The Invisible Boy (Complete) 11/20/2025

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So many things make this story enjoyable:

-The simplicity of the premise
-His total and unabashed enjoyment of being "invisible"
-The girls' fondness for him and enjoyment of seeing him (never mean; always full of wonder and admiration)

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Can the girls see the ring floating around, or is it "invisible" too?

[NudeBaG]

Can the girls see the ring floating around, or is it "invisible" too?

The ring is on his finger, so, *if it actually made him invisible, I would think it too, would disappear.
The ring isn’t magic.
It’s just the prop needed to convince Jack to get naked.

[NudeBaG]

The Invisible Boy Part 4

Jack tip toes around the room, taking wide, gawky steps in an attempt to avoid detection.
“Oh yeah!” Kace calls out. “If anyone needs to go to bathroom, be sure to lock the door!”
The girls gasp.
“Yeah! With an invisible boy around, we don’t want any peeping, do we?” Ferris adds.
She and Kace share a smile and a wink.
Meryl looks at them, wondering what they’re getting at, but then she looks back at Jack.
He’s looking around at the girls and tugging his penis again!
It clicks!
Her classmates are TRYING to make him hard again!
Meryl’s other classmates Talia, Apple, Ingred and Vicky all move to sit on the couch, crowding and squishing together, taking up all the space.
They’re clearly content to just sit and watch events unfold.
But there’s another motive in the 4 teens cramming onto the couch.
It’s one less place for Jack to seek refuge in.

Fiona sneeks towards Jack, while Henna, Sally and Christa slowly fan out, feeling around for the invisible boy.
“Good.” Fiona thinks.
After the discussion they had while he was gone, she was afraid they were all going to go after him at once.
And after hearing that they ALL wanted to touch him, well, it made her feel a little jealous.
Especially Henna.
She KNOWS Fiona likes Jack.
Fiona looks at him.
He’s standing in front of her in a wide stance.
His penis limply hanging over his balls.
She knows she needs to not stare-
She needs to pretend he’s invisible!
But after seeing it erect-
After TOUCHING it, and making him do ‘that’-
Whatever ‘that’ was-
She can’t take her eyes off of it!
“Hehehe!” A little giggle escapes her mouth.
The way Jack is standing leaves nothing to the imagination.
He isn’t erect anymore, either, which means his penis looks a lot smaller!
Not that it matters to the young girl, it just makes her feel ‘different’.
Not about ‘him’, just HER.
Physically, it makes her feel different.
When it was hard, it made her feel tingly.
Now, it just looks kind of funny!
How can she touch it again though?
She hasn’t changed her mind on that.

Henna, just like Sally and Christa, is still slowly and blindly feeling around the room ‘searching’ for Jack.
She looks at Fiona.
Fiona is just staring RIGHT at Jack again!
She’s gonna blow it!
She knows Fiona has a crush on Jack, but they ALL want to have fun with him!
If she drops the act, it’s game over!
She makes her way over to where Fiona is standing and staring.
She nudges her.
“Help us ‘find’ him! He’s ‘around here’ somewhere!” Henna says it in a way she hopes gets the message across.
“Huh?” Fiona looks at Henna.
Henna just widens her eyes and tilts her head, hoping her silent, mental message is recieved.
“Oh! Right!” Fiona shakes her head. “I thought I heard something over here, though.”
She looks again at Jack.
He presses himself against the wall and starts moving from side to side slowly.
Sally and Christa are now standing on either side of Fiona and Henna.
With the 4 girls on the couch, his sister and 2 of her friends at the doorway, and his 4 classmates side by side, arms sweeping the air blindly, Jack is cornered!

Meryl takes in the scene.
Jack’s classmates have him.
If they decide to pounce, that’s it.
She looks at the 2 girls in the middle.
It was one of them that touched Jack’s penis earlier, when it had been stiff!
God!
Poor Jack.
The most private thing a boy can do, and now, 4 of his classmates and 6 of her’s have SEEN it happen!
And it was all her fault.

Fiona moves forward in lock step with her 3 classmates, knowing that they all want to touch Jack.
She also want’s to touch him again, but she wishes it could be JUST them.
She thinks back to it again.
His face, his body-
He’d looked so vulnerable when she touched it!
Thinking about her friends getting the same reaction made her feel ‘off’.
She was still excited about touching him herself, but she didn’t want to share.
“Hey, Jack!” Kace calls out. “Why not make a noise? Let us know if they’re close!”
Meryl’s friends giggle.
“Yeah! I bet you’ll make a noise when they find you!” Ferris adds.
“Especially if they grab your ‘you know what!” Kace adds.
They all giggle again.
Jack cups his hands over his crotch momentarily, but then uncovers and gives his limp penis a few tugs!
Sally, Christa and Henna giggle.
Jack quietly sneaks forward, TOWARDS his 4 classmates!
Henna hunches over and makes wide, slow sweeping motions with her fingers spread wide!
Jack backs up again, flattening himself against the wall.
Fiona, not realizing that she’d been moving forward in lock step with her classmates, now finds herself face to face with Jack as he holds is breath, back pressed against the wall.
Henna, Sally and Christa are right next to her!
Jack is officialy cornered!
His body lurches, looking for an escape, but the girls have him locked against the wall, standing about a foot away from him on his sides and in front!
Fiona looks down at Jack’s penis as he breaths.
His little balls rise and fall with each breath!
“Jack? Are you close?” Henna taunts.
“Y-Yeah?” Jack whispers and immediately covers his mouth and shuts his eyes!
Sally and Christa share excited grins as they lean against the wall on either side of Jack!
Sally slowly extends her index finger until she pokes Jack in the shoulder!
“Hah!” She pulls away and giggles!
“Hehehehehe! I think we found you!” She sings.
The girls are looking at his body up and down, but not staring at any ‘particular’ parts, keeping up the idea that they can’t see him.
Fiona suddenly feels the urge to collapse forward onto Jack as he presses himself against the wall!
Use her body to shield him from her friends!
She wants touch him again, but something about his penis being so little and floppy is throwing her off!
She still likes looking at it, but it’s not making her ‘tingly’ like before.
The same cant be said about Henna, Sally and Christa though!
Henna gently places her hand on Jack’s chest!
She runs her fingers over his nipple, making Jack gasp!
“Hah!”
Sally and Christa also tentatively touch Jack’s torso!
Fiona is frozen, staring into Jacks eyes!
She replays touching his stiff penis and making his body spasm.
She feels the hot ‘tingles’ in her grow stronger!
Henna moves her hand down to Jack’s navel.
She lets her finger slide over the little indentation, causing another gasp from Jack!
It also starts another reaction as Jack’s limp penis begins to twitch!
Fiona sees it in her lower periphery-
Henna’s hand is moving down to Jack’s penis!
She doesn’t want to see her touch him!
Fiona lifts a trembling hand to Jack’s chest.
“Hah!” They gasp in unison.
His skin his so soft!
She can feel the slight indentation of his chest.
She can feel Jack’s heart-pounding!
Is that for her, or-?
“Oh!” Henna gasps.
“I thiiink I foooouuuund iiiiit!” She sings!
Jack and Fiona look down.
Henna is gently pinching Jack’s flaccid penis!
“Huh?” Fiona gasps.
Jack is panting!
Fiona can’t look away!
Seeing Henna’s fingers gently grip Jack’s penis is making her flustered!
She wants to slap Henna’s hand away!
She want’s to cover and grope Jack’s genitals so Henna, Sally and Christa CAN’T touch them!
But she can’t move!
Feeling Jack’s heart beat beneath her hand has her frozen.
“Did you find it?!” Sally gasps.
“Mhmm! I think so!” Henna sings.
“Really?!” Christa chirps.
“There’s definitely SOMETHING here.” Henna says.
“Ah!” Jack gasps and squeezes his eyes shut!
Henna is touching his penis!
The girl he has a crush on is TOUCHING HIS PENIS!
But it’s not like when Fiona touched him!
He isn’t hard!
“Hmmm.” Henna furrows her brow.
She’s thrilled to be touching a boy’s penis, but it looks a lot different than when Fiona had touched it.
It’s still floppy and soft-
Not at all how she pictured it feeling.
Jack want’s to look at her, but his eyes are shut!
He can’t look!
This is Henna!
The girl he’s liked since 3rd grade!
And she’s touching his penis!
“Jack?” Henna asks.
“Y-Yeah?” Jack squeeks out.
“Is this it? Am I touching your penis?” She asks.
Something in her tone cuts Jack like knife!
“Um,-“ Jack trembles.
Henna gently squeezes.
She gently squeezes between her thumb and index from the base of his limp penis, to the soft squishy head!
“Jack?” Henna asks again.
“Yes!” Jack cries!
Keeping his eyes shut!
“Ooooo! Wow!” Henna sighs.
She moves her fingers down to his tight balls!
“Hah!” She and Jack gasp unison!
“Are these your balls?! Henna gasps.
Jack nods violently!
“Yes!” He squeeks.
Fiona gasps!
She didn’t get touch his balls yet!
Sure, she got to touch his penis when it was hard, but Henna is touching his balls!
Fiona feels a wave of tingles shoot up her spine!
She rests her hands on Jack’s chest and slides her hands down to Jack’s genitals.
She moves Henna’s hand away as she cups Jack’s sex in her hands-
Penis AND balls!
She feels his squishy organ press against her palms as her fingers close around his scrotum!
The heat is incredible!
She presses against Jack completely, sniffing his neck.
Jack is in shock!
Henna, his crush, had just been fondling him!
A dream come true (in any other instance) but he hadn’t gotten hard!
It’d twitched, sure.
His crush’s touch hadn’t made him hard though!
But now, Fiona-!
This is the closest Jack has ever been to a girl!
He can smell her!
And she’s touching EVERYTHING!
Oh god!
It was Fiona who had made him orgasm earlier!
Fiona lets her fingers dance over Jack’s scrotum as she relishes in the heat coming off of his genitals!
“Hah!” Jack and Fiona gasp in unison.
Jack feels ‘it’ in her hands, and so does she!
His penis is twitching!
“Jack?” She whispers.
“Ah?” Jack moans.
Fiona can’t move!
Jack’s neck smells so good!
And his penis!
She can feel it getting hard!
“Fiona?” Henna asks.
Fiona turns her head to look at Henna.
Henna keeps looking down at her hands.
Fiona knows she’s blocking Jack from the other girls, but being this close to her crush-
Feeling him get hard in her hands-
She doesn’t want to move!
“Fiona?” Henna asks again, clearly getting annoyed.
Fiona knows she’s outnumbered.
There are so many things she wants to do with Jack, especially now that she’s seen and touched him in such an intimate way!
And being do close to him!
If he’d just wrap his arms around her, she’d melt!
Another thought crosses her mind.
What if Jack knew they could see him?
Would he LET HER touch him like this?!
She looks back at Jack’s face.
He’s panting!
She hadn’t even realized!
She slowly steps back, moving her hands away.
She looks down.
Her eyes go wide.
Jack’s penis is sticking straight up again!
Fiona feels the heat of her palm fade, but it’s almost like the heat transfers to her own sex!
She just made Jack hard!
Henna wastes no time.

She touches Jack’s navel again, and quickly slides her hand down to his penis!
“Ah!” Jack yelps.
Henna now freezes.
“Oh!” She gasps.
Jack’s penis is almost… hot!
She runs her fingers over every part!
With it sticking out like it is, it’s easy.
She likes how soft and smooth the mushroom head is.
She wraps her whole hand around the length of it.
When it’s limp, it looked like all they’d be able to do was pinch it or poke it with their fingers.
But with it like this, she could actually grab it!
The thought had never occurred to her before seeing it like that.
But once it stuck up, it felt ‘natural’.
It was so firm!
But also soft!
Henna had often thought of other boys at school- picturing them naked.
She had a ‘rough’ idea of what their penises might look like, but actually SEEING Jack’s- it wasn’t what she expected.

Jack is panting!
He’s feeling dizzy!
Henna-
The girl he’s fantasized about since 3rd grade is actually HOLDING his erect penis!
She’s looking right it!
It’s almost like she can see it!
THANK GOD she can’t see it!
Fiona, Sally and Christa too!
If they could SEE his penis sticking up like this!
Jack feels il for a moment.
He shakes his head.
No!
This is Henna!
Holding his erect penis!
But it feels-different.
Different from how it had felt when Fiona was touching him.
Fiona’s touch was more…
Protective?
Comfortable?
Henna’s touch feels more mechanical, clinical.
She hasn’t looked him in the eye once.
Jack looks at Fiona.
His heart skips.
Unlike Henna.
Unlike Sally and Christa-
Fiona isn’t looking down at his penis.
She’s looking directly into his eyes.
Jack never noticed it before, but they’re really pretty.
“Hmmm.” Henna grumbles.
Jack feels it as she starts bouncing his limp penis on her fingers.
He looks at Henna.
She’s looking directly at his penis as she holds it on her upturned fingers.
He looks down.
Oh no!
He’s gone completely flaccid!
WHILE HENNA WAS TOUCHING HIM!
NO!
“No no no!” Jack yelps.
He quickly pinches his penis as begins flopping it around.
“Oh! OH!” Henna gasps.
Sally and Christa burst into giggles.
“Hehehehe!” Sally reaches forward and pinches Jack’s penis and tugs a bit.
Jack slaps his hands flat against the wall!
Now his younger classmate Sally is touching his penis!
She’s just flopping it around, playing!
“Hahaha! It’s little again!” She chirps.
“I wanna touch it too!” Christa shouts.
She gently pinches it and immediately begins examining it up close!
Pulling it to the side, lifting it up!
“Why isn’t it sticking up anymore?!” She blurts out.
“Huh?!” Jack gasps.
He looks at Fiona.
She’s wide eyed and blushing.
She’s biting her lip as she looks him in the eyes.
He looks at Henna.
She’s pouting and seemingly looking at Sally and Christa as they play with his flaccid penis.
“I wanted to feel it sticking up!” Christa blurts.
She looks up at Jack.
“Jack! Make it stick up!” She pouts.
She’s looking him in the eyes!
“Me too!” Sally also looks up at Jack’s face.
“Huh?!” Jack begins to panic.

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So, I had intended to wrap things up in Part 4, but it felt rushed.
So there will be a part 5.
I’m conflicted with how he should react when the ruse does finally drop.
Humiliated?
Relieved?
Angry?

Is there anything specific I should go into?
I have some ideas, but not sure if it will just feel like I’m dragging the story on for the sake of it.

I knew this premise would be challenging, as ultimately, the embarrassment is cumulative and will hit all at once.

I want to get back to Magic, but I want this story to reach a conclusion.
I’m just not sure it’s there yet

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I’m conflicted with how he should react when the ruse does finally drop.
Humiliated?
Relieved?
Angry?

For me, I hope he's not angry. Embarrassed, certainly. Humiliated? Maybe in some respects. But I'd hope it's more embarrassment than actual humiliation. I hope he recognizes how much these girls all like him. So he'd be red-faced about it for sure, but I would hope it doesn't lead to any long-term ill-will toward any of the girls. Maybe he'll learn he shouldn't be quite so gullible. And I think some of those girls would be very willing to "make it up to him" if he's feeling bad about anything.

[NudeBaG]

I’m conflicted with how he should react when the ruse does finally drop.
Humiliated?
Relieved?
Angry?

For me, I hope he's not angry. Embarrassed, certainly. Humiliated? Maybe in some respects. But I'd hope it's more embarrassment than actual humiliation. I hope he recognizes how much these girls all like him. So he'd be red-faced about it for sure, but I would hope it doesn't lead to any long-term ill-will toward any of the girls. Maybe he'll learn he shouldn't be quite so gullible. And I think some of those girls would be very willing to "make it up to him" if he's feeling bad about anything.

Working on the next part now.
I really thought I was gonna end it here, but I set up another Halloween party, damn it!
So many directions to go!

Fortunately, as I was wrapping that chapter up, I decided to erase an entire 4 paragraphs that would have abruptly ended it, as I thought of some more fun to be had.

Can Jack’s sister Meryl and the other older teens reel things back in and keep ‘gullible Jack’ invisible?
I think the girls (specifically Sally and Christa) need another talking to about keeping up the act.

I’m also enjoying playing with the ‘triangle’ of Jack, Henna and Fiona.

[BareB4U]

Just caught up with the last couple of chapters. This is escalating nicely!

I think on some level, Jack does realise the girls can all see him, and has known it for a while. That fact just hasn't made its way to the front of his conscious brain yet. Hopefully, once it does, the humiliation won't kill him on the spot, and he'll figure the whole experience was worth it.

[NudeBaG]

Just caught up with the last couple of chapters. This is escalating nicely!

I think on some level, Jack does realise the girls can all see him, and has known it for a while. That fact just hasn't made its way to the front of his conscious brain yet. Hopefully, once it does, the humiliation won't kill him on the spot, and he'll figure the whole experience was worth it.

Hmmm.
I’m really trying to keep Jack in the dark as long as I can.
I thought I was ready to drop it, but it’s just not there yet.
As an exhibitionist, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE the idea that everyone is acting, INCLUDING Jack.
But not ready to reach that point yet.
Then again, he’s already expressed those tendencies by masturbating a bit on the ottoman.
But would 12 year old Jack really have been so cavalier about that if he knew everyone could see him?
In a fantasy sure, but in reality?

I genuinely don’t think Jack has put it together yet.
Letting the girls touch him is one thing.
Obviously, it’s fun for the girls and it feels great for Jack (also obvious)
But if he KNEW that THEY KNEW what he actually looked like naked?!
What he looked like while he masturbates?!
As a 12 year old boy, I may have fantasized about such things,
but from an ENM standpoint, if the moment actually occurred…
Especially with older highschool girls present- some of which would still be there when I started highschool-
That’s a bit different

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But would 12 year old Jack really have been so cavalier about that if he knew everyone could see him?
In a fantasy sure, but in reality?

Well, tbh, a lot of my fantasies at that age involved being touched by girls in my class. So if he's living that, whether they can see him or not, that's pretty exciting. And again, from my perspective at that age, let's say that I was in the dark with a girl, and she couldn't see me but she was touching me. If it turned out that the lights got switched on all of a sudden, and she saw me naked, I don't think I would have cared all that much—if at all. She'd already been touching me, which for me is far more intimate than being seen.

This is a totally different kind of embarrassment than being stripped on the playground, where the humiliation would be extreme and potentially traumatic. This is in a friendly environment, where the girls are practically fighting with each other to be able to touch him and get his attention. So I would suspect—again, if it were me at that age—that after all the touching, having the lights flipped on wouldn't be that big a deal. There's the initial shock of the embarrassment, but I think that would fade quickly, knowing that I've got four girls who want to get their hands all over me.