This looks really quite interesting.
Leaving a comment here so that I can find it a bit later and will check it out later today or tomorrow. Love ENF stories where the main girl is small in stature.
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So I managed to read a bit of this when I had a bit of spare time, and I really enjoyed what I read!
I'm at chapter 5 and it's been a thoroughly fun read so far. I have to be honest though, I'm really not a big fan of multiple girls getting naked in these stories. I'm very much a fan of the "only one naked" theme. Don't get me wrong, again, this story is tremendous fun and you've done nothing wrong. It's just personal preference that the main girl remain, at least for the most part, the only one naked and humiliated.
Brooke (if I remember her name correctly?) getting involved is not a deal breaker. I'm just curious if there are more girls getting naked, or if it mostly remains Katie thats the enf?
Beyond that though, I definitely like this story a lot!
I'm at chapter 5 and it's been a thoroughly fun read so far. I have to be honest though, I'm really not a big fan of multiple girls getting naked in these stories. I'm very much a fan of the "only one naked" theme. Don't get me wrong, again, this story is tremendous fun and you've done nothing wrong. It's just personal preference that the main girl remain, at least for the most part, the only one naked and humiliated.
Brooke (if I remember her name correctly?) getting involved is not a deal breaker. I'm just curious if there are more girls getting naked, or if it mostly remains Katie thats the enf?
Beyond that though, I definitely like this story a lot!
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I just found this and I've completed Part One.
Your writing is very smooth. It was easy to read and I enjoyed reading it.
You are an exceptional writer.
I wish my stories were this smooth. The words just flow so smoothly. It's a pleasure to read.
I struggle to come up with the words to express what I want to say, and often have to re-write to make it readable and exciting.
As I finish reading the rest of the parts, hopefully, I'll learn something from your style.
Your writing is very smooth. It was easy to read and I enjoyed reading it.
You are an exceptional writer.
I wish my stories were this smooth. The words just flow so smoothly. It's a pleasure to read.
I struggle to come up with the words to express what I want to say, and often have to re-write to make it readable and exciting.
As I finish reading the rest of the parts, hopefully, I'll learn something from your style.
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Re: The Midnight Run (1,2,3,4,5,6, 7,8,9, 10,11,12,13,14,15,16 ,17,18,19
Hi, I loved your story! How Katie makes increasingly questionable decisions and gets into more embarrassing and humiliating situations was a great read.
My only complaint is the ending; it didn't quite convince me. Are you going to publish the other endings you wrote, like the one where Katie's mom embarrasses her daughter even more at the dance?
My only complaint is the ending; it didn't quite convince me. Are you going to publish the other endings you wrote, like the one where Katie's mom embarrasses her daughter even more at the dance?
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