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PART 4: LOOSE SHORTS, LOSE SHORTS

Ellie laughed as water splashed her face and the head of the boy beside her broke its surface. Cameron gave her a goofy grin. That blond hair of his, usually sticking up all over the place, was now wet and plastered flat against his head. Ellie had told Mia that ...

Thanks guys. These were exactly the reactions I was hoping for! :D

There were a few things I needed to set up in this chapter, which led to it becoming such a drawn-out tease as to whether Cam's shorts were ever going to come down. I wondered if I should feel bad about doing that to you all, but I ...

PART 5: PRIVATE PARTS, PUBLIC EXPOSURE

The bottom fell out of Cameron’s world along with his shorts. A moment ago, he had been ecstatic, thrilled with the stunt he’d just pulled off and soaking up the adoration of the small crowd watching him. Now it was his swimwear that had been pulled off and ...

These are all excellent questions and speculations. Some of them may be answered very soon. Others might... take a little longer.

PART 6: MARCHING ORDERS AND A PEP TALK

Ellie, stood on the poolside, took a step back so the people around her could get out. The two elder boys let go of Mia and climbed out of the plunge pool as instructed. Mia hosted herself onto the side and sat there at Ellie’s feet, with her own feet ...

PART 7: REVENGE AND REVENGE AND REVENGE

Bobbing in the waves at the deep end of the beach pool, Hannah saw Cameron’s two classmates walking towards the pool alongside two boys she didn’t recognise. Cameron wasn’t with them, and she wondered where he was. Abigail, treading water next to her ...

Loving the ongoing speculation. All of your anticipation for the next chapters is great motivation for keeping me writing. 😊

The narrative isn't completely un-steerable. I've been changing a few plans as I've gone along in reaction to feedback, but my overall outline for this story has always been ...

I don’t know about you, but once a story reaches a certain number of chapters and a certain number of characters,
it can get tricky maintaining consistency in tone, character motivations and personalities, as well as events within the story.

This story is a perfect example of how to maintain ...

PART 9: CONSEQUENCES

Ellie quickly pulled her bikini top back on, staring at the back of Cameron’s head as she did so. Both teens were red-faced, Cameron’s with guilt at what he had just done, Ellie’s with both embarrassment and anger.

In truth, Ellie had dreamt of one day showing her breasts to ...

“This is my first attempt at writing this kind of fiction. Feedback welcome. It’s not likely to be the most original story ever, but let’s see how it goes!”

Just realized that this is how this story started…

Not to continue beating a dead horse, but you have done a PHENOMENAL job for this being ...