Humiliated at Swim School (New 11/3)
Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2025 3:53 pm
This fictional story is based on a series of posts by Jonjon2 in the "General Discussions" section, and is written with permission.
For ages 18 and older only.
Chapter 1: Jon and Melinda
Chapter 2: Realization
Chapter 3: Taking Measurements
Chapter 4: A Cold Shower, and Epilogue
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Chapter 1: Jon and Melinda
The season was winding down, and Jon was wrapping up his final sessions at the small swim school. A relatively strong swimmer, Jon hoped to join his school’s swim team. He was enjoying the process of honing his skills, and the school’s private, personalized instruction suited him well.
The school was run by a husband-and-wife team, though it was usually the wife who worked with Jon. Most of the students were younger children, typically ranging from toddlers to early teens, but the proximity to Jon’s home made it a perfect fit for him.
At fourteen, Jon was small for his age. Some might call him a “late bloomer”—though, in truth, he hadn’t bloomed at all. Still, he was a friendly, conscientious young man.
Another perk of the school was Melinda, the owners’ 13-year-old daughter. She helped out with paperwork and occasionally assisted with the younger kids. A year younger than Jon, Melinda had been growing into herself in ways Jon had yet to. She had blossomed early, and Jon couldn’t help but notice. While he wouldn’t exactly say he had a “crush” on her, he did find himself trying, in his own awkward way, to impress her with witty comments and light banter.
Melinda, however, wasn’t particularly interested in Jon. In fact, she found him annoying—arrogant, even. His attempts to charm her often came off as disrespectful, both to her and to her parents.
There was the time her father had asked Jon to retrieve a float from the side of the pool. Jon had replied, “Sure. I suppose it’s too heavy for you.” He meant it as a joke, trying to show off in front of Melinda. But she didn’t find it funny.
Or the time she was reading a book, and Jon, with his usual swagger, had said, “Oh, I didn’t know they taught you to read at your school.” He intended it as a flirty quip, but Melinda didn’t take it that way at all.
And then there were the times Jon would make faces behind her parents’ backs—especially if he saw Melinda looking his way.
In Jon’s defense, some of these actions were his way of compensating for his small size, perhaps even a strategy for dealing with the bigger bullies at school.
Sadly for Jon, however, none of these attempts at humor or flirtation went over well.
As for Melinda, she wasn’t exactly a paragon of virtue. She had her own faults. She was confident—some might even say smug—and she carried herself with an air of superiority. Her role at the swim school gave her a sense of authority, and she wielded it with casual ease. She’d instruct the students on everything from how to stand to when to change, and where to wait. On the surface, she was polite enough. But there was an unmistakable sense of condescension in the way she interacted with the students—regardless of their age.
Additionally, Melinda would often find herself in the boys' locker room, helping the toddlers and their mothers as they would prepare for lessons. Occasionally, Jon would see Melinda in the changing room. On days when that happened, he would find a secluded corner where he could find some privacy. It hadn't been a problem.
On this particular day, after his swim lesson, Jon headed to the locker room. His was the last lesson of the day, and the place was empty—no other students or parents in sight. The owners had left as soon as Jon’s lesson was over, and Melinda was in the office, working on paperwork. That was a relief for Jon. He wasn’t fond of sharing the locker room with toddlers and their mothers, so having it all to himself felt like a small luxury. And he thought that perhaps after he came out of the locker room, he might have a few minutes to flirt with Melinda alone.
Jon quickly took off his swim suit and left it on the bench in front of his locker—right next to a neat pile of his clothes and a dry towel—and then went to the small shower area. The shower consisted of two shower heads, and was open to the changing room with no curtain or privacy wall. This was a constant source of embarrassment for Jon, as he would sometimes find himself needing to shower while the toddlers and their mothers were in the room. Not that anyone paid any attention to Jon, but he didn't much care for the lack of privacy. So, again, to have the space all to himself today was quite a treat.
Jon soaped up and squeezed some shampoo from the bottle, washing his hair. The shampoo would sting his eyes, so he tended to keep them closed through most of the shower. He washed thoroughly, everywhere, turning this way and that, and taking his time as he enjoyed the solitude. Besides, he wanted to be clean and presentable when he went out to visit with Melinda. He gave special attention to washing his armpits, his chest, and even between his legs.
Finally, facing the wall, he finished rinsing off, and he turned off the water. He felt clean, refreshed, and looking forward to impressing Melinda.
Then Jon turned around to head back to his locker.
And when he turned around, his stomach dropped. For there, on the bench directly in front of his locker, sat Melinda, grinning from ear to ear, as she watched the surprised, wet, naked Jon.
In that instant, a million thoughts ran through Jon's mind. Why is she in here? How long has she been in here? She has seen me naked from every single angle, the whole time I've been showering. She's seen everything! But at the same time, Jon felt oddly flattered. Interesting. I wonder why she's been looking at me. Does she want to see me naked? Is she interested in what I look like? Does she like me?
Jon knew that in order to dry off and get dressed, he would need to return to his locker, which is exactly where Melinda was sitting. At first, he thought about cupping his hands over his privates. But then he thought, Maybe I shouldn't cover. Maybe if I covered, Melinda would see me as shy and immature. After all, I'm a year older than her. I'm 14 years old. I'm practically a man. And she's been looking at me naked for a while already. I'll just act confident. That will surely impress her.
So despite his utter embarrassment at being seen naked by the beautiful Melinda, he attempted to stride over to her, where he would surely impress her by being confident and unashamed as he dried off and dressed.
Melinda, on the other hand, was hardly impressed by Jon. His small, immature body and undeveloped, boy-like privates were nothing more than amusing to her. She had to suppress her impulse to laugh condescendingly as he approached. But it went even further for Melinda. This wasn't simply a matter of happenstance. Melinda knew the two of them were alone. She knew he was in the shower. And she had entered the locker room with the express intention of embarrassing him—perhaps even humiliating him—as payback for the snide remarks he had made about her and her parents. Boys such as Jonny, she felt, need a lesson in humility. And she was prepared to personally deliver that lesson.
As Jon approached, still wet from the shower—and now starting to feel a little cold, he noticed that not only was Melinda sitting directly in front of his locker, but she was intentionally sitting on his clothes and towel so he couldn't access them. He was trapped naked in front of her, with no way out. Melinda was oh so proud of her cleverness.
As she sat on the bench and Jon stood directly in front of her, her eyes were directly facing his manhood—or shall we say undeveloped boyhood. She took her time looking directly at him. Then, once she felt she had adequately established her authority, she looked up at his face and said, "Jonny, I just need to clear up some administration matters. I have a form we need to go through concerning your lessons and attendance." To Jon, she seemed to have an aura of authority and confidence, which he found both enticing and intimidating. He felt she just wanted to get things done—and she seemed no-nonsense.
Sadly for Jon, Melinda had a great deal of nonsense in mind.
For ages 18 and older only.
Chapter 1: Jon and Melinda
Chapter 2: Realization
Chapter 3: Taking Measurements
Chapter 4: A Cold Shower, and Epilogue
* * * * *
Chapter 1: Jon and Melinda
The season was winding down, and Jon was wrapping up his final sessions at the small swim school. A relatively strong swimmer, Jon hoped to join his school’s swim team. He was enjoying the process of honing his skills, and the school’s private, personalized instruction suited him well.
The school was run by a husband-and-wife team, though it was usually the wife who worked with Jon. Most of the students were younger children, typically ranging from toddlers to early teens, but the proximity to Jon’s home made it a perfect fit for him.
At fourteen, Jon was small for his age. Some might call him a “late bloomer”—though, in truth, he hadn’t bloomed at all. Still, he was a friendly, conscientious young man.
Another perk of the school was Melinda, the owners’ 13-year-old daughter. She helped out with paperwork and occasionally assisted with the younger kids. A year younger than Jon, Melinda had been growing into herself in ways Jon had yet to. She had blossomed early, and Jon couldn’t help but notice. While he wouldn’t exactly say he had a “crush” on her, he did find himself trying, in his own awkward way, to impress her with witty comments and light banter.
Melinda, however, wasn’t particularly interested in Jon. In fact, she found him annoying—arrogant, even. His attempts to charm her often came off as disrespectful, both to her and to her parents.
There was the time her father had asked Jon to retrieve a float from the side of the pool. Jon had replied, “Sure. I suppose it’s too heavy for you.” He meant it as a joke, trying to show off in front of Melinda. But she didn’t find it funny.
Or the time she was reading a book, and Jon, with his usual swagger, had said, “Oh, I didn’t know they taught you to read at your school.” He intended it as a flirty quip, but Melinda didn’t take it that way at all.
And then there were the times Jon would make faces behind her parents’ backs—especially if he saw Melinda looking his way.
In Jon’s defense, some of these actions were his way of compensating for his small size, perhaps even a strategy for dealing with the bigger bullies at school.
Sadly for Jon, however, none of these attempts at humor or flirtation went over well.
As for Melinda, she wasn’t exactly a paragon of virtue. She had her own faults. She was confident—some might even say smug—and she carried herself with an air of superiority. Her role at the swim school gave her a sense of authority, and she wielded it with casual ease. She’d instruct the students on everything from how to stand to when to change, and where to wait. On the surface, she was polite enough. But there was an unmistakable sense of condescension in the way she interacted with the students—regardless of their age.
Additionally, Melinda would often find herself in the boys' locker room, helping the toddlers and their mothers as they would prepare for lessons. Occasionally, Jon would see Melinda in the changing room. On days when that happened, he would find a secluded corner where he could find some privacy. It hadn't been a problem.
On this particular day, after his swim lesson, Jon headed to the locker room. His was the last lesson of the day, and the place was empty—no other students or parents in sight. The owners had left as soon as Jon’s lesson was over, and Melinda was in the office, working on paperwork. That was a relief for Jon. He wasn’t fond of sharing the locker room with toddlers and their mothers, so having it all to himself felt like a small luxury. And he thought that perhaps after he came out of the locker room, he might have a few minutes to flirt with Melinda alone.
Jon quickly took off his swim suit and left it on the bench in front of his locker—right next to a neat pile of his clothes and a dry towel—and then went to the small shower area. The shower consisted of two shower heads, and was open to the changing room with no curtain or privacy wall. This was a constant source of embarrassment for Jon, as he would sometimes find himself needing to shower while the toddlers and their mothers were in the room. Not that anyone paid any attention to Jon, but he didn't much care for the lack of privacy. So, again, to have the space all to himself today was quite a treat.
Jon soaped up and squeezed some shampoo from the bottle, washing his hair. The shampoo would sting his eyes, so he tended to keep them closed through most of the shower. He washed thoroughly, everywhere, turning this way and that, and taking his time as he enjoyed the solitude. Besides, he wanted to be clean and presentable when he went out to visit with Melinda. He gave special attention to washing his armpits, his chest, and even between his legs.
Finally, facing the wall, he finished rinsing off, and he turned off the water. He felt clean, refreshed, and looking forward to impressing Melinda.
Then Jon turned around to head back to his locker.
And when he turned around, his stomach dropped. For there, on the bench directly in front of his locker, sat Melinda, grinning from ear to ear, as she watched the surprised, wet, naked Jon.
In that instant, a million thoughts ran through Jon's mind. Why is she in here? How long has she been in here? She has seen me naked from every single angle, the whole time I've been showering. She's seen everything! But at the same time, Jon felt oddly flattered. Interesting. I wonder why she's been looking at me. Does she want to see me naked? Is she interested in what I look like? Does she like me?
Jon knew that in order to dry off and get dressed, he would need to return to his locker, which is exactly where Melinda was sitting. At first, he thought about cupping his hands over his privates. But then he thought, Maybe I shouldn't cover. Maybe if I covered, Melinda would see me as shy and immature. After all, I'm a year older than her. I'm 14 years old. I'm practically a man. And she's been looking at me naked for a while already. I'll just act confident. That will surely impress her.
So despite his utter embarrassment at being seen naked by the beautiful Melinda, he attempted to stride over to her, where he would surely impress her by being confident and unashamed as he dried off and dressed.
Melinda, on the other hand, was hardly impressed by Jon. His small, immature body and undeveloped, boy-like privates were nothing more than amusing to her. She had to suppress her impulse to laugh condescendingly as he approached. But it went even further for Melinda. This wasn't simply a matter of happenstance. Melinda knew the two of them were alone. She knew he was in the shower. And she had entered the locker room with the express intention of embarrassing him—perhaps even humiliating him—as payback for the snide remarks he had made about her and her parents. Boys such as Jonny, she felt, need a lesson in humility. And she was prepared to personally deliver that lesson.
As Jon approached, still wet from the shower—and now starting to feel a little cold, he noticed that not only was Melinda sitting directly in front of his locker, but she was intentionally sitting on his clothes and towel so he couldn't access them. He was trapped naked in front of her, with no way out. Melinda was oh so proud of her cleverness.
As she sat on the bench and Jon stood directly in front of her, her eyes were directly facing his manhood—or shall we say undeveloped boyhood. She took her time looking directly at him. Then, once she felt she had adequately established her authority, she looked up at his face and said, "Jonny, I just need to clear up some administration matters. I have a form we need to go through concerning your lessons and attendance." To Jon, she seemed to have an aura of authority and confidence, which he found both enticing and intimidating. He felt she just wanted to get things done—and she seemed no-nonsense.
Sadly for Jon, Melinda had a great deal of nonsense in mind.