when I'm writing it, the story is already 4 parts longer than I originally planned so maybe I'm losing the path a bit.
Every path in Paradise is the right path.
