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Re: Fun With Mark’s Sister
Posted: Thu Nov 28, 2024 4:16 am
by MrMongo
ghbh wrote: Wed Nov 27, 2024 1:18 pm
I assume you meant Kelly is now Mark's wife.
And I'd be down for writing the sequel, but it would have to be a collaborative effort since I don't think I could carry the story this time. There's a lot of scenes to unpack - the kids almost going to jail (does Kelly testify how Jenny ripped her clothes off in court?), Mark and Kelly's relationship and how they got married, the porn company offering them $2 million, convincing Kelly to get naked again (how much convincing she needs is up to you
), and the works. We can go back and forth writing scene after scene.
Good catch, I fixed it!
Re: Fun With Mark’s Sister
Posted: Thu Nov 28, 2024 4:18 am
by MrMongo
ghbh wrote: Wed Nov 27, 2024 1:18 pm
I assume you meant Kelly is now Mark's wife.
And I'd be down for writing the sequel, but it would have to be a collaborative effort since I don't think I could carry the story this time. There's a lot of scenes to unpack - the kids almost going to jail (does Kelly testify how Jenny ripped her clothes off in court?), Mark and Kelly's relationship and how they got married, the porn company offering them $2 million, convincing Kelly to get naked again (how much convincing she needs is up to you
), and the works. We can go back and forth writing scene after scene.
Good catch, it would have been a weirder story.