How Jacqui Saw Me Naked

[EverythingOff]

Fantastic job!
I loved the sweet little scene!
It’s character moments like this that elevate a story beyond the sexual/embarrassment factor.
And YES!
Now James is hard!
But the sprinkler might be an issue
I look forward to more embarrassment, more EXCITEMENT and yes, more sweet moments like this one

Thank you. I have to say, my favorite thing about this whole chapter is how much power she has over him. To have the power to get naked and tell the boy to not drop the towel and look, and he does exactly what she says??? Wow. She gets to see him whenever and however she wants. But for him to see her, well, she'll decide exactly what, when, where, how much, and for how long. And she'll make him work for it, too. So you can have a woman with leather and whips and chains if that works for you. But what Jacqui is doing? That's real dominance.

[Reginald Veers]

I think this is the best chapter yet. It would have been redundant to go from the humiliation of the previous chapter to the humiliation of the sprinkler chapter. This was just the “give and take” that the story needed. I hope Jacqui keeps her promise and really embarrasses James with the sprinkler. (Maybe make him bend over again for them? )

[docknumber]

I really liked the love scenes between James and Jacquie. It’s the romantic interest between characters which make the story interesting for me. I’m happy for James as he could see Jacqui partially nude. I wanted to see what Jacqui had planned for James now that she is gonna humiliate him more.

[EverythingOff]

I think this is the best chapter yet. It would have been redundant to go from the humiliation of the previous chapter to the humiliation of the sprinkler chapter. This was just the “give and take” that the story needed. I hope Jacqui keeps her promise and really embarrasses James with the sprinkler. (Maybe make him bend over again for them? )

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you like the story. I was actually nervous about posting the bathroom scene because I felt it went light on the embarrassment and humiliation factor. It was more about sweet storytelling, and I thought readers would be bored with it. But it's fascinating that it seems this was one of the most popular chapters so far!

And don't worry. Jacqui has decided she wants to downright humiliate James, not only in front of Laura, but also in front of Christine and Tracy—and anyone else who might happen to come along!

[EverythingOff]

I really liked the love scenes between James and Jacquie. It’s the romantic interest between characters which make the story interesting for me. I’m happy for James as he could see Jacqui partially nude. I wanted to see what Jacqui had planned for James now that she is gonna humiliate him more.

Thank you for your comment and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I love how she just comes out and tells him that it is now her objective to humiliate him in ways he never thought possible—and he doesn't seem to protest!

[EverythingOff]

I love, love, LOVE this chapter! So sweet, so tense and so hot, all at the same time!

When it was being debated earlier on, I was very much in the "keep the nudity one-sided" camp. I thought it would ruin the dynamic if James ever actually saw Jacqui naked. But in chapter 7, I found myself hoping James doesn't end up losing all of that potential Naked Jacqui Time. I think I was starting to feel sorry for the boy.

Thanks for your comment! I typically agree that I like ENM stories to be "pure ENM." But in this case, the way Jacqui is teasing him with her exposure, I think it only heightens his submissiveness. And yeah, I'm rooting for him too! Although he's really in for some rough times with the Sprinkler Games!

[NudeBaG]

I love, love, LOVE this chapter! So sweet, so tense and so hot, all at the same time!

When it was being debated earlier on, I was very much in the "keep the nudity one-sided" camp. I thought it would ruin the dynamic if James ever actually saw Jacqui naked. But in chapter 7, I found myself hoping James doesn't end up losing all of that potential Naked Jacqui Time. I think I was starting to feel sorry for the boy.

So chapter 8, for me, is all kinds of brilliant and sets up lots of interesting possibilities going forward. I think you're my favourite writer on here at the moment. I'm also very impressed (and envious ) by how many stories you've managed to churn out in such a short time!

Yeah.
I think after all is said and done, James will have surely earned at least a couple minutes of ‘naked Jackie time’, right?

[docknumber]

Waiting for the next part

[EverythingOff]

I think after all is said and done, James will have surely earned at least a couple minutes of ‘naked Jackie time’, right?

Jacqui is a girl of her word. So yes. If James cooperates (which may not always be so easy to do), I suspect he will be quite pleased with his reward.

[EverythingOff]

Waiting for the next part

Should be out tomorrow!