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Theresa pt 1 by guam4209

Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2019 10:17 pm
by PhilMarlowe
guam4209 wrote: Theresa pt 1 by guam4209

The rain stopped, after what felt like centuries. She couldn't be late, not on her first day. She ran, dodging puddle after puddle, hoping to make it before the first bell. Her parents were going to kill her. Theresa was 5'6 and blonde. she had brown eyes a petite frame. She had just moved into town this summer, not meeting anyone in her neighborhood she stayed inside. Theresa was only sixteen but had slightly large breasts, she tried hard to hide them, she was deathly shy. But now a lot was going to change. A new school. New people. A new beginning...She wore a pink blouse and blue skinny jeans. She was excited but at the same time terrified. Would she make any friends, she hoped so much. This is the second time she had to move because of her father's job, but this time it was for good. Now where were we, yes, she was running. The school starting to come into sight. Splash. No she hit one. Her sneaker was splattered in mud. She looked down again dodging puddles. Thud. she ran full blast into something. "ow" she thought to herself. She looked up and saw a guy standing there laughing off the pain. You ok? He asked the small blonde girl on the ground. She jumped up and started apologizing frantically. Hey calm down its fine, I'm Jake , nice to meet you. She smiled, happy he wasn't mad at her. I'm Theresa, I just moved in around here a few weeks ago. It just hit her that her whole butt was soaked from when she landed on the ground.

(love this site, so I decided to post some. Comment if you have any suggestions to help me write better or just want more)
Joshua wrote: Re: Theresa pt 1 by Joshua

Well writen so far. Nice starts although brief. Yes I would like you to continue....
Darkstar wrote: Re: Theresa pt 1 by Darkstar

Totally Continue..
guam4209 wrote: Theresa pt 2 by guam4209

She was mortified. Her parents were quite old fashioned and strict, her being the younger of two girls, she was still punished with spankings whenever a problem arose. She was standing up when "DONG" the school bell rang in the distance. She squeaked, quickly apologized to Jake again and took off towards the school. She made it with time to spare. There were still another two bells to go off before school started, so she went to the office, collected her schedule, and went off to find her locker. She got to her locker and stored her books, she then noticed a familiar face. It was Jake, chasing what looked like a freshman down the hallway. Curiosity got the best of Theresa and she decided to follow them. When she turned the corner she saw Jake holding the kid by the hair, she was to far to hear anything, but it was apparent the kid was crying. Jake then preceded to punch the kid in the gut, knocking the wind out of him. Theresa was backing back around the corner when she was grabbed by two girls. One took her by the pony tail and the other by her bag. The girls started dragging her to Jake. " Jake we found this chick watching you beat that kid" the one holding her bag barked. "she looks like a snitch to me, want us to take care of her?" This scared Theresa immensely. Jake was shocked upon seeing Theresa. "sit her over there Jake said and pointed next to the kid quietly weeping on the ground" Theresa was silent as she was thrown to the ground, fearing she was going to be hurt also. Jake started arguing with the two girls, Theresa blocking out their voices so she would not be accused of eavesdropping as well. Jake finally walked over to Theresa. "You threw me in a corner Jake started talking, those two girls want to beat you until they know you won't talk about what you saw" At hearing this Theresa was on the verge of tears, deathly afraid of being beaten up. "but you have another option", Jake inputted, seeing the distress she was in. "anything" Theresa shouted. Jake smiled at her and told her she was his, for lack of a better term, prospect. She was to do what he said when he said it, no questions asked. Theresa simply nodded, still quite frightened. She was in for a whole lot of trouble, and this was just the tip of the iceberg. To be continued.


(sorry if there's errors and stuff, writing this off of my cellphone at 2am. Comment if you have any ideas, input, or just like it.) (sorry I posted twice, I forgot to give it a title)