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[Sanford7727]

Nice premise. This very much reminds me of that other story where a girl ends up topless at a water park. I like that this one is more paced out and not so fast moving. I think one or two bracelets on her wrist would probably suffice, rather than making her wear four (that seems excessive and will make for tacky tanlines around her beautiful ankles - she should have her toenails painted pink, or something to make it even hotter). I cannot wait for those panties to get wet and see through, and I am genuinely curious if they will even stay on, once she starts going down those water jet slides. How many kids from school will show up? How many male classmates will be there? Lots to look forward too, for sure.

[Enfishot]

I'm loving the story. Looking forward to future chapters. I wonder if her friend will have ENF moments. Welcome aboard!

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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[Hooked6]

The tension in Chapter Three is marvelous! I love the addition of Val and her minions. I hope that trio will figure prominently in the future. Looking forward to the next chapter (which I hope will be soon, )

Hooked6

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[Debbifan]

I'm loving the story. Looking forward to future chapters. I wonder if her friend will have ENF moments. Welcome aboard!

I asked that myself too

Excellent chapter. For me, I always prefer when it is just the one unfortunate protagonist i.e. Amy. Emma seems too street smart to get caught out ?

[MGS]

I always prefer when it is just the one unfortunate protagonist

Same 100%. Definitely much prefer when it is just the one, main girl who is the only one who is the ENF.

[Somebody]

Particularly when they have this kind of dynamic. There are times when it's fun for others to join in enf, but this is not one of those scenarios

[superevil7]

Fun story so far! I was wondering the entire time if Amy was going to orgasm while going down the slide, lol. I'm glad she's lost her panties. Larson is a great last name for her

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

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