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Loving the ongoing speculation. All of your anticipation for the next chapters is great motivation for keeping me writing. 😊

The narrative isn't completely un-steerable. I've been changing a few plans as I've gone along in reaction to feedback, but my overall outline for this story has always been ...

I don’t know about you, but once a story reaches a certain number of chapters and a certain number of characters,
it can get tricky maintaining consistency in tone, character motivations and personalities, as well as events within the story.

This story is a perfect example of how to maintain ...

PART 9: CONSEQUENCES

Ellie quickly pulled her bikini top back on, staring at the back of Cameron’s head as she did so. Both teens were red-faced, Cameron’s with guilt at what he had just done, Ellie’s with both embarrassment and anger.

In truth, Ellie had dreamt of one day showing her breasts to ...

“This is my first attempt at writing this kind of fiction. Feedback welcome. It’s not likely to be the most original story ever, but let’s see how it goes!”

Just realized that this is how this story started…

Not to continue beating a dead horse, but you have done a PHENOMENAL job for this being ...

PART 10: CLOSE QUARTERS, CLOSE EXAMINATION

This was a whole new level of problem for Cameron. At least in the pool there hadn’t been any phones around. “Stop that!” he demanded, indignant at Mia’s intrusion. He reached up to try to block the camera lens and grab Mia’s phone from her hand, taking ...

Now what about those itty bitty titties of Hannah?
Some payback is only fair.


… and in one of the early chapters Cam tormented Hannah about being bald … 🤔

I am also intrigued how Natalie will fit into the wider plot. The author obviously had a plan otherwise she would not have been ...

EPILOGUE: BEDTIME CHAT

Alone in his bedroom that night, Cameron lay naked in the dark on top of his bedcovers. He was drained and covered in sweat, having taken care of the need that had been clawing at him ever since he’d got home from the pool.

He thought of the relationship that seemed to be ...

One hot summer, our entire family spent a week at a cottage on a lake. My older sister Jessica, my parents, and I drove to a dock, rented a motorboat that could comfortably seat us, and took it on the water, riding for 20 minutes until we reached a secluded cottage that could only be accessed by ...

Thanks Barely2 I'll try to keep writing more!

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Chapter 12: The Subordinates

I stood there grinning at Andy as Miss Prescott rummaged in her drawer, humming to herself, and pulled out the ballet slippers that Andy had worn earlier with the bunny suit. She held them up for a moment, then she ...