The Degradation of Hermione (explicit content)

[mikewozere]

Hermione finds herself at the mercy of Slytherin students.
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It was late in the evening, and 3rd year Hogwarts student, Hermione Granger, stood nervously outside the plain stone wall entrance to the Slytherin common room, daring herself to say the password she'd learned while hovering around the same area the previous evening wearing the Invisibility Cloak she'd borrowed from Harry. She hadn't told Harry (or anyone else) why she needed the cloak; that would be far too embarrassing. She also didn't ask to borrow it for a second night running; that would definitely have raised too much suspicion, and anyway, being so late, she thought it wouldn't be necessary.

The Slytherin dormitories and common room were actually located under the lake. Access was gained by going through the door to the left of the main staircase in the Entrance Hall and down the stone steps that led into a labyrinth of corridors. After one last look to check that nobody was about, Hermione quietly spoke the (rather predictable) password "pureblood" and the stone wall slid open. She hesitated, peering inside, before tentatively stepping over the threshold. The common room was long and low with rough stone ceiling and walls. It was lit by green-tinted lamps hanging by chains, and carved chairs stood around a fire burning under an elaborate mantelpiece.

As she'd anticipated, the common room was deserted, and she quietly made her way across the room to the trophy cabinet and bookshelves where she expected to find what she was looking for. The door closed behind her, making rather more noise than she'd have liked. Unbeknown to her, the noise of the door had awoken Pansy Parkinson, who had been asleep in a large, green, leather armchair with its back to the door. As Hermione tiptoed across the room, Pansy sleepily glanced around one of the armchair's large wings to see who had entered the room, and was amazed to see who it was. Silently, she withdrew her wand from the inside pocket of her robes.

Oblivious to the fact that she wasn't alone, Hermione approached the bookshelf and instantly spotted what she was there for; given pride of place in the centre of the middle shelf, propped-up against the books behind it, was a moving photograph of her wearing just a white bra and white knickers. Starting from behind her, it focused on her knicker-clad rear, then pulled back to show her entire body as she turned around, only realising she was being recorded when another Gryffindor girl nudged her, whereupon she squealed and covered up with her blouse. Finally, the image started from the beginning again. It had been taken a week earlier while changing for games, by Millicent Bulstrode and her cronies. She'd tried to retrieve it straight away, and had even threatened to tell a teacher, but they'd threatened to show it to all the boys if she did. A couple of days later, however, Hermione discovered from another Slytherin girl that her photograph was on permanent display in their common room, and that all the boys had seen it. She considered telling a teacher then, but in the end decided that enough people had already seen the picture, so resolved to retrieve it herself instead. Reaching out to pick up the photograph, she heard a loud voice from behind her announce "Petrificus Totalus". Fear gripped her, realising she'd been discovered, then panic took over when she realised that she had been immobilised by the body bind spell, which freezes or petrifies the body of the victim, making it incapable of moving, except for the eyes and the breathing.

Pansy caught Hermione as she was about to topple sideways. "Hello Hermione" she sneered into her face. "We're going to have some fun with you tonight!" She leaned Hermione against the bookshelves and skipped off to the dormitories to wake the others. Seconds later, Hermione heard excited laughter from the direction of the dormitories, and seconds after that boys and girls from various years came pouring out and crowded around her, all but Pansy wearing dressing gowns. Pansy pushed her way to the front and announced "She came for this," and held up the picture of Hermione. "Let's see her in her underwear in person instead, shall we?"

Pansy's suggestion spurred the others into a frenzy. Millicent, Daphne, and Tracey grabbed Hermione and lowered her onto her back, after which there was a free-for-all as Hermione was stripped by the baying mob. She was helpless as Gregory Goyle grabbed hold of her knee-length, grey skirt, and pulled it down and off in one movement, then retrieved her wand that had been wedged into its elasticated waist. While Tracey Davis and Daphne Greengrass removed Hermione's shoes and socks, Marcus Flint and Millicent pulled off her cardigan, and then unbuttoned her blouse, but because she was so rigid, were unable to easily remove it, so Millicent simply tore it off her. With Hermione's bra exposed, Vincent Crabbe took the opportunity to grope the 14-year-old's still small, but pert breasts. In no time, Hermione lay at the feet of the horde wearing only her bra and knickers; exactly the same as in the picture she was so desperate to retrieve.

Embarrassed and humiliated, Hermione remained powerless as the Slytherin boys leered at her barely covered body; her vaginal cleft clearly visible through the flimsy material of her white knickers, and her bra only just covering her nipples. "Let's stand her up" said Terence Higgs, an older boy, grabbing hold of Hermione's right arm. He and Miles Bletchley lifted her upright again, then they dragged her over to a low table and stood her so that her calves rested against it. Everyone stood sniggering and taunting her for a short while, until Draco looked Hermione directly in the eyes and sneered "Let's finish the job!" She could see the lust in his eyes as his gaze lowered to her barely concealed vulva. A murmur of approval rippled among the crowd, and Draco nodded to Gregory, who grinned back and took out his wand.

Hermione could only watch in horror as Gregory announced "Accio bra" and felt the clasp of her bra unhooking itself. The next second her bra was off, and sailing through the air. Gregory caught it and waved it above his head in triumph while jeers and catcalls rang in Hermione's ears as she stood topless in front of the entire Slytherin house. As the girls huddled together in groups, giggling, and the boys jostled each other for the best view of Hermione's bare breasts, Draco knelt down in front of her and gently gripped the elastic of her knickers on either side of her waist. Hermione's skin crawled as she felt his hands on her, knowing what he was about to do, but powerless to stop him.

With everyone egging him on, Draco slowly pulled down Hermione's knickers. Utterly humiliated, she felt her last remaining item of clothing slipping down, slowly revealing her hairless vulva to whoops from the boys, and more mischievous giggles from the girls (pleased to see 'Little Miss Perfect' with everything on show). Once her vaginal cleft was fully revealed, Draco whipped her knickers right down to her feet, then stood up and stepped back to allow everyone a clear view. Boys' cheers filled the room as the now nude Hermione was surveyed. She wished she had pubic hair as some of the other girls had; at least that would have left her with some modesty.

"Camera!" Millicent announced, remembering she owned one, and scuttled off to the girls' dorm to fetch it. Meanwhile, Pansy set about retrieving Hermione's knickers, leaning her to her left to hook them off her right foot, then right to hook them off her left. As Gregory had done with her bra, Pansy waved Hermione's knickers above her head as she danced around her. This was the first scene that Millicent recorded on her return, after which she recorded an all-round shot of Hermione, paying particular attention to her breasts, vulva, and bottom. After she'd completed this shot, Terence pointed his wand at Hermione and said "Finite Incantatem".

Hermione could suddenly move, and immediately covered her crotch and breasts with her hands and arms (still leaving her bottom bare). She could also speak, and screamed at the top of her voice as she streaked up the common room towards the door. "Terry, what did you do that for?" Draco asked, disappointed (as were the others), that Terence appeared to be letting her go. But when she was only halfway to the door, Terence pointed his wand at her again and announced "Levicorpus".

Hermione was suddenly swept off her feet, and dangled upside-down from her ankles by some invisible force, with her head just inches from the floor. She squealed and struggled in vain, and tried to cover her modesty by wedging both of her hands between her thighs to cover her sex as the Slytherin boys crowded around her again. After watching with amusement for a while as she wriggled like a fish on a line to free herself, a few of the boys, Draco among them, pulled her hands away and held them out to the sides as some other boys pulled her legs wide apart, revealing her inner labia and clitoris. The boys leered at Hermione's most intimate parts, and as she bucked and thrashed in their hands Millicent continued to the record her degradation, including close-ups of her genitals. "Do you realise you can see every orifice Hermione's got from here, boys?" Millicent laughed. "We're only interested in this one!" Adrian Pucey laughed, pointing at Hermione's cunt.

It was while Hermione was in this most compromising of positions that Professor Snape found her as he silently entered the room while everyone was distracted by the sex show. The boys holding her froze when they realised that their head of house was present. "Professor Snape, thank goodness!" Hermione exclaimed with relief on seeing the professor (the first time she'd ever been pleased to see him). "Get me down please!" she continued. But Snape just calmly walked over and gazed at the naked girl, with her legs spread wide apart, and her genitals on show. "PLEASE HELP ME!" Hermione continued to beg, still upside-down, and very conscious of the fact that her sex was being ogled by all present. Snape ignored her pleas, and his lips curled at the edges into a trace of a smile as his eyes ran over her bare breasts. "Have her cleaned and dressed in one hour," he said, returning his gaze to Hermione's exposed crotch. "I will wipe her memory this time, but this must not be repeated, understand?" Hermione couldn't believe her ears; surely even Snape wouldn't condone the stripping of a student? Delighted, the Slytherin students nodded and murmured their agreement. Snape turned and swept out of the room, leaving a distraught Hermione in the hands of her abusers.

The Slytherin boys took Snape's words as a green light to proceed, and as soon as he had left the room, Hermione's ordeal began in earnest. Terence cast the Liberacorpus spell on Hermione (to cancel the Levicorpus spell). The boys caught her, and carried her face-up into their dorm as she thrashed and screamed for help at the top of her voice. Even while carrying her the touching began, and all of the boys had either fondled, or actually penetrated Hermione's vagina with their fingers by the time she was laid on her back in the middle of the floor, and spread-eagled.

Sobbing and defeated, with all fight finally drained from her, Hermione lay pinned to the stone floor of the boys' dorm, as the boys' hands mauled her naked body, with her sex penetrated by several fingers at once in their eagerness. Those that couldn't reach her crotch contented themselves with groping her breasts. Gregory even sucked her right nipple. Pansy, watched Hermione's debasement from the doorway for a while with a malicious grin on her face, then closed the door and joined the other girls in the common room as they collected all of Hermione's items of clothing that lay scattered around the place.

Draco was the first boy to rape Hermione. First he played the tip of his wand up and down her tight cunt lips, before easing it fully inside her. She looked down the length of her naked torso and screamed as Draco's wand violated her. He withdrew the makeshift dildo and wiped her juices on Gregory's dressing gown, amid nervous laughter from the other boys. "Hey!" Gregory complained.

Next, Draco moved Hermione's long hair that had fallen across her face in order to see her expression, then knelt between her parted thighs with his trousers around his ankles and nudged his erect cock up against her vaginal entrance, before roughly pulling her labia open and shoving it into her. Feeling Draco's penis inside her made her feel sick and so filled with revulsion that she found the energy to try and fight back again, determined to get him off, but Draco enjoyed 'riding' her as she bucked and thrashed around. With several boys holding her down, she didn't stand a chance of escaping. Both Draco and Hermione were virgins, and he was the last boy she'd ever have imagined losing hers to, but as she felt him cum filling her, she knew she just had (and in front of an audience). Once Draco had finished, he performed a Scourgify spell to clean her up, then Terence took his turn, followed by Miles. Finally, she was raped by two boys younger then her - Malcolm Baddock and Graham Pritchard.

Five minutes before the hour was up, they finally decided it was time to clean Hermione up. Draco cast a Stupefy spell on her, and because her private parts were covered in bruises, and her labia was distended, Terence cast several Episkey spells to heal her. The boys then carried her into the showers, where they held her upside-down with her legs parted to clean out her genitals. The girls helped to dry and dress her (having used a Reparo to repair her torn blouse). Snape returned almost exactly when he said he'd return, by which time Hermione was starting to come round again. After casting another Stupefy spell he used an Obliviate spell to make her forget the entire thing, followed by a memory modifying spell to make her think she'd spent the previous evening in the library. He then instructed four boys to carry her to the library, where they left hunched over a desk in a quiet corner.

The next morning Hermione awoke not knowing where she was. Lifting her head from the table she'd been asleep on, she realised that she was in the library, but had no recollection of what she'd been looking-up the previous evening, and with no books around to give her a clue, could only conclude that she'd been so tired she'd fallen asleep before even beginning.

After visiting the Gryffindor girls' dorm to get washed and changed, she went to the great hall for breakfast. Being late, all of the other students were already seated, and the Slytherin students sniggered and nudged each other as she passed. She just ignored them, believing it to be just inter-house taunting. If she'd known all the boys had seen her naked, and either raped her or watched her being raped, she'd have died of shame.

The photograph of Hermione in her underwear in the Slytherin common room that she'd been trying to steal, was instead joined by the fully nude one taken by Millicent. This was viewed regularly by Slytherin pupils of all ages. Also, the dozens of moving photographs of her were enjoyed by, and copies passed around, Slytherin students from that night onwards.

[Legoman2]

Would love to read another story like this

[Moonshine+CC21]

Hermione finds herself at the mercy of Slytherin students.
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It was late in the evening, and 3rd year Hogwarts student, Hermione Granger, stood nervously outside the plain stone wall entrance to the Slytherin common room, daring herself to say the password she'd learned while hovering around the same area the previous evening wearing the Invisibility Cloak she'd borrowed from Harry. She hadn't told Harry (or anyone else) why she needed the cloak; that would be far too embarrassing. She also didn't ask to borrow it for a second night running; that would definitely have raised too much suspicion, and anyway, being so late, she thought it wouldn't be necessary.

The Slytherin dormitories and common room were actually located under the lake. Access was gained by going through the door to the left of the main staircase in the Entrance Hall and down the stone steps that led into a labyrinth of corridors. After one last look to check that nobody was about, Hermione quietly spoke the (rather predictable) password "pureblood" and the stone wall slid open. She hesitated, peering inside, before tentatively stepping over the threshold. The common room was long and low with rough stone ceiling and walls. It was lit by green-tinted lamps hanging by chains, and carved chairs stood around a fire burning under an elaborate mantelpiece.

As she'd anticipated, the common room was deserted, and she quietly made her way across the room to the trophy cabinet and bookshelves where she expected to find what she was looking for. The door closed behind her, making rather more noise than she'd have liked. Unbeknown to her, the noise of the door had awoken Pansy Parkinson, who had been asleep in a large, green, leather armchair with its back to the door. As Hermione tiptoed across the room, Pansy sleepily glanced around one of the armchair's large wings to see who had entered the room, and was amazed to see who it was. Silently, she withdrew her wand from the inside pocket of her robes.

Oblivious to the fact that she wasn't alone, Hermione approached the bookshelf and instantly spotted what she was there for; given pride of place in the centre of the middle shelf, propped-up against the books behind it, was a moving photograph of her wearing just a white bra and white knickers. Starting from behind her, it focused on her knicker-clad rear, then pulled back to show her entire body as she turned around, only realising she was being recorded when another Gryffindor girl nudged her, whereupon she squealed and covered up with her blouse. Finally, the image started from the beginning again. It had been taken a week earlier while changing for games, by Millicent Bulstrode and her cronies. She'd tried to retrieve it straight away, and had even threatened to tell a teacher, but they'd threatened to show it to all the boys if she did. A couple of days later, however, Hermione discovered from another Slytherin girl that her photograph was on permanent display in their common room, and that all the boys had seen it. She considered telling a teacher then, but in the end decided that enough people had already seen the picture, so resolved to retrieve it herself instead. Reaching out to pick up the photograph, she heard a loud voice from behind her announce "Petrificus Totalus". Fear gripped her, realising she'd been discovered, then panic took over when she realised that she had been immobilised by the body bind spell, which freezes or petrifies the body of the victim, making it incapable of moving, except for the eyes and the breathing.

Pansy caught Hermione as she was about to topple sideways. "Hello Hermione" she sneered into her face. "We're going to have some fun with you tonight!" She leaned Hermione against the bookshelves and skipped off to the dormitories to wake the others. Seconds later, Hermione heard excited laughter from the direction of the dormitories, and seconds after that boys and girls from various years came pouring out and crowded around her, all but Pansy wearing dressing gowns. Pansy pushed her way to the front and announced "She came for this," and held up the picture of Hermione. "Let's see her in her underwear in person instead, shall we?"

Pansy's suggestion spurred the others into a frenzy. Millicent, Daphne, and Tracey grabbed Hermione and lowered her onto her back, after which there was a free-for-all as Hermione was stripped by the baying mob. She was helpless as Gregory Goyle grabbed hold of her knee-length, grey skirt, and pulled it down and off in one movement, then retrieved her wand that had been wedged into its elasticated waist. While Tracey Davis and Daphne Greengrass removed Hermione's shoes and socks, Marcus Flint and Millicent pulled off her cardigan, and then unbuttoned her blouse, but because she was so rigid, were unable to easily remove it, so Millicent simply tore it off her. With Hermione's bra exposed, Vincent Crabbe took the opportunity to grope the 14-year-old's still small, but pert breasts. In no time, Hermione lay at the feet of the horde wearing only her bra and knickers; exactly the same as in the picture she was so desperate to retrieve.

Embarrassed and humiliated, Hermione remained powerless as the Slytherin boys leered at her barely covered body; her vaginal cleft clearly visible through the flimsy material of her white knickers, and her bra only just covering her nipples. "Let's stand her up" said Terence Higgs, an older boy, grabbing hold of Hermione's right arm. He and Miles Bletchley lifted her upright again, then they dragged her over to a low table and stood her so that her calves rested against it. Everyone stood sniggering and taunting her for a short while, until Draco looked Hermione directly in the eyes and sneered "Let's finish the job!" She could see the lust in his eyes as his gaze lowered to her barely concealed vulva. A murmur of approval rippled among the crowd, and Draco nodded to Gregory, who grinned back and took out his wand.

Hermione could only watch in horror as Gregory announced "Accio bra" and felt the clasp of her bra unhooking itself. The next second her bra was off, and sailing through the air. Gregory caught it and waved it above his head in triumph while jeers and catcalls rang in Hermione's ears as she stood topless in front of the entire Slytherin house. As the girls huddled together in groups, giggling, and the boys jostled each other for the best view of Hermione's bare breasts, Draco knelt down in front of her and gently gripped the elastic of her knickers on either side of her waist. Hermione's skin crawled as she felt his hands on her, knowing what he was about to do, but powerless to stop him.

With everyone egging him on, Draco slowly pulled down Hermione's knickers. Utterly humiliated, she felt her last remaining item of clothing slipping down, slowly revealing her hairless vulva to whoops from the boys, and more mischievous giggles from the girls (pleased to see 'Little Miss Perfect' with everything on show). Once her vaginal cleft was fully revealed, Draco whipped her knickers right down to her feet, then stood up and stepped back to allow everyone a clear view. Boys' cheers filled the room as the now nude Hermione was surveyed. She wished she had pubic hair as some of the other girls had; at least that would have left her with some modesty.

"Camera!" Millicent announced, remembering she owned one, and scuttled off to the girls' dorm to fetch it. Meanwhile, Pansy set about retrieving Hermione's knickers, leaning her to her left to hook them off her right foot, then right to hook them off her left. As Gregory had done with her bra, Pansy waved Hermione's knickers above her head as she danced around her. This was the first scene that Millicent recorded on her return, after which she recorded an all-round shot of Hermione, paying particular attention to her breasts, vulva, and bottom. After she'd completed this shot, Terence pointed his wand at Hermione and said "Finite Incantatem".

Hermione could suddenly move, and immediately covered her crotch and breasts with her hands and arms (still leaving her bottom bare). She could also speak, and screamed at the top of her voice as she streaked up the common room towards the door. "Terry, what did you do that for?" Draco asked, disappointed (as were the others), that Terence appeared to be letting her go. But when she was only halfway to the door, Terence pointed his wand at her again and announced "Levicorpus".

Hermione was suddenly swept off her feet, and dangled upside-down from her ankles by some invisible force, with her head just inches from the floor. She squealed and struggled in vain, and tried to cover her modesty by wedging both of her hands between her thighs to cover her sex as the Slytherin boys crowded around her again. After watching with amusement for a while as she wriggled like a fish on a line to free herself, a few of the boys, Draco among them, pulled her hands away and held them out to the sides as some other boys pulled her legs wide apart, revealing her inner labia and clitoris. The boys leered at Hermione's most intimate parts, and as she bucked and thrashed in their hands Millicent continued to the record her degradation, including close-ups of her genitals. "Do you realise you can see every orifice Hermione's got from here, boys?" Millicent laughed. "We're only interested in this one!" Adrian Pucey laughed, pointing at Hermione's cunt.

It was while Hermione was in this most compromising of positions that Professor Snape found her as he silently entered the room while everyone was distracted by the sex show. The boys holding her froze when they realised that their head of house was present. "Professor Snape, thank goodness!" Hermione exclaimed with relief on seeing the professor (the first time she'd ever been pleased to see him). "Get me down please!" she continued. But Snape just calmly walked over and gazed at the naked girl, with her legs spread wide apart, and her genitals on show. "PLEASE HELP ME!" Hermione continued to beg, still upside-down, and very conscious of the fact that her sex was being ogled by all present. Snape ignored her pleas, and his lips curled at the edges into a trace of a smile as his eyes ran over her bare breasts. "Have her cleaned and dressed in one hour," he said, returning his gaze to Hermione's exposed crotch. "I will wipe her memory this time, but this must not be repeated, understand?" Hermione couldn't believe her ears; surely even Snape wouldn't condone the stripping of a student? Delighted, the Slytherin students nodded and murmured their agreement. Snape turned and swept out of the room, leaving a distraught Hermione in the hands of her abusers.

The Slytherin boys took Snape's words as a green light to proceed, and as soon as he had left the room, Hermione's ordeal began in earnest. Terence cast the Liberacorpus spell on Hermione (to cancel the Levicorpus spell). The boys caught her, and carried her face-up into their dorm as she thrashed and screamed for help at the top of her voice. Even while carrying her the touching began, and all of the boys had either fondled, or actually penetrated Hermione's vagina with their fingers by the time she was laid on her back in the middle of the floor, and spread-eagled.

Sobbing and defeated, with all fight finally drained from her, Hermione lay pinned to the stone floor of the boys' dorm, as the boys' hands mauled her naked body, with her sex penetrated by several fingers at once in their eagerness. Those that couldn't reach her crotch contented themselves with groping her breasts. Gregory even sucked her right nipple. Pansy, watched Hermione's debasement from the doorway for a while with a malicious grin on her face, then closed the door and joined the other girls in the common room as they collected all of Hermione's items of clothing that lay scattered around the place.

Draco was the first boy to rape Hermione. First he played the tip of his wand up and down her tight cunt lips, before easing it fully inside her. She looked down the length of her naked torso and screamed as Draco's wand violated her. He withdrew the makeshift dildo and wiped her juices on Gregory's dressing gown, amid nervous laughter from the other boys. "Hey!" Gregory complained.

Next, Draco moved Hermione's long hair that had fallen across her face in order to see her expression, then knelt between her parted thighs with his trousers around his ankles and nudged his erect cock up against her vaginal entrance, before roughly pulling her labia open and shoving it into her. Feeling Draco's penis inside her made her feel sick and so filled with revulsion that she found the energy to try and fight back again, determined to get him off, but Draco enjoyed 'riding' her as she bucked and thrashed around. With several boys holding her down, she didn't stand a chance of escaping. Both Draco and Hermione were virgins, and he was the last boy she'd ever have imagined losing hers to, but as she felt him cum filling her, she knew she just had (and in front of an audience). Once Draco had finished, he performed a Scourgify spell to clear her up, then Terence took his turn, followed by Miles. Finally, she was raped by two boys younger then her - Malcolm Baddock and Graham Pritchard.

Five minutes before the hour was up, they finally decided it was time to clean Hermione up. Draco cast a Stupefy spell on her, and because her private parts were covered in bruises, and her labia was distended, Terence cast several Episkey spells to heal her. The boys then carried her into the showers, where they held her upside-down with her legs parted to clean out her genitals. The girls helped to dry and dress her (having used a Reparo to repair her torn blouse). Snape returned almost exactly when he said he'd return, by which time Hermione was starting to come round again. After casting another Stupefy spell he used an Obliviate spell to make her forget the entire thing, followed by a memory modifying spell to make her think she'd spent the previous evening in the library. He then instructed four boys to carry her to the library, where they left hunched over a desk in a quiet corner.

The next morning Hermione awoke not knowing where she was. Lifting her head from the table she'd been asleep on, she realised that she was in the library, but had no recollection of what she'd been looking-up the previous evening, and with no books around to give her a clue, could only conclude that she'd been so tired she'd fallen asleep before even beginning.

After visiting the Gryffindor girls' dorm to get washed and changed, she went to the great hall for breakfast. Being late, all of the other students were already seated, and the Slytherin students sniggered and nudged each other as she passed. She just ignored them, believing it to be just inter-house taunting. If she'd known all the boys had seen her naked, and either raped her or watched her being raped, she'd have died of shame.

The photograph of Hermione in her underwear in the Slytherin common room that she'd been trying to steal, was instead joined by the fully nude one taken by Millicent. This was viewed regularly by Slytherin pupils of all ages. Also, the dozens of moving photographs of her were enjoyed by, and copies passed around, Slytherin students from that night onwards.

Great. I like it. Not into the rape scene myself but I can appreciate the attention to detail with the spells doing exactly what they should do. I wonder what Snape would do in that situation. I mean he let Malfoy get away with casting a soell to make her teeth grow much longer in the book so I wonder.

At first when I read it I didn't see the part where you said they redressed her so I was just picturing Hermione completely naked in the library and having to sneak back to the gryffindor common room with nothing on. I'm surprised you didn't make them break her wand or anything either. I actually saw a story on deviantart where Malfoy cast a more aggressive version of the disarming charm "expelliarmus maxima" and it destroyed her wand also her clothes.

Anyway yeah absolutely great and I'm glad you uploaded it, wouldn't mind seeing more like this if you're up for it

[TeenFan]

By a number of 90 percent I love the story.
I've been itching for a fun fantasy based story, and Hermione of the "Harry Potter" series is about as good as it gets.
I approve of the story taking place during Year 3. Very well written this one is.

The ten percent I would prefer to be different is how far the boys go in humiliating the poor girl. Insertion of a wand would have been
good enough for me. I would have liked a rape scene better if it turns out to be a spell induced nightmare Hermione wakes up from...
and it never actually happened.
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I've been hoping for a story based on fictional characters, and we finally got one. Hopefully this will encourage more fantasy spinoff stories.

[mikewozere]

Thanks for the feedback. I do have a handful of stories I haven't published yet. Some need finishing, but some just need proof-reading, so I might post those soonish.

[Horn-eman000]

Would be a lot better without the rape scene imo.

[Somebody]

That is obviously not going to be everyone's cup of tea, but they're fucking Slytherins. I would have found it corny if they didn't.

[Moonshine+CC21]

That is obviously not going to be everyone's cup of tea, but they're fucking Slytherins. I would have found it corny if they didn't.

Can't generalise all Slytherins like that

Poor normal students in the bad house

[Horn-eman000]

That is obviously not going to be everyone's cup of tea, but they're fucking Slytherins. I would have found it corny if they didn't.

Corny if they didn’t rape Hermione? I don’t know, I feel like they might be worried about getting tainted with her “dirty blood.”

[Somebody]

Corny if they didn’t rape Hermione? I don’t know, I feel like they might be worried about getting tainted with her “dirty blood.”

Oh of course. A good writer can find an excuse to include or exclude anything. And that is a valid point. But of course we know from history that people tend to make certain exceptions. Either way, the story was never going to be a super happy one for her, heh.