THE WEDDING ANNIVERSARY: THE NEW CHAPTER 1I now available
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Re: THE WEDDING ANNIVERSARY: FLASHBACKS Chapter 3 Part 1 Available
I'm assuming the diaper was simply meant as a humiliating punishment by mother. There was no indication of a medical need.
It's described in the story that use if the diaper have been caused by forcing Amy to drink copious bottles (twice) and convenience, when she did not want to wake any adults up to put her in a diaper.
It's described in the story that use if the diaper have been caused by forcing Amy to drink copious bottles (twice) and convenience, when she did not want to wake any adults up to put her in a diaper.
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Re: THE WEDDING ANNIVERSARY: FLASHBACKS Chapter 3 Part 1 Available
Ella is 16 and is wearing diapers as punishment not because her or her sister needed them. Ella’s mum had gotten the first diaper off a guest at the party, the subsequent ones were either borrowed or bought for Ella by other people
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Re: THE WEDDING ANNIVERSARY: FLASHBACKS Chapter 3 Part 1 Available
I agree with the responses. The set up, that Ella is being punished by her stepmother and then other antagonists take advantage of the situation and make matters worse for her, is entirely consistent with stories of this genre. The idea that tens of other people around look the other way or take pleasure in her humiliation and don't help her is also consistent with the genre and to be honest, somewhat consistent with human behavior. People are surprisingly unwilling to step in and help people being tormented.
My point was more that she was being mistaken for an 8 year old and that as a result, no one was raising eyebrows about her diaper. It's very unusual for eight year old to run around in diapers. An eight year old is a third grader. If a third grader ran out in a diaper, their friends would be making fun of them. So, it might have been more believable if an eight grader in diapers was somewhat ridiculed. The way people are treating her, changing her in public etc. is more consistent with how 3 year old toddlers are treated, not eight year olds.
In any event, this is a fascinating story and I can't wait to see how this develops. It has a lot of potential. I was particularly intrigued by Dylan's reaction. It would be interesting to see whether he has an attraction for her underdeveloped body and his ability to get her naked in places where it wouldn't be possible for well developed teenagers to be naked. Also, with 60+ classmates having seen her humiliation, it would be interesting to see whether they take advantage of her in future.
My point was more that she was being mistaken for an 8 year old and that as a result, no one was raising eyebrows about her diaper. It's very unusual for eight year old to run around in diapers. An eight year old is a third grader. If a third grader ran out in a diaper, their friends would be making fun of them. So, it might have been more believable if an eight grader in diapers was somewhat ridiculed. The way people are treating her, changing her in public etc. is more consistent with how 3 year old toddlers are treated, not eight year olds.
In any event, this is a fascinating story and I can't wait to see how this develops. It has a lot of potential. I was particularly intrigued by Dylan's reaction. It would be interesting to see whether he has an attraction for her underdeveloped body and his ability to get her naked in places where it wouldn't be possible for well developed teenagers to be naked. Also, with 60+ classmates having seen her humiliation, it would be interesting to see whether they take advantage of her in future.
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Re: THE WEDDING ANNIVERSARY: FLASHBACKS Chapter 3 Part 1 Available
Blondie, with great admiration and respect, an older girl or woman being treated like an 8-year old or a baby IS part of the genre and fascination of age regression, ABDL and dark humiliation stories these days including the acceptance of things like diapers being changed in public, etc. The occurrence is readily deemed appropriate. Reality suspension plays an important part of the success of these stories and pointing out the flaws in the logic of what is happening to the victim or protagonist isn't very popular with fans of this particular niche.
Your points are quite valid, but I am just drawing attention that everyone into that genre understands that but chooses to ignore it for the sake of entertainment. Like I said, it is part of the attraction of this niche of erotica.
I am not a huge fan of ABDL and diaper humiliation, but I understand it and just go with the flow. Once you let the logical mind go into the back of your brain you'll enjoy these stories quite a lot I would imagine. There are many well-written stories on this site in this niche that are fun reads and are incredibly popular on this board.
Just some thoughts from underneath the shade tree.
Your points are quite valid, but I am just drawing attention that everyone into that genre understands that but chooses to ignore it for the sake of entertainment. Like I said, it is part of the attraction of this niche of erotica.
I am not a huge fan of ABDL and diaper humiliation, but I understand it and just go with the flow. Once you let the logical mind go into the back of your brain you'll enjoy these stories quite a lot I would imagine. There are many well-written stories on this site in this niche that are fun reads and are incredibly popular on this board.
Just some thoughts from underneath the shade tree.
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Part 1a the new chapter
“Oh, thank you, for coming over Ella, at such short notice. My wife, my elder daughter and I must go to this play and my sitter quit on us last minute.” Said Mr. Peet.
“No problem Mr. Peet. Who am I babysitting for?” Asked Ella.
“Just my other daughter Sarah. She is 12 and isn’t old enough to watch this play. Kelly is 17 now, and she said you would be perfect. I think she knows you from school.” Said Mr. Peet.
“Kelly Peet, the name sounds familiar.” Said Ella.
“Come on mum, we are going to be late. Oh Ella, it’s nice to see you fully dressed and ready to babysit my little sister.” Said Kelly, grinning her Cheshire Cat grin as usual.
“Anyway, rules are on the fridge, you have our numbers if you get into any bother, and here’s some money for dinner. Just put Sarah to bed around 8pm.
We won’t be back till Sunday afternoon around 4pm. We have a hotel near the theatre, you see. We will be there 2 nights. Have a great weekend.” Said Mr Peet.
“Come on mum.” Shouted Kelly.
“I’m coming. Bye Sarah, be good for Ella.”
Said Mrs. Peet.
“Bye Sarah.” Said Mr.Peet.
Kelly whispered into Sarah’s ear. Then looked up at Ella.
“Have fun Sarah, and Ella.” Kelly said with her grin firmly planted on her face.
The three Peets headed down the driveway, and got into the black Mercedes. Its engine roared into life, and they went off into the distance. It left the open doorway, with two girls waving it bye, on the doorstep.
“No problem Mr. Peet. Who am I babysitting for?” Asked Ella.
“Just my other daughter Sarah. She is 12 and isn’t old enough to watch this play. Kelly is 17 now, and she said you would be perfect. I think she knows you from school.” Said Mr. Peet.
“Kelly Peet, the name sounds familiar.” Said Ella.
“Come on mum, we are going to be late. Oh Ella, it’s nice to see you fully dressed and ready to babysit my little sister.” Said Kelly, grinning her Cheshire Cat grin as usual.
“Anyway, rules are on the fridge, you have our numbers if you get into any bother, and here’s some money for dinner. Just put Sarah to bed around 8pm.
We won’t be back till Sunday afternoon around 4pm. We have a hotel near the theatre, you see. We will be there 2 nights. Have a great weekend.” Said Mr Peet.
“Come on mum.” Shouted Kelly.
“I’m coming. Bye Sarah, be good for Ella.”
Said Mrs. Peet.
“Bye Sarah.” Said Mr.Peet.
Kelly whispered into Sarah’s ear. Then looked up at Ella.
“Have fun Sarah, and Ella.” Kelly said with her grin firmly planted on her face.
The three Peets headed down the driveway, and got into the black Mercedes. Its engine roared into life, and they went off into the distance. It left the open doorway, with two girls waving it bye, on the doorstep.
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Part 1b the new chapter
Sarah Peet looked a lot like her sister Kelly, she also had blonde hair, and a muscly build. She seemed to have similar sized breasts as her sister and the same Cheshire Cat grin. Also her teeth were a bit whiter as they were newer. She was about the same height as Ella.
Ella Cooper, had brown hair, skinny build, 18AA cup which meant her breasts were extremely shallow and looked quite flat chested.
Ella always wore a C cup bra, and stuffed it to make it look bigger. Since she turned 17 she wore boots with special inserts and heels to give her a couple of inches in height.
Ella was 61 inches tall. Making her 5 feet 1 inches tall. With her boots on she barely made it to 5 feet and 3 inches tall.
Ella hated her height and her small flat breasts, but there wasn’t much she could do about them.
The two girls stood in the doorway watching the Mercedes disappear from view. After it was gone Ella shut the door.
“Hi, I’m Sarah, what is your name?” Asked Sarah. Sarah had her phone pointed at Ella.
“You know my name.” Said Ella.
“I know but I just want it on my phone to help me remember.” Said Sarah innocently.
“Oh ok. What do you want me to say?” Asked Ella.
“Hello my name is… then your name.” Said Sarah.
“Ok fine. (Ella looked at the camera phone smiled and said.) Hello, my name is Ella Cooper, I’m 17 years old, and I’m a babysitter.” Said Ella.
“Do I need to be babysat?” Asked Sarah.
“Yes I need to babysit you.” Said Ella.
Sarah giggled and ran off upstairs leaving Ella bewildered in the hallway. Ella decided to go sit in the front room and watch some tv. Ella had just sat down when the doorbell rang. Ella got up and walked to the front door.
Ella opened the door, and was surprised to see Hannah and her sister Cheryl, at the door. Ella and Hannah didn’t get on, but Ella felt she had to be a polite hostess and invited both girls inside.
“Hi Ella, I hope you don’t mind my little sister wanted a sleepover with Kelly’s sister. I will help you look after both girls no problem.” Said Hannah.
“Ok thanks Hannah, it’d be nice just the four of us.” Said Ella.
Sarah then reappeared from upstairs.
“Hey, Hannah, and Cheryl, how are you? Come upstairs and look what I’ve made. You too Ella.” Said Sarah enthusiastically.
All four girls headed upstairs…
Ella Cooper, had brown hair, skinny build, 18AA cup which meant her breasts were extremely shallow and looked quite flat chested.
Ella always wore a C cup bra, and stuffed it to make it look bigger. Since she turned 17 she wore boots with special inserts and heels to give her a couple of inches in height.
Ella was 61 inches tall. Making her 5 feet 1 inches tall. With her boots on she barely made it to 5 feet and 3 inches tall.
Ella hated her height and her small flat breasts, but there wasn’t much she could do about them.
The two girls stood in the doorway watching the Mercedes disappear from view. After it was gone Ella shut the door.
“Hi, I’m Sarah, what is your name?” Asked Sarah. Sarah had her phone pointed at Ella.
“You know my name.” Said Ella.
“I know but I just want it on my phone to help me remember.” Said Sarah innocently.
“Oh ok. What do you want me to say?” Asked Ella.
“Hello my name is… then your name.” Said Sarah.
“Ok fine. (Ella looked at the camera phone smiled and said.) Hello, my name is Ella Cooper, I’m 17 years old, and I’m a babysitter.” Said Ella.
“Do I need to be babysat?” Asked Sarah.
“Yes I need to babysit you.” Said Ella.
Sarah giggled and ran off upstairs leaving Ella bewildered in the hallway. Ella decided to go sit in the front room and watch some tv. Ella had just sat down when the doorbell rang. Ella got up and walked to the front door.
Ella opened the door, and was surprised to see Hannah and her sister Cheryl, at the door. Ella and Hannah didn’t get on, but Ella felt she had to be a polite hostess and invited both girls inside.
“Hi Ella, I hope you don’t mind my little sister wanted a sleepover with Kelly’s sister. I will help you look after both girls no problem.” Said Hannah.
“Ok thanks Hannah, it’d be nice just the four of us.” Said Ella.
Sarah then reappeared from upstairs.
“Hey, Hannah, and Cheryl, how are you? Come upstairs and look what I’ve made. You too Ella.” Said Sarah enthusiastically.
All four girls headed upstairs…
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Re: THE WEDDING ANNIVERSARY: New parts available
It is great to see that you are continuing this story, Revengedpirate. I am looking forward to see what happens next.
I am curious. Since these are flashbacks, do these new parts occur immediately after The Wedding Anniversary Flashback Chapter 3 Part 1 at the Hotel ballroom where Ella was being changed on the ballroom floor and is now back home OR do these new parts occur earlier in the story perhaps before the Wedding Anniversary Party itself OR do these new parts occur after Mr. and Mrs. Cooper took both girls back home after the Wedding Anniversary Party and the adventures with the Cheshire Cat at the amusement park? I am a bit confused at this point where these new parts fit in the story so any clarification would be helpful.
Good to see you writing again.
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I am curious. Since these are flashbacks, do these new parts occur immediately after The Wedding Anniversary Flashback Chapter 3 Part 1 at the Hotel ballroom where Ella was being changed on the ballroom floor and is now back home OR do these new parts occur earlier in the story perhaps before the Wedding Anniversary Party itself OR do these new parts occur after Mr. and Mrs. Cooper took both girls back home after the Wedding Anniversary Party and the adventures with the Cheshire Cat at the amusement park? I am a bit confused at this point where these new parts fit in the story so any clarification would be helpful.
Good to see you writing again.
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The new parts are a while after the theme park. Ella now being almost a year older. I recently reread this story and I think I wanted to do future rather than continue with flashbacks. Not for any particular reason I just had thoughts on Ella’s future storylines and decided to go from there. I introduced new characters to further Ella’s humiliation whilst still keeping some of the old characters. Like Kelly and Hannah.
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Part 1c the new chapter
The girls, got to the top of the stairs which led onto a small landing. It had a high ceiling and decorated with elaborate paintings. There were a couple of windows and five doors that led to different rooms.
Sarah led the three girls across the landing and into the furthest room from the top of the stairs.
The room the girls walked into was dimly lit. The only light coming into the room was a tiny window opposite the door. It took a while for the girls eyes to adjust to the darkness.
Hannah was last into the room, she shut and locked the door, and flicked the light switch. A fluorescent tube buzzed into life on the ceiling illuminating the once dark room.
The room had a white ceiling, with a wooden dado rail which was white. Below that the walls were a pale pink to about halfway. Then there was a second dado rail which went around the middle of the room. It was a tarnished brown, and below that it was tiled white and black.
The floor was also tiled white and black, making the room itself look quite elegant. In one corner was a highly polished and clean sparkling white toilet, with a brown wooden seat.
Next to that standing on four golden legs, was a white bathtub. It was full of what appeared to be hot soapy water and a few toys were sat on top of the tubs side.
Then next to that was a white plinth which held a sink, and a towel rack. a thick brown towel was laid on top.
Next to that was a blue laundry basket which seemed to be half full and the lid shut. The four girls looked in awe and the neat and tidy bathroom.
Sarah, was stood nearest the tub with a Cheshire Cat grin, holding her phone.
Cheryl, who had mousy brown hair, tied in a pony tail, was the shortest of the four girls and quite skinny herself. Cheryl was also 12 and was in Sarah’s class at school.
Sarah and Cheryl were best friends and did everything together. Cheryl also had a toothy grin.
Hannah looked similar to Cheryl though she had breasts, which were B cup. Hannah had locked the door and was eyeing the scene in front of her with interest.
Ella was the only one looking slightly anxious now, wondering why, Sarah had made a bath. She also wondered why Sarah was showing them all. Surely Sarah didn’t want to be bathed in front of three other girls.
Sarah led the three girls across the landing and into the furthest room from the top of the stairs.
The room the girls walked into was dimly lit. The only light coming into the room was a tiny window opposite the door. It took a while for the girls eyes to adjust to the darkness.
Hannah was last into the room, she shut and locked the door, and flicked the light switch. A fluorescent tube buzzed into life on the ceiling illuminating the once dark room.
The room had a white ceiling, with a wooden dado rail which was white. Below that the walls were a pale pink to about halfway. Then there was a second dado rail which went around the middle of the room. It was a tarnished brown, and below that it was tiled white and black.
The floor was also tiled white and black, making the room itself look quite elegant. In one corner was a highly polished and clean sparkling white toilet, with a brown wooden seat.
Next to that standing on four golden legs, was a white bathtub. It was full of what appeared to be hot soapy water and a few toys were sat on top of the tubs side.
Then next to that was a white plinth which held a sink, and a towel rack. a thick brown towel was laid on top.
Next to that was a blue laundry basket which seemed to be half full and the lid shut. The four girls looked in awe and the neat and tidy bathroom.
Sarah, was stood nearest the tub with a Cheshire Cat grin, holding her phone.
Cheryl, who had mousy brown hair, tied in a pony tail, was the shortest of the four girls and quite skinny herself. Cheryl was also 12 and was in Sarah’s class at school.
Sarah and Cheryl were best friends and did everything together. Cheryl also had a toothy grin.
Hannah looked similar to Cheryl though she had breasts, which were B cup. Hannah had locked the door and was eyeing the scene in front of her with interest.
Ella was the only one looking slightly anxious now, wondering why, Sarah had made a bath. She also wondered why Sarah was showing them all. Surely Sarah didn’t want to be bathed in front of three other girls.
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