The Invisible Boy (Complete) 11/20/2025

[Jeepman89]

Really enjoying this. I can imagine what will happen when he finds out he's not really invisible. LOL

[Themarble]

Let's hope that Jack isn't capable of any ectoplasm! Or rather hope!

I imagine the charade will drop soon and the jack will be embarrassed or perhaps it doesn't! Perhaps he goes on to think the ring works. Trying it in class?

[NudeBaG]

Let's hope that Jack isn't capable of any ectoplasm! Or rather hope!

I imagine the charade will drop soon and the jack will be embarrassed or perhaps it doesn't! Perhaps he goes on to think the ring works. Trying it in class?

Oh no.
Jack definitely realizes he isn’t really ‘invisible’, but how will his classmates react as the ruse drops?
And how does he react to their reactions?

[EverythingOff]

Very fun story. I can't wait to see what the big reveal brings for everyone!

[NudeBaG]

It's just a two-part story? That's fine, just curious. Setting my own expectations!

Going into Part 3 now
This will be the conclusion.
It was going to end in Part 2, but it I felt it would have been too long.

Might have been a lie
There MIGHT be 2 more parts to go lol

[Jeepman89]

The more the merrier!

[NudeBaG]

The more the merrier!

I really did think I had the ending ready to go, but it felt rushed and anticlimactic.

Next chapter should be up in a few.
We’ll see where things go from there

[NudeBaG]

Let's hope that Jack isn't capable of any ectoplasm! Or rather hope!

I imagine the charade will drop soon and the jack will be embarrassed or perhaps it doesn't! Perhaps he goes on to think the ring works. Trying it in class?

Oh no.
Jack definitely realizes he isn’t really ‘invisible’, but how will his classmates react as the ruse drops?
And how does he react to their reactions?

So, I’ve re-thought this as I write and things evolve.
The realization hasn’t come yet.
I was having trouble figuring out how all those girls could keep up the ruse, but I think I worked it out
Like I said, I thought I had the ending locked, but things are still rolling.

[Jeepman89]

Looking forward to the next part.

[NudeBaG]

Looking forward to the next part.

Should drop soon.
Getting to a good break now
Might get Part 4 up yet today as well