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I agree with TeenFan, I think this setup could have resulted in a longer story with the boy going through more embarrassment.

Like I said in the tutoring Chelsea story you seem to have a gift of coming up with fun premises for stories. It's great to see a new writer here!

Maybe I could've still included the ballet school, but then had him just run upstairs to her room.

I'm going to brainstorm some of the most humiliating scenarios possible and have a boy go through them in the next part. I like the idea of a boy having a first date with a girl he really likes ...

Chapter 1: Stealing Adam's Clothes
Chapter 2: Exposed at the Sleepover
Chapter 3: Busting In

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Chapter 1: Stealing Adam's Clothes

Emma and her best friend Mia were hanging out at Emma's house. The two 13-year-olds were sitting on her bed looking at their phones.

Emma's twin ...

Looking forward to next chapter. Hopefully more humiliation.

What an absolutely awesome setup! If you were suddenly rendered completely naked one of the absolute worst places it could possibly happen would be in a crowded mall while on a first date with your big crush. Lisa has chosen the perfect target!

I'm so glad it's going to be a multiple part chapter ...

This didn't happen to me directly (thankfully), but I saw it happen to one of the other freshman guys on the team. I'll call him "Alex."

Alex and I had just gotten undressed and we had locked everything in our lockers. As soon as we closed and locked the lockers, Lisa appeared behind us. We, of ...

There's gonna be a lot of 'Splainin' to do if Maddy were to see him in the clothes Lisa brings him. But hopefully plenty of naked embarrassment
before that happens.

Chapter 1: The Grudge

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Have you ever noticed, dear child, how Halloween tales all begin the same?
Nights of candy, night of cheer, it always starts so tame.

The laughter echoes, as the children begin to arrive,
All is too ...

You should do what EverythingOff did in his stories by linking all the chapters at the start of your first story that way it’s easier to get to the next chapter

Ugh😓
I keep trying to make Magic my one and only focus these days, but as we move passed Halloween in the main story, I am compelled to put out a little Halloween one-off.
I don’t know where this will lead, and don’t want it to drag on, but this is an idea that is itching to come out so…
Happy ...