It's Just a Collar
Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2025 12:58 am
Disclaimer: Greetings. It's been a while. I was recently inspired by a comic I saw involving a girl getting collared, and thus here we are. This story starts out a bit mean spirited, but it won't end that way. This is a story of two rivals coming to terms and learning to understand each other. It's a bit of a slow burn, but I think it will end up being a satisfying tale.
Part 1
The crisp winter air was palpable as Jennifer jogged at a brisk pace alongside Rachel, each breath releasing a puffy white cloud of air. Although they had only met a few weeks ago, the girls disliked each other. Though they feinted friendliness in public, Jennifer’s disdain for the ‘perfect’ captain Rachel had been coming out in full force that night.
Jennifer, star athlete from a small town in Iowa, didn’t think that Rachel really deserved to be ‘captain’. Despite being a freshman, she was eying that position for herself. She was, after all, the best. She had never tasted the bitter flavor of defeat. She had secured a scholarship to any university she desired with her impeccable track results. It was hard to argue that Jennifer didn’t deserve at least some title of importance.
But Rachel was not impressed. She had seen a dozen ‘stars’ like Jennifer come and go. They burned bright and fast and they extinguished just as quickly. Nevertheless, it was her job as captain to bring her team in line. She tried not to let her personal feelings get in the way of doing her job. She would treat Jennifer the same as anyone else.
And that, of course, was the problem.
Rachel tussled her vibrant red hair and flashed a bright smile at Jennifer. “Great job. Ready to call it a night, flash?”
Flash, an annoying pet name that Jennifer’s new teammates had given her. Granted, it wasn’t entirely unearned, as she hadn’t exactly been the humblest person at the team practices. She wanted to everyone to know that she was the queen of the track. It hadn’t exactly been the most amicable start to her college career.
“Not on your life,” Jennifer replied, her eyes hardening. “But you can go if you’re tired, cap.” She was determined to show Rachel, the so-called ‘captain’, that she was and always would be her better. What started out as some spontaneous nighttime exercise was quickly becoming a heated argument filled with sarcastic quips and drawled out eye rolls.
Rachel tightened her ponytail and shrugged off the hostility. “Just looking out for you, Jen. You wouldn’t be the first freshmen that I’ve seen overdo it. Take the night off tomorrow, yeah? Enjoy the game. They say it’s going to be a good one, yeah?” Rachel added.
Of course, no one who was anyone would miss ‘the game’. Especially not this one. With some luck on their side, the football team might make it to the quarter finals if they managed a win this weekend. Or even better, they could go all the way. It was the best starting lineup they’d had in a decade. Neither girl would miss this game under any circumstances. But especially not Jennifer since she somewhat publicly promised Rich that she’d be there cheering for him as close as she could get to the field. Rich and Jennifer weren’t exactly an item, but that might change once Jennifer broke a school record or two. It was a perfect match as far as Jennifer was concerned.
“Overdo it? Hardly. Go home, cap. You’re clearly tired...” Jennifer said. “And slowing me down.”
“Oh, really? Sorry for slowing you down, flash. By all means...” Rachel waved her hands forward, giving a sweet, earnest smile. Knock yourself out, she thought. Rachel had seen her type before. Privileged was a word that came to mind.
“It’s okay, Rach. Not your fault,” Jennifer grinned and prepped for another lap. She could have just let it go as Rachel began packing her bags, but something about Rachel just pissed her off. And Jennifer wanted to let her know it. “You know, at my old school, the captain was always the best player on the team. Guess they just have lower standards here,” Jennifer said.
In an instant, Rachel’s sweet, amicable smile turned into a vehement gaze. She’d had enough. “Listen up, blondie,” Rachel jeered. Jennifer was taken aback by the sudden tonal shift. “You might have been the star athlete at your little town in Nowheresville, Iowa, but this is college track, and I have a teensy bit more experience than you, so maybe check your ego at the door. I’ve been trying to help you.”
For a moment, Jennifer was stunned into silence, but after a few moments, she gave Rachel a wide smile. “Fair enough. I haven’t been in a college race before,” Jennifer said, sarcastically fixating on the word college. “So let’s fix that. What do you say, red? You up for it?”
Rachel shrugged. While she did enjoy a good race, she didn’t particularly want to race Jennifer. She wasn’t suggesting a friendly sort of race where each girl could go home happy as long as she tried her best. This was a race with dark intentions.
Dark and mean spirited.
Rachel wasn’t interested. But perhaps some good could come out of it, Rachel thought. If she won, it might humble Jennifer a bit. Maybe she would chill out. Become amicable, even. Friendly. A slice of humble pie can cure even some of the worst attitudes, right?
“Fine. You’re on, Jen. Four laps around the track okay?” Rachel asked.
“Sounds perfect,” Jennifer replied.
“Anything else, flash?” Rachel replied.
There’s that nickname again. She never liked that name. Flash. As if she saw herself as some sort of superhero. No. She was gonna make this girl regret accepting her challenge.
“Yeah, one more thing. When you lose, I want you to resign from the team. That okay with you?” Jennifer added.
“What? R-resign?” Rachel stammered, taken aback by the incredulous demand. She agreed to this race on the premise that she could mellow Jennifer out, but that was a lot. Way too much. Jennifer was out of line.
“Yeah, resign. Unless you’re scared,” Jennifer taunted as she calmly strode closer to her rival. Even on her tiptoes, she barely reached Rachel’s bosom, but she nevertheless glared confidently into Rachel’s eyes. Short, blonde, and full of attitude, Jennifer was going to destroy Rachel.
All right, Rachel thought. If that’s what this girl wants, then fine. Two can play it that way.
“All right, fine. But if I win, you have to resign. And wear a collar to the game,” Rachel added.
“A collar? No problem,” Jennifer replied. A collar wasn’t a big deal. She’d worn one plenty of times. The more concerning issue was resigning from the team. Especially since she was here on scholarship, she couldn’t exactly do that. But she knew she’d win. After all, she was pretty sure she knew exactly what Rachel was capable of. Rachel’s times were always slower at practice. She didn’t make this bet lightly. And after all, Jennifer never lost. Not when it counted.
“A collar engraved with the words Rachel’s Pet, so you’ll remember how you got here,” Rachel replied.
Jennifer’s brow furrowed. That would be humiliating to say the least, yet she remained nonplussed. Fine, you want to play it that way?
“Oooh... that’s good, red. But if you’re going that far, let’s go all the way. Loser streaks across the field during the game wearing only a collar.” Jennifer didn’t just want to teach this girl a lesson. She wanted to humiliate her. She wanted Rachel to remember this for the rest of her life.
Rachel hesitated, a flicker of doubt passing through her psyche. Streak during the game? The entire student body would be there. Thousands of eyes. Resigning from the team was one thing, she could get past that. It wasn’t like the track team was her entire life. But to streak in front of everyone? Naked? That went too far. She hesitated. No. It was too much.
“You realize we could be expelled for that, right?” Rachel said. Her demand was absurd. What was Jennifer thinking if she was even thinking at all?
“Fine. You’re worried about getting caught. I get it. I’ll let you wear a mask if you ask nicely. Wouldn’t want the precious captain to be expelled,” Jennifer jeered.
“Come on, Jennifer. This is wild even for you,” Rachel replied, not taking the bait.
But Jennifer was relentless. “You know how this would end. Naked and covering up your bits as you desperately try to get it over with as quickly as possible. Heck, I bet you’ll run your best lap ever. And you’ll be wishing that you had run that fast when you raced me. Yeah, I get it. It’s definitely not worth the risk. Just go home, red. Don’t let me keep you up.”
Rachel took a deep breath. Someone had to put this girl in her place. As team captain, that duty fell onto her.
“Fine, let’s race.”
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Part 2
Rachel felt tense. This was no ordinary race; this was a showdown with serious consequences. Rachel’s gaze locked on the track ahead. She couldn’t afford to lose this one.
The moment Rachel finished the countdown, both girls surged forward. Jennifer was known for her explosive starts, but even Rachel was caught off guard as she surged ahead. Like a shooting star crashing towards earth, Jennifer bolted down the track without mercy. She maintained a body length lead as they rounded the first bend. Rachel, however, was a good captain. She knew Jennifer’s strengths and weaknesses. She maintained a steady, powerful stride, refusing to be rattled. She conserved her energy.
“I wonder if anyone will recognize that ass tomorrow night,” Jennifer called back, taunting the poor girl from a comfortable lead. Rachel didn’t reply. She was calm, cool, focused.
The girls reached the halfway point of the second lap, but Jennifer maintained her lead. The chilled night air felt a little warmer as Rachel’s body heated up. She leaned forward, increasing her pace. Stride for stride, breath for breath, Rachel steadily closed the gap between them. As they crossed the finish line for the second time, Rachel was half a body length behind. The tense race continued, a blur of red and blonde flashing through the air, the silence of the night broken only by the rhythmic pounding of feet and their measured breaths.
Jennifer’s instinct was to press the advantage. She continued her taunts and jeers. It was natural to try to shake the confidence of your opponent. “You might want to practice running naked! It’s gonna be a different experience without support for your fun bags,” Jennifer shouted.
Rachel didn’t reply. She kept her focus. She hadn’t lost yet and she knew it.
“If you give up now, I’ll let you keep your panties,” Jennifer shouted. She continued to press, but Rachel’s resolve was unshakeable. She only focused on her breathing and the length of her stride.
As they crossed the barrier into the third lap, Jennifer’s muscles began to ache. Rachel was relentless and Jennifer couldn’t gain an inch of distance. She increased her pace. Losing was not an option. But no matter how hard she surged and thrust her legs forward, Rachel matched her pace. Every surge, every desperate attempt to break away was met with equal resolve. Sweat beaded down her forehead. Her legs burned, but she was unfazed. She was in the lead and she wasn’t giving that up under any circumstances.
“Instead of Jennifer’s Pet, I was thinking we could go with Jennifer’s Property. What do you think, red?” Jennifer shouted over her shoulder, but with less confidence than her previous taunts. The race was almost over and her lead was only shrinking.
As they crossed into the fourth lap, Rachel was so close that she could feel Jennifer’s platinum blonde hair wisping against her. Jennifer still had the lead, but the gap had closed. Her body ached with fatigue. She was running on fumes.
But this is where she excelled. Her body screamed to stop, but Jennifer pushed herself even harder. These are the moments that define us, she thought. Jennifer refused to yield. She was fueled by her relentless desire to win at all costs, and, admittedly, the unadulterated terror of defeat. She pushed herself as far as she could go, finally surging ahead as she approached the finish line. This was her victory.
But her leg began to cramp.
Jennifer fell to the ground.
Time stopped.
This couldn’t be happening.
Rachel crossed the finish line.
It was over.
Rachel laid on the track too exhausted to celebrate. A wave of relief washed over her body. She knew all along that she had the advantage even as Jennifer torpedoed ahead. She was like a candle. She burned bright and hot, but things like that don’t last. Endurance is what mattered in a race like this. Hard work. Strength of character. Sensible training. All things that Rachel knew would lead to her inevitable victory. Things that she was trying to teach her misguided teammate.
Jennifer, slowly rising to her feet, looked at Rachel genuine, painful respect. The race was decided, the victor clear. She had been out run. Outmatched. Beaten decisively. And now, unfortunately, lurking in the shadows, were the consequences of her actions. Rachel had not only won the race, but salvation from the unspeakable forfeit that Jennifer would now endure.
Rachel and Jennifer laid on the cold ground in silence panting from exhaustion, their muscles fried and jumbled, taking in the events that just transpired.
After some time, Rachel stood up and grabbed her bag.
“Looks like you’re gonna be the star of the halftime show, Jen.”
The reality came crashing down on Jennifer.
Streak.
Football.
Collar.
Part 1
The crisp winter air was palpable as Jennifer jogged at a brisk pace alongside Rachel, each breath releasing a puffy white cloud of air. Although they had only met a few weeks ago, the girls disliked each other. Though they feinted friendliness in public, Jennifer’s disdain for the ‘perfect’ captain Rachel had been coming out in full force that night.
Jennifer, star athlete from a small town in Iowa, didn’t think that Rachel really deserved to be ‘captain’. Despite being a freshman, she was eying that position for herself. She was, after all, the best. She had never tasted the bitter flavor of defeat. She had secured a scholarship to any university she desired with her impeccable track results. It was hard to argue that Jennifer didn’t deserve at least some title of importance.
But Rachel was not impressed. She had seen a dozen ‘stars’ like Jennifer come and go. They burned bright and fast and they extinguished just as quickly. Nevertheless, it was her job as captain to bring her team in line. She tried not to let her personal feelings get in the way of doing her job. She would treat Jennifer the same as anyone else.
And that, of course, was the problem.
Rachel tussled her vibrant red hair and flashed a bright smile at Jennifer. “Great job. Ready to call it a night, flash?”
Flash, an annoying pet name that Jennifer’s new teammates had given her. Granted, it wasn’t entirely unearned, as she hadn’t exactly been the humblest person at the team practices. She wanted to everyone to know that she was the queen of the track. It hadn’t exactly been the most amicable start to her college career.
“Not on your life,” Jennifer replied, her eyes hardening. “But you can go if you’re tired, cap.” She was determined to show Rachel, the so-called ‘captain’, that she was and always would be her better. What started out as some spontaneous nighttime exercise was quickly becoming a heated argument filled with sarcastic quips and drawled out eye rolls.
Rachel tightened her ponytail and shrugged off the hostility. “Just looking out for you, Jen. You wouldn’t be the first freshmen that I’ve seen overdo it. Take the night off tomorrow, yeah? Enjoy the game. They say it’s going to be a good one, yeah?” Rachel added.
Of course, no one who was anyone would miss ‘the game’. Especially not this one. With some luck on their side, the football team might make it to the quarter finals if they managed a win this weekend. Or even better, they could go all the way. It was the best starting lineup they’d had in a decade. Neither girl would miss this game under any circumstances. But especially not Jennifer since she somewhat publicly promised Rich that she’d be there cheering for him as close as she could get to the field. Rich and Jennifer weren’t exactly an item, but that might change once Jennifer broke a school record or two. It was a perfect match as far as Jennifer was concerned.
“Overdo it? Hardly. Go home, cap. You’re clearly tired...” Jennifer said. “And slowing me down.”
“Oh, really? Sorry for slowing you down, flash. By all means...” Rachel waved her hands forward, giving a sweet, earnest smile. Knock yourself out, she thought. Rachel had seen her type before. Privileged was a word that came to mind.
“It’s okay, Rach. Not your fault,” Jennifer grinned and prepped for another lap. She could have just let it go as Rachel began packing her bags, but something about Rachel just pissed her off. And Jennifer wanted to let her know it. “You know, at my old school, the captain was always the best player on the team. Guess they just have lower standards here,” Jennifer said.
In an instant, Rachel’s sweet, amicable smile turned into a vehement gaze. She’d had enough. “Listen up, blondie,” Rachel jeered. Jennifer was taken aback by the sudden tonal shift. “You might have been the star athlete at your little town in Nowheresville, Iowa, but this is college track, and I have a teensy bit more experience than you, so maybe check your ego at the door. I’ve been trying to help you.”
For a moment, Jennifer was stunned into silence, but after a few moments, she gave Rachel a wide smile. “Fair enough. I haven’t been in a college race before,” Jennifer said, sarcastically fixating on the word college. “So let’s fix that. What do you say, red? You up for it?”
Rachel shrugged. While she did enjoy a good race, she didn’t particularly want to race Jennifer. She wasn’t suggesting a friendly sort of race where each girl could go home happy as long as she tried her best. This was a race with dark intentions.
Dark and mean spirited.
Rachel wasn’t interested. But perhaps some good could come out of it, Rachel thought. If she won, it might humble Jennifer a bit. Maybe she would chill out. Become amicable, even. Friendly. A slice of humble pie can cure even some of the worst attitudes, right?
“Fine. You’re on, Jen. Four laps around the track okay?” Rachel asked.
“Sounds perfect,” Jennifer replied.
“Anything else, flash?” Rachel replied.
There’s that nickname again. She never liked that name. Flash. As if she saw herself as some sort of superhero. No. She was gonna make this girl regret accepting her challenge.
“Yeah, one more thing. When you lose, I want you to resign from the team. That okay with you?” Jennifer added.
“What? R-resign?” Rachel stammered, taken aback by the incredulous demand. She agreed to this race on the premise that she could mellow Jennifer out, but that was a lot. Way too much. Jennifer was out of line.
“Yeah, resign. Unless you’re scared,” Jennifer taunted as she calmly strode closer to her rival. Even on her tiptoes, she barely reached Rachel’s bosom, but she nevertheless glared confidently into Rachel’s eyes. Short, blonde, and full of attitude, Jennifer was going to destroy Rachel.
All right, Rachel thought. If that’s what this girl wants, then fine. Two can play it that way.
“All right, fine. But if I win, you have to resign. And wear a collar to the game,” Rachel added.
“A collar? No problem,” Jennifer replied. A collar wasn’t a big deal. She’d worn one plenty of times. The more concerning issue was resigning from the team. Especially since she was here on scholarship, she couldn’t exactly do that. But she knew she’d win. After all, she was pretty sure she knew exactly what Rachel was capable of. Rachel’s times were always slower at practice. She didn’t make this bet lightly. And after all, Jennifer never lost. Not when it counted.
“A collar engraved with the words Rachel’s Pet, so you’ll remember how you got here,” Rachel replied.
Jennifer’s brow furrowed. That would be humiliating to say the least, yet she remained nonplussed. Fine, you want to play it that way?
“Oooh... that’s good, red. But if you’re going that far, let’s go all the way. Loser streaks across the field during the game wearing only a collar.” Jennifer didn’t just want to teach this girl a lesson. She wanted to humiliate her. She wanted Rachel to remember this for the rest of her life.
Rachel hesitated, a flicker of doubt passing through her psyche. Streak during the game? The entire student body would be there. Thousands of eyes. Resigning from the team was one thing, she could get past that. It wasn’t like the track team was her entire life. But to streak in front of everyone? Naked? That went too far. She hesitated. No. It was too much.
“You realize we could be expelled for that, right?” Rachel said. Her demand was absurd. What was Jennifer thinking if she was even thinking at all?
“Fine. You’re worried about getting caught. I get it. I’ll let you wear a mask if you ask nicely. Wouldn’t want the precious captain to be expelled,” Jennifer jeered.
“Come on, Jennifer. This is wild even for you,” Rachel replied, not taking the bait.
But Jennifer was relentless. “You know how this would end. Naked and covering up your bits as you desperately try to get it over with as quickly as possible. Heck, I bet you’ll run your best lap ever. And you’ll be wishing that you had run that fast when you raced me. Yeah, I get it. It’s definitely not worth the risk. Just go home, red. Don’t let me keep you up.”
Rachel took a deep breath. Someone had to put this girl in her place. As team captain, that duty fell onto her.
“Fine, let’s race.”
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Part 2
Rachel felt tense. This was no ordinary race; this was a showdown with serious consequences. Rachel’s gaze locked on the track ahead. She couldn’t afford to lose this one.
The moment Rachel finished the countdown, both girls surged forward. Jennifer was known for her explosive starts, but even Rachel was caught off guard as she surged ahead. Like a shooting star crashing towards earth, Jennifer bolted down the track without mercy. She maintained a body length lead as they rounded the first bend. Rachel, however, was a good captain. She knew Jennifer’s strengths and weaknesses. She maintained a steady, powerful stride, refusing to be rattled. She conserved her energy.
“I wonder if anyone will recognize that ass tomorrow night,” Jennifer called back, taunting the poor girl from a comfortable lead. Rachel didn’t reply. She was calm, cool, focused.
The girls reached the halfway point of the second lap, but Jennifer maintained her lead. The chilled night air felt a little warmer as Rachel’s body heated up. She leaned forward, increasing her pace. Stride for stride, breath for breath, Rachel steadily closed the gap between them. As they crossed the finish line for the second time, Rachel was half a body length behind. The tense race continued, a blur of red and blonde flashing through the air, the silence of the night broken only by the rhythmic pounding of feet and their measured breaths.
Jennifer’s instinct was to press the advantage. She continued her taunts and jeers. It was natural to try to shake the confidence of your opponent. “You might want to practice running naked! It’s gonna be a different experience without support for your fun bags,” Jennifer shouted.
Rachel didn’t reply. She kept her focus. She hadn’t lost yet and she knew it.
“If you give up now, I’ll let you keep your panties,” Jennifer shouted. She continued to press, but Rachel’s resolve was unshakeable. She only focused on her breathing and the length of her stride.
As they crossed the barrier into the third lap, Jennifer’s muscles began to ache. Rachel was relentless and Jennifer couldn’t gain an inch of distance. She increased her pace. Losing was not an option. But no matter how hard she surged and thrust her legs forward, Rachel matched her pace. Every surge, every desperate attempt to break away was met with equal resolve. Sweat beaded down her forehead. Her legs burned, but she was unfazed. She was in the lead and she wasn’t giving that up under any circumstances.
“Instead of Jennifer’s Pet, I was thinking we could go with Jennifer’s Property. What do you think, red?” Jennifer shouted over her shoulder, but with less confidence than her previous taunts. The race was almost over and her lead was only shrinking.
As they crossed into the fourth lap, Rachel was so close that she could feel Jennifer’s platinum blonde hair wisping against her. Jennifer still had the lead, but the gap had closed. Her body ached with fatigue. She was running on fumes.
But this is where she excelled. Her body screamed to stop, but Jennifer pushed herself even harder. These are the moments that define us, she thought. Jennifer refused to yield. She was fueled by her relentless desire to win at all costs, and, admittedly, the unadulterated terror of defeat. She pushed herself as far as she could go, finally surging ahead as she approached the finish line. This was her victory.
But her leg began to cramp.
Jennifer fell to the ground.
Time stopped.
This couldn’t be happening.
Rachel crossed the finish line.
It was over.
Rachel laid on the track too exhausted to celebrate. A wave of relief washed over her body. She knew all along that she had the advantage even as Jennifer torpedoed ahead. She was like a candle. She burned bright and hot, but things like that don’t last. Endurance is what mattered in a race like this. Hard work. Strength of character. Sensible training. All things that Rachel knew would lead to her inevitable victory. Things that she was trying to teach her misguided teammate.
Jennifer, slowly rising to her feet, looked at Rachel genuine, painful respect. The race was decided, the victor clear. She had been out run. Outmatched. Beaten decisively. And now, unfortunately, lurking in the shadows, were the consequences of her actions. Rachel had not only won the race, but salvation from the unspeakable forfeit that Jennifer would now endure.
Rachel and Jennifer laid on the cold ground in silence panting from exhaustion, their muscles fried and jumbled, taking in the events that just transpired.
After some time, Rachel stood up and grabbed her bag.
“Looks like you’re gonna be the star of the halftime show, Jen.”
The reality came crashing down on Jennifer.
Streak.
Football.
Collar.