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Re: 25 spaces to heaven - A dare dice story
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2022 5:33 pm
by dublinjohn
SDS wrote: Tue Dec 28, 2021 10:58 am
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Any mistakes ive missed would be apreshiated. This story was wrote in a bit of a hurry when I had a lot going on IRL. Haha
Re-read it (again) on get dare, mailed you the typo's there
Re: 25 spaces to heaven - A dare dice story
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2022 5:35 pm
by dublinjohn
Executionus wrote: Tue Dec 28, 2021 12:51 pm
Displaying the cards was fine and a useful narrative tool to make each draw more impactful. My only issue with them was that we readers generally couldn't remember what each card meant, so it may have been a good idea to post the card meanings directly under each one.
What I did was have another tab opened with the instruction post on it and would just flick to that
Re: 25 spaces to heaven - A dare dice story
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2022 8:07 pm
by DrWhoFanJ
Another enjoyable story in this series, well done!
Just one small(ish) question: Any chance of a story in this style where it’s the boys that get stuck naked rather than (or even as well as) the girls? Maybe even a direct sequel to one of these four (as revenge maybe)?
Re: 25 spaces to heaven - A dare dice story
Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2022 12:28 pm
by SDS
DrWhoFanJ wrote: Fri Jan 21, 2022 8:07 pm
Another enjoyable story in this series, well done!
Just one small(ish) question: Any chance of a story in this style where it’s the boys that get stuck naked rather than (or even as well as) the girls? Maybe even a direct sequel to one of these four (as revenge maybe)?
Being a randomly generated story it could have easily ended up that way haha!
No imediate plans for a future sequal but we'll have to see.
Re: 25 spaces to heaven - A dare dice story
Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2022 2:39 pm
by dublinjohn
SDS wrote: Sun Jan 23, 2022 12:28 pm
No imediate plans for a future sequal but we'll have to see.
Say it aint so