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Re: Doing Things the HOA Way (Chapter 4 - Oct 31)
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2026 5:54 pm
by Noclothes
Great chapter but Elli should have gotten naked immediately she's already been naked she loves being naked as soon as she said I want to be a leader too the clothes should have come off I look forward to where this is going and I hope the policy last beyond this summer
Re: Doing Things the HOA Way (Chapter 4 - Oct 31)
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2026 7:01 pm
by Somebody
Absolutely amazing story. I was wondering how the situation was going to continue, and you managed to weave together a perfect cable knit sweater of deception. Just about every character is a little bit guilty, and all of those motivations are supporting each other like a... tensegrity structure.
And on top of that, we have a real mean, rich bitch mom making things more embarrassing for the girl who might otherwise be doing little too well in this situation. Love it.
Re: Doing Things the HOA Way (Chapter 4 - Oct 31)
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2026 10:57 am
by steam train
Loving this!
I know you rarely have the boys loose out , but Zane does deserve to be taken down a peg or two. But won’t be holding my breath
Re: Doing Things the HOA Way (Chapter 4 - Oct 31)
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2026 4:59 pm
by alberic
Somebody wrote: Sun Nov 01, 2026 7:01 pm
you managed to weave together a perfect cable knit sweater of deception. Just about every character is a little bit guilty, and all of those motivations are supporting each other like a... tensegrity structure.
I love this. I often get bored by altogether wholesome stories where everyone means well. I much prefer manipulative assholes acting in blatant self-interest.
