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Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 4

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2025 4:27 pm
by EverythingOff
docknumber wrote: Sun Oct 05, 2025 2:40 pm James deserves to be spanked for lying to Jacqui.
He deserves that plus whatever else Jacqui comes up with! :oops:

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 4

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2025 5:44 pm
by Skylar21
Love the power dynamic here! Great chapter, especially the last few paragraphs where she hid his clothes, forcing the issue. :twisted:

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 4

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2025 8:50 pm
by EverythingOff
Skylar21 wrote: Sun Oct 05, 2025 5:44 pm Love the power dynamic here! Great chapter, especially the last few paragraphs where she hid his clothes, forcing the issue. :twisted:
Thanks. Hopefully the power dynamic only increases as she discovers how much power she really has over him. She will explore that more fully in the next chapter.

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 4

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2025 8:10 am
by steam train
EverythingOff wrote: Sun Oct 05, 2025 8:50 pm
Skylar21 wrote: Sun Oct 05, 2025 5:44 pm Love the power dynamic here! Great chapter, especially the last few paragraphs where she hid his clothes, forcing the issue. :twisted:
Thanks. Hopefully the power dynamic only increases as she discovers how much power she really has over him. She will explore that more fully in the next chapter.
The relationship developed due to their long relationship has been beautifully brought out in your writing. Jacqui is discovering how much power she has over James but you have shown she respects their friendship and I am sure she won’t do anything to ruin that friendship, but it certainly has moved onto a different level. I love how Jacqui explained how she masturbated and was then brave enough to take off her top, even thought James only saw her bare back. You have created a character who is excited about nudity both to see James totally naked but also to confess her own sexual feelings.

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 4

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2025 2:57 pm
by EverythingOff
steam train wrote: Mon Oct 06, 2025 8:10 am The relationship developed due to their long relationship has been beautifully brought out in your writing. Jacqui is discovering how much power she has over James but you have shown she respects their friendship and I am sure she won’t do anything to ruin that friendship, but it certainly has moved onto a different level. I love how Jacqui explained how she masturbated and was then brave enough to take off her top, even thought James only saw her bare back. You have created a character who is excited about nudity both to see James totally naked but also to confess her own sexual feelings.
Thank you for the comment. They really are very close. We know that James has a crush on her. We're not yet sure if she feels the same way, although it certainly seems that way.

And either way, she cares deeply about him, and while she's enjoying watching him all "cute and embarrassed," she absolutely doesn't want to hurt him. She's just exploring.

She does like teasing him (taking off her top, demonstrating her technique with the couch), but it comes from a place of caring.

I'm just curious how far she'll go with embarrassing him. I know she's going to ramp it up quite a bit in the next couple of chapters.

Thanks for reading!

How Jacqui Saw Me Naked: Chapter 4

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2025 3:33 pm
by EverythingOff
Chapter 4: The Rules of the Game

As I stood there in front of her, completely naked and carefully cupping my hands over my privates, she just sat gleefully on the couch, looking at me. Like she had won me as a carnival prize.

"Now, James. We're going to play a game. Actually, I have a few games in mind. Maybe they're not all games... some are more activities. But we'll start with a game. How does that sound?

I remained motionless.

"The first game I was thinking," she continued, "is 'Simon Says.' You know how to play 'Simon Says,' of course. I say something, and no matter what it is, you have to do it. I mean, like I could say, 'Simon Says put your hands in the air and skip around the couch three times!' Oh my god. That would be hysterical! Watching your thing bounce around while you skip around the couch? I hope it's hard while you do it. Or I don't know. Maybe soft would be funnier. Watching it flop around from side to side? Wow. I might actually pee my pants laughing!"

I could see in her eyes as she was imagining the whole scene. Oh my god! There was no way I was going to put my hands in the air and skip around the couch! She was dreaming.

She went on, "Or if I said, 'Simon Says stand on the pool table and dance the hula!' Oh my god! Poor James. If you thought you were embarrassed on the exam table, I mean, that was nothing! Yeah, are you going to look cute, with that helpless, embarrassed look in those sweet little eyes of yours as you're shaking your naked body and doing the hula with absolutely nothing on while I just stare at you. Oh, yeah. This will be an amazing game, don't you think???"

"Um, Jacqui..."

She ignored me. "Of course, just like regular Simon Says, if you do the thing but I didn't say 'Simon Says' first, then you'd get a penalty point."

My eyes got wide, and I shouted, "A penalty point??? Jacqui! I'm already naked! What kind of penalty could there be???"

She kind of smirked at me and said, "Oh, don't worry. I've got some really good ideas for your penalty. You'll love it!"

Now I was really getting nervous.

She went on. "Of course, I think there might be a lot of opportunities for penalty points. Like if you stall or delay, that would be a penalty point. So you have to do everything I say right way, without stalling. Or if you complain that something's too embarrassing. Because, that's kind of the point. Oh, boy. Am I going to have fun coming up with things for you to do that are going to be sooooo embarrassing. Yeah, that's going to be fun to watch! Or if you say something like, 'Jacqui! Come on!' And certainly if you lie to me. If you lie, that might be double penalty points.

She was really enjoying this.

"But Jacqui...!" I protested.

"Ah, ah, ah, James. See, that would be a penalty point. You know. For talking back."

"But...!"

"Oops. That would be another penalty point. Jeez, James. When are you going to figure out the rules of this game? It's really not that tough to understand."

I didn't say a word.

"But don't worry, James. It's a 'win-lose' game."

"What do you mean, 'win-lose'?"

"Well, here's what we'll do. I'll keep track of the penalty points. We'll play the game for... I don't know... ten minutes or something like that." She ran over and grabbed a pad of paper and a pen. "I'll mark your penalty points on this pad here. And at the end of ten minutes, I'll count them up. If you have less than ten penalty points, you win! But if you have ten or more penalty points, then you lose. Easy enough. So, like, you could basically even get one penalty point per minute, and you'd still win. So I think you've got a pretty good chance. A really good chance, now that I think about it. Maybe it's too easy. But whatever. That's fine. Just follow directions and don't lie about anything, and I'm sure you can win."

"And what would I win? I mean, just curious. You know. For incentive."

I couldn't believe we were doing this and I was actually going along with it. But she had hidden my clothes! What could I do???

She stood up and took a step toward me. "Well, James, that's the exciting part. Because if you win, you'll be a really lucky boy. You see, if you win, I'll give you your clothes back."

Okay. Well, that would be worth winning!

"And there's more, James. Not only will I give you your clothes back, but I..." and she lifted up her half-shirt about an inch or two, teasing me like she was going to flash me... "I'll take off my shirt... and my shorts. And guess what..." She leaned forward and whispered with a big mischievous smile, "I'm not wearing a bra or underwear. So if I take off my shirt and shorts, I'll be naked. Would you like to see me completely naked? Just like I saw you on the exam table yesterday... and like I'm seeing you now? Of course, you're covering the good parts right now. But I won't cover. I'll just take off my clothes and just lay down on the couch and let you look at me. Unless you'd rather take off my shirt and shorts for me. I'll let you do that if you win, if you want to. Honestly, I'll let you do that if you want. And I'll lay there on the couch and you can study every inch of me for as long as you want. You can even say, 'Jacqui, would you roll to your side?' or 'Jacqui, would you turn over?' and I'll do it. I'll let you look at me however you want for as long as you want. Would you like that?"

I wasn't going to make the same mistake as before. I nodded vigorously.

She seemed pleased that I was eager to see her naked. Then she got a little shy.

"Now, I'll be honest, James, because I don't want you to be disappointed. My boobs aren't all that big yet." And she pulled her shirt really tight, pinching the material from behind so I could clearly see the size and shape of her chest. Oh my god. I thought she looked amazing. She sort of did a quarter-turn from side to side so I could inspect from all angles. "I mean, they just started coming in a few months ago, so there's not much there yet." I would have disagreed. I thought they were absolutely incredible. Yeah, they were small, but they were perfectly shaped and with the way she was pulling her shirt so tight, I could even see her nipples poking through. "I'm not worried about it, though," she went on. "My cousin and I look a lot alike, and she's 15, and she's got really nice breasts. So I'll probably have breasts like her, but not for a couple of years. Maybe if we're still friends in a couple of years, we can play Simon Says again, and maybe if you win, I'll show you. But for now, they're just kind of small. So if you win and I get naked for you, which I absolutely will if you win... I'm not just teasing about it... I will absolutely take off all my clothes if you win... but if that happens, I just don't want you to be disappointed about my boobs. You don't think you'd be disappointed, do you?"

I shook my head 'no.' "Um, no, Jacqui. I'm sure I won't be disappointed." That was certainly not a lie.

"Excellent," she said, happily releasing her shirt to it's normal position and taking a seat again on the couch. "So that's what you get if you win. Do you think you can follow instructions and not lie to me? Because if you can do that, I bet there's a good chance you can win. And who knows. Maybe you can play 'Simon Says' with me, and tell me what to do. Because if you win, I'd let you do that. I mean, I don't know if I'm into being embarrassed, like you said you are, but I'd play if you wanted to. Would you like that?"

"Yes, absolutely, Jacqui. Absolutely. I'll do my best to follow instructions and I promise not to lie."

"Great, James. Now, of course, in the off chance that you don't win, and I do think you can win, don't get me wrong. But in that tiny sliver of a chance that you don't win, we need to talk about your penalty. I just want to be very upfront with you about what will happen if you lose."

I started to get nervous again.

"See, I was thinking, James, that for your penalty, if you lose, and I'm sure you'll win, because I know you really want your clothes back... and I know you really want to see me naked... but in that fraction of a possibility that you lose, I think I might just have to invite over Christine... or Tracy... or Laura... or maybe all of them, and let them see you naked."

My eyes almost popped out of my head!

"But Jacqui! You can't do that! I told you, I don't really want that to happen! It was just my imagination!"

I saw her immediately make a little tick mark on her pad of paper. "Hmm. Talking back. One penalty point," she casually said. Then she looked at me with a smirk.

"But Jacqui... we haven't really started the game yet! I was just saying that I don't really..."

Then she looked down and made another little tick mark on the paper. "Oh my. One more penalty point." She looked up at me and smiled. "Hmm. James. You're really not understanding how this works, are you?"

I froze. No way I was saying anything else.

"That's better." She put the pad and pen down on the cushion next to her.

She glanced over at the clock on the wall. "Okay, James. We'll play 'Simon Says' for 10 minutes... or until you have 10 penalty points. Whichever comes first. Are you ready?"

Okay. I could totally do this. Yeah, she was going to make me do some humiliating things, but if I went along and followed instructions, I'd get my clothes back and I'd get to see her naked... for as long as I wanted! And she'd let me play Simon Says with her, and she'd have to do whatever I said! So I absolutely had incentive!

"Yeah, Jacqui. I'm ready. Bring it on!"

"Okay, James. Now just a reminder... no hesitating, no talking back, and no lying. Those are the rules. Okay?"

"Okay!" I was eager.

"And you understand what you'll win if you win, and what will happen if you lose? You clearly understand all of that? And you still want to play?"

"Yeah, Jacqui. I understand. I'm ready! Let's do it!" I was totally going to see her naked!

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 6

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2025 4:40 pm
by NudeBaG
Fantastic!
Can’t wait!

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 6

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2025 4:48 pm
by TeenFan
She who has the clothes and the paper n pen make the rules.
I really don't see how the poor boy can win, not when he's two penalty points behind already.

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 6

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2025 5:17 pm
by EverythingOff
TeenFan wrote: Mon Oct 06, 2025 4:48 pm She who has the clothes and the paper n pen make the rules.
I really don't see how the poor boy can win, not when he's two penalty points behind already.
He is an optimist. :lol:

My feeling, though, is that Jacqui would actually like for him to win. I think part of her does want to let him see her naked. I think she finds that idea very exciting. But when it comes down to it, I wonder if she just leans a bit more to the side of wanting to humiliate her friend. :oops:

I've already written the next chapter, "Simon Says." I'm editing it now. I hope to post it later this week.

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 6

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2025 6:50 pm
by NudeBaG
Maybe focus on this story for a bit.
Give ‘Bullies’ a break.
Sometimes you gotta change it up