Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 6 01/19/26

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Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 6 01/19/26

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Hello everyone!



This is my very first attempt at posting one of my stories anywhere and I have some things to disclaim.

I'm writing this story all on my own apart from using AI tools to proofread and make my text easier to read. English is not my first language and to make everything more enjoyable for you guys, I decided to use AI.

All the plot and the story are created by me, though.

Here is where my second disclaimer come into play. This story has been heavily influenced by me reading some other stories here on the forum. I've been especially inspired by the Erica stories written by KrylB. But it's only the first couple of chapters. My story will go in a different direction down the line, and I will try to give it some unique twists.

Now my last disclaimer: I have only really outlined the first couple of chapters in my head, but I already know that my story will also include darker themes like non-consensual sexual interactions, humiliation, blackmail and the like. I will try to add the tags as the story progresses. The first chapters will stay comparably tame, though.



All feedback is greatly appreciated.



I hope you enjoy.



Most important characters:

Amy, 12, main protagonist
Emma, 12, Amy’s new and only friend

Ms. Kim Hendrix, 23, assistant swim coach at Amy’s school

Valerie ‘Val’, 12, the rich school queen
Hannah, 11, Val's lesbian Asian "friend"
Amber, 12, Val's redhead "friend"

Chris, 9, Amber's little brother
Mikey, 8, Chris' best friend
Lenny, 8, Chris' and Mikey's friend

Hope, 14, Lenny's older sister
Jack, 14, Lenny's older brother; Hope's twin (they are nothing alike)


Chapters:

01 – Improvise
02 – Emma’s Lie
03 – Sliding Down
04 - Lost and Found
05 - Conspiracies
06 - A Step Too Far
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Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 1 07/17/25

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Chapter 1 – Improvise

Twelve-year-old Amy Larson and her schoolmate and new friend Emma stood at the entrance to the indoor waterpark, which just recently had its grand opening.

Both girls were visibly excited, their eyes bright with anticipation. They waved goodbye to Emma’s mom, who had dropped the two girls off.

“Bye, Mom! Don’t forget to come back for us!” Emma called out, her voice echoing in the vast parking lot.

“I won’t! Have fun, girls!” her mom called back with a smile, before driving off toward her important work-related appointment in another town. She’d be back in a few hours to pick them up.

“Look how big that building is, Em. It’s huge!” Amy said, awestruck, her head tilted back to take in the towering structure.

“It must be, silly. How else would they fit all the slides and stuff?” Emma grinned, her eyes sparkling with excitement. “Come on, let’s go inside already—I want to see if that giant twisty slide from the commercial is real!”

At the entrance desk, a friendly woman greeted them with a warm smile. “Welcome to Splash Planet! First time here?”

“Yeah!” both girls said in unison, their voices filled with enthusiasm.

The woman handed them each a colorful flyer. “Here’s a map and some basic rules. The changing rooms are just through those doors. Enjoy yourselves!”

After paying for their entry, the girls walked toward the changing area, their footsteps echoing on the tiled floor. The entrance hall was a bustling hub of activity, filled with shops and food stalls. The size of the place was overwhelming, and the directions from the lady were greatly appreciated.

Emma and Amy headed into the women’s changing room and found themselves in a large space divided into two areas. The room was filled with the sound of laughter and the rustling of clothes.

“Oh wow, this looks like our school locker room,” Amy said, nodding toward the rows of benches and lockers, her voice a mix of awe and nervousness.

“Yeah, except ten times cleaner and with better lighting,” Emma replied, her tone more confident. “Look, they’ve even got private stalls over there if you want.”

It was still quite early, so the place wasn’t very crowded yet, though a few women and girls were in various stages of getting changed. The air was filled with a mix of excitement and anticipation.

“There’s already people here?” Amy asked, glancing around, her eyes wide with surprise.

“Early birds,” Emma said with a smirk. “They probably wanted to grab the best chairs by the pools.”

Just then, Emma noticed something across the room and grinned, nudging Amy. Amy followed her gaze to a young woman crouched beside her toddler son.

The boy stood on a bench, while his mother was in the process of stripping him down. The mom gave him directions to turn this and that way for her, but he seemed to be too distracted, his eyes fixed on another woman changing into her bathing suit.

The funny part was the way he was staring at the sight of the topless woman, his eyes wide with awe. The woman seemed to be oblivious to the little boy, but his mom certainly wasn’t. She looked slightly annoyed about him not helping her change himself.

This whole scene was funny as it was, but when the mother pulled down the young boy’s underpants, Emma and Amy broke out in loud laughter. The boy’s little pecker had sprung up from being pulled down by the underpants’ waistband. It now pointed almost straight up at the ceiling.

The girls, who both had brothers, were aware of penises and their ability to get stiff at often random times. Such a sight was hilarious to them, nonetheless.

The little boy looked completely oblivious to his state as he only had eyes for the half-naked woman in front of him. His mom was ignoring his innocent and involuntary show of interest in the other woman. Instead, she made him step into his pirate-themed swim bottoms and pulled them up and over his small erection. As quickly as that, the show was over.

Amy made the first move to enter one of the many private changing stalls. She was about to close its door when Emma shoved herself inside the same small space. Amy was a little surprised by that, her eyebrows raising in question.

“Oh, umm… Don’t you want your own stall?”

“I’m fine changing together. We’re friends now after all. And friends change together all the time. I always change with my other friends. Don’t you?” Emma asked, her tone casual but with an underlying hint of challenge.

Amy blushed a little, her cheeks turning a shade of pink. “You are the only friend I made since my family moved. The last time I changed with someone else was way back when me and my siblings were much younger.” she explained, visibly self-conscious about the thought of changing in front of Emma.

“Is this a problem then? If you want, I take another stall. I don’t care too much. I just thought you would be cool with that.” Emma said, giving Amy a look that almost signaled disappointment.

Amy felt pressured now. She didn’t want to risk her newly acquired friendship with Emma about this issue. Even though she still felt very self-conscious about her nudity, Amy decided to swallow the pill. “No, it’s okay. I’m just not used to it, that’s all.”

“Cool, let’s quickly get changed then. I want to see these slides!” Emma exclaimed, her enthusiasm contagious.

Both girls began to strip out of their clothes. Since it had been quite hot that day, Amy wore a light pink summer dress, while Emma had chosen to wear a crop top and shorts combo.

Amy was just done taking her clothes off by stepping out of her panties when she noticed that Emma was already standing in her lime green bikini right next to her. She looked so beautiful in it. “Wow, you’re quick.”

“I wore this under my normal clothes. It’s much easier and a lot faster that way.” Emma explained, looking down at Amy, who was bent over her bag searching for her own swimsuit.

Amy felt a little stupid for not thinking of dressing in her swimsuit this morning too.

Meanwhile, Emma mustered her friend’s naked body from the side. Compared to herself, Amy was more petite and less developed. She seemed to be just entering puberty. Her overall appearance reminded you more of a little girl still.

Emma, being younger by two months, started puberty shortly after she turned eleven. She’d been one of the first girls in her class to grow boobs. Amy, on the other hand, was a late-bloomer.

She was shorter than Emma, had thinner arms and legs and lacked the slight curves that Emma already showed. Only Amy’s small but well-toned butt stood out on her otherwise flat body.

Emma couldn’t resist and gave Amy a light but firm smack on her left butt-cheek, which echoed through the air and made Amy jump in surprise. She turned to face Emma, rubbing her behind.

“Hey, what was that for?” Amy said, her voice a mix of confusion and amusement.

Emma shrugged, her eyes roaming up and down Amy’s naked front side until they stopped at her crotch. Her eyes grew wide.

“Cool, you’ve got some pubes!” Emma exclaimed with enthusiasm, her voice certainly loud enough for people outside the stall to overhear.

Surprised by her friend’s comment, Amy looked down her own body. Just a few months ago, Amy had still been completely bare and hairless, while most of her peers in school had at least some pubes.

Then finally, the finest dusting of small blonde hair appeared. It was almost invisible, though. If you didn’t know it existed, you had a hard time noticing it at all.

A few days ago Amy noticed for the very first time that she was growing a handful longer and more noticeable hairs around the top of her vagina. She felt a lot of excitement and relief to finally catch up to all the other girls.

In private, Amy was very proud of her newly acquired pubic hair but now that someone else was paying attention to it, she felt a little embarrassed. Amy blushed at Emma for pointing it out like that turning away from her sight.

“Don’t look, it’s weird.” Amy said, holding one hand between her legs to shield herself from view.

“Don’t be silly. It’s totally normal for friends to share these things. Here, take a look at me.”

Amy turned her head and saw Emma moving one hand to her bikini bottom’s waistband, pulling it down. Amy’s eyes went wide when Emma exposed herself. But to Amy’s complete surprise, she had no hair at all!

“I thought you had pubes.” Amy said, visibly confused.

“Yep.”

“But there is none.”

“That’s because I shave. Everyday.”

“Why?”

“I think it looks much neater, and it feels so much better when I… you know.” Emma said, grinning at Amy, while her second hand made circular motions, hovering over her vagina.

“Oh.” was all Amy could say, entranced by the sight she was given. She knew about masturbation. Well, the concept of it. She even experimented a little herself recently, but she hasn’t taken it very far yet.

For some reason, Amy couldn’t take her eyes off her friend’s bare charms. Even though she obviously has seen other girls’ vaginas lots of times in other changing rooms, she was still very curious about how she compared to Emma.

Amy noticed some differences. Emma’s outer lips looked thicker and puffier hiding everything behind them, including her clitoral hood, which peeked through only at the very top. Amy’s hood on the other hand was bigger and much more prominent while her smaller lips were neatly tucked away between her legs so that they didn’t show as much.

“Hey, quit staring you perv!” Emma said in a mocking tone. Amy was torn from her thoughts. She felt caught. Had she been staring?

But then Emma laughed, pulling her bottoms back into place. “I’m just messing with you! But we should stop wasting more time. Go on and put your swimsuit on.”

Amy nodded, trying to smile at Emma’s small prank, and resumed the search for her swimsuit. But there was a problem. No matter how hard she tried finding it, there was no swimsuit. Her heart sank as she realized the gravity of the situation.

“I, uh… I can’t find my swimsuit. I went through my whole bag. It’s not there.” Amy confessed, her voice trembling with anxiety.

“Shut up. You didn’t bring your swimsuit?” Emma said in disbelief. She looked in her friend’s bag to make sure it really wasn’t there.

“No, I definitely put it in my bag. It must’ve fallen out at some point. Maybe it’s in your mom’s car still.”

“This is bad, Amy.”

“I know. Let’s call your mom.”

“That won’t do anything. She’s at that stupid meeting today, remember? She won’t return for us any time soon.”

After going through the bag herself, Emma came to the same conclusion as Amy. The swimsuit was not in there.

“Hey, how much money do we have? Maybe it’s enough to go buy a new swimsuit from one of the shops here.” Amy suggested, her tone hopeful.

Both girls pulled out their purses and together they had about twenty bucks. “That’s not enough. I saw some of the prices when we went inside and the cheapest I saw were like double that.” Emma said. Amy felt crushed.

Both girls sighed. They were silently thinking. Amy felt very bad for seemingly losing her swimsuit. This could ruin their whole day, and it would be her fault. But suddenly Amy saw a change in her friend’s demeanor as if she had an idea. “What is it?” Amy asked with renewed hope.

“Well, I might have the solution, but you won’t like it. It might be the only way to get your butt into the water today, though.” Emma said with a smirk.

“Ok?” Amy felt a resurgence of hope.

“Why don’t you just go in your underwear?” Emma suggested.

This caught Amy off guard. “What? Are you kidding? I can’t do that!” Amy said in total disbelief.

“Why not, though?” Emma asked, her tone challenging.

“No one does! It would be like… the worst!”

“Wait, think about it for a minute. Isn’t a bikini just like a bra and panties? Most people wouldn’t even notice the difference!” Emma argued, her voice filled with conviction.

“Yeah, except I don’t wear bras yet and my panties are… well… I wouldn’t want anyone to see me in those.” Amy said, pointing at the pair of pink panties with cartoon princesses on them, her voice filled with embarrassment.

“Okay. I agree that you shouldn’t wear yours, but I’ve got spare panties that might fit you and I think they’d look cute on you, too. Here, try them on.” Emma said, handing Amy a pair she pulled from her own bag.

Amy immediately noticed the very light weight. She barely even felt them laying in her hands. The material was very thin.

The panties were plain white and had a strange cut. Amy stepped into them and pulled them up, frowning. There was no waistband at all—nor any leg elastics. It almost looked like someone had trimmed them away.

Luckily, even though the panties might have been half a size too large on her, they didn’t slide down and fit her well. Due to their lightweight nature, the bit of friction they had on Amy’s skin was just enough to hold them in place.

Aside from the missing waistband and the resulting low cut, the panties looked like a regular bikini bottom. Amy felt that her butt cheeks were half-exposed, though. Something she wasn’t used to. Her own swimsuits always covered everything.

“I guess they’re fine. They feel nice.” Amy admitted, her voice hesitant.

“I know, right?” Emma said, her tone encouraging.

“But that only solves half my problems.” Amy said, pointing up at her chest, her voice filled with worry.

Emma rolled her eyes and said: “Oh my god Amy, those are so small, no one will notice them. Most people will think you’re just a little girl running around topless and that’s nothing special.”

Amy’s head instantly turned deep red as she felt embarrassed by Emma’s rude remark. She had to admit that her friend wasn’t wrong, though. Her “breasts” were nothing more than two tiny mounds the size of half a lime at most. They barely even elevated from her chest.

But atop these small buds sat her nipples, which Amy was most self-conscious about. They’ve grown to be very puffy and prominent recently.

Her areolae formed small, elevated mounds on her buds and in their center her pointy nipples always stood proud. Their pink color was in stark contrast to her otherwise fair skin tone. They caught all the attention.

“Look, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to be rude like that. I’d give you my bra, but I think this would just look silly. Your only option is to go topless.” Emma explained, her tone gentle but firm.

Amy was struggling. But she had to agree that wearing Emma’s A-cup bra would just look weird. But going topless? She couldn’t imagine that. “You want me to go out like this? I could never… I mean… I can’t…” Amy stammered, her voice filled with panic.

“You’ve got to, though.” Emma insisted, leaving no room for argument.

“Uh, I think I will just wait while you go without me. I can’t do that.” Amy said nervously, her voice trembling.

“No. If you don’t go, I won’t either. It wouldn’t be any fun without you anyway.” Emma told Amy, her tone final.

“But… then both our days would be ruined.” Amy said, her voice filled with desperation.

“I know…” Emma said.

“Look, when I was on vacation in France last year, I saw countless women and even girls our age going topless on the beach. It is the most normal thing over there. No one will care about a young girl like you being topless anyway.”

Amy’s mind was in conflict. On the one hand, she felt responsible for not bringing or losing her swimsuit, and on the other hand, she was absolutely frightened by the idea of going topless in public. There was a moment of silence where Amy was weighing her options, her heart racing with anxiety.

“Fine, I’ll do it. I don’t want to ruin your day too.” Amy finally said in defeat, her voice filled with resignation.

“Yay! You’re the best!” Emma squeaked and grabbed her friend in a tight hug. Emma felt Amy’s nipples press into her upper body. Their pokey nature was undeniable; a stark reminder of the decision Amy had just made.
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Reminds me of "A Day At The Rec Center" by moonlight that I can't find anymore. Looking forward to see where this goes. Good start!
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Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 1 07/17/25

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jojo12026 wrote: Fri Jul 18, 2025 1:57 pm Reminds me of "A Day At The Rec Center" by moonlight that I can't find anymore. Looking forward to see where this goes. Good start!
Hey, thanks for the reply. I don't know this story. At least I don't remember reading it.
Regarding my own story, I only plan like a few chapters ahead and everything beyond will work itself out. I'm a noob at writing, so every piece of criticism is valuable to me. I'm glad you enjoy it so far!
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Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 2 07/28/25

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Chapter 2 – Emma’s lie



“Ok, ready?” Emma asked, still hugging Amy tightly. The shorter girl nodded slowly. Emma released her half-naked friend and looked her in the eye, giving her a reassuring smile before reaching for the stall’s door.

But before she could open it, Amy grabbed her by the wrist. “Wait!” she said in panic. Amy’s mind raced. Her hug with Emma had made her even more aware of her exposed chest. She wasn’t sure anymore. Could she go through with it? What if she got into trouble? What if people called the police? What would her parents say?

“What? You said you would do it.” Emma reminded Amy, noticing the terror in her eyes. Amy blushed and held one arm over her chest, her whole body slightly trembling

“I... I don’t know, Em. I don’t know if I can do it.” Amy admitted, her voice quivering. Her eyes darted around the stall, avoiding Emma’s gaze.

“Well, not like this.” Emma replied, grabbing Amy’s arm and pulling it down to her side with a firm but gentle touch. “You better not walk around with your arm like that. People will see and wonder why you are acting all weird. Just don’t cause people to look at you.” She told Amy, her tone strict.

Amy’s body felt weak. Here she was about to leave the changing stall in nothing but panties. She felt the pressure that was on her, and it took everything she had not to cry, but she had to pull herself together.

“Okay. I think I can do it.” she said, her voice barely above a whisper.

“Are you sure?”

After a long, shaky sigh, Amy finally said, “Yes.”

Emma gave her friend one last smile and then opened the door. Both girls felt a light breeze of cool air hit them. Amy immediately got goosebumps, and as she looked down at her chest, she saw her nipples poke out.

“Come on, let’s go.” Emma said, leaving the stall. She noticed that Amy wasn’t moving and so she grabbed her by the wrist, pulling her along with a sense of urgency.

Amy almost stumbled out of the stall, but the first hurdle was finally taken. She was topless in public. Kind of, because the women’s changing room could hardly be considered a public space. At least not as public as the main pool area would be.

The girls walked over to one of the many rows of lockers where both put their bags away. All they had on them now were two towels and their flip-flops.

Suddenly, someone approached them from behind.

“Morning girls! What a pleasant surprise to meet you here.” A familiar female voice said.

Both girls turned to see who it was. They were greeted by the sight of Ms. Hendrix, the young assistant swim coach from their school swim class.

Amy froze in shock. Her heart pounded in her chest, and the urge to cover her chest was about to overpower her resolve to look unsuspicious. Her face flushed a deep red, and she could feel the heat rising in her cheeks.

“Oh, hello. Nice to see you, Ms. Hendrix.” Emma said politely, her tone casual and unaffected.

The young woman was always super nice to her students, and everyone liked her, especially the boys. At 23 years old, she was the youngest faculty member at their school and taught swim class alongside old Mr. Rudy, who wasn’t quite as popular.

She was also super attractive. At least that’s what all the girls agreed on. She was beautiful, athletic, and had big boobs, which always looked so good in the swimsuits she wore at swim class.

“It’s always a great idea to go for a swim, isn’t it girls?” the swim coach asked jokingly, her eyes flickering briefly over Amy’s exposed chest before returning to their faces.

“Yeah, but we’re here for the slides!” Emma blurted out, her enthusiasm genuine.

Ms. Hendrix smiled. She then leaned forward and whispered, “Me too. And you guys can call me Kim outside school hours, I don’t mind.”

The girls nodded at the offer. Amy still felt very uncomfortable, though. Here she was, standing half-naked, bare-chested in front of their very attractive assistant swim coach. But for some strange reason, Ms. Hendrix didn’t seem to even take notice of it. Or at least she didn’t care.

“Well, I’ve still got to change, and I don’t want to waste anyone’s time, so I will let you guys have fun now. See ya later maybe!” she said and left the girls to themselves.

Emma turned to her friend. “See? Just behave normal and you’ll be fine.”

“I can’t believe she didn’t notice.” Amy said, dumbfounded, her voice barely a whisper. She slowly relaxed from the sudden shock of meeting her swim coach like this.

Emma just shrugged. “Whatever. Come on, let’s go.”

Taking her by the wrist again, Emma pulled Amy towards the changing room’s exit. Amy’s nervousness was like a roller-coaster. After the encounter with Ms. Hendrix, she felt relief, but now as the two came closer to stepping outside the relative safety of the women’s changing room, she felt even more anxious than before!

But Emma was relentless and made Amy follow her outside the changing room. She noticed Amy’s reluctance, but she knew that she had to take the lead.

They crossed the room in no time, and just like that, they stood outside the changing room. They now were inside a short but spacious hallway that had three ways to go.

At one end were the entryways to the two changing rooms, and on the other side was a big sliding door with a sign above reading “Pools.”

The girls made their way down the hallway, but just before they reached the big sliding door, it suddenly opened, and a group of five teenage kids came through.

There were two girls and three boys, and they were loudly chatting with each other.

“Yeah, let’s get some pizza, I’m starving!” – “Hey, did you try that green curly slide?” – “No, but the one with the rafts is fun!”

Amy felt her heart skip a beat when she realized that those older kids would see her, especially the boys. Topless. Half naked.

She felt her stomach tighten from the nervousness. But to her surprise she also felt small jolts of excitement rush through her veins and electric tingles originate from deep inside.

Amy didn’t expect these emotions and just like before she felt embarrassment overpower her. She lowered her eyes to not encounter the other kids’ looks. She then noticed that her nipples began to stiffen. “Not now!” she thought in distress.

At first the group seemed to not even register Amy at all until they were about to pass each other.

Suddenly, one of the girls from the other group stopped dead in her tracks. She’d noticed Amy’s lack of coverage and made the rest of her group aware.

They began whispering to each other. Amy then heard them giggle and laugh. Her pace quickened as she felt her head heat up from blushing.

They finally reached the sliding door, and it opened for them automatically. They stepped into the huge main building with all the pools and slides.

The sliding doors then closed behind them and Amy felt relieved again to have escaped that embarrassing situation.

Both girls just stood and looked around in amazement. From the inside, everything looked even bigger! There were already many people swimming, walking around, and laying on one of the many loungers spread all over the place.

The level of noise was overwhelming. There was some Caribbean music that was playing, kids screeching, parents shouting, and lifeguards whistling. Amy felt her heart race faster. But this time from pure excitement for this place.

“Woah, Amy, look over there! See that slide? It’s the biggest I’ve ever seen!” Emma said, pointing toward a truly impressive slide.

Amy was just as taken aback as her friend, so much so that she almost forgot that she was topless in public. But that would change almost immediately.

“Excuse me, girls. Where are your parents?”

A female lifeguard stood right next to them. She was dressed in a bright red swimsuit and white shorts. The swimsuit had the waterpark’s logo and a name tag on it.

Apparently, the lifeguard’s name was Zarah. With a friendly smile, she looked right at Amy, who felt all her nervousness and the pressure return in an instant. Her cheeks flushed, and she could feel the lifeguard’s gaze on her bare chest, making her want to shrink into herself.

“They’re not with us. It’s just the two of us.” Emma answered truthfully, her tone confident and unapologetic.

“I see. The reason I ask is that children under the age of ten must be supervised by an adult around here.” the beautiful woman explained, her eyes flickering back to Amy’s chest before meeting her gaze again.

“We are both twelve.” Emma told her. She looked so confident, Amy thought.

“Is that so?” The lifeguard gave Amy a look of suspicion, her brow furrowing. “You see, I have a hard time believing that. I’ve never met a twelve-year-old girl going to the pools dressed like that. Without a top on I mean. Only little children ever do that. How old are you really?”

Amy felt the woman’s eyes burn on her skin. The look she gave her was too much to bear, so she looked down at her feet, her toes, painted in a cute pink, curling in her flip-flops.

“I... I...” Amy stammered, her voice trembling. She tried to tell the lifeguard that it was true. That she was twelve, almost thirteen in fact. But embarrassment overcame her. She couldn't speak.

The fact that this woman obviously suspected her of lying about her age, because she looked like a little girl to her, was the worst. It was so humiliating.

In that moment, Amy hoped for the ground to just open and swallow her so she could escape this terrible situation. But thankfully, something else happened.

“Hello Miss. I’m Kim Hendrix. These girls are my students. I’m their swim coach. Is there a problem?” Ms. Hendrix asked, standing behind Emma and Amy, her voice calm and authoritative.

“Well, I’m in the process of finding out about their ages. They claim to be twelve. But I have grounds to believe that at least she is lying to me.” the lifeguard said pointing directly at Amy.

“Oh. Let me be of help. I can see that you are just doing your job, but you are incorrect. Both girls visit my swim class, and I can confirm that they’re as old as they claim. I can see, though, why one would think that little Amy here is a bit younger. Let me assure you that she’s just a bit of a late bloomer.” Kim Hendrix explained, her tone gentle but firm.

The lifeguard looked somewhat puzzled, and her eyes went back and forth between the young girl and her supposed swim coach, who also looked suspiciously young.

“Well, in that case, there is another problem, I’m afraid. The rules about swim attire for girls are quite strict.”

The lifeguard let her eyes linger on Amy’s chest. She cleared her throat before carrying on.

“They state that any girl with obvious chest development must wear something to cover said... uh... development.” With that, she pointed directly at Amy’s chest, her finger only inches away.

Being called out like that and having all the attention drawn to her naked chest, Amy felt unbelievably embarrassed, and the urge to cover up became too strong. She used her left arm to shield her tiny breast buds as good as possible, her hand trembling.

“Excuse me, but you can’t be serious. You are telling me that Amy’s naked chest is in offense to one of your rules? I mean, yes. She has begun to develop up there, but if you look closely, you must admit that it’s hardly anything at all.” Ms. Hendrix argued, raising her voice in annoyance. She looked directly at Amy, whose face had become beet red in humiliation, her eyes welling up with tears.

“Put your arm down, Amy. Show that lady what I mean.” Ms. Hendrix said, her tone gentle but insistent.

Amy felt paralyzed, but then Emma stepped in and helped her put her arm down. Amy felt like running, but where to? Back into the changing room? Could she make it?

“See here? There is barely any breast tissue. You call that problematic?” Kim Hendrix asked the lifeguard, pointing at Amy’s chest, her voice laced with frustration.

The lifeguard seemed quite uneasy, but she stood firm. “The rules are there for a reason, lady. Besides, that girl might not have a lot of breast tissue yet, but her... well her nipples are more than enough reason to have her cover up.”

Now Ms. Hendrix looked like she was about to explode. “Listen lady, I’m seeing boys and men walk around at places like these, who have bigger tits than any of my young female students and they never get into trouble for that. Let me talk to your supervisor immediately!”

The lifeguard seemed overwhelmed with the young woman’s reaction. She was new at this job and didn’t quite know how to deal with such a problem. So she just sighed and pulled out a radio. She spoke some words into it and then told Ms. Hendrix and the girls to wait a minute or two.

So they did, and the whole time the lifeguard’s eyes went back and forth between Ms. Hendrix and Amy. All Amy could do was stare at her feet and hope for all of this to end. While they waited, no one said a word, the tension in the air palpable.

Finally, a middle-aged woman wearing a staff polo shirt and shorts walked up to the group. Amy noticed a small but colorful tattoo of an eagle with a crown on its head and a bunny in its fangs on one of her ankles. Amy felt like she’d seen this exact motive somewhere before.

“Hello and welcome to Splash Planet. I’m Erna Perkins, the water safety supervisor for this place.” the woman said towards Ms. Hendrix and the girls. Turning to the lifeguard she asked: “Zarah, what is the matter?”

Before the lifeguard could give an answer, though, Ms. Hendrix intervened.

“Nice to meet you. My name is Kim Hendrix and these two are my students.” she stated taking a step towards the supervisor offering a handshake. Amy noticed that Ms. Hendrix oddly offered her left hand instead of her right. To her surprise the supervisor didn’t seem to mind and did the same.

“Your lifeguard claims that little Amy over here is not allowed to swim topless.” Ms. Hendrix then said briefly pointing at Amy.

“I see. We have rules concerning female attire in our pools. Any breast development must be covered. She might be just starting to develop, but it's clearly in violation of said rule.”

“Yes, we can all agree on that Amy’s nipples are standing out. Especially now. I mean, she's probably cold from just standing here the whole time. But I must ask you what the waterpark’s stance is on equality between the sexes. When I see boys and men with their tits hanging out walk around this place, I only see a double standard. Won’t you agree?”

The lifeguard and her supervisor looked at each other. The latter had a calm demeanor while she listened to Ms. Hendrix, her eyes thoughtful.

“Of course, our waterpark prides itself with the highest standards of progressive values. Equality is of special concern to us.”

Suddenly, Emma stepped forward, pointing at Amy. “Her family is from France, and over there, women go topless in public all the time. Most are nudists even. It’s their culture.”

This was a complete fabrication on Emma’s part, but Ms. Hendrix didn’t seem to know or care, and she just went with it, her eyes widening.

“So, in that case, it could be considered discriminatory to not let Amy go topless, right? Not only would you discriminate against women but also against a different culture. To some, nudism is an integral part of life. It’s like a religion. Oh man, I can already see all the court cases make it into the news.”

Oddly enough the supervisor not only seemed amused but also to be in agreement as she nodded at these words. Her lips curling into a slight smile.

“Now, hold on. Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. I can see that this issue is very important to you, and considering that her development has just started, I’m inclined to let everything slide. As I said, the last thing we want is to discriminate against anyone. We respect different cultures and lifestyles and are a proud supporter of women’s rights and the queer-community.”

Amy saw that even Zarah the lifeguard looked surprised by her supervisor’s reaction.

“I’m glad to hear that. You should consider updating your rules, though. Because I’m sure Amy will want to visit your waterpark like that again, and we can’t have this conversation every single time.” Ms. Hendrix advised, her tone firm but polite.

The lady nodded in agreement. “I will see to it. I can’t make promises because the leadership can still be quite conservative at times, but you’ve made good points, and the current rules can certainly be interpreted to be in violation of our anti-discrimination policies. I promise that on the next board meeting, I will make some suggestions.”

Ms. Hendrix had a look of satisfaction on her face as she thanked the woman, who she shook hands with again.

“I will inform all our staff to not bother your student about her attire anymore. For today, I will need her to wear these for easy recognition, though. This way, my staff understands who the girl in question is.”

The supervisor held up four bright pink slap bracelets. Those plastic things with a metal core, which wrap around when you slap them on something.

Everyone watched as Emma took the bracelets and began to put them on both Amy’s wrists and ankles. They were about two inches wide and wrapped around Amy tightly. They had the same color as Amy’s toenails.

“We usually use them for kids whose parents want our lifeguards to have an eye out because they’re non-swimmers or still learning to swim.”

“Thanks for your understanding. I’m glad we agreed on everything.” Ms. Hendrix said, her tone now very friendly and relaxed.

“Me too. I’m sorry for your inconvenience and hope you three have a lot of fun on our slides.” the supervisor said.

The three women said goodbye, and the lifeguard and her supervisor went their way, leaving Amy, Emma, and Ms. Hendrix standing there, the pink bracelets a stark contrast against Amy’s pale skin.

“Thanks, Kim. You’re so cool!” Emma said with glee, her eyes sparkling. She elbowed Amy to say something, too.

“Yeah, thanks.” Amy quietly said, her voice barely audible. She was just glad that she would be left alone for now. Even though she now had to wear four bright pink bracelets, which would make her stand out big time.

“Oh no worries, girls. It was a pleasure to help you out. And Amy; I’m glad I learned about your nudism. Half my family lives as nudists, and my great-grandfather was French, too! What a coincidence.”

“I’m... not... I mean I don’t...” Amy stammered, trying to correct her teacher on the obvious mix-up. But for some reason, she wasn’t able to, her mind numb and confused.

“She runs around naked all the time! Especially at home and even sometimes in their backyard. I think I’ve seen her naked more than in clothes to be honest.” Emma lied, her tone very convincing.

Amy snapped her head at her friend. What? Why would she make up such a lie? What was she thinking? But again, Amy wasn’t prepared to deny this in any way.

“Wow, that’s brave. Hey, if you like, I’ll invite you over to my place at some point, and we can have a little pool party in my backyard. I’ve seen you girls walk to school a couple of times, I think we live quite close to each other.” Ms. Hendrix offered, her eyes shining with enthusiasm.

“That’s awesome! We’d love to.” Emma said in joy, her grin wide and genuine. Amy however, felt a knot form in her stomach. She was torn between the friendly energy between Ms. Hendrix and them and the discomfort of the situation and Emma’s lie. Her mind raced with questions, and she found herself at a loss for words, her usual chattiness replaced by a sense of unease.

When Ms. Hendrix finally said goodbye to the girls and walked off to go find a lounger, Amy gave Emma a questioning look.

“What? A little lie never hurt anyone and I thought it would be funny!” Emma said laughing.

Amy didn’t share Emma’s amusement at all but before she could reply she got pulled along by her friend who led the way to the biggest pool.

In that moment, Amy felt like a little sister being guided by an older, more confident sibling.
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Re: Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 2 07/28/25

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Very enjoyable chapter! I loved the interaction with the Swim Coach and the Pool Staff. Kim's logic was very unexpected, and I loved it. You have set up some amazing opportunities for Amy in the future. I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Great story! Thanks for posting I am also a big fan of the Erica story and am anxious to see where this goes.
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Thank you for the chapter 2

It is indeed a good story and I am looking forward for the next chapter. It should be very interesting and exciting in the next chapter.
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An excellent story and read so far. Lots of possibilities could be opened up. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Wonder if this'll lead to Amy being naked in Ms. Hendrix so she can experience her nudist lifestyle without fear
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