Amy - Losing Control - Chapter 6 01/19/26

[Sanford7727]

I cannot wait for her to be forced to walk around like that in front of everyone. And with her coochy swollen up and excited like that. It will be soooo hot! Her hair and body will be all soaking wet too. Nothing but water spots and perky hard nipples sticking out. Amazing stuff.

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

Sorry, no new chapter yet, but a little update.

First of all, thanks everyone, who participated in the poll. I like the idea of involving my readers in the creation of my work at least to some degree. You guys have spoken and most of you want the AI-images. I already have created visual representations of some of the story's characters and I think they came out great.

Now to the less amazing part:
The last weeks were tough on me and I had very little time to spend on writing. And when there was some, I didn't feel in the mood.
Due to personal problems, which aren't very severe, I didn't have the capacity to continue Amy's story at all.
Slowly, I feel like I can get back to it and resume writing. Please understand that I'm not able to pump out a new chapter in a consistent rhythm like some other great authors. I really need to be able to focus 100% on the story while writing and this not always the case for me.

Thanks again for your nice comments and advice.

Here is a little compensation for having to wait so long:


Ms. Hendrix

First rule of writing for a forum such as this; write what you want to write and would like to read. Don't try to cater for everyone's preferences, they are bound to vary. Some prefer instant gratification, some like the slow burn and build up of tension. I am in the latter camp and so very much enjoy and look out for a continuation of your story while ignoring others that are not to my taste.

It was nice that Amy got a surge of pleasure from the water jets but I can't help hoping that Val and her cronies have a few tricks to play ! She may regret not having the nerve to admit to the boys that the panties were hers ?

I'm glad you enjoy reading Amy's story. Chapter 5 will most likely answer those questions of yours.
And you're right. Trying to cater to everyone will leave more people unsatisfied. I still hope for lots of feedback in the future though. Even if it's negative. It's invaluable to me as I feel like I can learn so much from others.

I totally agree with Debbiefan. I too love your slow but ever-increasing tension that you are building in this story and the mental visuals you create are just marvelous. I also truly like Valerie and her minions.

You asked earlier if your pacing was okay and whether the venue you are dwelling on in these chapters was still interesting. I must tell you that I am truly loving the story and, as Debbifan already pointed out, you should write what pleases you. Write the story you want to write. Your instincts in this area seem right on target.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter and learning what the girls have in mind for Amy.

Hooked6

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Wow, thanks. Your words mean a lot to me.
Sorry for the long wait. It'll still take some time, which sucks but I'll do my best to make chapter 5 worth the wait.

I'm surprised the boys didn't use their goggles to check underwater themselves

ME TOO! But perhaps they did and didn't make it obvious. Or they simply were too distracted to think of that...

I cannot wait for her to be forced to walk around like that in front of everyone. And with her coochy swollen up and excited like that. It will be soooo hot! Her hair and body will be all soaking wet too. Nothing but water spots and perky hard nipples sticking out. Amazing stuff.

You meanie!

[jojo12026]

Lisa the story is great so far. RL comes first. We understand that writing is hard. Thats why there are more readers than authors. Always want more chapters, but take what you can provide. KrylB stories and the Erica stories are great and generate many rereads.
BTW Ms Hendrix is a hottie. Looking forward to Emma and Amy..

[mikewozere]

Just write for yourself and hope someone else likes it too. I always write a complete story and then publish it in parts; that way I don't feel pressured (by myself or others).

[MGS]

Sorry to hear you have been having a tough few weeks. Hopefully things are started looking better for you. Whenever you are ready, I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

[elysianempire]

Wonderful story! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope those panties stay lost forever . I also hope the rest of her clothes go missing too! I'm wondering if Val will pull something before the day is over.

That'll be nice. Even better if Emma told her mom about Amy's choice to become a nudist. Leading towards her being naked all the time, especially if Amy's parent become to supportive of Amy's "choice". Or it could be that they find out the truth and makes Amy's become a nudist anyways as a punishment.

[superevil7]

Due to personal problems, which aren't very severe, I didn't have the capacity to continue Amy's story at all.

My heart sank when I read this at first. I thought you were saying you were no longer going to continue this story. I'm happy that I read it wrong.
I'll echo was others have said. Write what you enjoy, and your audience will find you.
Hope to see what Amy looks like next (even if it isn't in the state she's in, in the story).

[computerphoto]

maybe she will be kept naked now as punishment

[darklord66]

maybe she will be kept naked now as punishment

Yeah I agree that could end up happening

[Lisa_The_Brave_12]

Lisa the story is great so far. RL comes first. We understand that writing is hard. Thats why there are more readers than authors. Always want more chapters, but take what you can provide. KrylB stories and the Erica stories are great and generate many rereads.
BTW Ms Hendrix is a hottie. Looking forward to Emma and Amy..

Thanks for the kind words.

Just write for yourself and hope someone else likes it too. I always write a complete story and then publish it in parts; that way I don't feel pressured (by myself or others).

That would've certainly been a better approach. Oh well...

Sorry to hear you have been having a tough few weeks. Hopefully things are started looking better for you. Whenever you are ready, I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm much better, thanks. Chapter 5 will be ready this week.

Wonderful story! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope those panties stay lost forever . I also hope the rest of her clothes go missing too! I'm wondering if Val will pull something before the day is over.

That'll be nice. Even better if Emma told her mom about Amy's choice to become a nudist. Leading towards her being naked all the time, especially if Amy's parent become to supportive of Amy's "choice". Or it could be that they find out the truth and makes Amy's become a nudist anyways as a punishment.

Due to personal problems, which aren't very severe, I didn't have the capacity to continue Amy's story at all.

My heart sank when I read this at first. I thought you were saying you were no longer going to continue this story. I'm happy that I read it wrong.
I'll echo was others have said. Write what you enjoy, and your audience will find you.
Hope to see what Amy looks like next (even if it isn't in the state she's in, in the story).

Sorry for the bad wording
I'm glad so many people like to read my stuff.

maybe she will be kept naked now as punishment

Yeah I agree that could end up happening

If I was Amy, I'd be afraid to get on your bad side!