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Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2025 7:24 am
by mikewozere
Agreed. Chapter 5 is great. Love the picture too

Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2025 2:46 am
by Somebody
Yep, really cute!

Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2025 1:25 pm
by Lisa_The_Brave_12
jojo12026 wrote: Tue Oct 28, 2025 3:57 am Lisa a great chapter. I also liked getting some backstory. I think the pacing was better in this chapter. Maybe I will go back and read them all in a row again. Looking forward to more.
steam train wrote: Tue Oct 28, 2025 4:05 am I also think the writing in chapter 5 is of a deeper quality. Well done!
mikewozere wrote: Tue Oct 28, 2025 7:24 am Agreed. Chapter 5 is great. Love the picture too
Somebody wrote: Wed Oct 29, 2025 2:46 am Yep, really cute!

Thanks everyone. Your nice comments are a huge motivation to me.
I'll stick to the longer chapter format from now on, meaning future chapters might take a little more time.

Which character would you guys like me to show you next? ;)

Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2025 7:44 pm
by MGS
Lisa_The_Brave_12 wrote: Wed Oct 29, 2025 1:25 pm
Which character would you guys like me to show you next? ;)
I will read the new chapter at the end of the week, but like everyone had said so far, I think most of us love long chapters, and I am excited to read chapter 5. But to answer your question I would say if I had to choose, I would say Amy again :lol:

Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2025 12:36 am
by MaireadM
The quality is much improved and the story had a great twist

Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2025 8:07 pm
by MGS
I just read chapter 5 and like everyone has been saying, it is amazing! I love the way you put on the tiniest piece of "clothing" on Amy, only to probably once again strip her soon of the barely there piece of cloth. I cannot wait for chapter 6 :P

Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2025 5:05 pm
by superevil7
Such betrayal! Lol

It's already been said, but I think this is the best chapter yet. Can't wait to see Amy have to face the boys.


And I'm already hoping for Emma, but even more so, Val, to get some comeuppance eventually 🤞

Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2025 3:26 pm
by Lisa_The_Brave_12
MGS wrote: Wed Oct 29, 2025 7:44 pm I will read the new chapter at the end of the week, but like everyone had said so far, I think most of us love long chapters, and I am excited to read chapter 5. But to answer your question I would say if I had to choose, I would say Amy again :lol:
MGS wrote: Tue Nov 04, 2025 8:07 pm I just read chapter 5 and like everyone has been saying, it is amazing! I love the way you put on the tiniest piece of "clothing" on Amy, only to probably once again strip her soon of the barely there piece of cloth. I cannot wait for chapter 6 :P
Thanks :D Considering what happened to Amy, I think your assumption is fair. She hasn't had much luck, has she? :lol:
MaireadM wrote: Thu Oct 30, 2025 12:36 am The quality is much improved and the story had a great twist
Thank you, glad to hear!
superevil7 wrote: Thu Nov 06, 2025 5:05 pm Such betrayal! Lol

It's already been said, but I think this is the best chapter yet. Can't wait to see Amy have to face the boys.


And I'm already hoping for Emma, but even more so, Val, to get some comeuppance eventually 🤞
Unfortunately for Amy, Val's in far too much of a superior position at the moment. But I totally agree, both girls would definitely deserve some retribution for the mean things they did! ;)

Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2025 3:46 pm
by Hooked6
Lisa_The_Brave_12 wrote: Sat Nov 08, 2025 3:26 pm
Unfortunately for Amy, Val's in far too much of a superior position at the moment. But I totally agree, both girls would definitely deserve some retribution for the mean things they did! ;)
Retribution would usually only occur if Amy hated what is happening to her. Seems to me, from what has been written so far that, despite her humiliation and embarrassment, AMY seems to be enjoying herself. Val and her friends have only been enabling a shy girl with poor self-esteem to come out of her shell and enjoy things that she would have never thought of doing.

Just a thought. :D

Hooked6

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Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 5 10/26/25

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2025 4:17 pm
by Lisa_The_Brave_12
Hooked6 wrote: Sat Nov 08, 2025 3:46 pm Retribution would usually only occur if Amy hated what is happening to her.
Oh, I meant it from a neutral observer's pov in a sense. Val in particular has no good intentions and Emma plays along because of egoistical motives. I'd say this counts as negative Karma, no? :lol:
Hooked6 wrote: Sat Nov 08, 2025 3:46 pm Seems to me, from what has been written so far that, despite her humiliation and embarrassment, AMY seems to be enjoying herself. Val and her friends have only been enabling a shy girl with poor self-esteem to come out of her shell and enjoy things that she would have never thought of doing.

Just a thought. :D

Hooked6

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