It’s Rude to Point (Chapter 9 - Sept 16)

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Re: It’s Rude to Point (Chapter 9 - Sept 16)

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Trundle wrote: Sat Sep 19, 2026 4:21 pm Well I really liked it!

Tommy begging Sarah to stop as she made him ejaculate against his will in front of the others was possibly my favourite scene yet. I may have said it before but I do like that even with everything that's happened Tommy feel still that feeling of shame. It's not like he's now totally used to being naked and erect in front of others, it's still something that embarrasses him.

I love that aspect. Really hope the story continues, I am desperate to see what new humiliations await for him. Do Mia and Emma have anything planned without Sarah around?
Thank you! That means a lot. I get in my head sometimes and wonder if anyone really enjoys my writing sometimes. And yeah, I like keeping the characters embarrassed, despite how long they've been naked, to the extent it stays believable. This being Tommy's first day naked at school, I think he should be pretty embarrassed. Lots of new people seeing him naked.

Mia and Emma will have some fun with him for sure. And Mia has her own agenda to think about too.
Brett wrote: Sat Sep 19, 2026 11:29 pm Surprised jessoe and chlie didnt get a hands on lesson. :roll:
Sarah is the crazy jealous girlfriend type. Do you think she really wants other girls giving Tommy such pleasure if she can help it? :lol:
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