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Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 12:56 pm
by NudeBaG
Oh, this is SO happening!
Great job and great tease!
Keep it up!
Maybe there’s still another opportunity to see HER naked.
But could he even handle that?

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 7:06 pm
by TeenFan
We all knew James didn't have a chance, but how humiliating can it get.
Hopefully something happens we can't predict.

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 8:41 pm
by EverythingOff
TeenFan wrote: Thu Oct 09, 2025 7:06 pm We all knew James didn't have a chance, but how humiliating can it get.
Apparently it can get pretty humiliating. Which would be the worst for you? For me, I think it would have been the skipping around the room repeatedly. Although if I had to strip for the girl next door at that age, that would be pretty rough too.
TeenFan wrote: Thu Oct 09, 2025 7:06 pm Hopefully something happens we can't predict.
I can't promise anything. I just type it as it comes out. So if something unpredictable will happen, if not. Or it might just be good old fashioned ENM fun. Either way, thanks for reading it.

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 8:43 pm
by EverythingOff
NudeBaG wrote: Thu Oct 09, 2025 12:56 pm Maybe there’s still another opportunity to see HER naked.
But could he even handle that?
I'd really like her to show herself. And actually, I get the feeling that she really does want to. But she's also having so much fun setting conditions on him being able to look. But in reality, I think she is very excited about the possibility that she'll get the courage to show him... at least something.

Could he handle it? Well, he's been through a lot already. I think he could manage. A lifetime of memories.

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 8:45 pm
by NudeBaG
EverythingOff wrote: Thu Oct 09, 2025 8:43 pm
NudeBaG wrote: Thu Oct 09, 2025 12:56 pm Maybe there’s still another opportunity to see HER naked.
But could he even handle that?
I'd really like her to show herself. And actually, I get the feeling that she really does want to. But she's also having so much fun setting conditions on him being able to look. But in reality, I think she is very excited about the possibility that she'll get the courage to show him... at least something.

Could he handle it? Well, he's been through a lot already. I think he could manage. A lifetime of memories.
I just mean, would he be able to control himself?
Not doing anything to her, but losing control of himself

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 8:50 pm
by EverythingOff
Maybe there’s still another opportunity to see HER naked.
But could he even handle that?
Could he handle it? Well, he's been through a lot already. I think he could manage.
I just mean, would he be able to control himself?
Not doing anything to her, but losing control of himself
Well, by control himself, if you mean keep from shooting, that I don't know. Like I said, he's been through a lot already. Of course, we know he already shot a couple of hours ago. Then again, at that age, I recall it comes back quick.

I will share, and I haven't written it yet so it could go differently, but I imagine that she is just aching to touch it, but despite her bravado on the outside, she's a little shy about it and she doesn't know how to ask him.

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 9:01 pm
by steam train
Another great chapter. We sort of knew he had no real chance but your writing drew it out so well.

One typo near the end “ I can't have Tracy coming over and seeing you naked right away” … wrong name!

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 9:06 pm
by EverythingOff
steam train wrote: Thu Oct 09, 2025 9:01 pm Another great chapter. We sort of knew he had no real chance but your writing drew it out so well.

One typo near the end “ I can't have Tracy coming over and seeing you naked right away” … wrong name!
Good catch. I'll fix it now.

And thanks for your comment. I'm glad you're writing it. I know, it's not surprising he didn't win. As I mentioned before, I'm a bit of an ENM purist, although I may find some way for Jacqui to show herself to him. Of course, that will be on her own terms, so it would be a move of power, not embarrassment for her.

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 9:08 pm
by NudeBaG
EverythingOff wrote: Thu Oct 09, 2025 8:50 pm
Maybe there’s still another opportunity to see HER naked.
But could he even handle that?
Could he handle it? Well, he's been through a lot already. I think he could manage.
I just mean, would he be able to control himself?
Not doing anything to her, but losing control of himself
Well, by control himself, if you mean keep from shooting, that I don't know. Like I said, he's been through a lot already. Of course, we know he already shot a couple of hours ago. Then again, at that age, I recall it comes back quick.

I will share, and I haven't written it yet so it could go differently, but I imagine that she is just aching to touch it, but despite her bravado on the outside, she's a little shy about it and she doesn't know how to ask him.
I like that angle
Shy, but excited
Which will win out?😈

Re: How Jacqui Saw Me Naked_New Oct. 9

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 11:12 pm
by docknumber
While reading the story again I noticed in chapter 3
“ I had known Christine and Tracy all the way since kindergarten. Laura I didn't know very well.”

But in chapter 5 it was kinda opposite.

I love the way the story is progressing. Looking forward to the stripping.