Story Contest #2

[Humilatron]

I enjoyed the entries of the previous contest so much that this time I wanted to try and come up with some prizes for this second one.

The rules:

- In order to be considered your story must be included in THIS thread.

- Your story may be either ENM or ENF.

- Your story must be contained under 1 post but can be as long as you want (the only limit being the character limit this site might have)

- The story must follow one of the 5 prompts.

- All victims in the story must be 16+

The Prompts

1. Take a classic holiday story (The Grinch, Home Alone, Christmas Carol, etc.) and turn it into a humiliating adventure. Note: All characters must meet the age requirement if they are to be included in the humiliation. You can add your own characters and even use a whole list of your own characters as long as it at least pays homage to the original story.

2. It has come to the point where Santa is tired of Naughty children being put on the naughty list. One name in particular (the protagonist) continually pops up on his list, so Santa has decided to pay this person a visit and teach them a valuable lesson rather than just give them coal.

3. 7 days of Hannakuh, 7 days of humiliation. The eighth and last day of ultimate humiliation.

4. A tired mom has a new years resolution to start disciplining her children, so as soon as the clock strikes 12 at the New Years Eve party, the protagonist finds themselves utterly humiliated and taken down a few notches by their mom.

5. Anything that is related to the winter time.

Yes, I have included the 5th to be whatever you want as long as it's winter related. While I would love to see the other 4, it ultimately will be up to you to decide.

Deadline: January 1st 12:00 AM EST

Prizes:

1st Place
Gets a short story about any ENF/ENM scenario they want (within reason).

2nd & 3rd
Will simply be mentioned and recognized in a post.

I will try to participate this time, but I won't be able to win.

[Lady Lucia]

Rude!

Jk, we can share. ‘Tis the season for dual contests!

-Lady Lucia

[Girlspns]

Well, you did say you wanted to offer bigger prizes, so here's the perfect opportunity.

[GeekGuy]

Wow #3 sounds like it's going to be fun. I look forward to reading that. I am going to try #4. I don't have writing experience. Would asking for a editor be in violation of the rules?

[Humilatron]

I don't think getting an editor is cheating so long as you write the actual story.

[BeardedPigeon]

Note: this story has a slow start but it gets rather chaotic around the end

Jennifer sat in her grandparent's lodge, waiting for something to happen. Her family was staying at this place for christmas and it seemed like she'd have to get used to this place. The building was nice and all, but it was cold as hell and rather far from anywhere she liked going. She could tell things were going to be rather boring.

As she walked along the long corridor, sulking to herself, her mom ran up to her with a large smile on her face.
"Jenny, your cousin's coming with one of her friends," Jennifer's mom said happily.
"So what?" Jennifer scoffed. "I don't even like Jasmine."
"I know you two have had some problems," Her mom stated. "So I decided to invite Lucy as well."
Jennifer smiled at that. Lucy and her had been friends for about a year now. Even though they were quite different, they still got on quite well. As Jennifer pondered what she would do, she heard the doorbell ringing.

A girl with brown hair in a ponytail and freckles stared at Jennifer. The girl wore a pink christmas sweater and a short skirt. She looked annoying.
"Is Jasmine here?" the girl asked. "I can't wait to explore this place with her."
"No," Jennifer said bluntly. "Aren't you too young to be Jennifer's friend?"
"I'm sixteen," the girl growled. "My name is Fay and you should treat me with some respect."
"You're still a year younger than I am, kid," Jennifer said coldly. "Don't bother me."
"Yo, cuz, are you being mean to fay?" Jasmine asked pointedly.
Jasmine had short blonde hair and wore a tank top and a miniskirt. She was also quite short.
"Is this your annoying friend?" Jennifer asked. "If she keeps out of my way, I won't disturb her."
"I can go where ever the hell I feel like and so can Fay!" Jasmine replied. "You'll do best to remember that, cuz," Jasmine said with a smirk.
Jasmine was much more outgoing and slutty than Jennifer. Jennifer in comparrison had long black hair, a sweater and trousers. Jasmine dressed as if it was summer.

The last girl to arrive was Lucy. She had long brown hair, a long sleeved shirt and shorts.
"This place looks nice," Lucy said. "Wanna race to the end, losers?"
Jennifer laughed at that comment while Jasmine growled at her. They started to introduce themselves before Jennifer's parents went to leave.
"We're going to help your grandparents with some shopping," they said. "You girls behave yourselves."
"We will," Fay smiled as she waved goodbye to Jennifer's parents. The girls then wandered upstairs, eager to divide into their own friend groups instead of having to mingle with everyone.

Jennifer and Lucy were doing quite well, staying in the living room where the christmas tree was. They were decorating it as they talked about boys and school. As Lucy went to put the star up on the top, Fay ran in and snatched it.
"What the hell!" Lucy yelled. "I was trying to put that up on the tree."
"Not anymore," Fay laughed as she started to run away. Jasmine was watching while trying to hold back laughter.
Something lit up in Lucy's eyes as she tackled Fay to the ground. She grabbed at her skirt and pulled it down to her ankles to stop Fay from running away. Fay's reindeer covered panties came into view for all the girls. Jennifer couldn't help but burst into laughter. Neither could Lucy. Fay stood there embarrased before quickly pulling up her skirt. Glaring while blushing, she ran at Lucy.
"I'll get you for that," She said angrily.
"Bring it on pipsqueak," Lucy taunted.

Fay was small but she was rather agile. She lunged on Lucy and the two got into a wrestling match, getting each other into locks while they tumbled across the room. Jasmine stood there bemused. Fay was eventually losing, as she was smaller than Lucy, so in retaliation for being pantsed, she reached for Lucy's shirt and pulled it over her head.
Not expecting that, Lucy tried to get her head free, baring her black bra to everyone watching. Not quite satisfied, Fay then tugged down Lucy's shorts, showing her pink panties to the girls. Jennifer was in hysterics at this point.

Giving in and breaking free of her exterior clothes, Lucy glared and went back into action.
"Two can play that game, Kid," Lucy laughed.
She tore off Fay's skirt as Fay sat there, trying to crawl away. Lucy then picked her up and ripped her reindeer panties clean off. Her small ass was now visible to the two girls and her trimmed bush was bared to Lucy.
"You bitch!" Fay shouted as she stuggled to cover up. Jasmine stood there, not knowing what to do.
Laughing, Lucy started spanking Fay's bare butt, causing it to jiggle and causing her to periodically lift her legs in the air, flashing her pussy to everyone. She blushed intensely as this happened.
"Nice shave job, Fay," Jennifer taunted. "Trying to look mature, are you?"
At this point, Jasmine had enough. As Lucy turned Fay around and got her in a headlock with her arms behind her back, exposing her vagina to everyone for a longer period of time, Jasmine whisked Lucy's panties down to her ankles. Lucy screamed and curled into a ball, trying to hide her goods from everyone.

Still not satisfied, Jasmine whisked Lucy's bra off, baring her C-cup boobs to everyone. Fay ran off, not even trying to hide her shaved pussy and ass from everyone as she was too busy rubbing her butt to stop it from stinging. Jennifer laughed hysterically at this. Lucy glared at her and instinctively cupped her boobs, baring her hairy pussy to Jasmine.

"This is just too good," Jasmine laughed as she sat on Lucy's stomach as she picked up her phone. She took a few photos of Lucy's cooch and breasts before standing up, flipping her over, and taking some choice shots of her ass. She laughed like a manaic as she did so.

Eventually, Jennifer had enough, and decided now was the time to get revenge at her cousin on the behalf of her friend. As Jasmine stood up, keeping eye contact at lucy, Jennifer ran behind her and pulled down her skirt and pink panties in an instant. Jasmine's small ass hit Jennifer's face as Lucy got a perfect look at her pussy. Lucy was now the one laughing hysterically.
"You're as bald as a baby," taunted Lucy.
Jasmine blushed as Jennifer got her in a bear hug, pointing to the christmas decorations. Lucy ran to them, knowinging mooning the two girls and brought some of the ornaments to the girls. A devious plan went into Jennifer's mind.
She tied up Jasmine's hands behind her back and let Lucy do the rest.

Not even bothering to hide her privates anymore, Lucy spread open Jasmine's legs, revealing every detail of her vagina to those watching. She then carried Jasmine to the tree and propped her up there. Jasmine continued to throw obscenties at the girls while Lucy just smiled more.
She then reached for Jasmine's shirt, tearing it off completely. Her bra followed shortly afterwards. Jasmine was now stark naked in front of these girls (even Fay who had returned to see if their attention was on someone else.) Her small tits were visible to everyone and her bare pussy continued to be in everyone's view. Jennifer took a few shots with her phone, making sure to save them in many files.

"Where do you think Lucy should put the star, cuz?" Jennifer laughed as she handed the decoration towards Lucy. Lucy walked towards a screaming Jasmine as Jasmine continued to struggle. Jennifer laughed, knowing two annoying people (and one not annoying person, sadly) had been utterly humuliated. This was going to be a great christmas indeed.

[theoneandonly]

Excellent story

[ENFfanatic]

Thanks for that story beardedpidgeon. I greatly enjoyed it

[dazed]

Yes, a fun read