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Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2025 4:55 pm
by fuwafuwataimu
Whew! I've finally managed to catch up on your latest story, and boy it's a doozy!

All three of the sisters have incredibly attractive personalities, despite all being so different. It's been fantastic reading about how the girls each become gradually more and more affectionate towards and dependent upon their brother. Bea's transformation from nemesis to meek follower was particularly erotic. She's way too cute now, is that legal? Especially the descriptions of her tuning out the world around her to focus all of her attention on Frankie.

Cindy choosing of her own volition to go naked in public has the potential to surpass even Bea's cuteness, though. What a gentle and loving soul. I have a feeling that Frankie will be able to get her to let her guard down with little more than caring words and positive reinforcement. Kind brotherly guidance should have her hands at her sides in no time.

As always, looking forward to the next chapter! And I hope that one day, when we reach the end of the road trip, we get a decent epilogue about the kids' new relationships at home!

Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2025 7:46 pm
by neverdoubted
Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!

Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2025 7:50 pm
by fuwafuwataimu
Oh, please be assured - I will gleefully read this story for the next 10 years if you want to keep writing it for that long! 😁 Which would be quite the road trip!

Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2025 5:09 am
by Freesub
neverdoubted wrote: Fri Sep 12, 2025 7:46 pm Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!
Glad to hear it!

Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2025 8:13 pm
by marrow324
neverdoubted wrote: Fri Sep 12, 2025 7:46 pm Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!
OK first let me say I really enjoy your series. I wish I had the disciple / skill to write like this.

Second. Yes I win one point with my imaginary betting partner ... there is very much the feeling of completing an arc here ... which would fit if the story were coming to an end ... but I was remembering your story style ... and a harness tucked away that had been suspiciously unused.

Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2025 11:13 pm
by student
"I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!" :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Let the fun begin!

Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2025 3:20 pm
by neverdoubted
If you’re here for the harness arc, you’re about to be very happy.

Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2025 6:21 am
by Freesub
marrow324 wrote: Fri Sep 26, 2025 8:13 pm
neverdoubted wrote: Fri Sep 12, 2025 7:46 pm Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!
OK first let me say I really enjoy your series. I wish I had the disciple / skill to write like this.

Second. Yes I win one point with my imaginary betting partner ... there is very much the feeling of completing an arc here ... which would fit if the story were coming to an end ... but I was remembering your story style ... and a harness tucked away that had been suspiciously unused.
Chekhov's gun, huh?

Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2025 5:29 am
by computerphoto
neverdoubted wrote: Fri Sep 12, 2025 7:46 pm Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!
good, think it's going to be a long vacation

Re: The Last Straw (new 9/5)

Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2025 9:36 pm
by Skylar21
Back when Mary had her pony girl experience at the corral, being displayed to that audience, Fredy stuffed a bridle or halter device into his bag when they left.

I'm hoping that thing makes another appearance. ;)