The Last Straw (new 4/5)

[fuwafuwataimu]

Whew! I've finally managed to catch up on your latest story, and boy it's a doozy!

All three of the sisters have incredibly attractive personalities, despite all being so different. It's been fantastic reading about how the girls each become gradually more and more affectionate towards and dependent upon their brother. Bea's transformation from nemesis to meek follower was particularly erotic. She's way too cute now, is that legal? Especially the descriptions of her tuning out the world around her to focus all of her attention on Frankie.

Cindy choosing of her own volition to go naked in public has the potential to surpass even Bea's cuteness, though. What a gentle and loving soul. I have a feeling that Frankie will be able to get her to let her guard down with little more than caring words and positive reinforcement. Kind brotherly guidance should have her hands at her sides in no time.

As always, looking forward to the next chapter! And I hope that one day, when we reach the end of the road trip, we get a decent epilogue about the kids' new relationships at home!

[neverdoubted]

Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!

[fuwafuwataimu]

Oh, please be assured - I will gleefully read this story for the next 10 years if you want to keep writing it for that long! Which would be quite the road trip!

[Freesub]

Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!

Glad to hear it!

[marrow324]

Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!

OK first let me say I really enjoy your series. I wish I had the disciple / skill to write like this.

Second. Yes I win one point with my imaginary betting partner ... there is very much the feeling of completing an arc here ... which would fit if the story were coming to an end ... but I was remembering your story style ... and a harness tucked away that had been suspiciously unused.

[student]

"I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!"

Let the fun begin!

[neverdoubted]

If you’re here for the harness arc, you’re about to be very happy.

[Freesub]

Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!

OK first let me say I really enjoy your series. I wish I had the disciple / skill to write like this.

Second. Yes I win one point with my imaginary betting partner ... there is very much the feeling of completing an arc here ... which would fit if the story were coming to an end ... but I was remembering your story style ... and a harness tucked away that had been suspiciously unused.

Chekhov's gun, huh?

[computerphoto]

Thank you for the kind words. Such encouragement supercharges my momentum. I don't understand why everyone is so eager to wrap things up and get home, though. I promise, the real vacation fun is just getting started!

good, think it's going to be a long vacation

[Skylar21]

Back when Mary had her pony girl experience at the corral, being displayed to that audience, Fredy stuffed a bridle or halter device into his bag when they left.

I'm hoping that thing makes another appearance.