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Thank you all for the encouraging feedback. A preface. I don't like to over-describe the physical appearance of characters (except when it is expressly necessary). So the readers can imagine what is missing as they wish.

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Part 2

Peter saw Barbara walking away with his dirty shirt. Peter was ...

This is my first attempt at writing this kind of fiction. Feedback welcome. It’s not likely to be the most original story ever, but let’s see how it goes!

PART 1: DON’T WANNA SHARE, DON’T WANNA BARE

“You just want to perve at girls in their swimsuits!”
“Oh yeah? Like you’re not going to perve at ...

PART 2: OF COURSE, YOU REALISE THIS MEANS WAR

Hannah got up from the bench and set her swimsuit down in its place. Cameron was sitting there bewildered, looking like he didn’t know what to do. She decided to take the initiative and start changing while he figured it out. Taking care not to lift ...

PART 3: A DESPERATE DANCE

Mary, meanwhile, had finished getting into her swimsuit. She had also packed up her and Chris’s clothes and their towels, and was leading Chris to the lockers so she could stow everything away. They passed the cubicle she had shoved Cam and Hannie into earlier along the ...

PART 4: LOOSE SHORTS, LOSE SHORTS

Ellie laughed as water splashed her face and the head of the boy beside her broke its surface. Cameron gave her a goofy grin. That blond hair of his, usually sticking up all over the place, was now wet and plastered flat against his head. Ellie had told Mia that ...

Thanks guys. These were exactly the reactions I was hoping for! :D

There were a few things I needed to set up in this chapter, which led to it becoming such a drawn-out tease as to whether Cam's shorts were ever going to come down. I wondered if I should feel bad about doing that to you all, but I ...

PART 5: PRIVATE PARTS, PUBLIC EXPOSURE

The bottom fell out of Cameron’s world along with his shorts. A moment ago, he had been ecstatic, thrilled with the stunt he’d just pulled off and soaking up the adoration of the small crowd watching him. Now it was his swimwear that had been pulled off and ...

These are all excellent questions and speculations. Some of them may be answered very soon. Others might... take a little longer.

PART 6: MARCHING ORDERS AND A PEP TALK

Ellie, stood on the poolside, took a step back so the people around her could get out. The two elder boys let go of Mia and climbed out of the plunge pool as instructed. Mia hosted herself onto the side and sat there at Ellie’s feet, with her own feet ...

PART 7: REVENGE AND REVENGE AND REVENGE

Bobbing in the waves at the deep end of the beach pool, Hannah saw Cameron’s two classmates walking towards the pool alongside two boys she didn’t recognise. Cameron wasn’t with them, and she wondered where he was. Abigail, treading water next to her ...